寫作輔導(dǎo)--運(yùn)用同位語課件

1、How to use the appositive如何使用同位語寫作輔導(dǎo)Teaching aimsAt the end of the class, we should knowwhat is an appositive.how to use the appositive to beautify your writing.Step 1 Warming Up A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and pr

2、ofessor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011

3、. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.Step 2 Lead-in What is an appositive? Last Thursday, I had an interview with Professor Li, a famous psychologist and educator, a

4、bout how Senior 3 students can release their stress from study. 同位語常用于描寫人物，地點(diǎn)及事物. Step 3 How to use the appositive1. To describe a person 1) 人物： 杜老師 職業(yè)： 英語老師 描述： 非常可愛，經(jīng)常用甜美的聲音和我 們說話。 Mrs. Du is a very lovely English teacher. She always talks to us in her sweet voice. Mrs. Du, _, always talks to us i

5、n her sweet voice.Step 3 How to use the appositive1. To describe a person 1) 人物： 杜老師 職業(yè)： 英語老師 描述： 非?？蓯?，經(jīng)常用甜美的聲音和我 們說話。 Mrs. Du is a very lovely English teacher. She always talks to us in her sweet voice. Mrs. Du, a very lovely English teacher, always talks to us in her sweet voice.1. To describe a p

6、erson 2) 人物：Amy ，耶魯大學(xué)教授 觀點(diǎn)：父母對(duì)孩子應(yīng)該從嚴(yán)教育 Amy, _, holds the view that parents should be strict with their children.1. To describe a person 2) 人物：Amy ，耶魯大學(xué)教授 觀點(diǎn)：父母對(duì)孩子應(yīng)該從嚴(yán)教育 Amy, a professor of Yale, holds the view that parents should be strict with their children.1. To describe a person 3) 你是校報(bào)記者，最近你就學(xué)生

7、上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班這個(gè)問題采訪了教育專家時(shí) 間：上周末對(duì) 象：教育專家陳教授主 題：父母要求孩子上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班的問題 Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Chen, _, about the issue that parents ask their children to attend extra classes.1. To describe a person 3) 你是校報(bào)記者，最近你就學(xué)生上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班這個(gè)問題采訪了教育專家時(shí) 間：上周末對(duì) 象：教育專家陳教授主 題：父母要求孩子上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班的問題 Last weekend, I had a

8、n interview with Professor Chen, an educational expert, about the issue that parents ask their children to attend extra classes.4) 你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況(2009年)：時(shí)間：上周末對(duì)象：眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授主題：我國中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness）問題 基本信息：(1) 發(fā)生率：略高于50% (2) 人數(shù)：世界第一專家解讀：(1) 原因：很復(fù)雜 (2) 治療：沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3) 建

9、議：不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng) (4) 特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, _, on the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.4) 你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況(2009年)：時(shí)間：上周末對(duì)象：眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授主題：我國中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness）問題 基本信息：(1) 發(fā)生率：略高于50% (2) 人數(shù)：世界第一專家解讀：(1) 原因：很復(fù)

10、雜 (2) 治療：沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3) 建議：不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng) (4) 特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye doctor, on the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.5) 你接受一項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)，要為當(dāng)?shù)赜⒄Z晚報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道(2014年) 人物：英國人查理德阿維斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日時(shí)間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解

11、不同文化中成功人生的含義相關(guān)信息：借助當(dāng)?shù)孛襟w尋找; 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個(gè)國家; 職業(yè)包括政府官員、運(yùn)動(dòng)員、司機(jī)、教師、藝術(shù)家等計(jì)劃: 40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人,打算根據(jù)此經(jīng)歷寫一本書Richard Avis, _,has been travelling around the world in search of his time twins.5) 你接受一項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)，要為當(dāng)?shù)赜⒄Z晚報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道(2014年) 人物：英國人查理德阿維斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日時(shí)間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人目

12、的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義相關(guān)信息：借助當(dāng)?shù)孛襟w尋找; 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個(gè)國家; 職業(yè)包括政府官員、運(yùn)動(dòng)員、司機(jī)、教師、藝術(shù)家等計(jì)劃: 40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人,打算根據(jù)此經(jīng)歷寫一本書Richard Avis, a British born on Dec 1st, 1974, has been travelling around the world in search of his time twins.2. To describe a place州名：加利福尼亞特點(diǎn)：1. 約38,000,000人； 2. 美國面積第三大的州Calif

13、ornia, _, has a population of 38 million.2. To describe a place州名：加利福尼亞特點(diǎn)：1. 約38,000,000人； 2. 美國面積第三大的州California, the third largest state of America, has a population of 38 million.2. To describe a place北京，中國的首都，是一個(gè)美麗的地方，那里有很多的名勝古跡。Beijing, _, is a beautiful place with a lot of places of interest.青

14、海湖,中國最大的內(nèi)陸(inland)湖,海拔3198米。Qinghai Lake, _, lies 3198 metres above sea level.2. To describe a place北京，中國的首都，是一個(gè)美麗的地方，那里有很多的名勝古跡。Beijing, capital of China, is a beautiful place with a lot of places of interest.青海湖,中國最大的內(nèi)陸(inland)湖,海拔3198米。Qinghai Lake, the largest inland lake in China, lies 3198 met

15、res above sea level.2. To describe a place天安門廣場是世界上第二大的廣場，占地面積44萬平方米。Tiananmen Square, _, covers an area of 0.44 million square metres.2. To describe a place天安門廣場是世界上第二大的廣場，占地面積44萬平方米。Tiananmen Square, the second largest square in the world, covers an area of 0.44 million square metres.3. To describ

16、e other things艾滋病，無法可醫(yī)，總讓人陷入絕望。Aids, _, can always drive people to despair.射擊最初(originally)只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。(2008年)Shooting, _, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 3. To describe other things艾滋病，無法可醫(yī)，總讓人陷入絕望。Aids, a disease with no cure, can always drive people to despair.射擊

17、最初(originally)只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。(2008年)Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 3. To describe other things目前的交易會(huì)(trade fair)，是有史以來規(guī)模最大的，正在廣州舉行。The current trade fair, _, is being held in Guangzhou. 信用卡是一種很便利的付款形式，它在年輕人中越來越流行。Credit card,

18、_, is getting more and more popular among young people.3. To describe other things目前的交易會(huì)(trade fair)，是有史以來規(guī)模最大的，正在廣州舉行。The current trade fair, the biggest in its history, is being held in Guangzhou. 信用卡是一種很便利的付款形式，它在年輕人中越來越流行。Credit card, a convenient means of payment, is getting more and more popul

19、ar among young people.Step 4 Instant PracticeGroup 1: (2012 廣東)請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹一位傳奇人物姓 名：Allan Stewart國 籍：澳大利亞出生日期：1915年3月7日世界紀(jì)錄：2006年獲碩士學(xué)位時(shí)年齡最大學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度：挑戰(zhàn)自我，永遠(yuǎn)為時(shí)不晚。第一個(gè)學(xué)位：1936年獲得第二個(gè)學(xué)位：醫(yī)學(xué)博士第三個(gè)學(xué)位：80多歲時(shí)決定學(xué)習(xí)法律，2006年獲得碩士學(xué)位。第四個(gè)學(xué)位：2012年通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)獲得，善于合理安排學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，受到老師表揚(yáng)。*碩士學(xué)位：masters degree; *博士：doctorAllan Stewart, an Aust

20、ralian born on March 7th, 1915, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. 2. Born on March 7th, 1915, Allan Stewart, an Australian, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. 3. Allan Stewart is an Australian who was born on March 7th, 1915 and he became

21、the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. Group 2: 請用5句話，介紹我們的祖國-中國要點(diǎn)如下：中國是一個(gè)有著悠久的歷史和文化的偉大國家 。地理位置（亞洲東部）、面積（960萬平方千米）和人口情況（13億）有美麗的山川和豐富的自然資源。長江是世界上最長的河流之一，長城是世界七大奇觀之一人民勤勞勇敢，他們的勤奮和智慧在過去的三十年里給中國帶來了巨大的變化 Lying in the east of Asia, China, a great country with a long history and rich cul

22、ture, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion. 2. China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a long history and rich culture and covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion.Group 3: 以下是微博的基本信息及主要影響： 基本信

23、息： (1)微博：一種網(wǎng)上日記 (2)話題：從日常小事到全球重大事件 (3)內(nèi)容：定期更新、公開，簡短、140字以內(nèi)主要影響：(1)正面：便于人們表達(dá)心聲、交流想法 使信息的傳播比以往更快更廣(2)負(fù)面：可能泄露隱私或其他重要的個(gè)人信息 誤導(dǎo)性信息使公眾無法辨清是非參考詞匯：微博microblog n. 誤導(dǎo)性misleading adj. 隱私 privacy n. Microblog, a kind of online diary, covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major glo

24、bal events. 2. Microblog is a kind of online diary which covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major global events.3. Microblog is a kind of online diary and covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major global events.1. Go over what we h

25、ave just learned. 2. Finish writing your article. HomeworkThank you for your attention ! Born on March 7th, 1915, Allan Stewart, an Australian, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself. He got his first degree in 1936

26、 and then his doctors degree in medicine. In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained his third degree in 2006. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.2. Lying in the east of Asia, Ch

27、ina, a great country with a long history and rich culture, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion. There are many beautiful mountains and rivers, as well as abundant natural resources. The Changjiang River is the longest rivers in the world and the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders on the earth. The Chinese people , whose