重在流暢切忌硬譯

1、重在流暢，切忌硬譯一篇好的書面表達(dá)應(yīng)該表意清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，沒有翻譯的痕跡。難點(diǎn)磁場(chǎng)假如你是某報(bào)社記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫一篇英文稿，簡(jiǎn)要地報(bào)道中國(guó)開發(fā)西部的有關(guān)情況。主要情況范圍：9個(gè)省、自治區(qū)（autonomous regions），一直轄市（municipality）面積：540萬(wàn)平方公里人口：2.85億實(shí)施要點(diǎn)交通（transportation）建設(shè)：修建多條公路，鐵路環(huán)境保護(hù)：退耕還林，防治污染資源利用：開發(fā)利用其豐富的天然資源人才引用：廣納各類專家，技術(shù)人員注意：（1）短文須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)；適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；（2）短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出；（3）詞數(shù)100左右。New Dev

2、elopment for Central and Western ChinaThe Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and Western China.案例探究請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面文字及表格中的內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。你于2001年暑期參加了第21屆大運(yùn)會(huì)（the 21st Universiade）的志愿者工作（voluntary work）。你為此感到驕傲并希望2008年北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)時(shí)能再次充當(dāng)志愿者。工作時(shí)間八月下旬，每天七個(gè)小時(shí)工作地點(diǎn)運(yùn)動(dòng)員村（the Villages）的后勤部（the supply office）工

3、作內(nèi)容配送（prepare and deliver）毛巾（towel）、香皂、鉛筆、紙張等日常用品到客房服務(wù)對(duì)象來(lái)自世界各地的運(yùn)動(dòng)員及官員感受、感想工作辛苦且瑣碎（trifling），但很重要注意：短文必須以第一人稱寫。應(yīng)包括全部要點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)100左右。命題意圖：考查學(xué)生對(duì)表格的理解，以及依據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容表情達(dá)意的能力。錯(cuò)解分析：學(xué)生做此類題時(shí)的最大毛病是不會(huì)重新組織所給材料，僅僅逐條翻譯。解題方法與技巧：（1）審題，確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、主要內(nèi)容；（2）依據(jù)常理，將以上內(nèi)容的順序做適當(dāng)調(diào)整；（3）寫出提綱，拓展成文；（4）檢查要點(diǎn)有無(wú)遺漏，上下是否銜接，所用動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、變形是否準(zhǔn)確。參考答案：

4、In the late August this year,I took part in the voluntary work for the 21st Universiade.Every day I was working in the supply office in the Villages for 7 hours.My job was to prepare and deliver daily supplies,such as towels,soap,toothbrushes,paper,pencils and so on,to the rooms of the officials and

5、 athletes from all over the world.The job was hard and trifling.None the less,it was very important.When the 21st Universiade closed,I completed my job successfully.Now I feel very proud of it and decide to work as a volunteer again when Beijing holds the 2008 Olympic Games.錦囊妙計(jì)1.重新組織指示語(yǔ)，不可逐條翻譯；2.適當(dāng)

6、使用連詞，使句子連貫，eg:when,after,and,but,till,etc.3.避免重復(fù)使用同一種句型，盡量使句子多樣化。4.使用學(xué)過(guò)的好句式，避免中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)。殲滅難點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練1.()請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文。你在2001年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店做保潔員（cleaner）工作。你每天工作七個(gè)小時(shí)，為期三周。 這項(xiàng)工作辛苦且枯燥，并使你感到非常疲勞。這幾乎使你半途放棄。每天你都要起早貪黑地工作。在新學(xué)期開始之前，你終于堅(jiān)持完成了這項(xiàng)工作，并且由此認(rèn)識(shí)到了勞動(dòng)（labour）的意味。你認(rèn)為這是一次成功的體驗(yàn)。注意：（1）必須使用第一人稱。（2）詞數(shù)100左右。2.()假如你是英文

7、報(bào)刊MORNING POST的通訊員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格以A Big Fire為題，寫一篇簡(jiǎn)單的報(bào)道。注意：（1）報(bào)道必須包括所列的全部?jī)?nèi)容。（2）詞數(shù)100左右。起火地點(diǎn)廣東省廣州市東南部森林起火時(shí)間2001年12月3日下午起火原因一位農(nóng)場(chǎng)工人吸煙持續(xù)時(shí)間3天多參加救火人員數(shù)千名消防隊(duì)員、農(nóng)場(chǎng)工人及當(dāng)?shù)鼐用駛鋈藬?shù)2人死亡、約20人受傷經(jīng)濟(jì)損失至少500萬(wàn)元影響震驚全省，并提醒人們注意防火，尤其是秋冬天氣干燥時(shí)3.(）云霧山是一處游覽勝地，每日有大量游客。幾年前不注意保護(hù)環(huán)境，現(xiàn)在大有改觀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)報(bào)道。幾年前少數(shù)游客的行為現(xiàn)在游客的表現(xiàn)亂扔廢紙、塑料袋、罐頭盒帶走垃圾殺害動(dòng)物，

8、捕捉飛鳥不再打獵破壞花草、樹木愛護(hù)植物在林中生火燒飯自帶午餐，以防森林火災(zāi)注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右。（2）開頭已為你寫好。生詞：環(huán)境environmentThe Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest重在流暢，切忌硬譯難點(diǎn)磁場(chǎng)New Development for Central and Western ChinaThe Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and Western China.This part of China includes 9 provinces an

9、d autonomous regions and one mumicipality,covering an area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million.The government will pay special attention to its transportation.Some highways and railways will be built.To protect the nature,farmers will return farmland to forest.Also,meas

10、ures should be taken to prevent pollution.Western China is rich in natural resources,which can be exploited and made full use of.To meet the need of the development,all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.We have every reason to believe that the government will be a great succe

11、ss.As a result of the great project,central and western regions of China will surely achieve better and faster development in the new century.The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.殲滅難點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練1.During the summer holiday,2001,I thought I should do something meaning

12、ful instead of touring.So I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner.I worked 7 hours a day for three weeks.The job was hard and boring and seemed endless,which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way.After all,I stuck to it with determination.Every day I star

13、ted off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening.Finally,I finished the job before the new school term began.Now,I understand what labour means.I think it is really a successful experience.2.A Big FireA big fire broke out in the forest in the southeast of Guangzhou city,Guangdo

14、ng Province on the afternoon of December 3,2001.The fire was caused by a young farm worker smoking carelessly in the forest while he was working there.To the peoples astonishment,the fire lasted more than three days.Thousands of firemen,farm workers and local people took part in the fight against th

15、e fire.Unfortunately,two people lost their lives and about twenty were injured in fighting against the fire.It caused a damage of at least five million yuan.People all over the province were shocked at the news and they have also been warned to be careful of fires,especially in dry autumn and winter

16、,for everything is easy to catch fire.3.The Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest,there are lots of tourists seeing sights every day.Years ago,some of them paid no attention to environment protection.They threw about waste paper,plastic bags and tins.Besides,they killed animals,caught birds,destroyed trees and flowers.Worse still,they often made a fire to cook in the forest.That was da