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1、減少減少be 動詞的使用動詞的使用be 動詞動詞n主要指be的各種形式和 there + be 的各種形式,還有 which is 的表達。在英語中它們常被稱為靜態(tài)表達靜態(tài)表達,一般說來,英語表達中應(yīng)盡量避免。因為它們有靜態(tài)傾向,在表達中往往使文章變得缺乏生氣。(1a) There is a beautiful park near my house. The name of the park is Tian Tan Park, which was built several hundred years ago. It is the biggest park in Beijing. The Ti

2、an-Tan Park is famous for not only its beauty but for its quietness.請比較:請比較:(1a) There is a beautiful park near my house. The name of the park is Tian Tan Park, which was built several hundred years ago. It is the biggest park in Beijing. The Tian-Tan Park is famous for not only its beauty but for i

3、ts quietness.(1b) Near my house stands Tian-Tan, the biggest park in Beijing, built several hundred years ago and famous now for not only its beauty but also its quietness.顯然后者的動詞要比前者有力得多,因而使文章更為生動耐顯然后者的動詞要比前者有力得多,因而使文章更為生動耐讀。作文不能僅僅滿足于讀。作文不能僅僅滿足于“沒有錯誤沒有錯誤”,或語法結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞,或語法結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞的正確性,而且還要追求表達的生動性。要寫出生動、簡潔

4、、的正確性,而且還要追求表達的生動性。要寫出生動、簡潔、有力、耐讀和連貫的文章就要有力、耐讀和連貫的文章就要“盡可能選擇強有力的行為動盡可能選擇強有力的行為動詞詞”,“可以少用被動語態(tài)和動詞可以少用被動語態(tài)和動詞 be be 的其他形式。的其他形式?!?2a) There are seven factors that contribute to this phenomenon./There are seven factors contributing to this phenomenon. (2b) Seven factors contribute to this phenomenon. (3

5、a) On the river banks there are many willow trees with their branches bending into water.(3b) Many willow trees bend their branches into the river. (4a) It is a small mountain village surrounded by a clear river winding through a deep valley.(4b) A clear river surrounds a small mountain village and

6、winds through a deep valley.非主句謂語動詞非主句謂語動詞 變主句謂語變主句謂語被動變主動被動變主動(5a) In the 1890s, China was invaded by western enemies and Chinese people were killed.(5b) In the 1890s, western enemies invaded China and slaughtered Chinese people.(6a) This is the place where dreams of a remote paradise are transform

7、ed into reality.(6b) The place transforms dreams of a remote paradise into reality.替換為詞義相近的行為動詞替換為詞義相近的行為動詞(7a) The problem is still unsolved.(7b) The problem remains unsolved.(8a) The gap between generations is wider and wider.(8b) The gap between generations grows wider.(9a) Mutual respect is the

8、basis of our cultural cooperation. (9b) Mutual respect sustains our cultural cooperation.(10a) Chinese people were killed.(10b) Chinese people fell victim to slaughters. 系表結(jié)構(gòu)變?yōu)閯酉当斫Y(jié)構(gòu)變?yōu)閯?賓賓)結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)(11a) Online shopping is very convenient for those busy people. (11b) Online shopping brings great convenien

9、ce to those busy people.(12a) Online shopping is popular in modern society.(12b) Online shopping enjoys great popularity in modern society. (12c) Online shopping prevails in modern society. (13a) In the front, it was a sharp slope of a cliff. (13b) The front cliff sloped sharply.(14a) Ecological imb

10、alance is the biggest threat to the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings.(14b) Ecological imbalance threatens the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings. (15a) The dominant feature of Nanking is the Yangtze River Bridge.(15b) The Yangtze River Bridge dominates Nanking.其他詞改變詞性做謂語其他詞改變詞性做謂語(16a) There is a river before my house. It is an east-to-west river and connected wi

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