2020-2021年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編

1、2020-2021 年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1.書(shū)面表達(dá)我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與方法，請(qǐng)你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇f短文，多聽(tīng)聽(tīng)收音機(jī)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)等，可以放松.多說(shuō)運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)能力與信心.多讀書(shū)開(kāi)闊視野，了解英語(yǔ)文化.語(yǔ)法規(guī)則更好地理解與運(yùn)用.寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)寫(xiě)日常生活.其他要求：1語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;2.必須包含表格中所有內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)80-100?！敬鸢浮縈y En glish StudyHow time flies!

2、My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my En glish study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs.Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with cla

3、ssmates. Speak ing En glish can enhance the abilityand con fide nee to lear n En glish well. Third, read more En glish books. Read ing can broade n our horiz on and help us understa nd En glish culture .In additi on, lear n some grammar rules to better un dersta nd and use En glish. Fin ally, we can

4、write about our daily life.In a word, only whe n we develop in terest i n study ing En glish can we lear n it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如look back,listen to theradio,a good way to learn En glish,relax ourselves,com muni cate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition , ina word等。而感嘆句H

5、ow time flies!，倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.禾口復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，

6、考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.書(shū)面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同學(xué)們對(duì) 初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右 放學(xué)，下 表所列里 大家的發(fā) 言記錄。 請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 oclockexercise to keep healthy and read booksat 4:45do what we want, such as liste

7、 ning to musicat 5 oclocktake a part-time job注意：(1)短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3) 詞數(shù)：80-100；(4) 短文開(kāi)頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文開(kāi)頭： “What time should junior high school stude nts leave school? held a classmeeti ng to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussi on.【答案】 “What time should junior hi

8、gh school students leave school?”This week we have held aclass meeti ng to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussi on.Most stude nts thi nk that stude nts should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise tokeep healthy and read more in terest ing books after school.Some think that

9、 stude nts should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such asliste ning to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collect ing discardedplastic bottles to sell for mon ey.I am in fa

10、vor of leaving school at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keephealthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room

11、，playtennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most studentsthink that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, becausethey can have more time to do what they want to do, such as liste

12、ning to music.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表This week we have達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí)Most stude ntsthink/ Some think/ A few tl使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總 結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有 條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】 書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)

13、。3書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是Amy,德國(guó)的交換生Sara下周即將來(lái)你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來(lái)信，在信中， 她詢問(wèn)如下信息：1.你家情況；2有關(guān)餐桌禮儀；3.她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)；4現(xiàn)在，你 就她提出的問(wèn)題給她回信,也預(yù)祝她在你家過(guò)得開(kāi)心！ 要求：1.文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.字?jǐn)?shù)約110詞。Dear Sara,Im glad to hear from you yesterday._Love,Amy【答案】Dear Sara,Im glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family nex

14、t week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placedon the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate.This is a sign of politeness. The appropria

15、te thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feeluncomfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there. As for housework, I think its our dutyto help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes

16、, clean the room and make the bed. Ihope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do so

17、me housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，makethe bed，take care of，how to do等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and sharedby everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope youcan take care of yo

18、urself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá) 更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】 書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和

19、較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長(zhǎng)，作為初中生的你，你感覺(jué)自已比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變 化?請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。要點(diǎn)包括: 1.變化是什么?2.變化是如何發(fā)生的?3.變化后有什么感受?【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and

20、bought me a lot ofbooks. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantasticway to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?！驹斀狻?結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，

21、人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was ,my mother always readGradually I began to,Books are等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān) 系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書(shū)，接下來(lái)介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書(shū)，最后指出現(xiàn)在書(shū)籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begi nto do sth, love doi ng sth, fe

22、el like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5.書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái)，西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes)，但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionn ecessary or unn ecessaryYour reas onsthe root（根）of Chin ese culture

23、, know more about, spread,developYour suggesti onDear editor,As we all know, Chin ese traditi onal culture is facing a great challe nge because of the rapid developme nt if intern ati onaltech no logy no wadays._Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chin ese traditi onal culture is facing a great ch

24、alle nge because of the rapiddevelopme nt of intern ati onal tech no logy no wadays. In my opinion, its n ecessary for schools toset up traditi onal culture classes.First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditionalculture and run after Wester n cultu

25、re. Second, traditi onal culture classes can give stude ntschances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, sett ing up traditi onalculture classes can spread and develop our Chin ese culture.All in all, it is of great importa nee to set up tra

26、diti onal culture classes in schools. Let schools to set up traditi onal cultureclasses!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本 文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱， 注意主謂一致問(wèn)題， 句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系 表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用， 比如：Chinese traditional cultureisfacing /its n ecessary for schools to,we shouldnt,They can raise，-

27、it is of greatimporta nee to等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn) 為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處becauseof,in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call o等這些詞組 的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6書(shū)面表達(dá) 初中即將畢業(yè),同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問(wèn)題,老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課上做

28、一個(gè)以“LessPressure Makes Life Better為題的報(bào)”告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇?與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求 寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括：1.普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2.我過(guò)去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3.我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2.詞數(shù)80左右,短文的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are unde

29、r too muchpressure. _【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cantget on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wan

30、ted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kindsof after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressedout so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes bet

31、ter life. Thank you.【解析】 【詳解】 這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要 包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的 壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng) 由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和 體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意 根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)

32、，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu) 為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和 復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成 分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】 這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn) 象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目 中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短 文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式 準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔

33、。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓 語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students cantget on well withtheir classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in myclass、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。7書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校200

34、9屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言 稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： 回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同 學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。注意：1. 90詞左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得 出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to ma

35、ke a speechon behalf of the graduating class of 2009.Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to makea speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this be

36、autiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively andinteresting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parentssupport and our classmates help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done f

37、or us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】 這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生 動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫(xiě) 作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。8書(shū)面表達(dá)(本題15分)根據(jù)要求

38、完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量(positiveenergy)。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助， 也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2.說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3.呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿正能量。作文要求：1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。 作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞 數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when

39、 a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire herbecause she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried m

40、y best to make her stop crying. When I knewshe was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for othershelp. I stronglybelieve helping others will fill ou

41、r society with positive energy. As the saying goe s,“The roses in her hand, the flavor inmine.（113w）”【解析】【詳解】 本文屬于話題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以 及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上 下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be for, adj en ough to do,

42、 theother day, try ones best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in oneto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思 連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因

43、此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確 性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還 要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇網(wǎng) 上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(a

44、dva ntage)1.不需要出門(mén)；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadva ntage)1.只看到圖片， 看不到商品本身2.容易購(gòu)買(mǎi)大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopp ing on li ne;商品goods;導(dǎo)致cause注意：1所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；3詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping

45、online.【答案】With the developme nt of the Intern et, many people are used to shopp ing on li ne. It has become fashi on able.Some of us stude nts also join the group.Shopp ing on li ne has many adva ntages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without goingoutdoors. You c

46、an avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you canchoose from more varieties of goods,whose prices are gen erally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy f(s opinion, be supto buy goods t

47、hat aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people tobuy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopp ing on li ne.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí) 態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任

48、務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，ingood quality，figure out，have the chanee to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)