2015屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題卷16Word版含解析

1、2015屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題卷16（含解析）1書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分25分) 最近，某中學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)向?qū)W生征文，主題New Look of My Hometown。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)為該報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的情況并發(fā)表自己的看法。概 況1氣候夏熱多雨，冬冷多雪，冬夏溫差很大2近年經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速，城市面貌一新，高樓林立，道路寬敞，環(huán)境優(yōu)美；3人民生活條件不斷改善，不少人搬進(jìn)新居，擁有私家車(chē)。你的看法家鄉(xiāng)人民將更加努力工作注意：1可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文連貫、通順； 2短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯：economy經(jīng)濟(jì) New Look of My H

2、ometown My hometown lies in the east of Liaoning ，with a river flowing through_2假如你是李華，你在英國(guó)的筆友上周來(lái)信說(shuō)自己性格內(nèi)向，不善與人溝通相處。并為此苦惱不已，請(qǐng)你以此為話題給他寫(xiě)一封回信安慰他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim, Im glad to have received the letter you sent me last week._ Best wishes to you ! Yours faithfully,L

3、i Hua3在最近學(xué)校組織的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)中，你班同學(xué)參加了進(jìn)行了關(guān)于一項(xiàng)青少年課余活動(dòng)情況的調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文， 簡(jiǎn)要介紹調(diào)查情況，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ⑻岢鼋ㄗh。注意：1. 詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右。 2. 文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which weconducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities. _4書(shū)面

4、表達(dá)（滿分25分）5月 1日,高二(3)班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去陽(yáng)光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)(送水果、打掃、聊天等)。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者李華,請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道.注意:1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物活動(dòng)；2.老人們的反映；3.簡(jiǎn)短評(píng)論；4.報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出.(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly_By Li Hua, School Newspaper5假如你是李華，是高一某班班長(zhǎng)。為了豐富同學(xué)們的課外生活，班級(jí)準(zhǔn)

5、備成立一個(gè)自行車(chē)俱樂(lè)部(cycling club)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則口頭通知。通知如下：每周訓(xùn)練一次，由體育老師輔導(dǎo)。安排在每周三下午第三節(jié)的課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間；自行車(chē)自備；活動(dòng)免費(fèi)；到班長(zhǎng)那里報(bào)名（sign up）。注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100 左右。參考答案1One possible version：New Look of My HometownMy hometown lies in the east of Liaoning ，with a river flowing through。It is a beautiful city。The climate

6、 here is warm with plenty of rain in summer and cold with plenty of snow in winter 。There is a sharp difference in temperature between summer and winter。In recent years，the economy of the city has been developing rapidly。The city is taking on a new look with high buildings，wide roads and better surr

7、oundings。People's living conditions are improving day by day。Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own。I'm sure people in my hometown will work still harder to make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier?！窘馕觥?Dear Jim, Im glad to have received t

8、he letter you sent me last week.As to your question in your letter, Id like to tell you its very common for us students of middle school. I suffered from the same problem at one time. Therefore, you dont have to worry about it too much. If you want to make a difference, you can do the following thin

9、gs ：Most important of all, you should try to communicate more with your friends and teachers actively to throw light on what you think of. .Only in the way can your friends understand you more. And you can talk about what others care about and the things and persons they are interested in. Besides,

10、helping others is of great importance for you, for others can be kind to you if you are friendly to them.Best wishes to you !Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】略3One possible version:Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which weconducted a survey among kids aged 5-1

11、4 about their extra-curriculum activities. The results are as follows.As is illustrated in the chart, both boys and girls have a strong preference for watching TV or videos with the percentage ranking first at 100%. More boys than girls enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, bike riding and electroni

12、c or computer games as leisure activities, each accounting for nearly 40% , 70% and 80%. However, girls outnumber boys by almost 20% when it comes to art and craft. We can draw a conclusion from this survey that according to the data, passive pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones a

13、nd that those who opt for creative pastimes are in the minority.In my opinion, since the addiction to watching TV or videos or playing computer games is likely to do harm to childrens health, parents should be responsible for limiting the childrens time spent on passive leisure activities. In additi

14、on, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to develop their creativity and build up physical health. (165 words)【解析】略4Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day,Li Yue and Zhuang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing

15、 Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with

16、 the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.【解

17、析】試題分析：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時(shí)態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是半開(kāi)放性作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫(xiě)作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性?？忌嗍褂脧?fù)雜句，如范文里面的句子, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.這句話用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Everything done, they sat in the yard chatt

18、ing with the elderly people.這句話用的是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)?？键c(diǎn)：提綱作文。點(diǎn)評(píng)：作文要層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)流暢，切合作文要求，句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色，使用高級(jí)詞匯及句型。5 Attention, please, everyone. As senior middle school students, weve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life and keep fit through ph

19、ysical exercise, weve decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities.We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher. It will fall on the third period in the afternoon, when students are having after-class activities.It is desired that you take time to join our club, as it is a great way to keep healthy and a good chance to relax ourselves. What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.Those who have interest can go to the monitor and