-高考英語真題_短文改錯帶解析

1、精心整理短文改錯1. 【2015 陜西】短文改錯（共 10 小題；每小題 1.5 分，滿分 15 分）Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywe

2、ll.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup. Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“ Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter! 【答案】76. 去掉

3、in 77.anything 改為 something 78.better 改成 best 79.decide 改成 decided 80.step 改為 steps 81.well 改成 good 82.after 改成 when/while 83.a 改為 the 84.just 后加 to 85.enjoy 改為 enjoying 【考點定位】考查短文改錯【名師點睛】 這篇短文改錯是記敘文， 短文的內容和學生的日常生活有關。錯誤之處的設置都是平常學生容易錯的地方。 考查點比較全面， 各種詞性都考查到了， 也涉及到一些語法知識的考查， 如：非謂語動詞，時態(tài)等。2. 【2015 四川】短文改

4、錯（共 10 小題；每小題 1.5 分，共 15 分）Hi,Janice, ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeofthe problemsIhavebeenexperiencing. AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchand 頁腳內容精心整理 afterschool.Wevebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSatur

5、days nowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatimelllosetheirfriendship.Howastingactivity!Infact,Idontliketogoanymore,soImafraidI wdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim? Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice. Grace 【答案】61. 加上 to 62.tell-told 63.friend-friends 64.sing-singing 65.many

6、-much 66.so-but 67.How-What 68.are-were 69.him-them 70. 去掉 with 【解析】試題分析：文章主要通過一封求助信，寫出了寫信人的困擾。作者交了三個新朋友，經常一起去卡拉 OK唱歌，但其實作者并不喜歡這樣，他想知道自己該怎么做才不會失去這段友誼。61. 加上 to 考查動詞 want 的用法， want 用不定式擔當狀語，故加上 歷的問題。to 。句意為：我真地很想和你分享一下我經62.telltold考查時態(tài)。根據時間狀語lasttime可知，此句需要用一般過去時，故把tell改成 told 。句意為正如我上次告訴你的那樣。63.frie

7、ndfriends 考查名詞的復數。 名詞 friend 為可數名詞， 其前有 three 修飾，需要用復數形式， 故把 friend改成 friends。句意為：我在這兒交了三個新朋友。64.sing singing 考查動名詞擔當賓語。本句考查句型 spend （in ）doingsth 結構，故把 sing 改成 singing 。65.many much 考查代詞。根據句意，指的是花費很多錢，故用much而非 many。句意為：那真的花費很多。66.so-but 考查連詞。上一分句意為：我不想再去；下一分句意為：我怕失去他們的友誼，兩個分句之間有轉折關系，故把 so 改成 but 。頁

8、腳內容精心整理67.HowWhat 考查疑問詞的選擇。本句中 do 之后缺少賓語， 表示事情， 故用 what 而非 how。注意首字母要大寫。68.are were 考查虛擬語氣。根據句子可知，此處為虛擬語氣，與現在事實不相符，故把 are 改成 were。句意為：如果你是我 , 。69.him them 考查代詞。根據上文可知，作者交了三個朋友，故用them 而非 him。句意為：你會和他們說嗎？70. 去掉 with考查動詞。動詞help 為及物動詞，其后接賓語時無需加介詞，故去掉with 。句意為：請幫幫我，給我一些建議?！究键c定位】考查短文糾錯【名師點睛】 本篇文章考查學生的短文糾錯

9、能力。短文糾錯能力考查的范圍較廣，如各類詞類用法和各種語法知識。本篇文章中既考查了詞類用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70 題，也考查了學生的語法知識如： 62、64、67、68，涉及多種語法知識。要求考生要通讀全文，把握大意，還要逐讀 各句才能找出錯誤所在。3. 【2015 浙江】短文改錯（共10 小題；每小題1 分，滿分 10 分）例如：Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospentweekendwithyou.Luckily the Iwascompletelyfreethen,soIllto say“ yes” .I llarriveinBrist

10、olataround8:00p.m.am inFridayevening. On Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitcloseto thewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemor nings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassro

11、omisalsosplendid.Closetothescho oltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowy mountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorni ng.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwas

12、onlyachildwhenIstudiedint hatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit. 【答案】side-sides from-to sit-sitting 頁腳內容精心整理 easy-easily is-was them-it not 刪除 inhurry-inahurry felt-feel If-Although/Though 【解析】試題分析：這是一篇介紹教室的文章。side-sides 考查名詞的單復數。根據前面的 three ，此處應該使用復數形式 from-to 考查介詞搭配 makeof 與 makefrom兩者都常用在被動語態(tài)中 , 表示 “ 某

13、物由 . 構成的” .makeof 的原材料是看的到的 , 即平常我們說的物理現象, 比如 Thechairismadeofwood. 椅子是有木頭做成的。而makefrom的原材料是看不到的 , 比如 Paperismadefromthetrees.紙張是由木材做成的 . 是一種化學變化 , 從紙上是看不出一棵樹滴 . sit-sitting 考查動名詞動詞 enjoy 后接 ing 形式。easy-easily 考查副詞此處的副詞修飾動詞 see is-was 考查動詞的謂語時態(tài)根據前后句的謂語時態(tài)都是使用過去的，所以這里面也需要用過去時態(tài)。them-it 考查代詞此處的 it 指代的是學

14、校。刪除 not 考查意思是否表否定該句的意思應該是表達肯定而不是否定所以要刪除 not 意為 “ 立刻 ” ，也是一個固定搭配 inhurry-inahurry 考查冠詞 inahurry felt-feel 考查使役動詞的法。 Makesbdosth, 是使役動詞的用法。If-Although/Though 考查連詞的用法， 根據句意 “ 盡管在我讀書的時候我是一個小孩，但我不 會忘記它 ” 表達讓步，而不是條件。而且翻譯為如果意思上也不通。【考點定位】短文改錯【名師點睛】這種題目對語法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及單詞的用法，以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其實這一些錯誤很有可能是在寫作中

15、會出現，所以，加強寫作的練習對于這一種題目，也是有幫助的。另外，這種題目也可以改編一下，成為語法填空的題目。4. 【2015 新課標全國 II 】?2. 只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。頁腳內容精心整理 Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow .Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaround

16、an dfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimdryingandtellinghimtowait outsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“ Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.【答案】71.parent 改為 parents 72.on 改為 in 73.very 去掉 改為 looking 74.looks 75.where 改為 that 或者去掉 where

17、76.begun 改為 began 77.telling 改為 told 78.a 改為 the 79.saw 后加 his 改為 terribly 80.terrible【考點定位】語法填空?！?Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain. 【名師點睛】 通過短短的100 多個詞， 使考生能正確運用各類詞和固定搭配，如動詞、 名詞、 副詞、 代詞和連詞，辨別并改正錯誤?？偟恼f來，本題都是學生平時書面表達中常見的錯誤。多讀多練習就能找出問題所在，也能對寫作有幫助。5. 【2015 新課標全國 I 】WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoli

18、veinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,but Imissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthe developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeensho wnthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairsweb

19、reatheinisgettingd irtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.I fwefailtodoso,we lllivetoregretit.【答案】76.think thought 77.countryside 前加 the 頁腳內容精心整理78.or and 79.on with 80.been 去掉81.seriouslyserious 82.airs air 83.muchmany 84.found find 85.your our 【解析】試題分析：

20、作者是孩子的時候，夢想生活在城市。二作者現在生活在城市，卻向往著家鄉(xiāng)，因為那里更少的污染。76.think thought 句意：我認為生活在那兒很快樂。 時態(tài)用法錯誤。 這里用一般過去時， 表示“ 過去認為”77.countryside前加 the 句意：但是我想念農村的家鄉(xiāng)。這里countryside是特指，故用定冠詞the 。78.or and 句意：那里山綠并且空氣新鮮。連詞用法錯誤。前后句為并列關系，故用連詞 and。79.on with 句意：隨著工業(yè)化的發(fā)展。短語搭配錯誤。短語 withthedevelopmentof 隨著 的發(fā)展。80.been 去掉句意：許多研究表明。語態(tài)用

21、法錯誤。主語與動詞為主動關系，這里不需要用被動語態(tài)。81.seriouslyserious句意：全球變暖已經成為嚴重的問題。詞性用法錯誤。修飾名詞，前面用形容詞修飾。82.airs air 句意：我們呼吸的空氣變得越來越臟。名詞用法錯誤。名詞 air 為不可數名詞。83.muchmany句意：許多罕見的動物已經消失。名詞 animal 為可數名詞，故用 many修飾。84.found find 句意：我們必須找到方法來保護我們的地球。動詞用法錯誤。情態(tài)動詞 must 后接動詞原形。85.your our 句意：我們必須找到方法來保護我們的地球。代詞用法錯誤。這里應當是保護我們的環(huán)境?！究键c定位

22、】短文改錯。(2014 屆黑龍江省哈三中高三上學期第三次驗收 ) 頁腳內容精心整理 Asisknown,thatitisinterestingtoteachchildrentoswimwhiletheyarestillbabies.MostlargetowninFloridaandCaliforni ahavealreadyrunparticularlylessonsforbabies.TheideahasquicklyspreadtoEuropewhich,inseveralcountries,special courseswerenowofferedtochildrenwhoarefrom

23、7to24monthsold.Thefirststepistohavechildgetridofthefearwithwat er.Next,heisteachingtofloatinwater.Oncehecandothatnaturallyandcanswimwithfear,thechildcanmasterthetechniq ueandpushhimforwardthroughwater. 【答案】1.去掉 that 2.town 改成 towns 3.particularly 改成 particular 4.which 改成 where 5.were 改成 are 6.have 與

24、 child 之間加 a 改成 ofwater 7.withwater 8.teaching 改成 taught 9.with 改成 without 10.him 改成 himself 2 （2014 屆浙江省溫州中學高三上學期期中）DearMr.Black, mverythanktoyouforinvitingmetostaywithyouinthecomesummervacation.Ihavebeendreamedofseeingyouagain s I othatIcangethelpfromyouinmyEnglishlearning.AndImafraidIcannotgotoyo

25、urpla ceinthissummer.Ivepromisedmy grandmother,shelivesinth ecountry,tospendthis summerwithher.ShemissesmetoomuchthatIfinddif ficulttorefuseh sconveni errequest.Imbusypreparingformyexaminationsinpresent.IplannedtovisityouinwinterifitBestwishes. Yourstruly, LiYing 【答案】1.thank 改為 thankful e 改為 coming

26、3.dreamed 改為 dreaming 頁腳內容精心整理 4.And 改為 But 5.去掉 in 6.she 改為 who 7.too 改為 so 8.find 后面加 it 9.in 改為 at 10.planned 改為 plan 3 (2014 屆浙江省浙北名校聯盟高三上學期期中聯考 ) Oneyearago,Iwasingreattrouble.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevoteallmysparetimetopractiseit.ButIfailedtopas sthemid-termexamination,whichmademegreatdisappo

27、inted.SoIaskedmygrandpaforadvicewhenIgottohome.Heari ngthatItoldhim,hesaid,“Tosomeextent,examinationresultsaresometimeunexpectedbyyourstudylevel.Youcan eyourprogressbyoneexamination.”Heencouragedmyselftoworkhardforlongtimetocheckmyresults.Itookmygrandp asadvice.NowIrealizethattheprocessoflearningism

28、uchmoreimportantandmyEnglishismorebetterthanbefore.Fro mmyexperience,Ifeelthatweshouldlistentoopinionfromoldpeople. 【答案】 devoted 1.devote 2.practise practicing 3.great greatly 4.去掉 to。5.that what 6.sometime sometimes 7.myself me 8.for 和 long 之間加 a。9.more much 10.opinion opinions 4 （2013-2014學年內蒙古包頭市

29、一中高三入學考試）“It Amanwasdrivingontheroad.Suddenlyhiscarsstopped.Hegotoutofthecartriedtofindoutthetrouble.dthevoicebehindhim.Hewassurprisingandturnedaround.Buthesawonlyanoldhorse.Didyousaysomething?頁腳內容精心整理d. “Isaidyoushouldcheckyoursmotor.”Thehorsereplied.Themanrushedto thenearesthouse.Withaveryexcitedv

30、oice,h“Hedidn etoldthefarmerhadhappened.Thefarmer,therefore,showednosignofexcitement.Heexplained,ngaboutcars.HecanonlyrepeatwhatIoftens ay. 【答案】1.cars 改成 car 2.tried trying 3.thea 4.surprising surprised 5.somet hing anything 6.yours your 7.With In 8.thefarmer had what 9.therefore however 10.didnt do

31、esn t 5 （2014 屆浙江省江山實驗中學高三上學期第一次階段性測試）Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.WehavespentseveralpreciousweekendinlearningintheEnglishClub.Alt periodoftimes,wehavemadeagreatprogress.Thatisbecauseweareallverymuc houghwehavebeenmembersforashort hactiveandtheactivitiesarenotonlyenjoyableandalsohelpful.

32、Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbe sttomaketheactivitieslivelyandinter ested.IamverypleasedtosaythatallofusgreatlyimprovedourspokenEnglishsofar .Iamlookingforwardtoseeallofyouagaininthenearfuture! 【答案】1.real-really 2.weekend-weekends 3.times-time 4.去掉 a 5.去掉 much 6.and-but 7.his-their

33、 8.interested-interesting 頁腳內容精心整理 9.us have 10.see-seeing 6 （2014 屆浙江省湖州市八校高三上學期第二次聯考）Ican tswimsoIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackatmychildhood,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainfear.Firstly,Ia mnotallowedtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,asmymotherhadanunreasonablefearofit.Therefore,Iwastaughttoseeto

34、thewaterassomethingdanger.Secondly,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldntseesomething,andthisincreasedmyfear.Whatsworse,forachildIoncesaw aneighbordrowned.SincethenIhavebeenmorefrightening. 【答案】1.sobecause 2.look looking 3.加 the 4.am was 5.去掉 to 6.danger-dangerous 7.glass-g

35、lasses 8.something-anything 9.for-as 10.frighteningfrightened 7 （2014 屆云南省部分名校高三第一次聯考（11 月）Peopleoftenhavetroublesgettingusedtoanewculture.Theyareusuallycuriouswhentheyfirs tarriveaforeigncountry.T herefore,iftheystayforalongtime,theymaystarttofeeldifferentstagesofcultureshock.Theycanfeelaloneorsadb

36、ecause hecan tdealwiththelocalpeople.Howquickpeoplegetusedtoculturedifferencesmaybedependonthewaytheylearn.Th at saproblemiftheycantspeakthelanguage.Onotherhand,somecanstudythesituationandmakegoodguessesab outtheculture.Whentheyfinallybegantounderstandsomeofthelanguageandmakesomenewfriends,theywillg

37、raduallyenjoyt hemselvesandfeelsatisfying. 【答案】1.troubles 改為 trouble 。頁腳內容精心整理 2.arrive 后加 in 。3.Therefore 改為 However 。4.alone 改為 lonely 。5.he 改為 they 。6.quick 改為 quickly 。7.maybedependon 中刪去 be。8.other 前加 the 。9.began 改為 begin 。10.satisfying 改為 satisfied 。8 （2014 屆黑龍江哈師大附中高三上學期期中）【答案】1.shall-should

38、 2.specially-special 3.respondingto 4.thebest 5.appreciation 6.willprefer-prefer 7.which-what 8.bringing 9.means 10.ourselves 9 （2014 屆河北省衡水中學高三上學期四調考試）Thanksforyoumail.Imgladtok nowyouareinterestedinthe2014FloridaWinterCamp.ItwillbeheldfromJanuary27toFebruary13,duringthattimeyouwillgetwonderfulexpe

39、rience.YouwillhavechancestoimproveyourspeakingEnglishint hecoursesproviding.Also,activitiesarrangedforyoutospendweekendstogetherwithyourhostfamily,soyoucanlearnA mericanEnglishinauthenticsituations.However,atriptothelocalDisneylandwillcertainlyaddupthefunofthecamp. Joininthecampandyouwillhavethebett

40、erknowledgeofAmericancultureandlife.Youaresuretobenefitfromit. Yourstruly 頁腳內容精心整理LiHua 【答案】1.you your2.that which3.在“get ”后面加 a 或 experienc experiences4.speaking viding provided6.在“arranged 前面加 are 7.However Besides/Also/Morever8.up to9.去掉 in 10.thea10 （2014 屆河南省南陽市高三五校聯誼期中考試）MyneighborJ

41、ackieisalwaysconsiderationtoothers.Oneday,IwasgoingtodeliveraspeechataninstitutewhileIfoundmycarwouldntgetstarted.Irushedtothestreettohireataxi.JustatthattimeIcomeacrossJackie.Hewashurriedgoingtoattendhissickmotherinhospital. Furthermore,whenhelearnedaboutmyproblems,hedidnthesitatetogivemealift.Iarr

42、ivedatthelecturehallintime,whentheaudiencehadbeenpresent.IowemygreatthankstomyneighbourJackie,heisapersonreadytohelptheothersatanytime. 【答案】1.consideration 改成 considerate 2.While 改成 when e 改成 came 4.hurried 改成 hurriedly 5.attend 后面 加 to 6.Furthermore改成 however 改成 where9.he改成 who10. 去掉 the 7.problems

43、 改成 problem8.when（2014 屆黑龍江省齊齊哈爾實驗中學高三上學期期中考試）頁腳內容精心整理 Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendlastsummer.Itwasagoodtripinthebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendssuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldntmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewhowtodealit.Onegirltriedtocallhermumoverhermobilep

44、hone,butthereisnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimtorestinit.Aftertakensomepills,hedranksomewaterandatesomefood.Afterawhile,Ifeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain. 【答案】1.第一句： friend 改成 friends; 2.第二句： and 改成 but 3.第三句： far 改成 farther 4.

45、第四句： deal 后加 with 5.第五句： is 改成 was 6.第六句： Lucky 改成 Luckily 7.第七句：去掉 rest 前面的 to 8.第八句： taken 改成 taking 9.第九句： I 改成 he 10.第十句： us 改成 ourselves 12 （201 4 屆浙江省衢州一中高三上學期期中考試）Nowadays,somestudentswouldnotliketoliveinadormitory.Instead,theyrentedhousesoutsidetheschool.Therearead vantagesforthemall.Livingi

46、nadormitorycanincreasefriendshipandcooperationamongclassmates,butofcourseitissaf，erBesides,adormitoryismorelikeasociety,whereenablesstudentstolearntogetalongwiththeeachother thuspreparingthesociallifelater.Asforrentinghousestolivelonely,itsbetterforyourstudyasyoucanfeelfreelyinyouro wnroomwithoutbei

47、nginterruptedbyothers.Asaresult，youcanhaveaplentyoftimetodevoteyourselftoreviewyourlessonswholeheartedly.Buttheremayappearafewsafetypr oblemasyouliveoutsidetheschool.Anyhowasastudent,Ipreferlivinginadormitory. 【答案】1.rented 改為 rent 2.all 改為 both 3.but 改為 and 4.where 改為 which 頁腳內容精心整理 5.repairing 后面加

48、for 6.lonely 改為 alone 7.freely 改為 free8.去掉 a9.review 改為 blem 改為 problems （2014 屆浙江省湖州中學高三上學期期中考試）Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothsa dandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoremi nute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemypro blem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewasteallthe