如何寫(xiě)高中英語(yǔ)作文作文

1、How to write a good compositionAbove all, we should avoid making some mistakes in it. 高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.1.評(píng)分原則評(píng)分原則（1 1）評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其）評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬所屬檔次檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或者調(diào)，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或者調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。整檔次，最后給分。（2 2）詞數(shù)詞數(shù)少于少于8080和多于和多于120120的，從總體中減去的，從總體中減去2 2分。分。（3 3）評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：）評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要

2、內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用，應(yīng)用詞匯詞匯和和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性量和準(zhǔn)確性以及上下文的以及上下文的連貫性連貫性。（4 4）拼寫(xiě)拼寫(xiě)與與標(biāo)點(diǎn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。（5 5）如）如書(shū)寫(xiě)書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以至于影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)較差以至于影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。檔次。常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤分析常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤分析1.However, other students against the idea.2.I am not be a student who is crazy about music.缺少謂語(yǔ)缺少謂語(yǔ)多了謂語(yǔ)多了謂語(yǔ)areTips: “句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對(duì)句子

3、結(jié)構(gòu)不對(duì),一處扣一處扣2分分”.3.There have many reasons for that.There be 句型句型are 句子結(jié)構(gòu)句子結(jié)構(gòu)1.DuJiangyan Irrigation Project, which is built 2000 years ago, is still working now.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Tips: “時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用為大錯(cuò)時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用為大錯(cuò),一處扣一處扣2分分”.was動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞2.The accident was happened in 1999.語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤V-ing 作主語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)To2. Improve my spoken language

4、, I decide to spend more time on English .Playingto do目的狀語(yǔ)目的狀語(yǔ)1.Play computer games too much is bad for health非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞1.From my point of view, traveling abroad can improve our knowledges and open our eyes .不可數(shù)名詞無(wú)復(fù)數(shù)形式不可數(shù)名詞無(wú)復(fù)數(shù)形式subjectsknowledge2.We study quite a few subject, such as English, Chines

5、e and so on.可數(shù)名詞需考慮單復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞需考慮單復(fù)數(shù)名詞的數(shù)混淆名詞的數(shù)混淆 1.Computer is playing a important role in our life.冠詞錯(cuò)用冠詞錯(cuò)用a2.My hometown Linhai is beautiful town with many places of interest.an缺少冠詞缺少冠詞冠詞誤用冠詞誤用1.Its convenient for us to travel abroad becausethe development of economy.缺少介詞缺少介詞介詞多余介詞多余3.The climate in t

6、here is very mild.of2. Some students object the plan.to介詞介詞4.In my surprise, he has got the first prize.To介詞誤用介詞誤用2.It is dishonest and foolishly to cheat in the exam.形容詞副詞混用形容詞副詞混用原形比較級(jí)最高級(jí)原形比較級(jí)最高級(jí)1.I think using the Internet is convenient than making a telephone call.foolishTips:并列結(jié)構(gòu)形式的一致性并列結(jié)構(gòu)形式的一致

7、性more convenient形容詞和副詞形容詞和副詞1.The students who are lazy they have no interestIn doing homework.代詞多余代詞多余 The majority of the students support the idea and a few object to it.while2.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.their指代內(nèi)容不一致指代內(nèi)容不一致連詞連詞代詞代詞動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞形，形，名詞名詞數(shù)數(shù)還要注意還要注意形形和和副副代詞代詞格，格，句子句子整整介詞介

8、詞短語(yǔ)需關(guān)注短語(yǔ)需關(guān)注習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常關(guān)注常關(guān)注summaryparagraphs key pointsto the pointadvanced vocabularysentence patternslinking wordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingavoid mistakesLearning to learnLearning to learnWhen you write a composition, remember: Beginning (topic sentence 主題句主題句) Middle Ending (Conc

9、luding sentence 結(jié)論句結(jié)論句)(Supporting sentence 支持句例子、支持句例子、實(shí)事、數(shù)據(jù)或引文實(shí)事、數(shù)據(jù)或引文)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的常用方式 The girl on the right is from Japan. Example 1The girl in red comes from America. The girl in white T-shirt is from Spain. The girl who has beautiful blonde hair is from the U.K. The girls in the picture are from diff

10、erent countries. topic sentence1. is usually the_sentence of a paragraph.Topic sentencefirst of a paragraph. 2.Topic sentence tells_the main idea概括段落主要意思概括段落主要意思Topic sentence tells of a paragraph.the main ideaExample 2My family members have different hobbies.My father loves collecting stamps. My mo

11、ther is interested in cooking. My sister likes watching TV, and my grandparents enjoy traveling. I enjoy_.Example 3every daySaturdaysweekendsTopic sentence should not be _or _.too broadtoo narrow主題范圍恰當(dāng)主題范圍恰當(dāng) I can sleep late on Saturday mornings. I neednt do my homework on weekends. Instead, I can d

12、o everything I like. I can go shopping, visit my friends and go to the movies with them. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go for a ride with my brother.C. Books tell us famous places, great persons and many other things.A. We can learn a lot by reading newspapers. B. We can learn a lot from books.Ex

13、ample 4 Topic sentence should be simple and clear.簡(jiǎn)單清晰簡(jiǎn)單清晰_ When we read books we can know some famous places like Tibet, London, New York and so on. We can also meet great persons and learn from them by reading books. Books also tell us new ways to do things and make us know ourselves better. Topic

14、 sentence should of a paragraph.tell the main ideaMikeMike cars.Example 5likes cars.is interested inCarsMikeares favorite.He has collected many magazines on cars and he is interested in nearly everything about cars. He likes watching TV advertisements on cars and goes to all the car shows. He also s

15、pends a lot of time working on his old car. We dont call him Mike any more, instead, we call him Mr. Car.Tips on writing topic sentences 4.Topic sentence should be _ and_.simple 3.Topic sentence should not be _or_.too broadtoo narrowclear is usually the _sentence of a paragraph.1.Topic sentencefirst

16、 2.Topic sentence should _ of a paragraph.tell the main idea巧用連接詞巧用連接詞 巧用連接詞連接上下文的關(guān)鍵 要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學(xué)會(huì)正確使用連接詞 表示羅列增加表示羅列增加 First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing for another, On (the) one handon the other hand, Besides / whats more / in addition / further

17、more / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular, 1. 1. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), otherwise, in spite of, despite , regardless of(不管,不顧), although, though, while. 3. 3. 表示對(duì)比關(guān)系表示對(duì)比關(guān)系on the contrary; Instead of; on one handon the other hand; for one thing ,for anoth

18、er thing.2. 2. 表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系besides, furthermore , whats more, in addition, moreover , worse still, to make matters /things worse,6.6.表示解釋、說(shuō)明關(guān)系表示解釋、說(shuō)明關(guān)系7.7.表示結(jié)論表示結(jié)論namely (也就是), actually, in fact, as a matter of fact, such as, for example/for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on,

19、 to tell you the truth, according to thisin short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, 4. 4. 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系as a result /consequence (of), owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of(由于), so, therefore, because, since ,as 5. 5. 表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系s

20、hortly afterwards(不久之后), first, second, then, next, finally, in the end, eventually. Dear Xiaoming, I am studying in Jueqi Experimental school. Our schoolis very beautiful with a big playground. There are greentrees and all kinds of sweet flowers all the year round. Theteachers are very strict with

21、us in our study, but after classthey are friendly and care about us very much. My new classmates are all very excellent and always work hard.They help me a lot in study as well as in my daily life andwe get along with each other quite well. Stressful as the school life is, I am full of confidence.I

22、think with the help of my teachers, I will make great progress. Best wishes to you. Yours， Li Hua其它：條其它：條真題回放真題回放“輕負(fù)高質(zhì)輕負(fù)高質(zhì)”要求我們提高學(xué)習(xí)效率要求我們提高學(xué)習(xí)效率, 為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)念為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)念,新世新世紀(jì)英文報(bào)紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在舉辦以正在舉辦以“How to be a good learner?”為題的征文為題的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你踴躍投稿。比賽，請(qǐng)你踴躍投稿。內(nèi)容提示：內(nèi)容提示：How to be a good learner?habitget ready, listenGo

23、 over, homeworkwork hard, do sportsStudy in groups, help each other As a good learner, we should_ I hope all these will be helpful to us.Writing How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have habits and ways in As a good learner, we should have habits and ways in learning. We need to ge

24、t ready for our lessons before class learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Its go over the lessons and fini

25、sh our homework on time. Its good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but dont forget to do sports working hard is important, but dont forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more readi

26、ng in our free and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, wed better ask others for time. If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help.help. I hope all these will be helpful to us. I hope all these will be helpful to us.文中共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。增加增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。刪除刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（）劃掉。修改修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。注意：注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改勻僅限一詞； 2 只允許修改只允許修改1