高考英語寫作之四如何達(dá)到詞匯高級化

1、-. z.寫作步步之四 如何到達(dá)詞匯高級化從近幾年高考英語書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中我們可以看出，高考書面表達(dá)提倡高級詞匯的使用。所謂高級詞匯是指那些大綱中有但課本中出現(xiàn)頻率不高，或大綱中沒有列入掌握要求，但實(shí)際運(yùn)用中出現(xiàn)頻繁的詞匯和短語。寫作時，如果僅局限在把容交代清楚，只選用一些普通的、直截了當(dāng)?shù)脑~，或一律使用簡單句平鋪直敘，寫出來的文章就會像一碗白開水，呆板單調(diào)沒有可讀性。要想把一篇文章寫好、寫完美，使文章耐人尋味、有深度、上檔次，不僅要將文章的意思表述清楚，還要嘗試在表達(dá)中使用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句型，以凸顯文章的亮點(diǎn)，給文章增添文彩，給讀者(尤其是閱卷者)留下深刻的印象。在詞匯的選擇使用方面，可本

2、著以下原則：1. 短語優(yōu)先原則和方法如果能用短語詞組代替單詞，一方面會增加文彩使文章生動，另一方面則會展示出你的實(shí)力，使閱卷教師對你刮目相看，從而提高文章的檔次。例如：The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away. (同義詞realized)2. 手法多樣化原則在表達(dá)相近或一樣意思時，要盡量防止過多重復(fù)使用*一個單詞，應(yīng)學(xué)會選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或近義詞或詞組來表達(dá)，這樣能讓閱卷教師感覺到你詞匯量的豐富及表達(dá)手法多樣化，從而獲得認(rèn)可。但這一點(diǎn)也不要絕對化，有時適當(dāng)?shù)闹貜?fù)是必要的。例如：The Beijing Olympic Gam

3、es show that China can do something big and splendid. Also, they show that China has been being increasingly strong and powerful. They indicate that we Chinese people can do anything successfully as long as we hold together.3. 多用具體詞匯少用概括性詞匯原則寫作中應(yīng)多使用具體、確切的詞匯，少用籠統(tǒng)、概括性詞匯，多用蘊(yùn)含感情色彩的詞語，少用中性詞。如good指人時較為籠統(tǒng)，

4、我們可用以下較為具體的形容詞替換：kind, honest, generous,selfless,brave,warm-hearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good在指事物或事情時，我們可用以下形容詞替換：great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,e*cellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。這樣用詞，能讓人看到活生生的人、物形象，而沒有霧里看花的感覺。給平淡無味的語句添加美味，給評卷教師留下深刻印象。4. 巧用習(xí)語，引用諺語，引人入勝語言是文化的載

5、體，習(xí)語又是語言的精華。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂盟?，會給文章增色，加強(qiáng)文章的感染力，從而引人入勝。和漢語一樣，英語中也有大量諺語。假設(shè)能在寫作中恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用，文章將增色不少。及時穩(wěn)固1. 請用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z取代句中劃線的容。She went to Australia in order to study music. _Because the weather was good,our journey was fortable._As a result, the plan was a failure._I dont know how to enlarge my vocabulary._They will conside

6、r the matter. _Suddenly I had a good idea. _The small group has si* people. _The little boy looked at the picture on the wall_2. 請根據(jù)所給單詞寫出你能想到的這些詞所對應(yīng)的高級詞匯。一般詞匯高級詞匯think ofbecause ofwish forvery wellordinarythanksavementionbe brokenlook aftereq oac(,11)as long aseq oac(,12)be satisfiedeq oac(,13)stan

7、d upeq oac(,14)many3. 請用更貼切的詞來代替畫線局部的詞，并寫在句后的橫線上。The house is good. Look at the sofas, tables and so on._He tried to keep calm, so he went out without hesitation._The boss is bad. He will bee angry without hesitation._It is cold this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time._He is a nice stude

8、nt. He often makes us laugh and we have much fun with him._He is a good teaches. He is always willing to help the students in trouble._4. 請?jiān)谙旅娴亩涛牡目瞻滋幪钌锨‘?dāng)?shù)母裱跃洹?There are many ways to learn Englishbut I think. We should take advantage of every opportunity to practice our Oral and written English . Ed

9、ison had failed more than a thousand times before he could invent the electric lamp. Madame Curie discovered the element Radium in 1902andwontheNobelPrizetwiceBut do you know she got through endless failures before that I want to be a puter scientist because I like playing puter very muchWith my put

10、er I search the Internet and I can learn many things on it. If I am a puter scientist，I will make more useful software so that we can do more things on the InternetSo I must study hard nowI cant make my dream e true unless I can go to the university. I know its not easy to be a scientistBut_.I am su

11、re I can realize my dream with a strong determination.5. 試譯并熟記如下在寫作中常用的習(xí)語或諺語。No pain, no gain._Actions speak louder than words._A young idler, an old beggar._Every minute counts._Strike the iron while its hot._Two heads are better than one._All that glitters is not gold._The early bird catches the w

12、orn._Rome was not built up in a day._One is never too old to learn._6. 請將下面一篇2010年高考作文學(xué)生習(xí)作中劃線局部容使用高級詞匯來進(jìn)展表達(dá)。We all know that, as long as you smile, the whole world will smile with you. At one time, smile proved its power to me, which I will never forget.Suddenly I think of a scene.On a cold morning

13、in winter, passing by a photo-studio, I saw an old couple and a lovely child were being taken photos. Their beautiful smiles recorded forever. Then what surprised me most was that they planned to give their photos to their dead son and daughter-in-law as a present. I still remember every word the ol

14、d lady saidI will live the rest of my life with a smile. Only in this way can I fort the dead.How wonderful!Smiles on their faces show their love and hope.From then on, even though Im in trouble,I still say to myselfFace everything with smiles.I believe smile will help me deal with any difficult sit

15、uations. I believe a bright tomorrow will be in front of me in the smiling world.答案1. for the purpose of studying musicthanks to the good weatherthe plan turned out to behave no ideatakeinto account / considerationall of a sudden, came up withconsist offi* ones eyes uponoccur/e up with/hit/strikedue

16、 to/owing to/thanks tobe long for sth/hope for/e*pectperfectly/wonderfully/e*cellentlyaverage/monappreciate/be grateful to sb. for sth.set aside/lay aside/put asiderefer to/speak of/tell ofbe worn out/shabbyattend to/take care ofeq oac(,11)on condition that/only ifeq oac(,12)e*press ones satisfaction with/be pleasedeq oac(,13)get to ones feet/rise to ones feeteq oac(,14)many a/numerous/countless/innumerable3.well-furnishedsteppedill-temperedfreezing (cold)humorouswarm-hearted4. practice makes perfectfailure is the mot