中考英語 話題作文 霧霾天氣1-人教版初中九年級全冊英語素材

1、霧霾天氣dear mike,i have heard from you. thank you for your care. next, i will tell you something about beijing.haze has lasted several days. recently the weather has gone from bad to worse. some highways were closed. and because of bad weather, most people cant do exercise every day. as a result, local

2、 hospitals were crowded with people. actually, the haze is caused by people. the polluted environment is the main reason for the haze. luckily, the government has realized its important to solve the haze. as for me, i also dont like the haze. in order to live a healthy life, i m doing something for

3、protecting the environment, too.how are you recently? please write to me soon. yours, li hua 點評：該生的作文，直接引入話題，霧霾天氣。然后，針對自己的所看、所感和所想來對談?wù)撟约簩F霾天氣的看法。同時，又把自己的所學(xué)運用到了文章當中，比如：goes from bad to worse, because of , were crowded of, luckily, as for me, in order to 這些詞匯的運用，就使文章顯得圓潤飽滿，富有創(chuàng)新。dear mike, thank you ve

4、ry much for your care. recently, there was thick haze in our city. everything around disappeared from our sight. its very terrible. because of the haze, some highways were dosed. and traffic jams were easily seen in the streets. and the haze would make our lives become worse and worse. many people,

5、especially children and old people, found it difficult to have a normal life. as a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with heir noses and throats. i believe the dry weather was one of the most important reasons for the thick haze. in addition, the environmental polluti

6、on is also the main reason. so we must try our best to protect the environment. as for me, i didnt get any health problems in the haze because i stayed mostly indoors. so dont worry about me. in order to have a healthy life, we should begin with the everyday things, such as, riding a bike instead of

7、 driving. and we should plant more trees to look after the environment. i will let more students join us. what about your ideas? i hope i can hear from you soon. yours,li hua點評：該作文是書信體作文。作者能首先把握書信寫作的格式，用呼應(yīng)的方式來開頭，顯得自然。在正文部分，通過對霧霾天氣的現(xiàn)狀、后果、原因以及措施方面做了典型敘述，層次分明。同時，because of, as a result, in addition, so

8、 , as for me 等關(guān)聯(lián)詞句的運用，使本文渾然一體。dear mike,ive received your letter for several days. thank you very much for your care. next, ill show you some information about the haze in beijing.last month, beijing was filled with thick fog. if you go out, you will not see anything. traffic jams were commonly seen

9、 in the streets. if you drive a car, you will hardly arrive at where you want to go. many people, especially children and old people, found it difficult to breathe. part of the cause was the dry weather. but the polluted environment was the main reason for the haze. in fact, factories caused dirty a

10、ir and put it into sky. the number of cars is increasing and it causes lots of pollution. in order to protect our environment, we should drive cars as less as possible and often take buses when we go out. people must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. as for me, i did not get any health problems because i stayed mostly indoors