大學(xué)英語四級作文模板(修改版)

1、2021/8/21英語四級寫作2021/8/22第一部分 第一、四級作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求第一、四級作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求l一、考核目的一、考核目的l 考核學(xué)生用英語進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的初步能力。l二、考核要求二、考核要求：l 1. 時間：30分鐘 l 2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞以上 （120150）l 3. 題型：l 1）根據(jù)給出的段首句續(xù)寫 l 2）根據(jù)中文提要作文 l 3）根據(jù)圖表寫作l 4）書信寫作l三、評分原則：三、評分原則： 1. 大學(xué)英語考試的目的是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級和六級教學(xué)要求，對作文的評分應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。l2. 大學(xué)英語考試作文題采用總體評分(Global Sco

2、ring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Reward Scores),而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。l3. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進(jìn)行綜合評判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容,而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題,是否充分表達(dá)思想,也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切地表達(dá)思想,也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。l4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分,包括滿分;該給低分的給低分,包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。 2021/8/23四、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：四、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 1作文題滿分為15分。閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共人為五等：2分，5分，8分，

3、11分及14分。2分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。5分-基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重錯誤。8分-基本切題，表達(dá)思想比清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多。11分-切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分-切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。閱卷人員根根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為某一分?jǐn)?shù)文件次（如8分）相似，即定為（8分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或劣于該檔次，則可加一分（9分）或減一分（7分），但不得加減半分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：少10字少20字少30字少40字少50字少51字累計字?jǐn)?shù)1101191001

4、09909980897079 69扣分123455注：1、如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句，均不得記入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。2、 只寫一段者：04分，只寫兩段者：09分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）3、白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想,則給零分。2. 設(shè)作文最低分，采用下列成績計算方法： 1）作文分為0分者，總分即使高于60分，一律作不及格處理； 2）作文分大于 0 分小于 6 分者，按下 列方式計算成績： 最后報道分 = 原計算總分 6 + 作文實(shí)得分2021/8/24四級寫作內(nèi)容篇l 題材現(xiàn)實(shí)性題材現(xiàn)實(shí)性 四級寫作的題材具有顯著的現(xiàn)實(shí)性，基四級寫作的題材具有顯著的現(xiàn)實(shí)性，基本可以分為

5、兩大類：本可以分為兩大類： 1. 貼近大學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)工作及課余生活貼近大學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)工作及課余生活的校園題材的校園題材 2. 論及當(dāng)前社會的現(xiàn)象、發(fā)展變化及論及當(dāng)前社會的現(xiàn)象、發(fā)展變化及進(jìn)步的熱點(diǎn)話題。進(jìn)步的熱點(diǎn)話題。 2021/8/25l1.Limiting the use of disposable palstic bag(2008. 12)解決問題l2. Creating a green campus(2009. 6)解決問題l3. Due attention should be given to spelling(2009. 12)現(xiàn)象分析l4. How should parents he

6、lp children to be independent? (2010. 12)解決問題l5.Online shoping (2011. 6) 分析利弊l6.On excessive packaging (2012. 6) 現(xiàn)象分析l7. 圖表作文Education pays (2012. 12)現(xiàn)象分析l8.圖表作文 The importance of doing small things (2013. 6)解決問題l9.圖表作文 (2013. 12) 校園題材校園題材2021/8/26l l關(guān)于此類題材的近五年的真題作文列舉如下：關(guān)于此類題材的近五年的真題作文列舉如下：l1. Limit

7、ing the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12)l2. Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12)l -3 How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010）l 1. 目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切l(wèi) 2. 為了讓孩子獨(dú)立, 父母應(yīng)該 四級作文命題透析社會熱點(diǎn)話題社會熱點(diǎn)話題2021/8/27l健康健康:1身體健康身體健康-health: physical:-keep fit; wellbeing(emotional/physical/psycho

8、logical)l2008.12/2008.06/2007.12/98.06/93.01/91/90l2人的心理健康人的心理健康：psychologically, mentally :independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, selfish, isolated, conservative-2009.12( 綠色校園不僅指綠色環(huán)境）/2007.12/2007.06參加社團(tuán)緩解壓力2021/8/28l教育與娛樂教育與娛樂： recreation, relax, enterta

9、inment; cultivate, foster, enlighten, give inspiration to ,motivate, expand ones horizon,促進(jìn)學(xué)生身心發(fā)展：promote the students physical, intellectual and emotional development (well-rounded/ versatile) mould ones character;lteam spiritl2009.06(博物館免費(fèi)開放的目的）-2008.06（娛樂使人們受益）/2007.12(學(xué)生選課不同原因)/2007.06( 參加社團(tuán)的好處)

10、/2006.12( 看春晚)2021/8/29 十二句作文法的原則 1、只背句型和模版，不背范文。、只背句型和模版，不背范文。 2、先寫死，后寫活。、先寫死，后寫活。2021/8/210 十二句作文法的特點(diǎn)1、適用性強(qiáng)。、適用性強(qiáng)。2、模板通用。、模板通用。3、簡便易學(xué)。、簡便易學(xué)。2021/8/211 十二句作文法的運(yùn)用1、“ 十二句十二句”的字?jǐn)?shù)決定文章的種類。的字?jǐn)?shù)決定文章的種類。2 、“ 十二句十二句”的結(jié)構(gòu)決定文章的難度。的結(jié)構(gòu)決定文章的難度。2021/8/2122021/8/213十二句作文法寫作模板十二句作文法寫作模板 現(xiàn)象解釋型現(xiàn)象解釋型 問題解決型問題解決型 對比選擇型對比選

11、擇型2021/8/214現(xiàn)象解釋型這類命題要求考生對某一社會現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行解釋這類命題要求考生對某一社會現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行解釋, 并加以評論。并加以評論。特點(diǎn)：特點(diǎn)：第一段：描述現(xiàn)象；第一段：描述現(xiàn)象；第二段：分析或闡述這種現(xiàn)象或存在的原因；第二段：分析或闡述這種現(xiàn)象或存在的原因；第三段：提出建議或總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。第三段：提出建議或總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。2021/8/215現(xiàn)象解釋型模板首段（描述現(xiàn)象首段（描述現(xiàn)象A） Nowadays, with the reform/development of （現(xiàn)（現(xiàn)象的背景）象的背景）, more and more people/an increasing number of peo

12、ple （描述現(xiàn)象）（描述現(xiàn)象） . This phenomenon has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.1) Be brought into public focus ：引起人們的關(guān)注 2） call for 要求、需要2021/8/216現(xiàn)象解釋型模板首段（描述現(xiàn)象首段（描述現(xiàn)象 B） In recent years, wherever you go, （描述現(xiàn)（描述現(xiàn)象）象） . This issue has aroused the greatest concern.Arouse the gr

13、eatest concern: 引起極大關(guān)注2021/8/217現(xiàn)象解釋型模板首段（描述現(xiàn)象首段（描述現(xiàn)象C） Currently, along with the advance of the society, an important issue that （描述現(xiàn)象）（描述現(xiàn)象） is brought to our attention. Consequently, （概況描述現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生（概況描述現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果）的結(jié)果）.Be brought to our attention:引起了我們的注意2021/8/218現(xiàn)象解釋型模板中間段（分析現(xiàn)象中間段（分析現(xiàn)象 A） Just as what h

14、as happened to anything in the world, many factors lead to On one hand, . _. On the other hand， . . Whats more， . _. Our list of contributors could go on, but the foregoing ones are already enough to give us a deep insight into the phenomenon本模板第本模板第3句的空格中應(yīng)該填上某個需要解釋的現(xiàn)句的空格中應(yīng)該填上某個需要解釋的現(xiàn)象或事件，第象或事件，第4句提

15、出原因句提出原因I，第，第6句提出原因句提出原因，第第8句提出原因句提出原因，第，第5、第、第7和第和第9句對這句對這3個原因個原因進(jìn)行了進(jìn)一步論述。進(jìn)行了進(jìn)一步論述。1) Give sb a deep insight into :使、對、有了深入解； 2)foregoing：前面提到的（above-mentioned） 3) contributor :促成因素，貢獻(xiàn)者2021/8/219現(xiàn)象解釋型模板中間中間段（分析現(xiàn)象段（分析現(xiàn)象 B） A number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the following are t

16、he most critical ones. First of all, （原因一）（原因一）. Whats more, （原因二）（原因二）. In addition, （原因（原因三）三）.Account for 解釋2021/8/220現(xiàn)象解釋型模板結(jié)尾段（作者看法結(jié)尾段（作者看法+前景展望前景展望 A） As far as I am concerned, （作者對現(xiàn)象的看法）There is still a long way for us to （促進(jìn)或限制現(xiàn)象）, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting

17、.Rewarding: 有報酬的、值得做的2021/8/221現(xiàn)象解釋型模板結(jié)尾段（現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果結(jié)尾段（現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果 B） This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. For one thing, （后果一）. For another, （后果二）. The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures sh

18、ould be taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future. 具體句子數(shù)量可根據(jù)實(shí)際需要調(diào)整。具體句子數(shù)量可根據(jù)實(shí)際需要調(diào)整。2021/8/222范文模板應(yīng)用 2007年年12月英語四級作文題目及范文月英語四級作文題目及范文What Electives to Choose1、各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課、各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2、學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課、學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3、以你自己為例、以你自己為例見見word

19、版范文。版范文。2007年年12月月.doc 分析現(xiàn)象分析現(xiàn)象.doc2021/8/223范文模板應(yīng)用 2010年年6月英語四級作文題目及范文月英語四級作文題目及范文Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.這種現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果這種現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果2010年年6.doc2021/8/224問題解決型這類命題通常首先提出一個有待解決的問題，然這類命題通常首先提出一個有待解決的問題，然后要求考生就該問題提出解決方法、途徑，有時還要后要求考生就該問題

20、提出解決方法、途徑，有時還要求考生最后談?wù)撨m合自己的方法。求考生最后談?wù)撨m合自己的方法。特點(diǎn)：特點(diǎn)：第一段：提出問題或闡述某件事情的重要性或意義；第一段：提出問題或闡述某件事情的重要性或意義；第二段：列舉說明處理某事的方式或解決某個問題的途第二段：列舉說明處理某事的方式或解決某個問題的途徑；徑；第三段：針對第二段所闡述的方法給予簡要的評論，也第三段：針對第二段所闡述的方法給予簡要的評論，也可提出個人建議或選擇，并闡述理由?？商岢鰝€人建議或選擇，并闡述理由。此題型的寫作重點(diǎn)在此題型的寫作重點(diǎn)在How，即解決問題的辦法。，即解決問題的辦法。2021/8/225問題解決型模板首段（提出問題首段（提出

21、問題 A） Nowadays, with the rapid economical development and intense competition, people are attaching more and more importance to （g提出問提出問題）題）。 So it is of great importance for us to （關(guān)注關(guān)注問題的要性）問題的要性）. On one hand, （問題后果一）（問題后果一）.On the other hand, （問題的后果二）（問題的后果二）. As a result, we must spare no effor

22、ts to take some measures to solve this problem. 1) Attach importance to 重視 = place importance on 2) spare no efforts to 竭盡全力、努力去做 3）take some measure to 采取措辭2021/8/226問題解決型模板首段（提出問題首段（提出問題 B） Along with the advance of the society ,more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is

23、that（提出問題）（提出問題）。It is of great significance that （解決問題很必要）解決問題很必要）. On one hand, （解決問題的必要性一）（解決問題的必要性一）.On the other hand, （解決（解決問題的必要性一）問題的必要性一）. Accordingly, how to solve the problem becomes the top priority for us. Top priority :應(yīng)予最優(yōu)先考慮的事 2021/8/227中間中間段（解決問題的辦法段（解決問題的辦法 A） There are many steps

24、which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, (途徑一途徑一). In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is (途徑二途徑二).問題解決型模板steps=measures 2) undo=solve3) Contribute to 有助于2021/8/228中間中間段（解決問題的辦法段（解決問題的辦法 B）Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but

25、 the following ones may be the most effective. First of all, . Another way to solve the problem is . Finally, . These are not the best and the only two/three measures we can take, but it should be noted that _.本模版中第本模版中第6句為主題句，第句為主題句，第7、8和和9句提供句提供3個個途徑，第途徑，第10句為結(jié)論。句為結(jié)論。問題解決型模板2021/8/229結(jié)尾段（總結(jié)結(jié)尾段（總結(jié)+

26、個人選擇個人選擇+前景展望）前景展望） In fact, more than three ways can be adopted to solve the problem of (具體問題具體問題), As for me, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, （方法）方法）. Anyway, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us when all of us make joint efforts to solve this problem.

27、問題解決型模板Make joint efforts to 共同努力做、2021/8/230范文模板應(yīng)用 2000年年1月大學(xué)英語四級作文題目及范文月大學(xué)英語四級作文題目及范文How I Finance My College Education 1.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用（上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用（tuition and fees）可以通過多種渠道）可以通過多種渠道解決解決2.那種渠道適合于我（說明理由）那種渠道適合于我（說明理由）見見word版范文。版范文。2000年年1.doc2021/8/231對比選擇型對比選擇型l對比/比較分析或觀點(diǎn)對比類型作文l例如：例如： Should the University Ca

28、mpus Be Open to Tourists? (2005. 12)1. 名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)2. 校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放，校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放， 人們看法不同人們看法不同3. 我認(rèn)為。我認(rèn)為。Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?1. 很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是。很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是。2. 也有人持不用的意見。也有人持不用的意見。3. 我的看法和打算我的看法和打算2021/8/232 對比論述型l真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? （

29、2000. 6）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.1.很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是2. 也有人持不同的意見，也有人持不

30、同的意見，3. 我的看法和打算我的看法和打算 2021/8/233對比論述型 When it comes to the test of spoken English, peoples opinions differ. Many people believe that it is necessary to adopt such a test. For one thing, fluent speaking ability is badly needed in todays society that is experiencing reform and opening-up. For another

31、, in a more competitive society such as ours today, fluent spoken English means more advantage you have to beat your rival in competing for a position with much appeal to both of you. Some people, however, take a different attitude. They regard the test as being unnecessary. In their views, fluent s

32、poken English does not necessarily mean a better job; sometimes, opportunity plays a more important role. Furthermore, many people do not use spoken English at all in their work. As far as I am concerned, I am really in favor of the test. On the one hand, it can encourage college students to try eve

33、ry means to improve their spoken English. On the other hand, college students will benefit endlessly in their future career if they can speak fluent English. So I decide to make use of every opportunity to practice my spoken English, and surely it will do me much good.2021/8/234模式模式1Different people

34、 have different opinions about （討論主題）. Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that （觀點(diǎn)1）. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that (觀點(diǎn)2)./ Other people, however, think that （觀點(diǎn)2） As for me, I agree with the former/latter idea. (I am in favor of the first/second idea.)

35、(The following are the reasons of/for my choice/personal inclination.)First of all, (論據(jù)1).More importantly, (論據(jù)2).Most important of all, .(論據(jù)3).In summary, (總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)). As a college student, I am supposed to ( 表決心).或 From above, we can predict that (預(yù)測). 模式模式2 Peoples ideas/opinions/views on （討論主題）vary f

36、rom person to person. Some people hold/think that .(觀點(diǎn)1). From their point of view, .However, others hold/think that (觀點(diǎn)2). In their opinion, ./ Yet other people dont think in this way. They argue that (觀點(diǎn)2).As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, ( 論據(jù)1)

37、. For another, (論據(jù)2). Last but not the least, (論據(jù)3)./ First of all, ( 論據(jù)1)。Furthermore, (論據(jù)2)。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, (論據(jù)3)。To conclude, (總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)). As a college student, I am supposed to (表決心). 或 From above, we can predict that (預(yù)測).模式模式3Different people h

38、ave different views on (討論主題) . Some people think that （觀點(diǎn)1）. Other people hold that (觀點(diǎn)2).Those who hold the first opinion think that （觀點(diǎn)1） ( 論據(jù)1，2，3)On the contrary, those who hold the second view think that （觀點(diǎn)2） ( 論據(jù)1，2，3) As for me, I agree with the former/ latter opinion. ( 論據(jù)1，2，3)Therefore I

39、 hold that (觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)1/2.)練習(xí)：練習(xí)：1. 1. 有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運(yùn)。有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運(yùn)。 2. 2. 我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無關(guān)，我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無關(guān)， Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?2021/8/235第一、寫作中的常用句式第一、寫作中的常用句式一、開頭常用語式一、開頭常用語式( (主題段的引入主題段的引入) )A proverb saysAs the proverb saysSome people say thatMany peo

40、ple believe thatIt is generally believed thatWe all know that As we all know It is quite clear that Various views exist as to , butThere are many arguments/opinions/views aboutThere is much discussion about/attention to It is well known thatIt is said thatIt has been found thatIt is easy to see that

41、The pie graph showsA recent survey providesThe chart/graph/table showsNo one can deny that Nowadays,.At present 2021/8/236二、二、 中間常用句式（擴(kuò)展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴(kuò)展段的連接）通常按重要程度排列，我們習(xí)慣于先說最重要的，西方人則相反，但都得符合邏輯順序。1表示“首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin with 在跌降法里用first and foremost 但不可用 at first。2表示“第二”、“此外”“其次”

42、、“況且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, whats more, in addition, besides+名詞短語，in addition to+名詞短語，another+名詞短語3表示 “最后”finally, last, lastly, 但不可用at last 或 in the end。4表示 “最重要的是” above all, most important of all，在跌降法里用last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的是。5.表示“更嚴(yán)重的是”、“更糟糕的是

43、” more serious, even worse, to make matter worse6. 表示“最為嚴(yán)重的是”、“最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all例如：1 1）First of all, First of all, 論據(jù)1. More importantly,More importantly, 論據(jù)2. Most important of all,Most important of all, 論據(jù)3. In In summary,summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).2)2) The advantages can be listed as fol

44、lowsThe advantages can be listed as follows：First,First, 好處1. Besides,Besides, 好處2. Most Most important of all, important of all, 好處3. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,To begin wit

45、h,壞處1. To make matter worse,To make matter worse,壞處2. Worst of all,Worst of all,壞處3. From the above analysis, I believeFrom the above analysis, I believe 觀點(diǎn).3 3）For one thing, For one thing, 論據(jù)1. For another, For another, 論據(jù)2. Last but not the least,Last but not the least, 論據(jù)3. To To conclude, concl

46、ude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)或 From above, we can predict that From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測. 4 4）First of all,First of all, 論據(jù)1。 Furthermore, Furthermore, 論據(jù)2。 Among all of the supporting evidences, Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,one is the strongest. That is, 論據(jù)3。 A natural

47、conclusion from the above discussion is A natural conclusion from the above discussion is thatthat總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。 或 From above, we can predict thatFrom above, we can predict that 預(yù)測.2021/8/237例文Key to Success In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in In such a competi

48、tive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his life. But how to achieve success? his life. But how to achieve success? In my opinion, there are three main keys a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence. FirstFirst, , it is very important to set up a goal before you st

49、art. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind. BesidesBesides, , you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success. Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. Last but not leastLast but not least, , ev

50、eryone who wants to suceed should be diligent. There is and old saying, “No pains, no gains.” Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.In conclusionIn conclusion, , if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys mentioned above.There is no shortc

51、ut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream.練習(xí)：Advertisement 1） 廣告給人們帶來的益處。 2） 廣告給人們帶來的煩惱。Advertisement can be a service to people. First, First, it is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, Second, it can widen peoples knowledge, and make peop

52、le more experienced. Lastly Lastly, people can enjoy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into. Some advertisements, however, however, are not very useful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, for example, may put thousands of wom

53、en and girls into trouble. Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You need help. Phone me. And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep. 2021/8/2385其他詞語或句式：1）用于強(qiáng)調(diào)：after all, any way, in fact, indeed, apparently, clearly, obviously, especially, 2）用于對比：however, on one hand, on the other hand,

54、in contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, instead, but, different from, 3）用于比較：similarly, likewise, like, in the same way, 4）用于列舉：for example, for instance, such as, takefor granted, except(for)5）表示時間：later, then, next, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, after that, from now o

55、n, at the same time, for the time being, after some time, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, presently, since, as soon as, afterwards, some time later, temporally, in the meanwhile, after a while,6）用于解釋：in other words, as a matter of fact, that

56、is,7) 用于讓步：although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if, though, no matter how8) 用于結(jié)果：consequently, thus, as a result, as a consequence, hence, so, therefore, accordingly9) 其他：not onlybut also, as far as I am concerned, when it comes to, in practice, in principle, another key aspect ofis, it

57、 is true that, what is more serious is, there is no doubt that,but it is a pity that,but the trouble /problem/point is 例1 Brain Drain in China (接開頭)1）中國人才流失的現(xiàn)狀；2）對人才流失的看法；3）如何解決人才流失。However, people see this phenomenon in different perspectives. Some hold the opinion that China suffers a lot from bra

58、in drain. They argue, on the one hand, that brain drain considerably weakens our international competitiveness. On the other hand, they believe that the talent should serve their native country first.In contrast, others highlight the advantages of international exchange and cooperation. They claim t

59、hat Chinese youths should go abroad to study and gain more experience. Whats more, the long-term benefits will outweigh losses we suffer now. 2021/8/239三、結(jié)尾常用句式（終結(jié)段的連接）三、結(jié)尾常用句式（終結(jié)段的連接）1表示 “總之 ”、 “總而言之 ”、 “簡言之 ”in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, to sum up, in short, in brief, in a

60、word, on the whole2“綜上所述 ”from the foregoing, from what has been discussed above, from what has been mentioned above, from the above analysisObviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion thatThus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find thatObviously, it is high time that we took some measu