2022屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫評(píng)講（素材）

1、讀后續(xù)寫評(píng)講閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her.It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel

2、 sighed and reached out to dipher brush in some black paint andoh, no! She knockedover the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa calledMrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumpedto her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards

3、. She turned round andher paintbrush caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa wasso surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand. It came crashingdown and the books went all over the floor.How clumsy! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside

4、 her house. She jumped up and her elbow(肘部)knocked a womans hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry,got off and ran indoors. Mum wasnt in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caughtan awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather waitfor Dad. Rachel sighed. She underst

5、ood Mum was afraid she would spill (濺出)it.“But would yougo to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure?” asked Mum.Rachel turned to the door at once.“But Rachel, Mrs. Willowshouse is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, youd better sayno.” Rachel sighed and ran out.Mrs. Willow was an old l

6、ady with white hairand sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and invitedher in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside rememberingher mothers warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deepbreath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs

7、. Willows sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.注意:1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2）至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4）續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1:There were beautiful things everywhere -pretty china figures and delicate vases.Paragraph 2:With a smile, Mrs. Willow comforted her s

8、ayingit had been broken before.The analysis of the given passage:根據(jù)第二段開(kāi)頭可以推測(cè)出Rachel 最終還是打碎了Mrs Willow 的珍貴花瓶，所以第一段側(cè)重從心里和動(dòng)作上描寫她進(jìn)到屋子后的小心翼翼和打碎花瓶后的反應(yīng)第二段主要描寫Mrs Willow在花瓶被打碎后沒(méi)指責(zé)Rachel反倒去安慰她。Rachel感到很內(nèi)疚及她的一些內(nèi)心想法。Sentence translation看著滿屋子的珍寶，Rachel一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地站著，怕打翻什么東西。Seeing the treasures with eyes wide open, Ra

9、chel stood there still, afraid of upsetting something.媽媽的話一直在耳邊回響，但好奇心驅(qū)使，她還是伸手去摸其中的一個(gè)寶貝。Mothers words echoing in her mind, but driven by curiosity, still she reached for one of the treasures with great caution.看著這些精美的物件，媽媽的話被拋諸腦外，她忍不住向其中的一個(gè)伸出手。Looking at the delicate items, she totally forget mums w

10、arning and couldnt help reaching for one of them.她向她道謝，轉(zhuǎn)身向門口走去，這時(shí)有東西碰到了她的腿，她驚訝地跳了起來(lái)。She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg.She was so surprised that she jumped backwards.是只貓！但是她的胳膊肘撞到了一個(gè)花瓶，花瓶掉到地上，摔碎了。It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the flo

11、or, broken into pieces. Cautious as she was, she tripped over a vase when a cat jumped out.就在她碰到花瓶的一瞬間，瓶子滾落到地上摔成了碎片，她緊張到無(wú)法呼吸。The moment she touched the vase, it fell apart into pieces.Nervous, she was nearly out of breath.Staring at the fragments, she felt as if her heart missed a beat.Glued to the

12、spot, she was trembling from head to toe.Rachel尷尬地?zé)o地自容，恨不得找個(gè)地縫鉆進(jìn)去。Face deadly pale, so embarrassed did Rachel feel that she desperately hoped to hide herself in the ground.8.“我年輕時(shí)也笨手笨腳” Mrs Willow溫和地說(shuō)道，眼里滿是安慰。I used to be a trouble maker. No one grew up without being clumsy. You couldnt have been as

13、 clumsy as I was, Mrs Willow calmed her down softly, with eyes full of comfort9.Rachel慚愧地自責(zé)道“要是我能小心一點(diǎn)就好了”并下定決心再也不要這么粗心了。Self-condemned, she muttered with great regret, if only I had been more careful, she made her resolution not to be careless any more.10. 他們收拾完花瓶，喝了瓷杯里的茶，吃了精致盤子里的蛋糕，Rachel沒(méi)有打碎別的東西。A

14、fter they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didnt break another thing. It was Mrs Willows genuine patience and kindness that carved her mind and urged her to change better.Rachel 終于舒了一口氣。原來(lái)只要更加謹(jǐn)慎一點(diǎn)是可以避免麻煩發(fā)生的，沒(méi)有人是天生笨拙的。Rachel felt at ease

15、 in the end. Only if you are more cautious /remind yourself constantly ,some trouble may be avoided/you may not be a trouble maker. Nobody was born clumsy. One possible versionParagraph 1There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases. All the treasures seemed to boast

16、 a long history and thus priceless. ”Wow, its really a land of wonder ” Rachel couldnt help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases. Moms words echoing in her mind, curiosity still got the upper hand. She reached for one of them, but unfortunately, the vase slipped off her hand and lay

17、in pieces on the floor. Her heart missing a beat, she stood there still.Paragraph 2:With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Seeing Mrs Willows eyes filled with warmth and affection, Rachel felt extremely regretful for her clumsy behavior. ”If I had been more careful,