[外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)]基礎(chǔ)寫作課件

1、English Writing about Characters 高考英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作中的人物的介紹，可以用第一人稱(如寫求職信)，也可以用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)常常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，具體的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)要依據(jù)寫作的要求來(lái)確定。寫作過(guò)程中要注意以下幾個(gè)方面的問題：1人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長(zhǎng)、事跡、性格等多個(gè)方面，需要嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求來(lái)寫；要點(diǎn)可以重組。2介紹自己的老師、朋友等要突出他們的特點(diǎn)。3正確運(yùn)用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。4注意運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)?；A(chǔ)寫作：介

2、紹我國(guó)短道速滑女運(yùn)動(dòng)員周洋姓名周洋出生年月1991年6月出生地吉林省長(zhǎng)春市從小喜歡滑冰，希望獲得奧運(yùn)金牌以使父母過(guò)上好日子2010年溫哥華（Vancouver)冬奧會(huì)獲得1500米短道速滑冠軍，成為中國(guó)最年輕的冬奧會(huì)冠軍2010年溫哥華冬奧會(huì)短道速滑女子3000米團(tuán)體接力冠軍，實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想當(dāng)選長(zhǎng)春市“十大杰出女性”，并因表現(xiàn)突出而受到市政府表彰和獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)最近在為參加下一屆冬奧會(huì)積極準(zhǔn)備個(gè)人情況寫作步驟：1內(nèi)容2可能出現(xiàn)的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)3信息點(diǎn)的整合和排列4難點(diǎn)第1步 審題介紹短道速滑女運(yùn)動(dòng)員周洋第三人稱;一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)4項(xiàng)獲得奧運(yùn)金牌；成為冠軍；3000米團(tuán)體接力；當(dāng)選“十大杰出

3、女性”；表彰和獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)；難點(diǎn):1. 獲得奧運(yùn)金牌2. 成為冠軍3. 3000米團(tuán)體接力4. 當(dāng)選“十大杰出女性”5. 表彰和獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)win an Olympic gold medalbecome the champion; take the first place; get the first prize; take the gold3000-metre relaybe elected as one of Ten Outstanding Womenbe praised and rewarded第2步 整合信息, 譯成英語(yǔ)。人物背景介紹周洋：1991年6月出生于吉林省長(zhǎng)春市,從小喜歡滑冰，希望獲得奧運(yùn)金

4、牌以使父母過(guò)上好日子。Zhou Yang, (who was) born in Changchun, Jilin Province in June, 1991, has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic gold medal to let her parents live / lead a better life.2) 個(gè)人情況22010年溫哥華（Vancouver)冬奧會(huì)獲得1500米短道速滑冠軍，成為中國(guó)最年輕的冬奧會(huì)冠軍。 a. During the Vanc

5、ouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, which made her the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.b. During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, becomi

6、ng the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.3) 個(gè)人情況32010年溫哥華冬奧會(huì)短道速滑女子3000米團(tuán)體接力冠軍，實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。a. She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, which turned her dream into reality.b. She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in t

7、he Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, making her dream come true.c. She realized her dream by winning the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010 with her teammates.4) 個(gè)人情況4當(dāng)選長(zhǎng)春市“十大杰出女性”，并因表現(xiàn)突出而受到市政府表彰和獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun

8、 and she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government for her outstanding performances.She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and because of her outstanding performances, she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government.5) 個(gè)人情況5最近在為參加下一屆冬奧會(huì)積極準(zhǔn)備a. Recently she is

9、 actively preparing for the next Winter Olympic Games.b. Recently she is making preparations for the next Winter Olympic Games actively.第3步 連句成篇 Zhou Yang, (who was) born in Changchun, Jilin Province in June, 1991, has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic

10、 gold medal to let her parents live / lead a better life. During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, which made her the youngest champion of Winter Games in China. _, she and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in

11、 the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, which turned her dream into reality. Besides_, she was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and, because of her outstanding performances, she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government. Recently she is actively preparing for the

12、next Winter Olympic Games.As a result寫作點(diǎn)撥：B. 在寫好簡(jiǎn)單句(五種基本句型)的基礎(chǔ)上做到句式靈活1)并列句2)復(fù)合句(定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句)3)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型4)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞5)倒裝句6)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)A. 背景介紹往往作為文章第一句：sb be born on/ in +日期 +in + 地點(diǎn)1. 寫作前：2. 寫作中：確定時(shí)態(tài)、整合句子、解決難點(diǎn)C. 使用適當(dāng)連詞將句子串成連貫的文章。姓名巴拉克奧巴馬 （ Barack Obama ）出生時(shí)間1961年8 月4 日出生地點(diǎn)夏威夷檀香山(Honolulu, Hawaii) 家庭父親是肯尼亞(Keny

13、a)黑人，母親是美國(guó)白人小時(shí)夢(mèng)想當(dāng)總統(tǒng)教育哈佛法學(xué)院(Harvard Law School),博士職業(yè)畢業(yè)后一直從政。2008年11用4日，在大選（ the general election ）中擊敗麥凱恩（John McCain ），成為美國(guó)第44任總統(tǒng),首位非裔總統(tǒng)。意義激勵(lì)全世界人民，努力工作實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想寫作步驟：1內(nèi)容2可能出現(xiàn)的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)3信息點(diǎn)的整合和排列4難點(diǎn)第1步 審題介紹美國(guó)總統(tǒng)奧巴馬第三人稱;一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)8項(xiàng)肯尼亞黑人；博士學(xué)位；一直從政；非裔總統(tǒng)肯尼亞黑人2. 博士學(xué)位 一直從政4. 非裔總統(tǒng)a black man from Kenyawith a do

14、ctors degree, get a doctors degreehas been engaged inAfrican-American President基礎(chǔ)寫作 Barack Obama, the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. When he was only a small boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States

15、. Since he graduated from Harvard Law School with a doctors degree, he has been struggling for success in politics. On November 4th, 2008, he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States, making him the first African-American President of the c

16、ountry. The success of Obama greatly inspired people form all over the world, especially black people to work hard to achieve their goals.姓名Ashrita Furman身份運(yùn)動(dòng)員國(guó)籍美國(guó)愛好喜歡挑戰(zhàn)吉尼斯（Guinness) 紀(jì)錄經(jīng)歷小時(shí)候身體不健康，對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)不感興趣；十多歲時(shí)，成了印度靜坐功(meditation)導(dǎo)師Sri Chinmoy的學(xué)生并在他的鼓勵(lì)下積極參加各項(xiàng)體育比賽嘗試打破吉尼斯紀(jì)錄成就過(guò)去25年中，大約打破93項(xiàng)吉尼斯世界紀(jì)錄，到現(xiàn)在還保持

17、其中20多項(xiàng)紀(jì)錄。信念身體是精神的工具，人能用自己的精神力量去完成任何事情。 Ashrita Furman was born in America and is a sportsman who likes to challenge the Guinness records. As a child, he was unfit and didnt have any interest in sports at all. In his teen, he became a student of Sri Chinmoy, an Indian meditation teacher, and encouraged by his teacher, Ashrita was active in differen