英語作文 給xx 的一封信

1、Dear manager,My name is Li Mengran ,a college student. I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. I hear that you need a Lab assistant. I want to say I like this job.I study in DeZhou university. My major is Chemical. In my course, experiment is very important. S

2、o as a Chemical student, we need do many experiments. And I study hard in college, I get many glorious champion. In college, I get a chance to enter a competition of Chemical experiment. I get Second Place Award. Through I work hard, I pass the CET 4. And now I plan CET 6. As a girl, I have a abilit

3、y of strict. I think this ability is very important in experiment.I hope I can catch this chance. In one hand, I can learn more knowledge, In another hand, I hope I can share responsibility for your job, let you relax. I promise if I get this job I will study hard and try my best do well .Looking fo

4、rward to your early reply.1.13th May, 2012 Dear manager, My name is Li Mengran , a college student.學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“學(xué)院,大學(xué)”之意。 1.2I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: use, apply, employ, utilize, avail

5、, exploit 均含“使用,應(yīng)用”之意。 1.3I hear that you need a Lab assistant. 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: hear, listen, over hear均含“聽”之意。hear: 及物動(dòng)詞,指聲音進(jìn)入耳內(nèi),但不含有注意的意味,即,只要聽覺正常,聲音進(jìn)入耳內(nèi),就能聽見。但在祈使句中,hear可指有意識(shí)的行為。listen: 及物動(dòng)詞,指有意識(shí)地傾聽,強(qiáng)調(diào)行為的過程。overhear: 指偶然聽到,無意中聽到,也指偷聽。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)1.4I want to say I like this job.點(diǎn)評(píng) I want to say: 表達(dá)不規(guī)范,太口語化,建議

6、檢查。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)2.1I study in DeZhou university.學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: learn, study均含“學(xué)習(xí)”之意。learn: 常指一般性的學(xué)習(xí),尤指初級(jí)階段的學(xué)習(xí),表示摹仿實(shí)踐的過程;著重成果時(shí),作“學(xué)會(huì)”解。study: 著重指學(xué)習(xí)過程和高深的或周密的研究,尤指從書本上學(xué)習(xí)。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)2.2My major is Chemical.學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: drug, medicine, medication, remedy, cure, chemical都有“藥”之意。 2.3In my course, experiment is very important.高分

7、詞匯 important是普通詞匯,可以在某些語境中替換為高分詞匯crucial或essentialcrucial: extremely important/critical:It is crucial that the report should be on timeessential: (something very important/indispensable:It is essential that you should take out a proper insurance.It is essential for the applicant to wear a dark suit.

8、好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)推薦詞匯 very在寫作中使用的太多,在某些語境下可考慮換為extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.如果設(shè)計(jì)不當(dāng),刻度盤將會(huì)非常難于操作。Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedinglymilitant.一八九年到一九三年間婦女爭取選舉權(quán)運(yùn)動(dòng)變得非常激烈。The surface of Mars is rema

9、rkably diverse.火星的表面參差不齊。He was so informed and intensely forceful.他是那么見多識(shí)廣,極了不起。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: trial, experiment, test, try 均有“試驗(yàn)”之意。 2.4So as a Chemical student, we need do many experiments. 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 2.5And I study hard in college, I get many glorious champion. 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)低頻警示 i get many glorious champion在語料

10、庫中無此用法,疑似中式英語好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)低頻警示 many glorious champion在語料庫中無此用法,疑似中式英語好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: splendid, gorgeous, glorious, superb, magnificent 均含“華麗的,宏傳的,輝煌的”之意。 2.6In college, I get a chance to enter a competition of Chemical experiment. 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: competition, contest, match 均有“比賽,競爭”之意。 2.7I get Second Place Award

11、.2.8Through I work hard, I pass the CET 4.學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: pass, elapse 均可表示“過去,消逝”之意。pass: 最普通常用詞,指歲月的流逝,某些自然現(xiàn)象或事情的過去。側(cè)重其結(jié)果。elapse: 書面用詞,指時(shí)間等不知不覺地逝去,含義比pass窄,常常側(cè)重從某一特定時(shí)間到另一特定時(shí)間的過去。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)2.9And now I plan CET 6.2.10As a girl, I have a ability of strict.語法檢查 請(qǐng)檢查a ability (Wrong article好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)低頻警示 a ability of s

12、trict在語料庫中無此用法,疑似中式英語好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: ability, capacity, cap ability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力,才能”之意。 2.11I think this ability is very important in experiment.點(diǎn)評(píng) 此句型用的太過頻繁,建議改為sb. suppose +從句或sb. claim +從句或sb. agree +從句或第一人稱時(shí)替換為As far as I am concerned.好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)名詞錯(cuò)誤 in

13、 experiment冠詞缺失好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“認(rèn)為”之意。 3.1I hope I can catch this chance.點(diǎn)評(píng) catch chance建議替換為take hold of a chance“抓住機(jī)會(huì)”通?？梢悦枋鰹?take hold of an opportunity,take hold of a chance,pursue an opportunity,grasy every minute, make the most of somethi

14、ng好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: arrest, capture, catch, seize, trap 均有“抓住,捕捉”之意。 3.2In one hand, I can learn more knowledge, In another hand, I hope I can share responsibility for your job, let you relax. 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)點(diǎn)評(píng) 固定短語使用錯(cuò)誤,建議將In another hand改為On the other hand。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)點(diǎn)評(píng) 固定短語使用錯(cuò)誤,建議將In one hand改為On the one hand。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)點(diǎn)評(píng) 固定用法錯(cuò)誤,建議將in one hand改為on the one hand。好