寫作課件 過去事件

1、Writing of Unit 8話題寫作訓(xùn)練話題寫作訓(xùn)練話題綜述話題綜述本單元以學(xué)校旅行和假期生活為本單元以學(xué)校旅行和假期生活為話題，描述期間所發(fā)生事情的經(jīng)話題，描述期間所發(fā)生事情的經(jīng)過及自己的感受。過及自己的感受。 在你成長的歷程中，在你成長的歷程中，有些日子會(huì)讓你開心有些日子會(huì)讓你開心快樂，經(jīng)久難忘。請(qǐng)快樂，經(jīng)久難忘。請(qǐng)以以“My happiest day” 為題寫一篇為題寫一篇80詞左右詞左右的短文。記述你那天的短文。記述你那天的感受。的感受。A1.認(rèn)真閱讀所給材料，完成下列信息。認(rèn)真閱讀所給材料，完成下列信息。 The title of the article is _My happ

2、iest day仔細(xì)審題，明確要求仔細(xì)審題，明確要求 The tense(時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)) of the article is _The Simple Past tense（一般過去時(shí)）（一般過去時(shí)）What made you happy? Was it a trip, a birthday , an exciting match , a fantastic movie ?寫作課件寫作課件 過去事件過去事件Decide What you want to write in your article. Was it a trip, a birthday , an exciting match , a f

3、antastic movie ? It was a birthday.列列緊扣要點(diǎn)，尋求思路緊扣要點(diǎn)，尋求思路A2 用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。 On the morning of my birthday,I got up early I invited some friends They sang We ate the birthday cakeWe played games a nice body加加A3. How to begin your article ,write them down . 開門見山，緊扣主題開門見山，緊扣主題I still rem

4、ember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me. a nice head連連A4 Use the following words to put your articles in the correct order . so,because , though, then, after that,- 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。各個(gè)部分銜接自然。過渡自然過渡自然, , 表達(dá)流暢表達(dá)流暢 On the morning of my birthday, I got up early becaus

5、e I was very excited. I invited some friends to my house and they brought me many beautiful gifts. They sang “Happy birthday to you !” together . I loved their song . So sweet! Then we ate the delicious birthday cake.My mother made it for me early this morning ! Ater that ,we played games and danced

6、 until ten oclock in the evening.寫作課件寫作課件 過去事件過去事件美美A5.How to make your article worth reading article ,write something about your opinions about how you feel at the ending of the article. 選好詞句，適當(dāng)評(píng)論，選好詞句，適當(dāng)評(píng)論，美化美化文章。文章。適當(dāng)評(píng)論適當(dāng)評(píng)論, 發(fā)表己見發(fā)表己見I still remember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me. a ni

7、ce heada nice tail 1. Pleasant hours fly fast. The next day we left there. How I miss the happiest day! 2. Looking down the mountains from the Great Wall, I was excited and felt proud of myself . 3. Life is just like a bowl of cherries. If you like , youll be the happiest one every day in your life.

8、 a nice tail My happiest day On the morning of my birthday, I got up early because I was very excited. I invited some friends to my house and they brought me many beautiful gifts. They sang “Happy birthday to you !” together . I loved their song . So sweet! Then we ate the delicious birthday cake. M

9、y mother made it for me early this morning ! Ater that ,we played games and danced until ten oclock in the evening. I still remember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me.What a great day! I will never forget it.修改點(diǎn)：人稱修改點(diǎn)：人稱 、時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)，、時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)，詞序，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)詞序，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，大小寫方面。符號(hào)，大小寫方面。 查漏補(bǔ)缺，完善文章查漏補(bǔ)缺，完善文章書面表達(dá)寫作技巧書面表達(dá)寫作技巧列列加加連連美美Finish your article after class and show it to us in the next lesson.The more you write ,the better your article is . 1.During the summer holiday, I went to a beautiful beach with my parents and had