2022屆高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)之求助篇-課件

1、首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)感謝篇單詞單詞difficulty n. 困難 seek v. 尋求problem n. 問(wèn)題 assist v. 幫助face v. 面對(duì) eager adj. 渴望的helpless adj. 無(wú)助的 instruction n. 指導(dǎo)upset v. & n. 困擾 guidance n. 指導(dǎo)confused adj. 困惑的 anxious adj. 焦急的短語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)offer some guidance 提供一些指導(dǎo)encounter a problem 遇到一個(gè)問(wèn)題be faced with problems/ difficulties 面對(duì)問(wèn)題/ 困難have dif

2、ficulty/ trouble (in) doing sth郾 在某方面有困難give sb. a hand/ do sb. a favor 給某人幫助ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help 向某人尋求幫助一、話題詞匯一、話題詞匯Step 1 素材累積素材累積首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)開(kāi)頭引人入勝開(kāi)頭引人入勝1. Recently, I have difficulty in., which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 最近,我在方面有困難,這很困擾

3、我。 因此,我別無(wú)選擇,只能向你求助。2. Unfortunately, I find it quite hard to., so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 不幸的是,我發(fā)現(xiàn)做很難,所以我寫(xiě)信是想尋求你的幫助。3. Im sorry to bother you, but I meet some difficulties and Im writing this letter to seek your help.很抱歉打擾你,但我遇到些困難,寫(xiě)信是想尋求你的幫助。篇中精編細(xì)織篇中精編細(xì)織1. Faced with so many diffi

4、culties, Im at a loss and Im anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on.?面對(duì)如此多的困難,我不知所措,非?？释玫侥愕膸椭?你能給我一些關(guān)于的建議嗎?二、話題句型二、話題句型首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)2. What bothers me most is that its difficult for me to. 最困擾我的是我很難3. I am eager to., but I dont know how, which makes me upset, so I long to get

5、your timely help. 我渴望,但我不知道怎么做,這使我很煩惱。 所以我渴望得到你及時(shí)的幫助。收尾簡(jiǎn)練到位收尾簡(jiǎn)練到位1. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and spare some time for. 如果你能花點(diǎn)時(shí)間幫助我,我將不勝感激。2. I will be extremely grateful if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能幫我,我會(huì)非常感激。3. Thank you for your kind consideration and I look forward to

6、receiving your earliest reply. 謝謝你的關(guān)照,期待盡早收到你的回復(fù)。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)1.最近,我在與同學(xué)友好相處方面很困難,這個(gè)問(wèn)題讓我很困擾。_2.最令我困擾的是我無(wú)法將我的注意力集中在學(xué)習(xí)上。_3. 如果你能花點(diǎn)時(shí)間幫我修改簡(jiǎn)歷,我將不勝感激。_三、仿寫(xiě)練習(xí)三、仿寫(xiě)練習(xí) Recently, I have difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. What bothers me most is that its difficult for me to co

7、ncentrate on my study. I would appreciate it if you could do me a special favor and spare some time for polishing my resume up.首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)Step 2 遣詞造句遣詞造句一、句型講堂一、句型講堂定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句1.限制性定語(yǔ)從句限制性定語(yǔ)從句與先行詞關(guān)系密切。 在一個(gè)限制性定語(yǔ)從句中,如果去掉從句,主句的意思就沒(méi)法表達(dá)完整了,它是先行詞在意義上不可缺少的定語(yǔ)。 主句和從句之間不需要用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)。 引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系詞有關(guān)系代詞 that, who, whom, wh

8、ose, which, as 以及關(guān)系副詞 when,where, why 等。The boy who wears a pair of glasses is my cousin. 2. 非限制性定語(yǔ)從句非限制性定語(yǔ)從句與主句關(guān)系沒(méi)那么密切。 在一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句中,如果去掉從句,主句還是完整的一個(gè)句子,從句只是作為附加說(shuō)明。 從句和主句之間多有逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)。 非限制性定語(yǔ)從句一般不用 that 引導(dǎo),且句中的關(guān)系詞不可省略。The book, which is a gift from my classmate, is interesting._ _ _ _ _主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)(先行詞先行詞) 關(guān)系代詞關(guān)

9、系代詞 充當(dāng)定語(yǔ)充當(dāng)定語(yǔ),修飾修飾 the boy 系動(dòng)詞系動(dòng)詞 表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)_ _ _ _ _主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ) 先行詞先行詞 關(guān)系代詞關(guān)系代詞 充當(dāng)定語(yǔ)充當(dāng)定語(yǔ),修飾修飾 the book 系動(dòng)詞系動(dòng)詞 表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)二、強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練二、強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練(一一) 單句改錯(cuò)。下列每個(gè)句子中均有一處錯(cuò)誤單句改錯(cuò)。下列每個(gè)句子中均有一處錯(cuò)誤,請(qǐng)找出并修改。請(qǐng)找出并修改。The man who lives next door sell eggs in the market.2. Mary, with whom I watch movie last night, was a sports lover.3. This i

10、s the city which I used to stay.4. Tom was absent from class again, which made his teacher anger.5. The room who window faces south is the most beautiful._sells_watched_Where / in _angry_whose首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)(二二) 寫(xiě)作必備。請(qǐng)將下列中文句子譯為英文。寫(xiě)作必備。請(qǐng)將下列中文句子譯為英文。 多虧了你的熱心幫忙,我順利到達(dá)了目的地。 (thanks to) _2.他的家庭太貧困了,根本付不起學(xué)費(fèi)。 (too.t

11、o.)_3.這篇文章是根據(jù)唐代歷史寫(xiě)的。 (base.on)_4.他決定留在中國(guó),不去美國(guó)。 (rather than)_5. 從那以后,他就不再是我們的好朋友了。 (no longer)_ Thanks to your kind help, I got to the destination smoothly.His family is too poor to afford the tuition.This article is based on the history of Tang Dynasty.He decided to stay in China rather than go to

12、America. Since then, he was no longer our good friend.首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)三、短文改錯(cuò)三、短文改錯(cuò)以下短文共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taken writing course in your International English School during the summer vacation. Im writing to ask for the help. I came here last mon

13、thand find the courses interested. But I have difficulty in note鄄taking and I have no idea ofhow make a sentence. Especial, how to polish the passage and make it fluent. Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings but Friday afternoons. Please let me know which days is okay

14、with you. You may emailed me. Here is my email address: _taking_Especially_the/ your/ some_with to_email_found_and_day_intereting首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)lihua3453. com. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua剖析剖析第一處:taken寅taking?？?查 非 謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞。 因 為 a Chinese student 與 take 之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以 這里應(yīng)該使用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ),故 taken 改為 taki

15、ng。第二處:help 前的 the 去掉,或改為 your/ some。 考查冠詞。 此處 help 為泛指,不能用定冠詞,故 help 前的 the 去掉,或改為 your/ some。第三處:find寅found?？疾閯?dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。 由 last month 可知,這里使用一般過(guò)去時(shí),故 find 改為 found。第四處:interested寅interesting?？疾樾稳菰~。 courses是物,用以鄄ing 形式結(jié)尾的形容詞修飾 the courses,故 interested 改為 interesting。第五處:in寅with?？疾榻樵~。 have difficulty wit

16、h sth.是固定搭配,意為“做某事有困難”,故 in 改為 with。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)第六處:how 后面加 to。 考查不定式。 how to do.意為“如何做”,故 how 后面加 to。第七處:Especial寅Especially。 考查副詞。 副詞修飾整個(gè)句子,故 Especial 改為 Especially。第八處:but寅and。 考查連詞。 根據(jù)句意可知,星期二上午和星期五下午都沒(méi)有課,故 but 改為 and。第九處:days寅day。 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。 因?yàn)榍懊嫣岬搅诵瞧诙衔绾托瞧谖逑挛鐩](méi)有課,所以讓史密斯老師從中選擇一天,因此使用單數(shù),故 days 改為 day。第十處

17、:emailed寅email。 考查動(dòng)詞。 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面接動(dòng)詞的原形,故 emailed 改為 email。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)Step 3 謀篇布局謀篇布局一、案例展示一、案例展示英語(yǔ)高考原創(chuàng)題英語(yǔ)高考原創(chuàng)題書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá) 假定你是李華,暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職,已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume)。 給外教 Ms Jenkins 寫(xiě)信,請(qǐng)他幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)二、審題立意二、審題立意審題定位審題定位1. 文體:求助信2. 主題:請(qǐng)求幫助3. 要點(diǎn):說(shuō)明兼職意向+請(qǐng)求幫忙修改4. 要

18、求:詞數(shù) 100 左右,增加細(xì)節(jié)以使文章充實(shí)、連貫5. 人稱:第一、第二人稱為主6. 時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主技技巧巧點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥撥1. 本試題并非提綱作文,首先需要理清寫(xiě)作思路,總結(jié)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,從而整理作文框架結(jié)構(gòu)。2. 適時(shí)地采用豐富的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)以及復(fù)雜句型表達(dá)。3. 注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接,適當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)或獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)要點(diǎn)整合要點(diǎn)整合1. 鋪墊陳述:為了獲得暑假兼職的機(jī)會(huì),需要寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷。2. 碰到問(wèn)題:第一次寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,對(duì)文字和格式不太了解。3. 請(qǐng)求幫忙:提出讓對(duì)方幫忙檢查修改申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,自己將不勝感激。框框架架構(gòu)構(gòu)建建第一段:自我介紹,開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出寫(xiě)信目的:尋求對(duì)

19、方的幫助。第二段:簡(jiǎn)要闡述想要得到兼職的機(jī)會(huì),并寫(xiě)好了申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,順著話題,提出自己碰到的問(wèn)題,拿不準(zhǔn)申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷的文字和格式是否正確,希望對(duì)方能夠幫忙檢查修改。第三段:提前感謝對(duì)方的幫助。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)斟詞酌句1. 鋪墊陳述:淤I(mǎi)n order to get some practical experience, Im planning to apply for a part鄄time job at a famous foreigncompany, which I think will be pretty helpful to my future career.于I have alre

20、ady completed my application letter and resume.2. 碰到問(wèn)題:However, as this is the first time I prepare these, Im not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used.3. 請(qǐng)求幫忙:I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could spare some time to go throughthem and make necessary

21、 changes.首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)三、妙筆生花三、妙筆生花 豐富的詞匯和多樣的句型,是從眾多作文中脫穎而出的關(guān)鍵。積累高級(jí)詞匯,學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用多種句型,你的作文才能出類拔萃。詞匯與短語(yǔ)詞匯與短語(yǔ)ask for 尋求 in order to 為了get some practical experience 獲得一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn) plan to 打算,計(jì)劃apply for 申請(qǐng) be helpful to 有助于busy schedule 繁忙的日程 go through 仔細(xì)檢查make necessary changes 對(duì)做必要的修改 in advance 提前句型與表達(dá)句型與表達(dá)淤I(mǎi)n order to

22、 get some practical experience, Im planning to apply for a part鄄time job at a famous foreign company, which I think will be pretty helpful to my future career.句中使用豐富的詞匯,將目的狀語(yǔ)獨(dú)立出來(lái),非限制性定語(yǔ)從句是亮點(diǎn)。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)于However, as this is the first time I prepare these, Im not quite sure of the language and the format I

23、ve used.用過(guò)渡詞 however 表轉(zhuǎn)折,邏輯關(guān)系清晰;用 as 引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句巧妙地帶出原因。盂I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could spare some time to go through them and make necessary changes.you have a very busy schedule 為賓語(yǔ)從句,后面的 but 表轉(zhuǎn)折,Id be very grateful if you.為條件狀語(yǔ)從句。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)四、寫(xiě)作達(dá)人四、寫(xiě)作達(dá)人首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)首 頁(yè)末

24、 頁(yè)Step 4 經(jīng)典再現(xiàn)經(jīng)典再現(xiàn)一、考題回放一、考題回放20162017 河南省天一大聯(lián)考 假定你是李華, 今年 10 月份即將去英國(guó)的布萊頓大學(xué) ( Brighton University)留學(xué)。請(qǐng)給你在布萊頓的網(wǎng)友 Tom 寫(xiě)一封英文電子郵件,讓他介紹一下布萊頓這座城市,告知他你的租房需求并請(qǐng)他幫忙租房子。 注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)關(guān)和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Tom, _Li Hua首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)二、思路點(diǎn)撥二、思路點(diǎn)撥這是一封求助郵件,首先清楚雙方關(guān)系為網(wǎng)友,由于很快要去對(duì)方所在的城市上學(xué),可以告知對(duì)方很快就可以見(jiàn)面了。

25、 順便引出寫(xiě)信目的,即求助。 因?yàn)閷?duì)方是當(dāng)?shù)厝?熟悉當(dāng)?shù)氐那闆r,可以請(qǐng)對(duì)方大致介紹這座城市,并提前幫忙租房。 不管最終對(duì)方能幫到多少忙,郵件中一定要提前感謝對(duì)方,以表禮貌。 在談到租房子時(shí),可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),如原因或者對(duì)房子的具體要求。三、詞句錦囊三、詞句錦囊each other 彼此 give sb. a hand 幫某人一個(gè)忙do sb. a favor 幫某人一個(gè)忙 in advance 提前brief introduction 簡(jiǎn)短介紹 give an introduction 做個(gè)介紹live off 住在之外 furthermore 此外anyway 不管怎么樣 express.t

26、o sb. 向某人表達(dá)首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)四、補(bǔ)充完整四、補(bǔ)充完整Dear Tom, I am very excited to tell you that well meet each other soon because Ill start my study in Brighton University this October. Talking about this, I am thinking whether you could give me a hand. 1._ (為了讓我在那里更加舒適), I wonder if you could do me a favor. First, I nee

27、d to have a clear idea of the city of Brighton in advance, so would you please give me a brief introduction of it? Second, I want to live off campus while studying there, 2. _(這會(huì)給予我更多的自由). Therefore, could you please help me rent a one鄄bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom? Furthermore, 3.

28、_(如果房子在學(xué)校附近那就完美了). Anyway, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you first. Looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Li HuaTo make my stay there more comfortablewhich will give me more freedom it would be perfect if the apartmentis near the schoolStep 5 佳作研習(xí)佳作研習(xí)一、作文典范一、作文典范佳作研讀佳作研讀Dear Wa

29、ng Wei, Im looking after my sick father in the Second Hospital. Hes getting a little better now, which is the biggest happiness I received these days. Ill take my responsibility toattend to him for three more days here, and Ill make an attempt to teach myself in my free time in case Im left behind.

30、But what I worry about is if I can completely catch math. As you know, it is obviously abstract sometimes. So are you kind to lend your math notebook to me? Itll be better if you take the trouble to note the lessons down in detail. Hoping for your notebook. Your help counts to me! Yours,Li Hua非限制性定語(yǔ)

31、從句非限制性定語(yǔ)從句+限制性定語(yǔ)從句限制性定語(yǔ)從句并列句并列句+狀語(yǔ)從句省略狀語(yǔ)從句省略+in case 從句從句+what 主語(yǔ)從句主語(yǔ)從句+if 表語(yǔ)從句表語(yǔ)從句+catch three more days+make an attemptit 形式主語(yǔ)形式主語(yǔ)首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)習(xí)題示例習(xí)題示例 假如你是某校學(xué)生李華,正請(qǐng)假照顧病重住院治療的父親。 你不想落下課程,打算在看護(hù)期間自學(xué)。 但你擔(dān)心自己難以看懂?dāng)?shù)學(xué),所以給你的同學(xué)王偉發(fā)一封電子郵件,借他的數(shù)學(xué)筆記看看。 注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Wan

32、g Wei, _Yours,Li Hua首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)一、作文典范一、作文典范研習(xí)以上范文美句研習(xí)以上范文美句,將下列句子譯為英文。將下列句子譯為英文。1.我有 3 份兼職工作,一年能掙大約 14,000 英鎊。2.大致說(shuō)來(lái),做這件事有 3 種方法。3.把溜冰鞋帶去,說(shuō)不定你們要溜冰呢。4.童年發(fā)生的事深深地影響著我們。5. 如果我能告訴他是誰(shuí)給他打過(guò)電話,那樣會(huì)更好。_ There are, broadly speaking, three ways in which this can be done. I have three part鄄time jobs, which bring in ab

33、out 14,000 a year. Take your skates in case you want to go skating.We are deeply affected by what happened to us in childhood. I think it would be better if I could tell him who called.首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)Step 6 仿真模擬仿真模擬 假定你是李華,在美國(guó)某中學(xué)做交換生。新生開(kāi)學(xué)之際,你被選為優(yōu)秀學(xué)生代表在開(kāi)學(xué)典禮上發(fā)言,已寫(xiě)好了發(fā)言稿。 給你的外教 Mr. Brown 寫(xiě)封信,請(qǐng)他幫你修改發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容和格式(form

34、at),并且希望他告知你作為優(yōu)秀學(xué)生代表發(fā)言有哪些需要注意的地方。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Task 1Task 2 假定你是李華,正在美國(guó)的某所中學(xué)參加暑期課程,你的教授布置完成一篇關(guān)于美國(guó)的風(fēng)俗與文化的論文。 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中你遇到了一些困難,希望得到你的美國(guó)朋友 Peter 的幫助。 請(qǐng)給Peter 寫(xiě) 一 封 郵 件, 內(nèi) 容 要 點(diǎn)如下: 1. 求助的內(nèi)容; 2. 希望得到建議和幫助; 3. 約定時(shí)間。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。首 頁(yè)末 頁(yè)Dear Mr. Brown, Im Li Hua, one of your students. Worried about how to be a speaker, Im writing to turn to you for help. Im chosen as the representative of the outstanding students to give a speech at the school opening ceremo