公開課地點描述英語寫作教學(xué)設(shè)計朱寧寧

1、 Topic： How to Introduce a Place Type：Writing Teaching objectives:1. To be able to describe a place in English.2. To be able to use complex and compound sentences to polish the writing .3. To be clearer about how to organize a passage.Important points1. Make good use of the expressions and sentences

2、 patens describing a place.2. Make the student to be familiar with how to introduce different aspects of a place. difficult points1. How to describe a place using coherent sentences .methodsInduction and deductionperiod1Teaching proceduresStep 1 Warming upPlay a guess game” Where is it ?”Guessing 1W

3、ith a population of about 1.3 billion, “ ? ” has the largest number of population in the world at present.Guessing 2“?” is the second largest country in the world. It has an area of over 9.9 million square kilometers and a population of over 30 million.Guessing 3? , the largest island in China, lies

4、 in the west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest.Step 2 Look and Read Read a passage about Taiwan Island, T let the Ss find good sentences and learn how to write about a place. Put sentence patterns into the stdudentsmind.(Keys: China, Can

5、ada. Taiwan Islan).Taiwan Island, the largest island in China, lies in the west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest. .Taiwan covers a total area of about 46,000 square kilometers with a population of over 20,000,000. .Its a place abundant

6、in natural resources and bananas, rice, tea and other agricultural products are well-known both at home and abroad. The scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that tourists come in large numbers for a visit from all over the world. Alishan National Scenic Area, lying in the northeast

7、 of Jiayi county on Taiwan Island, is one of the eleven scenic areas, which attracts thousands of tourists from home and abroad for sightseeing every year.Mind map :let the Ss find the following points in the above passage and list them.It is a part of my handwriting on the blackboard Step 3 Present

8、ation1. Introduce Locationbe located in (on/to) be situated in (on/to) stands/lies in (on/to) be surrounded byTaiwan Island, the largest island in China, lies in the west of the Pacific Ocean. 北京位于中國的北部。Beijing is located situated in the north of China.Beijing lies stands in the north of China2. Int

9、roduce population has / with a (large/small) population of The population of is, is a city with a (large/small) population of百分之70的人口是: Eighty percent of the population here are .中國是一個發(fā)展中國家，人口13億。1. China is a developing country, with a population of 130 million.2. As a developing country, China has

10、 a population of 130 million.3. The population of China, which is a developing country, is 130 million.北京是中國的首都，是一個有1200多萬人口的大城市。（用一句話）Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3. Introduce area has / occupies / takes up / covers an area of square kilometers

11、/ meters covering / with an area of square kilometers 寫作指導(dǎo)：面積表達(dá)可用同位語、介詞短語、非謂語等做插入結(jié)構(gòu)以復(fù)雜句型。如：天安門是世界上最大的廣場，它的面積是 1.Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers / has an area of 2. Tiananmen Square, with / covering an area of, is the largest square in the world. 3. Tiananmen Square , which

12、takes up square kilometers, is the largest square in the world.4. Introduce Historyhas a long history (of years)with a long history (of years)1不僅歷史悠久,還是中國古代“海上絲綢之路(Silk Road on the sea)”的發(fā)祥地(birthplace);以“五羊”(Five Goats)為象征,以嶺南文化著稱.Guangzhou is not only a city with a long history, but also the birth

13、place of the ancient “Silk Road on the sea”. 2Guangzhou, whose symbol is “Five Goats”, is famous for Lingnan Culture.3. 建于16世紀(jì)的城堡見證了太多的歷史輪回。Built in the 16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.4. 牛津大學(xué)追溯到13世紀(jì)。Oxford University dates back to the thirteenth century.S

14、tep 4 Presentation and practice ; Other characteristics1 Introduce Climate Beijings climate is dry.Its foggy.Its average temperature is 11 .Beijing has a dry climate with plenty of fog and the average temperature is 11. Sp. has a climate with plenty of. The average temperature is Shantou has a warm

15、climate with plenty of sunshine and the average temperature is 21.2 Introduce travellinga place of interest  名勝a famous tourist resorta tourist attraction a tourist destination 旅游景點，旅游目的地 a scenic spot  風(fēng)景區(qū)廣東有很多著名的旅游勝地，如廣州塔，丹霞山等。(Ss try totranslate)There are many famous places of interest

16、in Guangdong, such as Guangzhou Tower , Danxia Mountain and so on.There are many places of interest, such as . and so onThere are many famous places of interest in Beijing, such as Tiananmen Square, the Great Wall and so on.3 Introduce natural resources我們國家自然資源得天獨厚，如：煤、天然氣等等。Our country is rich abun

17、dant in natural resources, such as coal, natural gas and so on.Sp. is rich /abundant in 4 Introduce politics culture economy這城市經(jīng)濟發(fā)展很快。The citys economy has been developing rapidly.它是整個省的政治中心。Its the center of the politics of the whole provinceStep 5 Copy the expressions and sentences patens and writ

18、e new sentences as follow1.中國位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大的國家之一。China, one of the largest countries in the world, is located in the east of Asia.2.多倫多是加拿大東部的一個繁華的港口城市，總面積1, 850平方千米，總?cè)丝?61萬人。Toronto, a busy port city on the east coast of Canada, covers a total area of 1,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.6

19、1million.3. 中國是一個古老的(ancient) 國度，有將近五千年的歷史。(with a history of )China is an ancient country with a long history of almost 5000 years.4. 西藏有其獨特(unique)的文化，和眾多的名勝如布達(dá)拉宮(Potala Palace)，深深地吸引各地游。(be well-known for)Tibet is well-known for its unique culture and a number of places of interest such as Potala

20、 Palace, attracting tourists from all over the world.5.這城市經(jīng)濟發(fā)展很快。The citys economy has been developing rapidly.6它是整個省的政治中心。Its the center of the politics of the whole province7.There are many famous places of interest in Beijing, such as Tiananmen Square, the Great Wall and so on.Step 6: Practicing

21、writing an article(The result of the class)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容, 用5句話寫一篇短文 北京 地點北京氣候特征冬季干燥、夏季炎熱，平均氣溫11 風(fēng)景名勝旅游資源豐富，如著名的長城、天安門等資源自然資源、礦產(chǎn)資源比較豐富政治經(jīng)濟文化等經(jīng)濟發(fā)展快，是整個國家經(jīng)濟中心。人口北京的人口有1800萬(18,000,000)面積北京市面積16410.54平方公里地理位置北京位于中國的北部寫作思路：1、審題- 文體：地點介紹 人稱： 第三人稱 時態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時、過去式2、謀篇：要點重組位置、面積、人口、風(fēng)景特色3、行文：運用不同的句型進(jìn)行翻譯4 潤色：(1) 在文章中使用

22、一些非謂語動詞。 （2）巧用同位語（3）活用從句（4）巧用連接詞Step 7:Correct the a students article mistakeson the blackboard. It is another part of my handwriting on the blackboard Step 8 Show sample versionBeijing, the capital city of China, is located in the north of China. It covers an area of 16,410 square kilometers with a

23、 population of 21.14 million. The population of Beijing is 18million It was an ancient city with a long history of more than 2000 years and has different names in different dynasties. As a famous cultural city, Beijing is famous for many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, Tiananmen Square ,

24、the Forbidden City and so on, attracting tourists from home and abroad every year. It is in 2008 that Beijing succeeded in holding the Olympic Games, which offers a very good chance for people around the world to know more about it.Step 9 Summary 一 常用句型和短語1 位置:be located ; stands; lies ; be situated

25、 2 人口:has a population of.; Its population is The population of is; With a population of 3 面積:has an area of ; covers an area of with an area of; takes up 4 歷史: has a history of ; date back to/from ; with a (long) history (of)5 氣候特征： Sp. has a climate with plenty of. The average temperature is 6 名勝景

26、觀: There are many places of interest, such as . and so on.7 物產(chǎn): Sp. is rich /abundant in Its a place abundant in 8 其它: be famous for 二點撥難點給文章增色：復(fù)合句: 非謂語、with結(jié)構(gòu)、定語從句、表語從句、狀語從句、同位語從句語法，句法高分tips1.使用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆蓋 Antarctica, which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the)

27、 year round, is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica, the coldest continent in the world,is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.2.運用非謂語動詞和with結(jié)構(gòu)優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)我的家鄉(xiāng)位于中國廣東，毗鄰香港My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong,_ is located in Guangdong Province of China.Step 10 Homework1. Improve your own writing.2. Recite useful expressions and sentences3. Recite the sample version.