短文寫作專題訓(xùn)練

1、短文寫作專題訓(xùn)練 李時珍中學(xué)高三英語組短文寫作（滿分30分） 一、寫作要求：要求學(xué)生根據(jù)提示準確使用英語詞匯、進行書面表達?？忌鷳?yīng)能： 1.有效運用所學(xué)語言知識，準確使用語法和詞匯 語言的準確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個重要方面，因為它直接或間接地影響 到信息的準確傳輸。應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準確程度是寫作部分評分標準中的一項 重要內(nèi)容。 2.使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地傳遞信息，表達意思 任何一篇文章都需要有一個主題，作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型、詞匯等的支持，清楚、連貫地表達自己的思想。 二、評分原則本題總分為30分，按5個檔次給分。 詞數(shù)少于100，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。評分時，先根據(jù)

2、文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評分檔次的確定應(yīng)在內(nèi)容符合題目要求的前題下側(cè)重于語言的表達。評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語言表達準確、多樣、連貫、得體。拼寫與標點符號是語言表達準確的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。如書寫太潦草，以至影響辨認，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔第五檔25-30分 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。所有內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用準確，雖有個別錯誤，但不影響意義的表達；具備較強的語言運用能力。恰當使用了語

3、句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔第四檔19-24分 完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用基本準確，個別錯誤對意義的表達有一定影響。較恰當?shù)厥褂昧苏Z句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)較緊湊。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔第三檔13-18分 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示比較吻合。應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能基本滿足任務(wù)的要求。有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯的錯誤，對意義的表達有較大影響?；灸苁褂谜Z句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)比較松散。整體而言，基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔第二檔7-12分 僅完成試題規(guī)定的部分任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)

4、容與提示基本吻合。語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，應(yīng)用詞匯有限。有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了意義的表達。語句間的連接成分運用不當，缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。第一檔第一檔1-6分 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示不太吻合。語法結(jié)構(gòu)單一，應(yīng)用詞匯十分有限。有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的嚴重錯誤，嚴重影響了意義的表達。缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分分 -未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所 寫內(nèi)容無法看清。四、近幾年湖北高考英語作文1、2010年高考英語作文部分 第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分25分） 請你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中

5、的一個實例，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勎⑿Φ淖饔?。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意：無須寫標題； 內(nèi)容只需涉及一個方面； 詞數(shù)為100左右。One possible version I still reme

6、mber how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke English throughout the class, which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the

7、 English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shone on the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to take charge of English study in

8、my class. Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I began to be confident.2、2011年高考英語(湖北卷)作文題目第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分25分）請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個事例，就與人合作這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpos

9、e of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)為100左右。One Possible Version Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didnt realize

10、 its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. T

11、hus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.滿分作文 As is universally acknowledged, teamwork has been playing a dramatically important role. Tea

12、mwork makes it clear that by joint efforts we can do something beyond our imagination. Additionally, it improves our ability of cooperation and communication. The experience that our class won the annual science and technology festival still remains fresh in my mind. There was little chance that we

13、would win at that time because there existed many great competitors in our grade. However, we didnt lose heart. Instead, we were just united closely and each member spared no effort in it. Luckily, we succeeded. It is clear that teamwork is of crucial importance. It has magical effect, before which

14、difficulties disappear and obstacles vanish.3、2012年湖北卷高考英語作文第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分) 請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version Three years ago I failed an important

15、exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along

16、well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that dete

17、rmines who you are. 滿分作文1 In our daily life, we can experience various kinds of things, including good ones as well as bad ones. If we are optimistic about our life, we can still benefit from the bad things. Five years ago, I went to have a piano test. Unfortunately, the teacher who was to carry out

18、 the test was a very strict man. Seeing that many students had failed in the rest, I felt very nervous and didnt know whether I could pass it or not. After a while, my name was called. I suddenly realized that this was a very precious chance to test my real performing skills and I might as well make

19、 full use of it to show my ability. Much to my surprise, the teacher was very satisfied with my performance and gave me a high mark. Through this experience, I understand no matter what we face, we should try our best to deal with it with positive attitude. As long as we believe ourselves, were sure

20、 to succeed in the end.滿分作文2 As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what weve already had. When I was a child, I am fo

21、nd of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had werent enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thoug

22、ht of an idea to divide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity. After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make u

23、se of what we have already had to solve problems.4、2013年高考英語作文（湖北卷）題目：第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分) 請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”， but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。【思路點撥】 本文以

24、“我們應(yīng)該意識到，言語也可能會傷害別人”為題，讓學(xué)生寫一篇短文。體裁可為記敘文、議論文和說明文。但根據(jù)考生的實際情況，還是記敘文好些，可以通過自己的親身體驗來證明這句話?？忌晌臅r應(yīng)注意：1.結(jié)構(gòu)上：采用三段成文，第一段引出話題；第二段講自己的親身體驗；第三段說自己的認識，回歸主題。2.時態(tài)：以一般過去時為主。3.人稱：第一人稱。4.注意恰當使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5.適當使用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次?！痉段摹?My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by hi

25、s compliments. One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red. Aft

26、er class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply. Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. We should avoid hurting others if we cant always

27、be encouraging when we speak. 2013湖北高考英語滿分作文 王祖元 武漢市新洲一中 Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life. One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several cha

28、nces that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates comfort and persuasion as well as Peters apology and explanation that helped

29、 me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasnt long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever. From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get throug

30、h and get along well.五、高考英語作文專項訓(xùn)練 1、請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 It is known to all that volunteering benefits others, but we should also aware that it can benefit volunteers themselves, too.注意：無須寫標題； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。One Possible Version Nowadays,

31、 more and more people, especially young people, enjoy doing volunteering work, which of course benefits others and makes our society more harmonious. However, volunteering can also benefit volunteers themselves. When I studied in junior middle school, I volunteered to accompany an old man in the hom

32、es for the elderly at weekend. The old mans only interest was to talk or listen to history stories. Unfortunately, I happened to be the lest interested in history and history was my poorest subject. In order to satisfy the old man, I began to study history very hard. Not only did I listen to my teac

33、her attentively in class, but also I borrowed history books from the library and even studied history in the Internet. Gradually, I got to be fond of history and made great progress. Later, I even took the first place in a history knowledge competition. Ever since, history has been my best subject.

34、My experience has convinced me that while helping others, we ourselves may get developed. So, lets do volunteering work and that will benefit others, society and us ourselves as well. 2、請根據(jù)以下提示并結(jié)合一個事例，就“潛能無限”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。As we all know, ones potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, yo

35、u can never imagine how powerful ones potential will be. Therefore, its unwise to set limits to your potential.注意：1）不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限； 2）文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)120以上。 Potential is limitlessIts universally acknowledged that a persons potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges

36、, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they realized how powerful a persons potential will be.An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago. An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest

37、 life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day. It never rains but pours.One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers anger and

38、therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.The story makes me firmly believe that o

39、ur potential is limitless. Consequently, its of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind and grow our potential to the fullest.3、一個好學(xué)生應(yīng)該具有許多優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)（如圖所示），你認為哪種或哪兩種品質(zhì)最重要？為什么？請分析原因，并結(jié)合生活實際，寫下感悟。 Passion Self Discipline（自律） Perseverance Responsibility Honesty 要求：1）詞數(shù)為120個左右； 2）文中不得出現(xiàn)個人姓名和學(xué)校

40、的信息。 注意：1. 行文連貫，條理清楚，詳略得當； 2. 結(jié)合實例，寫出真情實感。Good Qualities in StudentsOne Possible Version There is no denying that nearly all students expect themselves to be outstanding youngsters deep in their hearts. Then what kind of good qualities are outstanding youngsters supposed to own? And which ranks as t

41、he most important quality among dozens of good ones? Personally speaking, Im strongly convinced that honesty should be put first. There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”, and it seems as true as it was when first created. The most important element in human relationships, whether b

42、usiness or personal, is trust. Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Having known the real fact from teachers, they encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original

43、 deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth! From then on, I have kept the following in my mind: If it is not true, dont ay it. If it is not right, dont do it. 4.請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 We know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man. But some p

44、arents havent realized the importance of experiencing hard times. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version I think parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life. I grow up in an ordinary family, which is not so well o

45、ff. I could understand the hardships my parents were bearing at that time. Therefore, I work very hard now in the hope of entering the university and changing the situation of my family and me. I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a persons potential and pave the way f

46、or him to achieve success. One can be strong, brave and faithful after all these hardships he has gone through. All in all, as far as I am concerned, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm but that a hard life is good for children.5.請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 In the modern s

47、ociety, we should learn to share. Sharing is an effective way to enrich our life. We can learn a lot by sharing with our classmates and friends.注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version I didnt realize the value of sharing until I failed the final exam last term,

48、during which time I studied on my own, fearing that studying with my classmates might disturb me. As a result, I had little communication with my classmates during the whole term. Then my teacher had a long talk with me, telling me the importance of sharing with others. I followed her advice and beg

49、an to share my study experience with my classmates and learn from them at the same time. Gradually I caught up with them. It was sharing that made me achieve such great progress and become more confident. 6.請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 We all know the saying“Gifts of roses, hand there are lingering fragr

50、ance”. It is better to give than to take. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version Do you know that when you are helping others, you are actually helping yourself? I understand this through a voluntary service. It was on last years Learning-from-Lei Feng Day that

51、 I had this unforgettable experience. On that day, my classmates and I went to the school library to help the librarians clean the book shelves. Hot though the weather was, all of us did our job dedicatedly. On finishing the job, we were really pleased as we saw around the clean environment that we

52、had created. Moreover, knowing that we had made a difference made us feel great pride. There is no happiness that is better than that acquired by helping others. It helps us enjoy the deepest pleasure, through which we can see how important we are for the society. I appreciate the experience of help

53、ing people, which not only brings warmth and convenience to others, but also enriches my own life!7.請閱讀下面英文短詩，用英語寫一篇短文，表達你對該詩意思的理解。 Work while you work, and play while you play. For that is the way to be happy and gay. All that you do, do with your might（力量）. Things done by halves are never done rig

54、ht. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version Work and play are both necessary for us. Work gives us knowledge while play gives us rest. Being hard-working is one of the qualities we admire. We can not achieve success without it. Once we set our goal, we must work

55、 hard until we succeed. It is no good getting things half done. However, we can not work all the time if we are going to keep healthy and enjoy ourselves. Good physical and mental health can enable us to work efficiently. While you work, you should work by heart. Then while you play, you will be eve

56、n more relaxed. If we understand the relationship between work and play, and arrange our time properly, we can achieve our goal in our life.8.請結(jié)合以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，分析越來越多的人騎自行車的原因。 Nowadays, more and more people choose to ride bicycles. They believe there are many advantages of riding bicycles, such as c

57、onvenience and benefit to the environment and so on.注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。One Possible Version Nowadays, there exists an increasingly special phenomenon that bicycles take up the road again. There are a couple of reasons that produce this phenomenon. Firstly, ridin

58、g bicycles is the most environmentally friendly. It doesnt have to burn any fuels; nor does it give off any polluted air. Secondly, it is quite convenient. The bicycle can always find its way ahead, even though there is a traffic jam. The bicycle takes the least room to park in, which saves much tro

59、uble, especially in big cities. Thirdly, the bicycle costs the least among all means of transport. It costs so little that almost every family can afford to buy one. Finally, by riding bicycles, people can take regular exercise.9.請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。 We all know success results from positive habits. But some students havent realized that different habits produce different consequences. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左