雅思作文找分論點

1、找分論點的方法：絕大多數(shù)大作文話題都可以通過以下幾個方面進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展（簡稱論據(jù)擴(kuò)展十二大法則），現(xiàn)列舉如下：經(jīng)濟(jì)（economy）、就業(yè)（employment）、時間（time）、空間（space）、心理（psychology）、生理（physiology）、環(huán)境（environment）、教育（education）、文化（culture）、科技（technology）、情感（emotion）和個人權(quán)利（human right）。我將通過列舉一些例題來印證這十二大法則的實戰(zhàn)性。Some people think tobacco should be made illegal in the same

2、way as other drugs because the products containing it are addictive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?通過審題，此題問是否同意煙草行業(yè)被取締。同意則要列舉煙草的一系列缺點，反之不同意，可列舉其優(yōu)點。我們馬上來看看十二大法則，當(dāng)然不是每一項都應(yīng)用，但是大多數(shù)都可以適用。Advantages經(jīng)濟(jì)：revenue-rising for the country and businessmen concerning this arena,就業(yè)：offer

3、 the opportunities of employment in various fronts, including manufacturing, transporting, selling, governing, for residents時間： killing the time心理： relieve ones pressure文化： forming / shaping cigar cultureDisadvantages經(jīng)濟(jì)： money-consuming for smokers生理： be addictive to it,harmful to smokers health, le

4、ading to lung cancer環(huán)境： air pollutionpotential hazard of fire空間： passive smoking / second-hand smoking情感： be overly-dependent on smoking用了上述辦法，擴(kuò)展出來的論據(jù)就能更加全面，有條理。下面我再列舉一個題目，來做brainstorming。Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the w

5、orld. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?通過審題，此題無非就是我們21世紀(jì)是利大于弊還是弊大于利，所以只要列舉21世紀(jì)發(fā)展的優(yōu)缺點就可以了。我將通過之前介紹的十二大法則來進(jìn)行素材的擴(kuò)展。Advantages:經(jīng)濟(jì)： economy be promoted, efficiency be increased科技： advanced technology facilitates peoples life時間： time-saving when conducting various kinds of activ

6、ities個人權(quán)利： human rights be laid more emphasis on心理： increasing number of recreational activities to help people relieve from pressureDisadvantages:就業(yè)： growing population,fierce competition心理： pressure coming from a range of aspects環(huán)境： environmental pollution continuing getting worse二 所對應(yīng)的短語1經(jīng)濟(jì)與效率有利于

7、經(jīng)濟(jì)Spur/boost impel economy, generate government revenue, invest more to ., earn foreign currency, create/generate job opportunities and ease/relieve/alleviate the pressure of unemployment, improve living standard, ease the financial burden of students. redistribute the income不利于經(jīng)濟(jì)Hinder/hamper/imped

8、e the growth of economy, worsen the situation of unemployment, lay a heavy burden on students families, endanger the stability and safety of the society, 不贊成國家投資的理由：We have a very limited budget. We should make full use of the taxpayers money to benefit the common people.China is still a developing

9、country, which is short on funds. A thousand and one things remain to be taken care of.There are still many people living below the poverty line, and many eligible children can not receive the basic education for lack of money.Priority should without doubt be given to the development of infrastructu

10、re, not the building of art centers.2時間與空間（土地資源的占用）省時間: time-savingSave much time, improve efficiency, make more profits(可以轉(zhuǎn)到經(jīng)濟(jì))Save space, to construct more healthcare-related buildings to benefit the public and entertainment establishments to enrich their spiritual and cultural life.浪費時間 time-cons

11、umingSth/doing sth directly/indirectlyWaste/lavish time Occupy the cherished land resources, 3就業(yè)與競爭Becoming increasingly competitive, which is unfavorable to seeking jobs, not to mention decent jobs, worsen the situation of unemployment, lead to many stress-related decreases such as depression, inso

12、mnia, to name but a few.Create/generate more and more job opportunities, foster/develop/cultivate a strong sense of competition and cooperation(轉(zhuǎn)經(jīng)濟(jì)與效率)4 壓力與健康 Impose heavy strain on/ lead to more and more emotional and abnormal psychological problems/ lead to many stress-related decreases such as de

13、pression, insomnia, to name but a few.Ease/relieve/alleviate pressure, which is favorable to studying more efficiently/develop their interests in other fields5智力與教育(心態(tài)，視野，精神狀態(tài))正方：Widen horizons/enrich spiritual life/help cultivate independence/help cultivate the sense of competition and cooperation/

14、increase their creativity and imagination/help find jobs easily/get a chance to experience the totally different cultures/ inspire childrens interest in/ traditional way and thinking have endured the test of time and could help young people to avoid mistake;/ most manual work involves only basic kno

15、wledge;/make it possible for the students to accumulate job experience earlier;/Save a great deal of time and fund for both the government and the students/ Getting students physically ready for their career is also a part of education purpose;/ deepen their understanding of certain categories/ lay

16、a solid foundation for further study/ A strong body is indispensable in the success of sports/ Students can learn from the same professors as colleges students do./ Students can download and store the lessons, which enables them to choose the convenient time for them to study/ Students can communica

17、te with professors through email when questions occur. / Reduce the cost of school buildings and the trip between home and campus/deepen students memory of important knowledge/ is necessary in learning which requires memorizing things/bring a sense of belonging反方stifle the development of creativity,

18、 imagination and interest/occupy their study time/go astray easily/expose them to the dark sides of society/does harm to their mental health/fail to enjoy colorful life/ exert heavy financial burden on the students family/ Different way of life and culture put students physical and mental health at

19、risk./ cause brain strain in the students homeland/ is time-consuming/ Colleges and universities are not only places for learning but for social activities as well. / Staying before computers too long may exert negative impact on both mental and physical health of the user./ Students can get on-the-

20、site guidance from the faculty members./ Passing on knowledge is only part of the role of education. Teachers cannot be replaced in molding students characteristics and teaching the correct attitudes towards society and others/Teachers help students to choose information and learn it in a correct wa

21、y./Teachers help is necessary when questions occur./ make it easier for the students to find their job/stimulate the development of economy with well-trained labor pool/facilitate understanding of theoretical knowledge6發(fā)展與污染Arguments for tourism:1. Boost the local economy, increase the government re

22、venue, earn foreign currency and improve the living standard of the locals. Relieve the pressure of unemployment.2. Enhance mutual understanding, remove hostility and prejudice, promote good will and strengthen ties. Maintain world peace.3. Showcase the brilliant culture and glorious history. Promot

23、e cross-cultural communication. Improve the image of a place. Increase reputation and upgrade the status in the international community.4. Improve the living environment and better the basic facilities. Increase investment in infrastructure.5. Improve the quality of the locals. Expose them to the outside world. Widen their vision and develop a broader mind. lead to the extinction of some speciesresult in shortage of energy and natural resourcesbe irreparable and irreversible d