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1、編輯課件1 中中 考考 專專 題題 復復 習習 課課Writing編輯課件2書面表達書面表達: 是中考英語中的必考是中考英語中的必考題，占卷面總分的題，占卷面總分的12.5%，分，分值為值為15 分分 。編輯課件3文章的形成過程：文章的形成過程：單詞單詞 短語，結構短語，結構 +符號符號 句句子子 段落段落 文章文章如何把這些組織一篇文章？如何把這些組織一篇文章？分析文章的形成過程首先，我們必須在頭腦中構成一幅mind map.在map的幫助下，我們就能有效的到達我們的目的地。編輯課件4分析結構分析結構 Mike is crazy about football!He loves watchin

2、g football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes his par

3、ents could give him their support for his hobbies . IntroductionMain bodyConclusion編輯課件5DiscussionHow to Write English Compositions編輯課件6抄抄組組集集連連抓抓審審作文作文集句成段集句成段組段成篇組段成篇審清題意審清題意連詞成句連詞成句抓住要點抓住要點抄寫規(guī)范抄寫規(guī)范 Writing skillssix steps編輯課件7自從實施教育新政策，中學生有了更多自主支配的時自從實施教育新政策，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這間，但

4、有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲校園英語之聲”欄目就欄目就“如如何更好地利用課余時間何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。請你用英語給進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內容要點包括：該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內容要點包括：注意注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數參考詞匯參考詞匯: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar 不良現(xiàn)象和行不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少為（至少3點）點）1. 花太多時間在

5、興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網吧，上網打游迷戀網吧，上網打游 3. 看法看法我認為我認為建議（至少建議（至少3條）條） 合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 編輯課件8Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our SpareTime”._編輯課件9第一步第一步:審清題意審清題意認真審題認真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作主題主題、體裁體裁、人稱人稱、字數字數、結構結構、時態(tài)時態(tài)、提示、提

6、示要點要點和和補充信息補充信息具體做法：具體做法：用筆勾畫用筆勾畫編輯課件10自從實施教育新政，中學生有了更多自主支配的自從實施教育新政，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲校園英語之聲”欄目欄目就就“如何更好地利用課余時間如何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。請你進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內容要點包括：用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內容要點包括： 不良現(xiàn)象和不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少行為（至少3點）點）1. 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷

7、戀網吧，上網打游戲迷戀網吧，上網打游戲3. 看法看法我認為我認為 建議（至少建議（至少3條）條）合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 注意注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數總詞數主題主題體裁體裁人稱人稱結構結構時態(tài)時態(tài)字數字數已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息以一般以一般現(xiàn)在時現(xiàn)在時為主為主編輯課件11第二步：第二步：列出寫作提綱（列出寫作提綱（Outline）。）。具體做法：具體做法：根據段落整理寫作要點根據段落整理寫作要點不要遺漏不要遺漏要點！要點！編輯課件12Introduction Main body Conclusionpr

8、oblemsopinionssuggestionsWrite an outline 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上 迷戀網吧，打電腦游戲迷戀網吧，打電腦游戲 - 合理安排時間合理安排時間 參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 -編輯課件13 List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _ 第三步：抓住要點，列關鍵詞第三步：抓住要點，列關鍵詞

9、編輯課件141.List some keywords about problems. spend too much time on their hobbies be crazy about play computer games watch too much TV refuse to do homework2. List some keywords about opinions.not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to 1. 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網吧，

10、上網打游戲迷戀網吧，上網打游戲.編輯課件153. List some keywords about suggestions. plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 編輯課件16spend too much time on their hobbies refu

11、se to do homeworkwatch too much TV be crazy about play computer games Whats worse, 1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems. sothatMany students spend much time on their hobbies they cant finish their homework on time.some of them watch too much TV, others students often go to the net bar a

12、nd are crazy about playing computer games.Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. We dont think its good for their study and health.2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. 第四步：連詞成句第四步：連詞成句第五步：集句成段，

13、組段成篇第五步：集句成段，組段成篇編輯課件17第五步：集句成段，組段成篇第五步：集句成段，組段成篇 we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, and take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we shoul

14、d help parents do some housework.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides these,And alsoWe注意添加注意添加主題句，主題句，連接詞！連接詞！plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do so

15、me housework3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. There are many things we can do.編輯課件18How to give this writing an end? Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful futur

16、e. 編輯課件19范文展示范文展示Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much t

17、ime on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare t

18、ime? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. I

19、f we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!編輯課件20 how to write a goodcomposition開頭開頭:開門見山開門見山中間中間結尾結尾:抓要點抓要點,列短語列短語短語擴句短語擴句找連接詞找連接詞連句成段連句成段與主題相呼應，與主題相呼應， 緊扣主題緊扣主題編輯課件211. 壓線壓線 2. 斜度一致斜度一致3. 扁扁 4. 飽滿飽滿 5. 間隔間隔編輯課

20、件22常見錯誤常見錯誤時態(tài)是否正確時態(tài)是否正確主謂是否一致主謂是否一致要點是否全面要點是否全面人稱是否正確人稱是否正確語序是否有問題語序是否有問題語言是否符合習慣語言是否符合習慣固定短語是否恰當固定短語是否恰當編輯課件23如今，中國掀起了廣場舞(public square dancing)熱潮。對于這種現(xiàn)象，人們褒貶不一。請你根據下列提示寫一篇短文，談談廣場舞的利與弊，并提出解決措施。要求：1.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；盡量運用本講的重點句子。2詞數：80100詞左右。開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：遭受suffer from；音量volume編輯課件24Nowad

21、ays，public square dancing is becoming more and more popular. Most of the public squares are crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening. We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old. Besides，it is money saving. But it also causes noise p

22、ollution. Many people suffer from the noise caused by the loud music. They cant work，study or sleep well. They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers. In my opinion，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing. In addition，our government should build more public places for the

23、m，such as squares and parks. We hope that people can have fun dancing without disturbing other people.編輯課件25范文展示范文展示Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays, we students have much more free time than b

24、efore. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We

25、dont think its good for their study and health.編輯課件26However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kind

26、s of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!編輯課件27The structure of the article IntroductionMain body Conclusi

27、onSummary ProblemsSuggestions opinions 編輯課件28寫作：寫作：第一步就是要第一步就是要認真審題認真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作主題主題、體裁體裁、人人稱稱、字數字數、結構結構、時態(tài)時態(tài)、提示、提示要點要點和和補充信息補充信息第二步就是要第二步就是要列出寫作提綱列出寫作提綱（列關鍵（列關鍵詞詞、連詞成、連詞成句句、集句成集句成段段、組段成、組段成篇篇）寫作前：寫作前：確定確定人稱、時態(tài)人稱、時態(tài)寫作后：寫作后： 查錯改錯查錯改錯編輯課件29中學生在成長過程中經常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做

28、法。寫作實踐寫作實踐你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少 學會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）編輯課件30變換句式變換句式并列句并列句復合句復合句結果狀語從句結果狀語從句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on ti

29、meSome students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time編輯課件31思路構建思路構建構思列綱提出問題Im not tall and Im not goodlooking.My parents cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school.I have too much pressure in study. I have few afterschool activities.提出建

30、議I dont care about these, and I believe in myself.I communicate with them and Im friendly to my classmates at school.I relax myself: I do sports or listen to music. I go shopping with my parents or friends.編輯課件32自我展示自我展示Hello everyone,Im Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with

31、them. Im not tall and Im not good-looking. But I dont care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and Im always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in st

32、udy too and often have few after-school activities. So I often relax myself. When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my編輯課件33_Thats all. Thank you!parents or friends. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.高分點評：高分點評：本文采用本文采

33、用“總總分分總總”的寫作結構。首先提出了分享問的寫作結構。首先提出了分享問題與解決方法的意愿，然后談論每個問題及解決的方法，題與解決方法的意愿，然后談論每個問題及解決的方法，最后用禮貌性的語言作出總結。本文作者能夠較好地處理最后用禮貌性的語言作出總結。本文作者能夠較好地處理表格中所提供的寫作信息，并能發(fā)揮自主性，提出自己的表格中所提供的寫作信息，并能發(fā)揮自主性，提出自己的合理建議。合理建議。編輯課件34短語：短語：care about, believe in, communicate with, be friendly to; relax oneself; go shopping句型：句型：When I have free time,