小學(xué)英語作文課件

1、看圖作文看圖作文200906010237 蔣天曉蔣天曉Sample 1 根據(jù)下根據(jù)下列圖畫中列圖畫中 Tom Tom 騎自騎自行車的經(jīng)行車的經(jīng)歷，用英歷，用英語寫一篇語寫一篇故事。故事。 短文要寫短文要寫得連貫、得連貫、完整。完整。1. Go over the requirement 1. topic : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:A story （a traffic accident)past tenseTom , he Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other da

2、y/ one day2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how) A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why,

3、how) The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how) A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Key wordsKey wordssent

4、encessentencesride a bike /run fast toWhen Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. hit him/fall off his bikeThe car hit him. And he fell off his bike.be frightened /run awayThe driver was so frightened that he ran away.see the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught

5、A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.3. Writing a passage Passage 1 Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the acciden

6、t. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.passage 2 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so

7、 frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wro

8、ng doing.Passage 3 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leav

9、ing Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Using connectives并列并列 轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折 3. 因果因果 4. 其他其他and, bothand but, however, th

10、ough, while so, therefore, because when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worseSummary : How to write a picture story? Go over the requirement（person, tense, style） Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Write a passage （using

11、connectives and adding details and specific information. ) 點題（時間、地點、點題（時間、地點、人物、事件人物、事件） 事件的起因事件的起因 事件的發(fā)展事件的發(fā)展/ /過程過程 事件的結(jié)果事件的結(jié)果 扣題扣題 中中 考考 作作 文文 的的 評評 分分 標(biāo)標(biāo) 準(zhǔn)準(zhǔn)四檔文：四檔文：內(nèi)容不完整，語言表述錯誤很多，不能完整地內(nèi)容不完整，語言表述錯誤很多，不能完整地 表達(dá)思想?？傻帽磉_(dá)思想?？傻?-2分分三檔文：三檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述合理，但表述不充分，層內(nèi)容完整，重點描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，語言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，語言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6處處語法或拼寫錯誤；字?jǐn)?shù)不足?？傻谜Z法或拼寫錯誤；字?jǐn)?shù)不足。可得3-5分分二檔文：二檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述比較充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較內(nèi)容完整，重點描述比較充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，語言比較流暢，字跡工整，有清晰，語言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語法或拼寫處語法或拼寫錯誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。錯誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。 可得可得6-8分分一檔文：一檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述清楚、合理，表達(dá)充分，內(nèi)容完整，重點描述清楚、合理，表達(dá)充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，字跡工整，可讀性