高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)練習(xí)04-傳統(tǒng)文化話題指導(dǎo)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上2013屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)復(fù)習(xí)專題04 傳統(tǒng)文化話題指導(dǎo)實(shí)例指導(dǎo)1歡度春節(jié)Dear Bob, Im glad to hear from you. You said that you are very interested in Chinese customs, especially the Spring Festival. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. On the New Years Eve, the whole family usually get togeth

2、er to have dumplings, set off fireworks, and watch TV programs. On the New Years Day, people always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says "Happy New Year" to each other. Children can also get lucky money from their parents and other adults. When you take a walk

3、 in the streets, you will be struck by the sight of beautiful decorations. Some doors are decorated with red lanterns. This is something about our Spring Festival. And welcome to our country some day. Best wishes.Yours, Li Ming教師點(diǎn)評(píng):本文覆蓋了寫作任務(wù)中規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容,所使用的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)基本準(zhǔn)確,語言連貫,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,基本達(dá)到寫作目的。但是仍有個(gè)別地方有所欠缺,有待

4、修改和完善。1. 文章沒有段落,顯得有些繚亂且思路不清。2. 本文大多是單純的敘述和介紹,缺少作者本人的情感和一些帶有人情味的語句,讀起來給人感覺頗為生硬。成稿:Dear Bob,Ive received your letter, and Im glad to hear that you are very interested in our traditions, such as the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. Both a

5、dults and children look forward to this great day, just like Christmas Day in the West. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. The night before, the whole family usually gets together to have dumplings, set off fire-works, and watch TV. On New Years Day, people always get up

6、early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says "Happy new year" to each other. I like the Spring Festival because I can get lucky money from my elders. Walking down the street, you will see many beautiful decorations. Many homes are decorated with red lanterns and other things

7、. Isnt the Spring Festival interesting? Im sure that you will love it. I hope you can join us during a Spring Festival. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming實(shí)例指導(dǎo)2美國的節(jié)日習(xí)俗及文化寫作任務(wù):    假設(shè)你是學(xué)校英語愛好者俱樂部的會(huì)員,近期此俱樂部即將籌備一場(chǎng)會(huì)員聚會(huì),主題是了解美國的節(jié)日習(xí)俗及文化。你想讓會(huì)員們了解一下即將到來的美國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日"土撥鼠節(jié)"。下面是你在網(wǎng)上查閱到的相關(guān)信息:

8、0;DateFebruary 2ndPlaceCelebrated in America and CanadaOriginBegan in Germany in the 6th century; a traditional Christian festivalMeaningIf the groundhog comes out of its hole and sees its shadow, there will be 6 more weeks of winter; if it doesnt see its shadow, spring wont be far away.EventsA year

9、ly festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US. The State was populated mainly by German settlers.5. 本文是供英語愛好者傳閱,雖然是說明文,但是帶有一定的宣傳性質(zhì),因此語言力求簡潔、明了、活潑,以吸引讀者的注意力,讓讀者能夠通過簡短的內(nèi)容獲取最多的信息。Ground hog Day Ground hog Day is celebrated on February 2nd. It is celebrated in America and Canada.

10、 It began in the 6th century in Germany and is an old festival with long history.What does Groundhog Day mean? People say that if the groundhog comes out of its hole and sees its shadow, there will be 6 more weeks of winter. If it doesnt see its shadow, spring wont be far away. I think its a very in

11、teresting festival.There are a lot of events held on this day and every year a festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US, a state that was mainly populated by German settlers. 教師點(diǎn)評(píng):本習(xí)作內(nèi)容沒有偏離中心,表格中的內(nèi)容都轉(zhuǎn)化到了習(xí)作中,寫作過程中也作了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。但是本文有一個(gè)表格寫作類作文的通病:沒有仔細(xì)分析表格,沒有更好地組織文章內(nèi)容,只是將表格內(nèi)容照搬照抄到文中。另外,初稿

12、的句子銜接不夠流暢,句型使用單一。成稿將重點(diǎn)對(duì)這兩個(gè)問題進(jìn)行修改和完善。成稿:Happy Ground hog DayGroundhog Day is a traditional Christian festival which originated in Germany in the 6th century. Today it is celebrated in America and Canada on February 2nd. How does this festival relate to the groundhog? Here is the story. On this day, i

13、t is said if the groundhog comes out of its hole, sees its shadow, and returns to its hole, it means there will be 6 more weeks of winter. But if it doesnt see its shadow and starts the life on the ground, it means spring wont be far away. The groundhog is like a weather forecaster and Groundhog Day

14、 is a day to forecast the weather, which shows that the people are eager for spring. A festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US every year. The State was populated mainly by German settlers, which explains how the festival came to America.亮點(diǎn)提示:1. 第一段將表格中的"日期","地點(diǎn)&

15、quot;,"來源"三組信息用復(fù)合句流暢地整合到一起。2."How does this festival relate to the groundhog?"承上啟下,銜接兩個(gè)自然段,使過渡自然流暢。3. 文章最后一段用一個(gè)定語從句將節(jié)日活動(dòng)的舉辦地同節(jié)日的來源銜接起來,前后呼應(yīng),表明作者深入地理解了該英文背景信息。 實(shí)例指導(dǎo)3介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化 上面這篇書面表達(dá)可以說是考查了兩個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容。一是如何給筆友寫信，另一個(gè)是考查如何介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化元宵節(jié)。因此根據(jù)它的特點(diǎn)，我們寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 1書信是人們?cè)谌粘Ｉ詈凸ぷ髦羞M(jìn)行交際的工具，也是高考書面

16、表達(dá)中常見的考試文體。由于民族語言和習(xí)慣上的差異，英語信件在書寫格式及表達(dá)方式上與漢語不大一樣，有些地方迥然不同。但是近幾年我們主要是考查信的正文，因此只要掌握幾點(diǎn)就可以了：1）稱呼語稱呼指的是信文開頭的那種稱呼，如Dear , Mr, Uncle，各種稱呼因人而異。在稱呼后面一般是用逗號(hào)，但也有用冒號(hào)的。本文用Dear 就比較合適，注意要頂格寫。 In the daytime, there are performance such as a dragonlantern dance, a landboat dance , walking on stilts and so on. At nigh

17、t , besides magnificent lanterns , fireworks form a beautiful scene.If you have any question about this, please write to me soon . Yours faithfullyLihua 實(shí)例指導(dǎo)4My FavouriteFestval【寫作任務(wù)】我國有很多傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)你以“My FavouriteFestval”為題目，寫一篇120詞左右的作文。內(nèi)容包括： 1你最喜歡的節(jié)日； 2喜歡的原因。【寫作指導(dǎo)】 本文是一篇陳述原因的亨理說明文。通過介紹事物，指出原由，解釋事理，使人們

18、對(duì)抽象事理了然于胸，并領(lǐng)會(huì)其精神實(shí)質(zhì)。 內(nèi)容指導(dǎo)要寫好此類文章應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 事理說明文的寫作，首先要有明確的目的性，抓住事物的本質(zhì)特征；還要使用準(zhǔn)確、簡明、生動(dòng)的語言，對(duì)事物做客觀、科學(xué)的介紹和緣由解釋。總體結(jié)構(gòu)一般采用三段論：引言段、主體段、結(jié)論段。 a引言段：運(yùn)用所提供的相關(guān)提示或背景知識(shí)對(duì)某一現(xiàn)象加以描述，引入討論的話題，并縮小討論范圍，提出主題。引言要簡練、自然、流暢。 b. 主體段：主體段要圍繞主題，從不同的角度出發(fā)，通過巧妙運(yùn)用舉例法、對(duì)比分析、類比法等說明方法來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)，闡明原因時(shí)要合理使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，注意句子間的自然銜接。 c結(jié)論段：說明文的結(jié)論往往是對(duì)主題或中心思想進(jìn)

19、行重申，總結(jié)全文，提出某一問題的解決方柔，或得到的啟發(fā)等。 相關(guān)表違SprmgFestival春節(jié)id-autumn Festival 中秋節(jié)Qingming Festival 清明節(jié)delicious food 美味食品set off fireworks 放煙火get together 聚會(huì)visit relatives and friends 走親訪友pocket money 零用錢look on . as . 把看作There are several masons why 有種種理由What is more important is that 更為重要的是 實(shí)例指導(dǎo)5Foreign Fe

20、stivals VS Traditional Festivals寫作任務(wù):    隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,世界各國之間的聯(lián)系日益增多,文化之間的傳播也越來越多。受此影響,國內(nèi)一些年輕人非常熱衷過"圣誕節(jié)"、"情人節(jié)"等外國節(jié)日,而對(duì)一些傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日則嗤之以鼻。你校的英語校報(bào)開設(shè)的"Opinions"欄目本期就在討論對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法。請(qǐng)你寫一篇130詞左右的文章,向校報(bào)投稿。文章主要內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面:1. 為什么很多中國人喜歡過外國節(jié)日；2. 你對(duì)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的看法和觀點(diǎn)；3. 你的做法。參考詞匯:文化遺產(chǎn)c

21、ultural heritage分析:As society develops, many people celebrate foreign festivals in China. They believe its cool. At the same time, they dont think our traditional festivals are a big deal. However, I disagree.     I think we should pay more attention to our own festivals because

22、our traditional festivals are a very important part of our cultural heritage. And our traditional festivals are just as interesting as many foreign festivals. As our country becomes stronger, the world will learn more about our culture and festivals. Maybe one day people in other countries will cele

23、brate our Spring Festival as well.      So, we should try our best to protect our own festivals and protect our cultural heritage as well.教師點(diǎn)評(píng):1. 初稿基本完成了寫作任務(wù)的要求,文章包含了提綱中給出的要點(diǎn)信息,從結(jié)構(gòu)上看還是比較完整的。2. 存在的問題:1) 第二段中的第一個(gè)理由"我們的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是文化遺產(chǎn)的一部分"只用一句話帶過,讀起來很單薄,缺少說服力。2) 陳述的幾條理由之間銜接不夠緊密,

24、條理不是很清楚。3) 結(jié)尾部分沒有實(shí)質(zhì)性的建議和內(nèi)容。另外,在做總結(jié)時(shí),用"so"是比較口語化的用法,在這里使用"in conclusion"或者"all in all"等短語會(huì)更好。成稿:As society develops, many people in China, especially young people, celebrate more and more foreign festivals instead of our traditional festivals. They believe it is cool or

25、fashionable. At the same time, they consider celebrating Chinas festivals as out-dated.     I dont think this is good for younger generations or for our country. Firstly, traditional festivals are an important part of Chinas cultural heritage. They are unique and are precious tre

26、asures from our ancestors. If we dont keep them, we will lose our own cultural characteristics. Secondly, our traditional festivals are, in fact, just as cool as a lot of foreign festivals. As our country becomes stronger, the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just like

27、 our language becomes more and more popular in other countries.      In conclusion, I think its all right to receive some foreign cultures, but we should not ignore our own traditional festivals. We should learn more about them. As the Beijing Olympics approaches, we can introduc

28、e our festivals to our foreign friends!Powerful sentences:1. While learning advanced techniques and gaining experience from foreign countries, we should also protect our own cultural heritage.2. If we lose our own culture, we no longer have anything unique.3. Only through protecting our own cultural

29、 heritage, will we be respected by the world.Do we need to Fear the Popularity of Christmas?Nowadays Christmas Day is becoming more and more popular with Chinese youngsters. They celebrate and enjoy it in various ways. Meanwhile they dont know and dont care much about the traditional Chinese festiva

30、ls. Some people are worrying that the increasing popularity of Christmas might take peoples attention from traditional festivals in China.As far as Im concerned, there is no need to have fears over culture expansion. Youngsters are interested in new things, but it doesnt mean they are turning their

31、backs on Chinese traditional culture.However, we should stay cool while celebrating western festivals. We should bear in mind the cultural valve of celebrating our own traditional festivals, for if we let our traditions disappear, there will be a cultural gap, which western values may fill.李明在給美國朋友B

32、ob回信介紹了中國的春節(jié)后,又想了解西方除了圣誕節(jié)還有什么節(jié)日備受歡迎,于是向Bob詢問他最喜歡什么節(jié)日。假如你是Bob,請(qǐng)你給李明寫一封120詞左右的回信,向他介紹西方的萬圣節(jié)(Halloween)?；匦乓ㄒ韵乱c(diǎn):1. 萬圣節(jié)的時(shí)間(10月31日)；2. 在南瓜上挖出臉形,里面放蠟燭,做成南瓜燈；穿戴稀奇古怪的面具和衣服；準(zhǔn)備一個(gè)袋子。挑燈拿袋,挨家挨戶討要小獎(jiǎng)賞,不然就會(huì)搞惡作劇。Bob請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表寫一篇短文，向你的朋友Peter介紹中國公共假期的變化，并簡述這樣調(diào)整的原因。調(diào)整前 調(diào)整后 五一放假3天五一放假一天 清明節(jié)、端午節(jié)和中秋節(jié)不放假 清明節(jié)、端午節(jié)和中秋節(jié)各放假1天春節(jié)放假

33、3天春節(jié)放假3天，但提前到除夕國慶節(jié)放假三天，元旦放假一天國慶節(jié)放假三天，元旦放假一天注意：生詞：清明節(jié)：Tomb-Sweeping Day； 端午節(jié)： Dragon-boat Festival ；中秋節(jié)：Mid Autumn Festival字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150詞開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。China makes 3 traditional festivals holidaysThe Chinese government on Sunday officially announced the scrapping of one of the country's three "go

34、lden week" holidays and introduced three new one-day public holidays._A possible versionChina makes 3 traditional festivals holidaysThe Chinese government on Sunday officially announced the scrapping of one of the country's three "golden week" holidays and introduced three new one

35、-day public holidays.The new national public holiday plan adds three traditional festivals - Tomb-Sweeping Day, Dragon-boat Festival and Mid Autumn Festival - to the list of public holidays.The plan, which comes into effect on Jan. 1, also increases the total number of national holidays from 10 to 1

36、1 days.Each of the three traditional festivals will be a one-day holiday, The Spring Festival remains a three-day public holiday, but it will start one day earlier from the eve of the Lunar New Year, China's most important traditional festival.The May Day holiday is shortened from three days to

37、one day, while the three-day National Day holiday and one-day New Year holiday remain unchanged.Recently, millions of Chinese traveling at the same time makes transport and tourist destinations very crowded. The new plan would uphold Chinese traditions, make public holidays better distributed and, w

38、ith more people traveling on new public and paid holidays, ease overcrowding on the golden weeks.感恩節(jié)前夕,你用英語寫了一篇題目為"Live with Thankfulness"的文章,向你校的校報(bào)"英文隨筆"專欄投稿,號(hào)召大家學(xué)會(huì)感恩生活。(詞數(shù):120左右)1. 感謝大自然給你提供了生存環(huán)境。2. 感謝父母給了你生命,培育了你。3. 感謝老師教育你成才。4. 感謝朋友給你提供幫助。詞數(shù):120左右。Despite its name, Boxing Day

39、 has nothing to do with a boxing competition. Its a traditional British festival, which was first celebrated in England during the Middle Ages. It is celebrated on December 26, the day after Christmas, in Great Britain, and in other English-speaking countries including Canada, Australia, and New Zea

40、land.     Where did Boxing Day first come from? It is said that servants were once required to work on Christmas Day, but they could visit their families the next day, so as servants prepared to leave, their employers would give them boxes containing food and fruit, clothing, or money

41、.    Today, Boxing Day is spent with family and friends with lots of food and the sharing of friendship and love. Its also a day for shopping reduced price gifts, cards and decorations. (Linda)剛結(jié)交的英國網(wǎng)友Nelson一直很想了解中國的文化和習(xí)俗,你打算寫一封信向他簡要介紹一下中國的習(xí)俗,下面是你想要向Nelson介紹的內(nèi)容:1. greetings2. gift giving3. ways of tal