改變句子的開頭---靈活的奧妙

1、How to Get Your Composition Advanced 改變句子的開頭改變句子的開頭-靈活的奧妙靈活的奧妙 多種句式多種句式-精彩總是在變化中精彩總是在變化中 分詞和不定式分詞和不定式-極富表現(xiàn)力的表達(dá)極富表現(xiàn)力的表達(dá) 過渡詞過渡詞-文章的潤滑劑文章的潤滑劑 習(xí)語習(xí)語-使你文采飛揚(yáng)使你文采飛揚(yáng),與眾不同與眾不同 洋味十足洋味十足- 話措詞話措詞 不難的一招不難的一招-相同的意思用不同相同的意思用不同 的詞語的詞語A Students versionMany students feel it difficult to finish so much homework. Not o

2、nly do they have classes in school but also do their homework at home. I have heard that some of students stay up until midnight. How hard they are!In my opinion, there are some reasons causing it. On one hand, the teachers consider that the more exercise the students do, the better they will learn

3、. so the teachers ask the poor students to do a good many work. On the other hand, the parents also demand their children that they should do too much homework in order to get their lessons improved. Im not in favour of taking too much work . The teachers and parents should change their way to bring

4、 up their children. _a great deal of_/1. 改變句子的開頭方式改變句子的開頭方式.不要一味地用主語開頭不要一味地用主語開頭,適當(dāng)使用狀語提前適當(dāng)使用狀語提前1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the moring2). The young man could not help crying when he heard the news.3) We all Know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly.Earl

5、y in the morning, we met in the school gate and went togetherHearing the news, the young man couldnt help cryingAs is known to us all/As we all know, internet will Help us a lot if we use it properly多種句式多種句式. 避免在整篇文章中只使用一兩個(gè)句式避免在整篇文章中只使用一兩個(gè)句式,可以靈活運(yùn)用省略可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句句,強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句,倒裝句倒裝句,主從復(fù)句主從復(fù)句 with獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

6、1).My parents praised Ahfu warmly.It had saved my sister bravely.2).We had to stand there to catch other offenders3).Our school has changed a lot.4). He opened his eyes wide and looked at me curiously.5).When I saw the scene, I felt very frightened.6).We dont have enough time to have a rest for a si

7、ngle day.My parents praised Ahfu warmly,who had saved my sister bravely.What we had to do is to stand there to catch other offendersOur school has been /is no longer what it was /used to be.He looked at me curiously with his eyes wide open.At the scene, how frightened I felt!Not a single day do we h

8、ave enough time to have a rest.分詞和不定式分詞和不定式-極強(qiáng)的語言表現(xiàn)力極強(qiáng)的語言表現(xiàn)力nHe stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offenders.nWe had a short rest,Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories ;some played chess.nTom is a boy of six. He knows three languages.n4. The boss was

9、greatly satisfied with my answer and decided to employ me. He stopped us half an hour ago to make us catch the Having had a short rest,we began to play happily,singing and dancing.Some told stories, while others played chess.Being a boy of six, Tom knows three languages.As a boy of six ,TomAged six,

10、 TomGreatly satisfied with my answer, the boss decided to過渡詞-文章的潤滑劑記住積累一些常用的過渡詞,拿來即用: then, besides, furthermore ,moreover,What was/is more What was/is worse,In addition(to this), so far as Im concerned,As well (as) , not onlybut also, on the contrary, after all,apart from that, in my opinion, there

11、fore, as a result, Needless to say(不用說), thereafter(后來) ,afterward,however, nevertheless ,sooner or later巧用習(xí)語-增加文采巧用一些介詞短語巧用一些介詞短語,名詞短語名詞短語,形容詞短語形容詞短語 使文采不同凡響使文采不同凡響1).Many houses are being built. 2).She hurried to catch the train.3).When I thought of the coming holiday, I just couldnt helping smili

12、ng . 4).We decided to stay to help the poor old lady5).When the man got on the bus ,he was tired and hungry.Many houses are under construction.She was in a hurry to catch the train.At the thought of the coming holiday, I just We made a decision to give help to the poor old ladyTired and hungry, the

13、man got on the bus.洋味十足-才是好文章I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!”I was very eager to go home. I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.She shouted at the top of her voice, “I ve made it!”I coulnt wait to go home.不難的一招-相同的意思用不同的詞語1)I like being left quiet while my sister likes being in an active situation.2)My father lost his work