高中英語外研版選修6 writing Book6M7Revision writing 部?jī)?yōu)課件

1、Book Six Module Seven Revision Writing天津市實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué) 王洋Composition You are Li Jin, you want to write a letter to a pen friend named Tom in another country.Read the following instructions: 1. One of your best friends Li Hua is moving to live in another country. 2. You have a pen friend in the town or city w

2、here your friend is going to live. 3. Your friend is shy and doesnt speak English as well as you do!In your letter, do the following: 1. Describe your friend. 2. Say how long youve known him or her and where you met. 3. Ask your pen friend for help.About 100 words. 1. Avoid grammatical mistakes.2. E

3、nrich expressions. 3. Improve handwriting, cover necessary contents, Composition evaluation criteria Revise your composition. Education is a gradual polishing process. So is writing.How to polish a composition?Grammatical mistakes1、主謂一致（Subject-Verb Concord） Please help him when he arrive there. I h

4、ave a problem which really need to be solved. I have a problem which really needs to be solved. Please help him when he arrives there.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤（misuse of tenses）2、To our amazement, we nearly have same hobbies and we quickly became good friends. To our amazement, we nearly had same hobbies and we quickly

5、became good friends. It has been three years since I had known him. It has been three years since I knew him. 詞性誤用（misuse of parts of speech）3. Now he will move to you city soon. Now he will move to your city soon. Hear that he will move to your country, I want to ask you for help. Hearing that he w

6、ill move to your country, I want to ask you for help. 句子不完整（sentence fragments）4. He is shy when first meets a stranger. He is shy when he first meets a stranger. I appreciate if you agree to help. I appreciate it if you agree to help.不間斷句子（run-on sentence）5. His English isnt that good, thats why he

7、 is afraid of speaking English in the public. His English isnt that good, and thats why he is afraid of speaking English in the public. He is shy and not good at communicating with English, your help is of vital importance. He is shy and not good at communicating with English, so your help is of vit

8、al importance. Enrich expressionsowing to,to make things worse,have a good command of (a language)be faced with,adapt oneself to do sb a favor,relieve pressure,cherish the memory,cause inconvenience, Other useful sentence patternsBeginning: I wonder if it is convenient for you to Im writing to ask y

9、ou a favor. Would you?Body part: Faced with such a problem, I It was quite an experience for both of us, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life. Ending: Thank you in advance. I would appreciate it ifRevise your compositionStep 1 Find out the grammatical mistakes in your original composition

10、and correct them.Step 2 Vary the words and expressions (with the help of useful expressions)Step 3 You can have a discussion with your partners if you meet some difficulties.Write the composition down on the learning sheet.Students presentationGrading 1. Exchange your composition with your group mem

11、ber and grade his or her composition.2. Offer your suggestions of revision.Students presentationPossible version:Dear Tom, How is it going these days? It has been a long time since I heard from you last time. Actually, I am writing to ask for some advice and help for my best friend Li Hua, who is mo

12、ving to your city. We have known each other for three years since we were in the same class. He is the most charming person that I have ever met not only because of his extraordinary intelligence, but his kind heart filled with enthusiasm. However, I am kind of worried about his incoherence of spoke

13、n English and shyness while practicing it, which will probably add to difficulty adapting to his new life.Coming straight to the point-asking for help.Using rich expressions and proper link words; necessary contents reasonably covered. If possible, could you please help him overcome this problem? I

14、will appreciate it very much and hope you can be good friends. Looking forward to your reply!Echoing the beginning and show appreciation before hand.SummaryWe have learned: how to polish your composition.1. Avoid grammatical mistakes.2. Enrich expressions. 3. Pay attention to the requirements in the composition evaluation criteria.