作文訓(xùn)練系列之圖表作文(一)

1、 作文訓(xùn)練系列之圖表作文作文訓(xùn)練系列之圖表作文(一一) 圖表作文有表格(table)、柱形圖(bar chart)、餅狀圖(pie chart)和折線圖(diagram)之分。一般情況下，都需要對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行描述，一般放在文章的第一部分，長度宜適中。 圖表式作文形式多樣，是一種控制性和應(yīng)用性極強(qiáng)的出題方式，從寫作類型來看，以說明文或議論文為主。考生要圍繞題目并將有關(guān)信息轉(zhuǎn)化為文字形式，這要求考生具有一定數(shù)據(jù)分析和材料歸納的能力，同時(shí)還需要運(yùn)用一定的寫作方法。對(duì)此類作文題一般以三段式寫作方法來組織文章，即：第一段總結(jié)歸納信息反映的總的情況，點(diǎn)出主題思想；第二段對(duì)數(shù)字、數(shù)據(jù)等信息作出有條理的分析比較；

2、第三段作出總結(jié)或加以簡單評(píng)論。 思路點(diǎn)撥: 首先對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行分析，弄清其內(nèi)容和性質(zhì)，進(jìn)而確定其體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)；然后確定文章所用的時(shí)態(tài)；最后確定所用的人稱。當(dāng)然必要的過渡以及句式的變化也是非常必要的。 演示: 題目要求：假設(shè)你是李華。你將代表學(xué)校參加國際中學(xué)生論壇，就你所在城市的教育狀況發(fā)表演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下兩幅圖表，介紹你市高中學(xué)生構(gòu)成情況及畢業(yè)去向的選擇，并針對(duì)兩幅圖中的任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況發(fā)表自己的看法。 注意： 1開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。2詞數(shù)：100左右，不包括已給出部分。 3參考詞匯：nonlocal workers外來務(wù)工人員；vocational school職業(yè)學(xué)校 Ladies and

3、 gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im going to talk about the high school education of my city. I believe the future of the education in our city is promising! Thats all. Thank you. 審題: 1、體裁：圖表式作文，為說明議論文體 2、主要時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 3、人稱：第一,三人稱 4、要點(diǎn)：說明議論文體，? 關(guān)鍵詞及

4、短語： be honored to do sth. on behalf of make up intend to according to made more efforts be happy to 連接詞: besides; and; for example, for one thing; for another 參考答案參考答案 Ladies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im going to talk about the high sch

5、ool education of my city. From chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. There are even 1 percent foreign students. According to chart 2, the stu

6、dents choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to universities. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies. I think we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after

7、graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago. For one thing, our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers. For example, their children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. For another, with th

8、e economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up business here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. I believe the future of the education in our city is promising! Thats all. Thank you. 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練: 下面的餅狀圖（p

9、ie chat）顯示了你對(duì)你校學(xué)生興趣愛好的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你用英語給English Weekly寫一篇短文，報(bào)道你的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并對(duì)此結(jié)果發(fā)表你的看法或建議。字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右。首句已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。 A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the pie chart, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in ou

10、r school. The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy t