五年高考(2014-2018年)英語滿分作文解析及寫作素材積累：話題06節(jié)假日活動

1、 話題06節(jié)假日活動節(jié)假日活動是指春節(jié)、元旦、國慶節(jié)、植樹節(jié)、教師節(jié)、重陽節(jié)、圣誕節(jié)、復(fù)活節(jié)、情人節(jié)、母親節(jié)等各種中西方節(jié)假日的起源、發(fā)展、慶祝方式和假日活動安排，還有生日、周年紀念日、畢業(yè)典禮等各種慶祝活動，以及參加這些活動的經(jīng)歷和感受等。 暑期、寒假等的活動、社會實踐活動或者青年志愿者的活動安排及感受等等。命題人可能從下列方面出題：(i)直接給出某一個中西方節(jié)日的活動安排；(2)假設(shè)考生參加了某個盛大節(jié)日或者某個活動，要求他對節(jié)日場面或活動情況進行描述；(3)某個節(jié)日或寒暑假要來了，準備舉行一個活動，以通知的形式告訴大家，希望踴躍參加；(4)以圖片的形式體現(xiàn)節(jié)日的盛況，要求考生進行描述；(

2、5)節(jié)日去某地度假了，回來后寫信表示感謝，其中以回憶的形式體現(xiàn)假日活動；(6)節(jié)日物品，例如餃子的制作、紅包等；(7)中西方節(jié)日的對比；(8)對節(jié)日的盛大狀況的態(tài)度，覺得如此豪華，盛況空前，有沒有必要性；(9)現(xiàn)在中國逐步開始流行過“洋”節(jié)，那么你認為西方節(jié)日會不會代替中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；(10)你的節(jié)假日如何安排，如何有意義地度過節(jié)假日。f材積I一、中國節(jié)日名稱I.The Spring Festival 春節(jié).The Dragon Boat Festival 端午節(jié).The Mid-autumn Festival 中秋節(jié).New Year s Day 元旦.National Day 國慶節(jié)nter

3、national Labor Day五一勞動節(jié).Teachers Day 教師節(jié).Children s Day 兒童節(jié).Women s Day 婦女節(jié).Tomb-sweeping Day 清明節(jié).Double Ninth Festival 重陽節(jié).Lantern Festival 元宵節(jié)二、西方節(jié)日名稱. Christmas day 圣誕節(jié).Thanksgiving Day 感恩節(jié). Valentine s Day 情人節(jié).April Fool s Day 愚人節(jié).Halloween Day 萬圣節(jié).Easter Day 復(fù)活節(jié).Mothers Day 母親節(jié).Fathers day 父親節(jié)三

4、、常用詞匯1.celebrate 慶祝2.observe遵守，慶祝.congratulation 祝賀.in honor of為了 慶祝.approach 靠近.paradise 游行.celebration慶?；顒?feast 盛宴.popularity 受歡迎.on holiday 度假11.ask for leave 請假12. cradle of culture文化搖籃13. traditional culture傳統(tǒng)文化artistic taste藝術(shù)品味stick to the tradition堅持傳統(tǒng)cultural needs文化需求give publicity to宣傳 廣

5、受歡迎enjoy great popularity 16. cultural treasures文化寶藏historical site 古跡material civilization物質(zhì)文明fall on 恰逢三、參考語句話題常用句型National Day is coming. 國慶節(jié)快到了。National Day falls on Monday this year.今年國慶節(jié)是星期一。We celebrated the New Year with a dance party.我們舉行舞會來慶祝新年。It is festivals that make us reunite .節(jié)日讓我們團聚

6、在一起。People all enjoy ourselves.人們者酩艮歡樂。I can have a rest, and put trouble aside.我可以好好休息一下，把煩惱丟到一邊。Celebrating festivals is a good way to hand down the tradition .慶祝節(jié) 日是傳承傳統(tǒng)的好方法。8.I love all festivals, because people usually feel happy during festivals anyway.我喜歡所有節(jié)日，因為，無論怎樣，人們在節(jié)日里總是感到快樂的9. Spring Fe

7、stival is the most important festival in China, and it is also my most favor festival.春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日，也是我最喜歡的節(jié)日.10.It s to celebrate the lunar calendar s new year.它是為了慶祝農(nóng)歷新年11.In the evening before the Spring Festival,families get together and have a bigmeal.在春節(jié)前夜，家人聚在一起享用豐盛的一餐In many places people like

8、 to set off firecrackers .在許多地方人們還放鞭炮.Dumplings are the most traditional food.餃子是最傳統(tǒng)的食物.The 9th day of the 9th lunar month is the traditional Chongyang Festival農(nóng)歷九月初九是傳統(tǒng)的重陽節(jié)。. The custom of ascending a height to avoid epidemics was passed down from long time ago.登高避疫的習(xí)俗是很久以前流傳下來的。典例割析【典例01】（2015年課標全

9、國卷I）假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：.欄目介紹；.稿件內(nèi)容；.稿件長度：約400詞匯.交稿日期：6月28日前天注息：.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；.開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter ,I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息要求給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，內(nèi)容是美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，

10、弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：首先，簡單介紹校英文報欄目的情況。建議 Peter介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活。稿件的要求及時間。寫作時根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。還要注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點?！痉段馁p析】Dear Peter ,I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The Foreigp Cultures7ectian in our aewspaper is very pofFular among us FtudcutsJ

11、t carries artiGles written by foreign fiicnds about (he cultures of their home coiiLitries. Would you please write somethuLg about the culture in y&ur paif of the United Stated? And 9 would esptially welcirtie arricles atwut kw Anierieanj spend their holidays and festivals j and the life cf American

12、 high school studcats. You xn write nythuig rdevant so 1-ong as 浦 inter艇tii喀 ind iifornntivfl .400 wdrds would be fine.Could hat嵯 your article before Tune 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【典例02】(2015年課標全國卷II)假如你是李華，計劃和同學(xué)去敬老院( nursing home )陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(the DoubleNinth Festival )。請給外

13、教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：.出發(fā)及返回時間；.活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。 注息：.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好。Dear Lucy,Looking forward to your reply.Yours , Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：邀請、時間、具體活動。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點

14、所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時態(tài)。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。【范文賞析】Dear Lucy,rd lite to mwte you to join us foe a visit to nearby nurEng heme nexi Saturday for the Double Ninth FestivalJt is the day oi th-e elderly in our Gr.I really want to obtain this prodous opponuninr because, by offering m

15、y smloe I will be able to improve my organisatdEil ability； OMtmuiiication ski Ils as wdl 35 mywcfidiw in spiking En5lisli in public.As an outgoing girl , I get along well with my classmates.Besides, I have sucha good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successful

16、ly , I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class , which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be gratefulif you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Your

17、s truly,Li Hua【典例04】（2016 北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（一）班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以Actions for a Greener Earth ”為題，給?？坝⒄Z 角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。提示詞：地球日 Earth Day【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1.認真讀圖，可知四幅圖講述的是你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動的事情。2.初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、 短語、句型和時態(tài)。.連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。.反復(fù)

18、審核，修改錯誤。5.注意所給的漢語提示。 一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往 給定了有關(guān)的時間、 地點、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章 的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。【范文賞析】A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us t

19、o join in the actions for a greener earth.Our cUjs came up witli the idea Io make bener use of used rmTtrials. We brought to oui classroom wm-ciit clothes, pieces ofcaidboard ind empty ph Iwnles, and turned those intodolK handbags, issue boxes and small vases. That weskemd. we went to a nearby neigl

20、itKuhflod and gave them away to the people Ibcre. Evciyoiie was vetyliappy with those ureapcGtod gifts, cBpcdally littk kid 31alid ddrly people Wc did so wdl that wc wctc incited to fhaie our idea aid experieiice 卯ich all th七由idenisour school.We are very premd of ourselves and believe we can Lp mare

21、 Ear a better world.假設(shè)你是李華，你的加拿大朋友 David給你發(fā)來email,希望你給他簡要介紹中國過春節(jié) 的一些文化習(xí)俗。內(nèi)容包括：貼春聯(lián)，包餃子，看春晚，拜年，放鞭炮，走親訪友等。注息：.詞數(shù)100詞左右；.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開頭已寫好，不計入總數(shù). 生詞：春聯(lián)Spring Festival couplets Dear David,I m glad to receive your email. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear David,I m very glad to receive your email. I m w

22、illing to tell you about how we Chinese celebrate the Spring Festival.The day just before the lunar NewYear, every familywill paste the Spring Festivalcouplets on the door and make preparations for makingdumplings. On NewYear s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as we

23、ll as appreciating the SpringFestival gala. Whenthe New Year bellrings, all the people will cheer and firecrakers are set off. With the New Year sDay coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Years call each other. Everywhere is filled with joy.Could you pleas

24、e drop me a line talking about how westerners celebrate the New Year?Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇提綱式作文，寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生 首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，

25、使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等?！玖咙c說明】范文涵蓋了所有的要點，語言簡潔，但是不乏好的詞組和句式：makepreparations for 準備，set off 燃放，be filled with 充滿， drop me a line 給某人 寫信，On New Year s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the deliciousdumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala.這句話用 了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語， Wit

26、h the NewYear s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Years call each other.這句話用了 with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。假如彳是Tom,今年國慶節(jié)正好和中秋在一起，你寫信給你的筆友Peter告訴他你國慶節(jié)是怎么度過的。 汪后： 詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫?！痉段摹緿ear Peter,I am writing to tell you how I spent my National Day. This year it

27、was acoincidence that National Day was close to the Mid-Autumn Festival, so I had a long and happy holiday.First, in celebration of the 68th birthday of our country, I went to Beijingto watch the flag-raising ceremony with my parents, which moved me a lot. I hope our country will become stronger. Of

28、 course, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a time to reunite, so we spent two days accompanying my grandparents as well as helping them do some housework. Whats more, holiday as it was, I still spared time to finish my homework.Yours,Tom【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇開放式作文，要求寫信講述十一長假是怎樣度過的，這類作文容易寫成流水賬，要選擇幾件有代表性的事情寫，也要就這些事情發(fā)表自己

29、的看法。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可以確定用一般過去時和第一人稱為主，作文除了內(nèi)容還要注意遣詞造句，高中英語學(xué)習(xí)很多特殊的句式， 學(xué)生要在作文里面有體現(xiàn)，在保證表達正確的前提下恰當使用高級句型。句式一定要富有變化，不能千篇一律都是簡單句，也不能都是復(fù)雜句。還要使用適當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞將這些要點連接起來，這樣文章才能連貫?！玖咙c說明】范文涵蓋了所有的要點，語言簡潔，但是不乏好的詞組和句式：in celebrationof為了慶祝；accompany陪伴，as well as 而且，spare time to do sth 騰出時間做某事， flag-raising ceremony升旗儀式，it was a coinci

30、dence that National Day was closeto the Mid-Autumn Festival, 這句話用了 it 作形式主語，I went to Beijing to watch the flag-raising ceremony with my parents, which moved me a lot.這句話用了 which 弓 I導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。還使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞first , what s more使得文章更加連貫。你的英國朋友在做一個課題：世界各地生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學(xué)生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：.生日通常方式；.生日聚會；.生日禮物；

31、.生日祝福；.我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由。一、/ 汪后：.詞數(shù)100左右；.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。 【范文】As we all know, birthdays are celebrated all over the world.Some ways to celebrate birthdays are rather similar from country to country: candles , cakes and birthdaywishes. But there are also different ways to celebratebirthdays.Here are a f

32、ew inChina :In China, the ocicbratioii of biitt(hyE is a custom f which is cspedaJly attractive to the ycrurg iniildraiPcopk get togettici in family? ttcy cat the birthday cake, singing son5s mid dandr happily. Besidesj tley give the birtfcd3y飛 presents and hlessiiigs to each other.Id my opinion, we

33、 should ceJebrate birthchys with our family members together and give out best wishes to our parents.【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是提綱類寫作，話題是關(guān)于生日問題，文章的要點是以提綱的形式給出來的，不是很具體，內(nèi)容有：1.生日通常方式；2.生日聚會；3.生日禮物；4.生日祝福；5.我認為更有 意義的慶祝方式和理由?？忌枰龅木褪且蕴峋V為中心，適當增加細節(jié)，考生要自己去發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容充實難度，這也增加了作文的難度，要求學(xué)生有很高的拓展能力，在確定寫作內(nèi) 容后，考生要考慮的是選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思

34、，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。 要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點， 使文章成為一個 整體。【亮點說明】這篇文章涵蓋了要點，簡潔又不乏好的詞語和句型：do harm to 對有害；custom 習(xí)俗；get together 聚會， blessings 祝福，.give our best wishes to 向某人表 達我們的祝愿，In China ,the celebration of birthdays is a custom , which is especiallyattractive to the young Children.這句話用了 which引導(dǎo)的非限制

35、性定語從句，As we allknow, birthdays are celebrated all over the world.也是非限制性定語從句,還有范文還使用了 besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。一個英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿請你寫一篇英語稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個節(jié)日里的主 要活動。寫作要點：.它是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；.家人團聚；.賞月、吃月餅；.還有旅游、訪友等其他活動。注息：.詞數(shù)100左右;.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開頭語已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：中秋節(jié) the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷 lunar calendar賞月 enjoy

36、the full moon月餅 moon cake【范文】The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home fo

37、r the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, w

38、e have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是提綱類寫作，話題是關(guān)于生日問題，文章的要點是以提綱的形式給出來的，不是很 具體，內(nèi)容有：1.它是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；2.家人團聚；3.賞月、吃月餅；4.還有旅游、訪友等其它活動。考生需要做的就是以提綱為中心，適當增加細節(jié)，考生要自己去發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容充實難度，這也增加了作文的難度，要求學(xué)生有很高的拓展能力，在確定寫作內(nèi)容后， 考生要考慮的是選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句

39、子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體?！玖咙c說明】這篇文章涵蓋了要點，簡潔又不乏好的詞語和句型：fallon恰逢時候；enjoying great popularity 非常受歡迎； a wider range of 各種各 1的，no matter how faraway or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.這句話使用讓步狀語從句；What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.這句話用 了主語從句； The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.這句話使用定語從句；With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eatmoon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories.這句話使用 with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， 還有范文還使用了 as well as這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。圣誕節(jié)就要到了。假如你是李華，老師讓你們了解關(guān)于圣誕節(jié)，并給同學(xué)們介紹