呂吉爾：以讀助寫(xiě)寫(xiě)出精彩20170719南京：定稿

1、一點(diǎn)想法一點(diǎn)想法 + 一道考題一道考題l以讀助寫(xiě) vs 以讀促寫(xiě)讀書(shū)破一點(diǎn)想法一點(diǎn)想法 + 一道題目一道題目l以讀助寫(xiě) vs 以讀促寫(xiě)l讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神。（省略句）縱使一點(diǎn)想法一點(diǎn)想法 + 一道題目一道題目l以讀助寫(xiě) vs 以讀促寫(xiě)l讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神。l縱使讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，未必下筆如有神。拿什么一點(diǎn)想法一點(diǎn)想法 + 一道題目一道題目l以讀助寫(xiě) vs 以讀促寫(xiě)l讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神。l縱使讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，未必下筆如有神。 拿什么“促”寫(xiě)？l以寫(xiě)促寫(xiě) 以寫(xiě)促學(xué) 如何參見(jiàn)參見(jiàn)網(wǎng)上書(shū)店有售篇章內(nèi)容：篇章內(nèi)容：l以寫(xiě)促學(xué)的理?yè)?jù)以寫(xiě)促學(xué)的理?yè)?jù) l以寫(xiě)促聽(tīng)以寫(xiě)促聽(tīng) l以寫(xiě)促說(shuō)以寫(xiě)促說(shuō) l以寫(xiě)促讀以寫(xiě)促

2、讀 l以寫(xiě)促寫(xiě)（以寫(xiě)促寫(xiě)（書(shū)寫(xiě)書(shū)寫(xiě)、寫(xiě)作）、寫(xiě)作） l詞塊理論與詞塊教學(xué)詞塊理論與詞塊教學(xué) l高中英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法十要高中英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法十要 洪崗教授作序參見(jiàn)參見(jiàn)網(wǎng)上書(shū)店有售篇章內(nèi)容：篇章內(nèi)容：l理性思考理性思考（ “做中學(xué)做中學(xué)”“用中學(xué)用中學(xué)”；有意記憶詞塊；有意記憶詞塊, etc.）l調(diào)查研究調(diào)查研究（英文書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范問(wèn)題（英文書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范問(wèn)題, etc. ）l課題研究課題研究（以寫(xiě)促讀（以寫(xiě)促讀, etc. ）l教學(xué)研究教學(xué)研究（定語(yǔ)從句的陷阱；（定語(yǔ)從句的陷阱；“指代指代”的正確理解的正確理解, etc. ）l考題研究考題研究（以（以30年高考英語(yǔ)試題為樣本）年高考英語(yǔ)試題為樣本）吳本虎教授作序一點(diǎn)想法一

3、點(diǎn)想法 + 一道考題一道考題l概要寫(xiě)作概要寫(xiě)作：提供一篇350以?xún)?nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫(xiě)出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。 （20）閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；上下文的連貫性；對(duì)各要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。* 教育部考試中心.2015.普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試英語(yǔ)科考試說(shuō)明（高考綜合改革試驗(yàn)省份試用）（第一版）M.北京：高等教育出版社.第二節(jié)：概要寫(xiě)作（滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a go

4、od thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought

5、to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman h

6、ad taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好處) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to

7、health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has t

8、he hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫學(xué)家), encourages ch

9、ildren to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground. 308 words* 教育部考試中心.2015.普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試英語(yǔ)科考試說(shuō)明（高考綜合改革試驗(yàn)省份試用）（第一版）M.北京：高等教育出版社.24.One possible version: People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要點(diǎn)1) For a long time in hist

10、ory, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要點(diǎn)2) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要點(diǎn)3) However, some scientists be

11、lieve that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要點(diǎn)4）72w, 5s 概要寫(xiě)作原則：o 1.要點(diǎn)齊全o 2.準(zhǔn)確簡(jiǎn)潔o 3.獨(dú)立有效（避免抄原句?。﹏ 摘要摘要應(yīng)具有獨(dú)立性和自明性，擁有與文章等量的主要信息，即不閱讀全文，就能獲得必要的信息。n 摘要摘要不容贅言，故需逐字推敲。內(nèi)容必須完整、一目了然。 概要寫(xiě)作過(guò)程：【讀+寫(xiě)】o 細(xì)心閱讀，提取要點(diǎn)（1理解主旨和要義 ）o 概括整合，表達(dá)要點(diǎn)o 替代轉(zhuǎn)換，體現(xiàn)獨(dú)立（避免抄原句?。?o 樣例Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of m

12、ost people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular

13、danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learnin

14、g that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away di

15、rt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces t

16、o shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist, encour

17、ages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.One possible version:People have mixed opinions towards dirt on their skin. For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected

18、 people from getting ill. About 200 years ago, people began to change their attitudes towards dirt, and were told that washing dirt off their body could keep them healthy. However, some scientists argue that exposure to some dirt may help the immune system. （70 words）These days a green building mean

19、s more than just the color of the paint. Green building can also refer to environmentally friendly houses, factories, and offices. Green building means “reducing the impact of the building on the land”, Taryn Holowka of the U. S. Green Building Council in Washington, D. C. said. According to Holowka

20、, building account for 65 percent of total U. S. electricity use.But green building can reduce energy and water use. Also, the buildings are often located near public transportation such as buses and subways, so that people can drive their cars less. That could be good for the environment, because c

21、ars use lots of gas and give off pollution. Green buildings are often built on developed land, so that the buildings dont destroy forests. Marty Dettling is project manger for a building that put these ideas into action. The Solaire has been called the countrys first green high-rise building. Accord

22、ing to Dettling, “Weve reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by 50 percent.” The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power. “On the face of the building we have solar panels which change the suns energy into electricity,” Dettling explained.The Solaire also has lights that automat

23、ically turn off when people leave the room. In addition, the building has lots of windows, allowing people to use the sun for light during the day. The Solaire cuts water by reusing it. Not everyone is eager to move into a green building, however. Some people think that things like solar panels cost

24、 more money than more traditional energy sources. Anyhow, Holowka said, “Its going to be big.”O(jiān)ne possible version:Green buildings, which refer to environmentally friendly structures, can help save environment. They can reduce energy and water use, thus lessen pollution and avoid destroying forests as well. The green building Solaire has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water. Although not all people like green building yet