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1、2專題限時集訓(xùn)(十九)讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練2(對應(yīng)學(xué)生用書第193頁),)A(2017浙江吳越聯(lián)盟二模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事?!癢ill you take me to go trick -or-treating, Chad? ” Zoe asked when I came home from school.My little sister was already wearing her fairy wings and taking a wand(魔杖).“Mom's taking you,“ I said. "Mommy slipped on t
2、he mat and hurt her ankle” my sister said.Mom limped(一病一拐地走)down the hallway just then , and her left ankle was wrapped in a bandage .“I'll be OK sitting in the car.But could you take Zoe from door to door ? She's really been looking forward to Halloween . ” “I've been looking forward to
3、 it, too," I said and didn't want anything out of expectationI had to admit, though,Zoe was more excited than I was.She'd been trying on her costume枇妝K )every day for a week. “I'm a fairy she said, twirling(旋 轉(zhuǎn))around. “I have plans with my friends," I said.Our plans consisted
4、of racing around the neighborhood to collect as much candy as we could, not bothering too much with costumes“Please, Chad," Zoe begged. "Fine." There would be my chance for fun and candy, I thought.Zoe twirled on her toes.Later; Zoe walked to the first house while I hung back. "I
5、 don't want anyone to know that I'm taking you to go trick-or-treating,“ I'd said to her.I'd told my friends that I couldn't hang out with them tonight, but I didn't tell them why, being afraid of being laughed at“Take a candy bag" said Mom sitting in the car at the end
6、of the block.When I turned back, Zoe was already 15 steps ahead.Zoe, wait! ” Zoe stopped and turned around. “ Hurry, hurry she said.I ran to catch up.Looking after her would be more work than I'd expected.注意:1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4 .續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的
7、關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:“ Trick or treat! ” shesaid at the nexthouseParagraph 2:On our way to the car, we ran into myfriend Jeff on the sidewalk.【寫作指導(dǎo)】原文講的是妹妹請求哥哥帶她去玩萬圣節(jié)的游戲,哥哥剛開始因為和朋友們 有約定而不愿帶她,后來禁不住妹妹的再三請求而決定帶她玩。根據(jù)第一段的提 示句可知,本段的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是妹妹到鄰居家“Trickor treat的過程的描述。而第二段則是遇到了哥哥的朋友之后的故事。第一段描述情景較為簡單,但是第 二段的故事一定要
8、和原文中哥哥的心理變化保持一致。【參考范文】“Trick or treat! ” shesaid at the next houseThe door opened.A woman stepped out. “Aren't you so cute? ” Zoe held up her candy bag. “Are you alone? ” the woman asked, looking around worriedly. “ No ;' Zoe pointed a finger at my hiding place in the bushes. "Oh, no, &
9、quot; I thought.She's going to announce me to the world.“Can he have a candy too, please? ” Zoe asked instead.The woman laughed and gave her some more candieswhich was out of my expectation. People's faces lit up as soon as they saw Zoe.On our way to the car, we ran into my friend Jeff on th
10、e sidewalk. “This is how you spent Halloween “ he said.But he didn't laugh at me.On the contrary he said I was lucky to have a lovely sister. “You became a Halloween hero because of looking after your sister,“Yes! ” I said I was Zoe's superhero now.As we rode back homye Mom smiled at me. “An
11、d did you have fun? ” “ Actually , I did , " I said.Halloween with Zoe had turned out to be pretty magical.B【導(dǎo)學(xué)號:38144070】(2017浙江溫州中學(xué)期中)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。The eight- year- old Carol lived with her father David, mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a bea
12、utiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.While they lived a very happy life , Carol did not lov
13、e the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop move around the dty, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes etc.However, there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had ev
14、erything in the village.One day, Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of course, she had a strange dreamShe saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she a
15、lways desired.Grandmother understood the desire of Caro lbut still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.She told Carol, “ Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You ca
16、nnot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you see here Do you still want to go to the city ? ”Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6
17、hours to spend in the city.Later, she would return back to the village.Carol agreed.注意:1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4 .續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.Paragraph 2:Carol's brother Robwascalling her for
18、lunch and Carol wokeup.【寫作指導(dǎo)】原文記述了一個生活在山村的女孩渴望過上城里人的生活的故事。原文的后半段寫這個女孩有一天睡著了。而之后的描寫都是夢境。根據(jù)原文的結(jié)構(gòu)以及第 一段的提示句,本段應(yīng)該是描述這個孩子夢中在城市生活的故事。 而第二段的提 示句暗示本段應(yīng)該描寫夢醒了之后發(fā)生的事情?!緟⒖挤段摹緾arol then found herself in the city with her friends.Carol and her friends went to watch movies. After that they ate delicious food in a
19、restaurant and shopped in a huge mall.Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.Yet at the same time she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence; the city life was fast and rushing.The air quality is n
20、ot satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.Carol understood that
21、 she was having a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants, animals and beautiful natureC閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。There were three boys Martin , Tom and Jack who like campi
22、ng very much.One day, Jack told Martin and Tom that he knew a very good place to go.They set off a new adventure together when they got ready.The light from the campfire brightened the darkness but it could not prevent the damp cold of Dennis's Swamp(沼澤地)creeping into their bones.It was a strang
23、e place. Martin and Tom wished that they had not accepted Jack's dare.They liked camping, but not near this swamp“So," Martin asked as they sat watching the hot coals. “How did this place get its name? ”“Are you sure you want to hear it? It's a scary story" warned Jack.“Of course!
24、” cried out Tom. “If there were anything to be scared of , you wouldn't have chosen this place! ”“OK, but don't say I didn't warn you,“ said Jack, and he began his tale.Way back in time , a man called Dennis tried to start a farm here.He built that cottage over there to live in.In those
25、days, the arealooked quite differentit was covered with tall trees and the swamp was a crystal-clear river. After three hard years, Dennis had cleared several fields and planted crops.He was so proud of his success that he refused to listen to advice.“ 'You are clearing too much land' warned
26、 one old man. 'The land is a living thing.It will hit back at you if you abuse it.' "“Silly fool ,' said Dennis to himself. ' If I clear more land, I can grow more crops.I'll become wealthier.He's just jealous ' "“Dennis continued to chop down trees.Small animal
27、s that relied on them for food and shelter were destroyed.He was so eager to expand his farm that he did not notice the river flowing slowly towards his door.He did not notice salt seeping to the surface of the land.He did not notice swamp plants choking all the native plants.“What happened? ” Marti
28、n asked.It was growing colder.He trembled, twisting his body closer to the fire.注意:1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4 .續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:“ The land hit backjust as the old man warned :' Jack shruggedParagraph 2:Few minuteslater, Tom woke slowly.【寫作指導(dǎo)】在續(xù)寫前,學(xué)生首先應(yīng)該理清文章的脈絡(luò),再根據(jù)所給關(guān)鍵詞進行續(xù)寫,以 保證續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的完整性和準確性。本文先寫到三個愛野外露營的男孩在一片沼澤 地露營的特殊經(jīng)歷,主要提到了一個由于Dennis貪婪而毀壞環(huán)境,即這片沼澤如何形成的故事。結(jié)合所給關(guān)鍵詞,學(xué)生可以從環(huán)境保護的話題續(xù)寫,確保情節(jié)合理即可。在寫作過程中,可適當用一些連接詞,以使內(nèi)容連貫;還可使用一些 復(fù)雜句式,來提高作文的得分檔次。【參考范文】“The land hit back just
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