(完整版)英語寫作中盡力使用高級詞匯課件

1、Try to get the 給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題五檔（很好）21-25分1）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點 2）應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 ，有些語言錯誤，但因盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致，有較強的語言應(yīng)用能力。3）有效地使用了語句間的連接成分 ，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。4）完全達到了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的 第四檔：(16-20分)完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉了一兩個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面應(yīng)用

2、基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔（11-15分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。 應(yīng)用簡單的詞語間連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。整體而言，基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作母的。第二檔（6-10分）未恰當完成試題規(guī)定任務(wù)。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯知識有限。 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫

3、性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。 第一檔：（1-5分） 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯知識有限。 較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判; 寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。 拼寫和標點是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮. 詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 英語句子的種類簡單句 (The simple se

4、ntence)并列句 (The compound sentence)復(fù)合句 (The complex sentence)請用合適的并列連詞把每組句子合并為一個并列句。1. I turned on the TV.I watched it. 2. I bought my sister a present.She didnt like it. 并列句I turned on the TV and watched it.I bought my sister a present,but she didnt like it.3.He was tired. He went to bed. 4.The chil

5、d hid behind his mothers skirt. He was afraid of the dog.He was tired, so he went to bed.The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.5.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.He made a promise, but he didnt keep it. 6.Mary is opening the door.John is greeting her guests.Mary is op

6、ening the door,and John is greeting her guests.請用括號中所給的詞把此組句子連接為一個復(fù)合句。I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing. 技 巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當連接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的

7、文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強書面表達效果的技巧2. 使用較豐富的句式一、使用高級詞匯1.盡量使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞增加文采。試比較：I have decided to study English better this term.I have made up my mind to study English better this term. I have been determined to study English better this term.A burning cigarette end caused the big fire. A burning ciga

8、rette end resulted in /led to the big fire. be of great importancebe ready to / be willing to I like helping others.2. I like sports.3. This is important for the work.be fond of/ be interested in / have great interest inSimple phrase Advanced phrase Im good at English.2. I want to do something for t

9、he Olympics.3. Ill try my best to offer the best service.be fluent in/ have a good knowledge of/ have a gift formake a contribution to/ contribute to/ devote tospare no effort /make every effort 例如：用make use of替代use，用catch sight of替代see，用pay a visit to替代visit，用go on替代happen，用of importance替代important

10、，用be supposed to替代should，用I come up with a good idea替代I have a good idea等。 I like music. I am fond of music. I am into music.I dont know how to enlarge my vocabulary. I have no idea how to enlarge myvocabulary.練習：2. 使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如：Thank you for sharing the time with us. The noise nearly drove me ma

11、d. 練習：Tom broke his leg last week.Tom_last week. Our school lies in the suburb of the city. Our school _the suburb of the city. had his leg brokenis located in3. 避免重復(fù)使用同一單詞或短語。 如果前文用了interesting，后文就可用a lot of fun； 若前文用了clever，后文就可用smart； 若前文說了a good idea后文就可說a lovely idea，等等。I like reading while my

12、brother likes watching TV.I like reading while my brother _watching TV.enjoys4.適當使用比喻、擬人等修辭手法1） The Great Wall runs across China like a huge dragon.2） To finish the work ahead of time, I have been as busy as a bee recently. 3） He is a lucky dog. 5、使用形容詞（短語）做狀語或者使用非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)等1） They returned home, safe

13、and sound.2） Full of fear, I walked in the darkness.3） While walking along the streets I met Jane.4)My brother is old enough to attend school.6.善用小詞 2005 saw the successful launch of Shenzhou VI in China. How does Shenzhen strike you? This is how the story goes.Marys mother asked her to seize time t

14、o go over her lessons for the final exam, but it didnt help.1.突然，我想出了一個主意 。Suddenly I thought out a good idea. (一般)A good idea occurred to me. (高級)A good idea suddenly struck me. (高級)2.你能很容易找到我家。You can find my house easily. (一般)Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house. ( 高級）練習：3.我們每天有許多作業(yè)做

15、。We have a lot of homework to do every day. (一般)We have endless homework to do every day. (高級)4.非常感謝你的幫助。Thank you for your help very much. (一般)I feel thankful grateful for your help. (高級)I appreciate your help very much. (高級)5.你應(yīng)該給我道歉。You should apologise to me. (普通)You owe me an apology.（高級）6.許多老師

16、都來參加展覽。Many teachers have come to the exhibition. (普通)Many a teacher has come to the exhibition. （高級） A great many teachers have come to the exhibition. （高級）8.我們將要考慮這個問題。We will consider this matter.We will take the matter into account (consideration).7.結(jié)果這個計劃失敗了。Finally,the plan failed.(一般）As a res

17、ult the plan was a failure. (高級)The plan turned out (to be) a failure. (高級)二、使用豐富的句式(改變主語)：1. Ill offer the best service to others._ is my goal. (-ing分詞作主語) It is my goal to_. ( (用it形式主語)2. I like helping others._. (-ing分詞作主語等)_. (用it形式主語或賓語)Offering the best service to others offer the best service

18、 to others.Helping others is my favorite/ what I like most/.It is my favorite to help others.3. I wont disappoint you. （句首否定詞倒裝）4. If you give me the chance, Ill offer the best service to others. If _ the chance, Ill offer the best service to others. ( 使用省略）On no account (決不) _.will I disappoint you

19、given5. Im familiar with Beijing. Its important for the work. Im familiar with Beijing, _. (定語從句)6. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Beijing. Im a middle school student._.(定語從句/分詞作狀語) which is of great importance for the workBorn in Beijing, Im an 18-year-old boy,who is studying in a middle school(

20、studying in a middle school). Ill offer the best service to others. It is _ that _. (使用強調(diào)句）5. I like sports very much.I _ like sports very much. (使用強調(diào)）dothe best serviceIll offer to others三、使用過度銜接詞1. Phrases: (選取高級連接詞表層次順序，羅列增加： First,second, third,fourth,last _, _, _, _, _ _, _, _, _, _To begin/sta

21、rt withfurthermorein additionfinallyFirst and foremostbesideswhats morelast but not leastin addition to thatmoreover三、記住這些使文章層次清晰，行文連貫的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，并在寫作中學(xué)習使用。1.表示平行、對等或選擇關(guān)系and, bothand, as well as . Neithernor, eitheror,also, not onlybut also2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系But, yet,however, nevertheless(然而), in spite of(盡管仍), altho

22、ugh, otherwise, while,instead3.表示對比關(guān)系On the contrary, instead of, while,on the one handon the other hand, just like, unlike(不象)4. 表示因果關(guān)系So, for, therefore, as a result(of), because(of),owing to, due to, thanks to , on account of(=because of )5. 表示時間關(guān)系In the past , now , nowadays,at present, in the f

23、uture, in the end, shortly after(不久之后）,recently,lately6.表示順序關(guān)系Firstsecond, then, next, finally, for one thing; for another thing7.表示遞進、強調(diào)關(guān)系Besides, furthermore（而且，此外）, in addition , moreover, whats more ，worse still, whats worse,above all, certainly important of all, to make matters worse8. 表示解釋、說明關(guān)

24、系 namely,actually, such as, for exampleinstance, that is to say, in other words, and so on , to tell you the truth, according to this9. 表示結(jié)論，對話題進行總結(jié) in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole策略：1、平時多寫。2、及時更正錯誤，避免再犯。3、注重積累單詞、詞組、固定短語、精彩句式,常用句型,避免Chinese Engl

25、ish的現(xiàn)象。4、多背誦模仿。Maybe the following advice will do good to you. 你的英國朋友正在做一個課題；世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學(xué)生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：一、通常方式1生日聚會2生日禮物3生日祝福二、我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由 *詞數(shù)100-120 Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the

26、 party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I think that its better to help other people. We know that its important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held s