高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析(背誦佳選)(共6頁(yè))

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上一. 用詞準(zhǔn)確;表達(dá)地道【北京卷】【試題回放】第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)美國(guó)中學(xué)生jeff將要來(lái)你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來(lái)中國(guó)后的生活安排。注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。2.詞數(shù)不少于60。Dear Jeff,Im Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.While you are

2、here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese fo

3、od there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay her

4、e in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes,Li Hua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒(méi)有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過(guò)渡自然，令人耳目一新。 【安徽卷】【試題回放】假如你是李華，美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：l 表示贊成。 l 提出你喜

5、歡的欄目。 l 簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。 2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。 3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目：欄目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup

6、 of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn En

7、glish idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magaz

8、ine!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語(yǔ)作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語(yǔ)，一些詞語(yǔ)的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測(cè)此人或者是家人可能有過(guò)國(guó)外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語(yǔ)，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來(lái)的。比如說(shuō)：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can't wait to 簡(jiǎn)直是perfect! 況且

9、文章中沒(méi)有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語(yǔ)法。英語(yǔ)能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為作文添彩 【北京卷】【試題回放】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In t

10、he morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect

11、 the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)。 【北京卷】【試題回放】開放作文請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，

12、寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same w

13、ay as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it t

14、he hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)?？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國(guó)人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。三. 復(fù)合句為寫作增色 【全國(guó)卷】【試題回放】 假定你是李華，

15、從小喜愛(ài)大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：1、 自我介紹;2、 祝賀蘇琳生日;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About

16、three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are livin

17、g a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我介紹;2.信息來(lái)源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員

18、的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。 積累卡片英漢互譯好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂(lè)的 2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育好句Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy li

19、fe in the US.我祝福它生日快樂(lè)并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活?！救珖?guó)卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;2.房間及價(jià)格：?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放; 5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan

20、 Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot

21、water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in B

22、aishan Mountain.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文開門見(jiàn)山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確。總地來(lái)說(shuō)，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來(lái)便利，并且非常的愉快。評(píng)析：bring great convenience，

23、帶來(lái)便利。【重慶卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵(lì)打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：1. 信的格式已為你寫好2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。3. 詞數(shù)100左右。4. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear tha

24、t you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort le

25、tter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見(jiàn)的句式，如Im sorry to hear that., It is reported that.等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行

26、文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片好詞1.realize v.意識(shí)到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈(zèng)好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!好處：擲地有聲，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。 四. 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,句式準(zhǔn)確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國(guó)

27、億萬(wàn)學(xué)生陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬(wàn)學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意?、 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、 詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、 參考詞匯：陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)a national student sports program;教育部the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in J