新目標初三英語寫作課ppt課件

1、1;.234Describe the pictureShe is used to using a smart-phone before going to bed every day.She uses a smart-phone before going to bed.智能手機智能手機before going to bedDangerbe bad for傷身體傷身體描述圖片描述圖片5Describe the pictureMany people use smart-phones when they cross the street.Many people use smart-phones whe

2、n they ride bikesdrive a carwalk.cause traffic accidents61.eat with familyeat with familyDescribe the pictureSome people use smart-phones when they eat with family.Some people use smart-phones. They eat with family.Dangerinfluencethe relationship with7 Opinions1.好好利用手機。（make good use of）2.面對面的交流勝過網上

3、交流。 （ face-to-face conversation） Structures: In my opinion I think/believeWed better make good use of smart-phones.Face-to-face conversation is better than chatting online.We can use them at proper time and proper situations小組討論發(fā)表你們的觀點：小組討論發(fā)表你們的觀點：(firstly, secondly, besides, whats more, finallyOn t

4、he one hand, on the other handnot onlybut also)8（2015，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網的發(fā)展，智能手機（，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網的發(fā)展，智能手機（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。我們身）已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的邊的“低頭族低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息隨處可見。請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”寫一篇寫一篇120詞左右的短文。詞左右的短文。9要求：1. 短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當發(fā)揮；2. 題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：1. ea

5、t with family 2. cause traffic accidents3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. _10小組討論，完成以下任務小組討論，完成以下任務 1.1.認真審題，認真審題， 理清思路。理清思路。 2.2.列出提綱，初步成形。列出提綱，

6、初步成形。 本篇文章應分為幾段，每段都寫什么？本篇文章應分為幾段，每段都寫什么？應選用哪種時態(tài)？第幾人稱？應選用哪種時態(tài)？第幾人稱？需要用到哪些句式結構？需要用到哪些句式結構？11（2015，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網的發(fā)展，智能手機（，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網的發(fā)展，智能手機（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。我們身）已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的邊的“低頭族低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息隨處可見。請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”寫一篇寫一篇120詞左右的短文。詞左右的短文?，F現象象弊弊端端觀觀點點12選出每段主題

7、句：In my opinion, we should learn to use our smart-phones properly, and we should refuse to be phubbers 2. With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. 3.Being phubbers has some disadvantages.1.現象現象2.弊端弊端3.觀點觀點13幾點建議：幾點建議：Dont eat fast.Dont eat, fast!I love China.I

8、 love china(瓷器瓷器).I very like English.()I like English very much. ()He is very young. He knows a lot. ( Good! ) He knows a lot although he is very young. ( Better! )1.1.注意標點和字母大小寫注意標點和字母大小寫. .2.2.注意句子的結構正確。注意句子的結構正確。3.3.注意遣詞造句，爭取文采。注意遣詞造句，爭取文采。14Your opinions(1.make good use of 2.face-to-face conver

9、sation, ) 現象現象Phenomenon (1.eat with family2.get together with friends3.be busy doing cross the street）DisadvantagesIn my opinion, We shouldWed betterI think/believe4.the relationship with5.cause traffic accidents6.be bad for/get in the way of15 Exchange your article with your partner , then underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes.161.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短語。用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短語。2.用英語思維來表達。用英語思維來表達。3.語句要通順，層次要清楚，上下連貫很重要。語句要通順，層次要清楚，上下連貫很重要。Some advice for you!17Put down the phones, give more time to our families .18Homework A組：繼續(xù)改寫本節(jié)課作文，使它更加完美。組：繼續(xù)改寫