托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作真題：兒童教育類(lèi)

1、托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作真題：兒童教育類(lèi)話題類(lèi)別：兒童教育類(lèi)What is the most important do you think to share with a young child (age 5-10)?1. Being well organized2. Being honest3. Being helpful to others題目翻譯：分享給5到10歲的孩子以下三個(gè)價(jià)值觀，哪一個(gè)是最重要?1.樂(lè)于助人2.誠(chéng)實(shí)3.組織有序托福寫(xiě)作考試點(diǎn)評(píng)：本次托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作是兒童教育類(lèi)，新題，但也是傳統(tǒng)的兒童教育類(lèi)，意思是你認(rèn)為要跟小孩分享的事情最重要的是哪一個(gè)，第一是要讓他們生活有條理，第二是要誠(chéng)實(shí)，第三

2、是要樂(lè)于助人，典型的三選一題型，還是用上課時(shí)候講過(guò)的文章結(jié)構(gòu)和方法去寫(xiě)作即可，可以兩段支持段加一段反證段，也可以一段支持段加兩段反證段，靈活使用即可。這里選擇第一個(gè)。首先，being organized是他們今后獨(dú)立生活的必備能力。其實(shí)現(xiàn)在很多孩子的小時(shí)候的生活都是父母在安排，孩子只要被動(dòng)的.接受并且執(zhí)行，其實(shí)沒(méi)有自己的想法，而這則會(huì)使他們對(duì)父母產(chǎn)生過(guò)度的依賴，會(huì)對(duì)他們獨(dú)立生活會(huì)產(chǎn)生消極影響，導(dǎo)致自己無(wú)法自理生活，而如果從小就學(xué)習(xí)如何能夠井井有條的安排自己的生活的話，他們以后就可以自己很獨(dú)立很好的生活。其次，being organized能減輕他們以后生活和學(xué)習(xí)的壓力。其實(shí)，現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生都有拖

3、延癥，就是因?yàn)椴粫?huì)安排自己的時(shí)間，導(dǎo)致拖到最后自己壓力很大，這甚至到high-level education還會(huì)發(fā)生，所以being organized是一種管理生活和學(xué)習(xí)的能力，能夠考慮好每件事情要做的時(shí)間點(diǎn)，知道在正確時(shí)間做正確的事情，這樣的話不僅可以按時(shí)完成自己的學(xué)習(xí)或者工作任務(wù)，還可以讓自己的生活壓力減緩很多。另外，being honest雖然也很重要，但其實(shí)在今后的生活中，一個(gè)人是很難保持百分之百誠(chéng)實(shí)的，因?yàn)橛幸恍﹫?chǎng)合是需要說(shuō)謊的，比如說(shuō)有些善意的謊言，而且在某些情況下，誠(chéng)實(shí)反而會(huì)冒犯到他人，比如直接指出他人的缺陷或者短處，所以說(shuō)孩子應(yīng)該要在自己的生活和社交過(guò)程中去體會(huì)如何在不冒犯他

4、人的情況下去保持誠(chéng)實(shí)，這是在他們小時(shí)候可能無(wú)法理解的事情，這是需要時(shí)間去磨練和積累的。當(dāng)然，being helpful也是一個(gè)很重要的品質(zhì)，但同樣地，幫助他人也要看情況，不能一味的幫助他們，這樣的話有時(shí)候使得他人對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生過(guò)度的依賴，反而對(duì)他們的能力產(chǎn)生負(fù)面效果。而這些也是孩子在小時(shí)候難以學(xué)習(xí)的道理。詞匯：1. traditional virtue 傳統(tǒng)道德2. absolute truth 完全的事實(shí)3. Confrontation 對(duì)抗4. Blotch 弄臟5.dilemma 困境、窘境6. in the long run 長(zhǎng)期7. betrayal 背叛8. overwhelm 勝過(guò)9

5、. derive from 從.獲得托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作范文一:The traditional virtue of honesty in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in todays world. Many believe that being honest is not always the best policy when dealing with people and shall not be shared with children. Be that as it may, this essay will explore the

6、 importance of being honest in relationships between people.Undeniably, Sharing values of being honest exposes children to the cruel world. We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. Even, many would agree that if a company is to tell th

7、e absolute truth about its products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products. The same logic also applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your

8、 opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one shes currently wearing? and spoil her birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particularly) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.However, there is always the risk factor of th

9、e truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. the basic trust in any relationships friends,parents and children will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. the story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequences of tell

10、ing lies. no one will believe you when youre telling the truth. Therefore, after presenting the value of honesty to children, they will avoid falling in the dilemma.In addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth will emerge. untruths

11、breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; in the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party. In contrast, delivering the value of being honest to children, children will have no worries of fearing the truth to be exposed. Th

12、erefore, the life will be easier than those choosing to cover up the secrets.Everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms th

13、e minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. After all, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. Indeed honesty is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. As a result, this value should be shared

14、greatly.(word count: 472)托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作范文二:As the first teacher of a child, parents play a pivotal role in childrens growth, which is not just restricted to physical well-being but includes personality-building and psychological health. Especially for young children aged 5 to 10, parents are like role model

15、s that children admire and try to imitate. So, there are many good traits that parents are supposed to help children develop, such as being honest, being helpful and being organized. In my mind, the first lesson children at this age should learn is honesty.To begin with, honesty is the valuable char

16、acter for a child to be accepted by others. To maintain friendly relationship, people need mutual trust. It is vital that a child is honest to parents, playmates, teachers and anyone they meet. At young age, they may be simply blamed for telling lies, but when they grow up, what dishonesty costs the

17、m is the loss of trust, and gradually they may be isolated. In a word, parents should timely point out childrens lies and appropriately help them correct the mistake. For instance, the reason why a child refuses to admit he breaks the vase is he fears parents punishment. But, if he finds his lies ca

18、n help him avoid punishment and thus gets used to lying, the loss will finally become unbearable and irreversible in future work or study.Secondly, children should also learn to be honest to themselves. Inevitably, people will encounter some situations or consequences that they are unwilling to conf

19、ront. At this moment, someone may choose to deceive themselves and escape from reality. Through constantly lying to themselves, they may finally forget the truth and accept lies they make up as facts. For example, when a child does not want to admit he loses a game at school, he may make up some exc

20、uses to cheat himself, such as unfair referee, and refuses to admit the competitor actually is stronger. Consequently, once he finds sanctuary in lies, the dishonesty to inner heart stops him from training harder to win the game but encourages complaints and self-abandonment. Parents at this time have the duty to motivate children to break lies and be honest to themselves bravely.Admittedly, being cooperative and organized is also significant characteristic that children ought to possess since young. To keep everything in order is the prerequisite for one to maintain high efficiency in work o