-2016高考英語各地短文改錯匯編---試題與解析

1、（全文由Peter編制）2016年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯1 .【2016全國新課標I短文改錯（10分）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popularin our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to

2、his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2 .【2016全國新課標II】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）The summer holiday

3、 is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broad

4、en you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.3 .【2016全國新課標III短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficul

5、t time for me . They were also the best and worse yearsin my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn utnderstand

6、me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4 .12016四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）It is Mother s Day toTdhaoyu.gh it s

7、 a western festival, it s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or Iplanned to do something on Mother WseDgaeyt. up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bu

8、nch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom s favAotritdieinsnt.er, we said to her, “ Happy Mother s！ Da”y Mom was grateful and moving.5.12016浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）When I was a very young children, my father creat

9、ed a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we at tdhegrdeoeot rh.eHt e would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While the

10、y chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up ther！eMy sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯1.12015陜西】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do

11、 anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some

12、on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2

13、.12015四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，共15分）Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been s

14、pending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact ,I don t lianymore, so I m afraid I ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you ta him?Please

15、help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.12015浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. I

16、n the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the roa

17、d. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.12015新課標全國II One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his

18、parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wa

19、it outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, see you again! Dad and I were terrible mise” d hTeor nthyat this would never happen again.5.12015新課標全國IWhen I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, butI miss m

20、y home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirt

21、ier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we regret it .2014年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯1. Correction 1（2014課標全國 I ）Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoeS（ 女果 ）in our ba

22、ck garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to gro

23、w in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2（2014課標全國 H ）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We di

24、dn t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time-wscithoaoflter activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.

25、 We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3（2014浙江）I was taking a train to London s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled w peop

26、le.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn tbecame quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his s

27、uccess.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4（2014遼寧）Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we ve

28、 been delighted to have you as neighbors, we re hoping to settle something that b us. In a word, your dog Cleo.We ve called several timeabout Cleo s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as

29、we are often up all night wi the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way

30、of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5（2014四川）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate

31、. Don t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighterscowmilleand put out a fire. If it s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroonotice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.2016年高考試題分項解

32、析之專題-短文改錯（答案解析）1.【2016全國新課標I短文改錯（10分）【答案】1. that -where 2. but 去掉 3. had -have 4. honest - honesty 5. or一 and6. using fused 7. becoming 前力口 of 8. the - 9. our f his 10. stead fsteadily【解析】試題分析：1. that -where考查宣語從句的引導詞，介詞后面的宣語從句缺少狀語，根據(jù)句意判斷此處表示地點，故把 that 改為 where。2. 去掉but考查連詞小Thou曲不和bnt連用，故去掉but.【歸納總結

33、】在英語中though、although、while或者as等引導的讓步狀語從句不和 but連用；連tbecause 不和so連用；此外，return不和back連用。3. had -have查動詞時態(tài)。文章是介紹現(xiàn)在的情況，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。4. honest - honesty查名詞。此處是指誠實是他成功的秘訣，用名詞形式。而形容詞honest意思是誠 實的”，是指人的性格特點。5-or-and考查連詞，根據(jù)句意判斷此處是表示并列關系，故把“改為and.6國里-used考查被動語態(tài)根據(jù)句意可知此處表示被動含義，be used foT被用來去做一7 beooming前加of考查介詞«

34、;固定短語二市cam of夢想做某事中78. the a考查冠詞。固定短語：in a short time在短時間內。9. our his考查代詞c根據(jù)句意可知此處是指叔叔的生意,用his指代。10. steadneaMy考查副詞匕根據(jù)句意可知此處即皿是實意動詞，意思是嘴長，不是系動詞，故用副 詞修飾.2.【2016全國新課標II】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）【答案】1.how 改為 what 2.chose 改為 choose 3.take 改為 taking 4.but 改為 and 5.about 后力口 the6.your 改為 our 7.knowledges 改為

35、 knowledge 8.刪除 can 或 can 改為 should 9.thought 改為 think 10.many 改為 much【解析】試題分析：考查記敘文，我”和同學們對暑假的旅游計劃的討論。I tow改為what考查特殊結構特殊疑問詞+依dd在本句中作為短語tall about的賓語，其中明面還要作為動詞曲的邏輯賓語。句意：同學們和我在談論暑假期間做什么。Zdroffe改為choose考查句子結構。情態(tài)動詞+動詞原形F可以在句中作為謂語部分，而本句中di醛e是 過去式.3 take改為回山喀考查并列結構本句中動名詞短語staying at上的岫與面由iga trip構成并列關系

36、；都作為介詞between的宣語*4一but改為311d考查連詞。句意：如果我們待在冢里,很舒服也沒有必要花錢。上下文之間是并列關系，而 不是車專折關系，所以使用and連接上下文.S aboul后加the考查定冠詞。在英語中定冠詞the通常表示特指,本句中the修飾world表示特指這個世界。6 .your改為our考查代詞。應該使用our與本句的主語we保持一致。句意：如果我們出國旅游，我們就 拓寬視野并學到書本上學不到的知識。7 .knowledges改為knowledge考查名詞單復數(shù)。本句中名詞 knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式。8 .刪除can或can改為should考查

37、虛擬語氣。動詞suggest作為建議的時候，后面的賓語從何要使用虛擬 語氣"(should)動詞原形”版以本旬可以刪除can或can改為should。9 .thought 改為 think 考查時態(tài)。本文介紹我和同學們商量暑假旅游的事情，全文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，所以本句使用現(xiàn)在時think。10 .many改為much考查代詞。本句中代詞 much代替不可數(shù)名詞 much money作為動詞cost的賓語，而 many通常代替可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)形式?！久麕燑c睛】高考短文改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面?？键c層次越高，就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層

38、次的考點往往側重于語法方面的考查，而高層次的考點往往側重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。一、詞法改錯詞法的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復數(shù)和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣，情態(tài)動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區(qū)別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習慣用法。例如：本題中的5.about后加the考查定冠詞7.knowledges改為knowledge考查名詞單復數(shù)10.many改為much考查代詞二、句法改錯句法的測試包括：主謂語在數(shù)上的一致性；名詞性從句、定語從句和

39、強調句；句子結構的連貫性、完整性、對等性和邏輯性。例如：1 .how 改為 what 考查特殊結構。2 .chose改為choose考查句子結構3 .take改為taking考查并列結構8 .刪除can或can改為should考查虛擬語氣三、語篇改錯語篇的測試包括：上下文的時態(tài)是否一致；上下文中的代詞指代是否一致；上下文中的邏輯關系是否一致。9 .but 改為 and 考查連詞10 your改為our考查代詞和邏輯關系11 thought 改為 think 考查時態(tài)3.【2016全國新課標III】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）【答案】51 .year years 52.wors

40、e worst 53.the 去掉54.yourself myself 55.such so 56.tell told57.freelyfree 58.wearwearing 59.to for 60.I A need【解析】試題分析:題目主要考查學生對詞法的掌握情況，測試學生能否在具體的語境申靈活運用51一彈前一¥叩考查名詞復數(shù)。13-19年是復數(shù)概念，2是可數(shù)名詞，故把y朝改為y皿。52vo*-曬值考查形容詞最高綱根據(jù)前句）19歲是最困難的時期可知，應該使用最高級；業(yè)d表并列，根據(jù) 限 可知,and連接了兩個最高級，故把worse改為亞0皿53面去掉考查冠詞.斌比sr起初，是固定

41、詞組，不需要冠詞，故把rhe去掉“54一ycEJm源f考查反身代詞，句意：我認為我什么都知道可以自己堂主意了*這里指作者自己做決定，根據(jù)主語I可知，應該用myself,故把yourse甘改為皿ys甑52 .such- so考查 so/such的用法。 my parents didnt seem to think so我的父母似乎不這樣認為， so指代 上一句的內容，故把 such改為so。56 .telltold考查時態(tài)。通篇回憶過去的事情，使用的一般過去時，故把 tell改為told。57 .freely-free考查形容詞副詞。be后跟形容詞構成系表結構，be free from擺脫,不受

42、的影響，故把freely改為free。58 .wearwearing考查固定搭配。by是介詞，意為 通過”，后跟名詞/代詞或動名詞，故把 wear改為 wearing o59 .tcfor考查介詞。leavespforsp離開某地前往另一地，colkge是目的地，故把to改為for。M.I人幽9d考查狀語從句“ whenever引導讓步狀語從句,意為“無論何時，隨時: 從句缺少主語，根據(jù)句意可知，這里指毋需要父母的幫助，故在whenever后加I。考點：名詞；形容詞；代詞；介詞；最高級；固定搭配；時態(tài)【名師點睛】改錯中動詞、連詞以及上下文語境也是出題者經(jīng)常會考慮的出題知識點，其解題方法如下：1

43、 .動詞錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決英語中有許多的短語動詞，是很難從字面上判斷其意義的。其中與介詞構成短語的動詞是最常見的。我 們在分析題目的時候，發(fā)現(xiàn)有動賓搭配的時候，應該考慮該動詞是否是一個短語動詞，并進而分析構成 該短語動詞的介詞有無遺漏。對于短語動詞的熟悉是一個長期積累的過程，需要隨時總結與記憶。以下 是考試中常見到的短語動詞：account for； add up to；back up； break down； break away from； bleak out； break up； breakin；break off;bring about;bring up； bring out; brin

44、g down； build up； call off; call for；callon； carry out; check in； clear up； come off; comearound; count on；cut down； cut off;doaway with； dwell on； fall back on；fall out； get over;get out of； get at；give out；give up；giveoff； hang on； hold back； keep back from；keep up with； lay off； lay down； live up

45、 to；lookinto ；look forward to ； look over； make up； make out； pass away put up with ； role out ； runout of； set about；take over；take up；take in； take off； turn up； turn out； work out 等。還有一種?？嫉膭釉~的用法就是語態(tài)。在所分析的文字中包含謂語動詞，那么應該分析是否是這方面的 問題。其中應該重點分析主語與謂語動詞的關系是主動還是被動。2 .連接詞錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決例： However, a second perso

46、n thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manne rs 本題所考查的就是比較連接詞的用法。從前文的more我們就可以看出，下文的as是不恰當?shù)模_的答案應是比較連接詞than。一般來說，比較連接詞所考查的重點集中在as與than的用法上。句意中是否還有比較意義是很容易辨別的，我們一旦覺察到句子有比較的意思，就應考慮是否是as與than的用法混淆。此外定語從句的連接詞也是要特別注意的。我們看 2000年6月的第74題：Instead, this other person told us a s

47、tory, it he said was quite well known.在這里，句子的后半段很明顯是一個非限制性的定語從句，所 以應將it改為which.非限制性的定語從句的連接詞在近幾年的考試中反復出現(xiàn)，應該引起我們的重視。解決此類問題的方法是，凡是發(fā)現(xiàn)有復合句的分析對象，首先就要考慮從句的連接詞。首先看是否有連 接詞，其次看連接詞是否正確，尤其是 which與that的不同應用。3 .語言環(huán)境類錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決從歷年的考題來看，語言環(huán)境類的錯誤是最有章可循的。這類錯誤一般是一行中的關鍵詞與上下文所體 現(xiàn)出來的意思完全相反。此類題的解決也較簡單，那就是將不符合文意的詞改為它的反義詞即可。

48、如第 54題就是屬于語境錯誤。句意：我認為我什么都知道，可以自己拿主意了。這里指作者自己做決定，根 據(jù)主語I可知，應該用myself,故把yourself改為myself。4.12016四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）【答 案】 1.so-but2.houseworks-housework3.or-and4.get-got5.去掉 on6 .her-his 7.在 in 和 kitchen 之間加 the 8.what-that/which（或去掉 what） 9.favoritest-favorite 10.moving-moved【解析】試題分析：和媽媽過母親節(jié)。L9-

49、but句意：媽媽有一個全即工作，但是她不得不做多數(shù)的家務此處表示轉折關系,故把Q-bul。2.houseworks一housework飛0但陽0£廠是不可數(shù)名詞？故把 houseworkshousework 03.oi一皿1固定搭配：bothand一,兩個都一中故把orand°4 .getgot句意；在母親節(jié)我們起床早。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時態(tài)，故把getgot。5 一去掉on固定詞組;go shopping去購物作可矢法掉on46 her-hi5 句意士在爸爸手里.故把her-his。7 .在in和kitcheii之間加the句意；我在廚房里做飯。此處特指在廚房里。故在

50、in和儂就的之間加the.-儂仍柿1曲或去掉what）此處考查引導定語從句的關系代詞。句意：我做的菜是媽媽最喜歡的。The dishes做先行詞:指物，定語從句跳少引導詞，從句缺少賓語，可知引導詞在定語從句中作賓語，故把wim-that/wbich去掉 wlut）*9.£avoritcst-favorite ，*favori既本身就是“最喜歡，故把由voritest-favorite &lO moviiig- - -moved句意：媽媽即感激有感動心故把moving-moved «【名師點睛】表示情感的現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞surprising令人驚訝的，surpris

51、ed感至U驚訝；frightening 令人害怕的，frightened 感至U害怕； moving 令人感動的， moved感動；exciting令人興奮的，excited感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的，bored感到厭煩； annoying令人煩惱的，annoyed感到煩惱的?，F(xiàn)在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通常指人。比 如第10小題moving-moved 句意：媽媽即感激有感動。故把moving-moved?？键c：考查短文改錯5.12016浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）66 .【答案】children改成child工解析】試題分析士因為前面有不定冠詞a?

52、所以這里用單數(shù)由故childien改成child?？键c：考查名詞單復數(shù)67 .【答案】late改成later【解析】試題分析：late是形容詞 遲的”，或副詞 遲地”，但是 j段時間后面應該接later ；'表示”時間以后”。故 late 改成 later。考點：考查副詞68 .【答案】at后面加the1解析】試題分析:at Zend *f為固定搭配,意為"在一.結束的時候、故或后面加小也考點：考查冠詞69 .【答案】her改成him【解析】試題分析： 根據(jù)上文可知我們每天在門口迎接爸爸。用 him指代my father,作greet的賓語。故her改 成 him o考點：考

53、查代詞70 .【答案】was改成were【解析】試題分析：這句話的主語是we,謂語用復數(shù)，而且這篇文章是作者回憶小時候的事情，用一般過去時。故was改成were。考點：考查主謂一致71 .【答案】knowing改成know【解析】試題分析：pretend后面接不定式作賓語，這里是否定式 pretend not to do。故knowing改成know?？键c：考查動詞不定式72 .【答案】去掉had【解析】試題分析：句意：他和我媽媽會喝些東西。這里不是虛擬語氣，不能用 would have done,用would do表 示過去常常做"。故去掉had?？键c：考查動詞形式73 .【答案】

54、chat改成chatted【解析】試題分析：根據(jù)主句內容 my father would lift my sister可知while引導的時間狀語從句用一般過去時。故 chat 改成 chatted o考點：考查動詞時態(tài)74 .【答案】in改成on【解析】試題分析：on小七top M為固定搭配，意為“在頂部l。故in改成on?？键c：考查介詞75 .【答案】excited 改成 exciting【解析】試題分析：這句話的主語是形式主語it,真正的主語是to be up there,主語是物的時候，表語應該用現(xiàn)在分詞形式的形容詞。故excited 改成exciting。考點：考查形容詞【名師點睛】

55、高考短文改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面?？键c層次越高，就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層次的考點往往側重于語法方面的考查，而高層次的考點往往側重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。這篇短文主要是一些詞法錯誤，詞法的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復數(shù)和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣，情態(tài)動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區(qū)別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習慣用法。例如：本題中的66. children改成child （名詞單復數(shù)

56、錯誤）67. late改成later （副詞錯誤）68. at后面加the （冠詞錯誤）69. her改成him （代詞錯誤）71. knowing改成know （非謂語動詞錯誤）72去掉had （虛擬語氣錯誤）73. chat改成chatted （動詞時態(tài)錯誤）74. in改成on （介詞錯誤）75. excited改成exciting （形容詞錯誤）2015年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯（答案解析）1.12015 陜西】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分） 【答案】76. 去掉in 77.anything 改為 something 78.better 改成 best 79.

57、decide 改成 decided 80.step 改為steps 81.well 改成 good 82.after 改成 when/while 83.a 改為 the 84.just 后加 to 85.enjoy 改為 enjoying【解析】試題分析：文章介紹作者的教練退休了，在退休聚會上作者送給教練自己親手烘焙的拼干。教練非常高興°% .句意：我的足球教練上個星期退休了。1,守,上前面不加介詞，去掉也，M句意；我想在他退休聚會上為他做些特別的事情?？隙ň溆胹om白血ng口74句意：我媽媽做的是世界上最好的餅干。用最高級，bser改成besn為句意；所以我決定向她求助序這篇文章使用一般過去時，dm也改成詼nded。加句意：媽媽教我一些基本劃共焙的步驟“step是可救名詞，用復數(shù)混pn8L句意：我認為這些餅干很好。做表語用形容詞1科頓改成并。丸S2句意：我唯一的錯誤是在我將它們打包的時候將它們掉在地上口出"改成科hskhllE好這里是特指第一段提到的退休聚會。a改為由2句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多這樣的餅干，用不定式做目的狀語 jlM后加85.句意：我最喜歡的照片是我和我的教練在聚會上開心地享受餅干&