中考英語作文講評課

中考英語作文講評課書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；2、看圖作文；3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學(xué)到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。3.寫。要進行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。二.應(yīng)試策略1.審題目：要切中題意?！吨锌伎荚囌f明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4）注意冠詞用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2）服飾顏色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描寫：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）動作描寫：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手：1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。假如你叫張強。請根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右?；匦诺拈_頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dearfriend,Hello！I’myournewfriend.MynameisBob.I’mfifteen.I’mAmerican.IliveinNewYork.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.I’mgoodatmaths.Itisveryinteresting.Myfavouritesportisbasketball.AndIamnotonlyabasketballfanbutalsoagoodplayer.Ilikepopmusic.MyfriendsandIoftensingpopsongstogether.Afterschool,Iaminterestedingettingon-line.IhaveknownalotaboutChinafromtheInternet.NowI’mlearningChinese.IhopeIwillvisityourcountryoneday.Pleasewritetomeandtellmesomethingaboutyourlife.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,Bob1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強自己的情況。2.圈要點：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：1、收到對方的來信；2、愿意和對方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；5、自己的希望。3、列提綱：1.gotyourletter2.gladtobeyourfriend3.name,zhang

Qiang,fifteen,liveinShaanxi4.amiddleschoolstudent,likeEnglish,likesports,goodatdrawing,5.hopewe’llmeetinChina4、定基調(diào)：1.時態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。5、寫全文：DearBob,

Igotyourletteryesterday.I’mverygladtobeyourpenfriend.MynameisZhangQiang.I’mfifteenyearsold,too.IliveinShaanxi.

I’mamiddleschoolstudent,too.IlikeEnglishandphysicsverymuch.Ialsolikesports,butI’mgoodatdrawing.IknowalittleaboutAmerica.Couldyoutellmesomethingmoreaboutyourcountryinyournextletter?Ihopewe’llmeetinChinasomeday.I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtimetogether.Pleasewrite(to)mesoon.Yours,ZhangQiang結(jié)構(gòu)/語法（5分）+內(nèi)容（7分）+文采（3分）一、認真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)正確二、理清思路，列出提綱三、連詞成句，初步成形四、檢查修改，內(nèi)容無誤五、遣詞造句，爭取文采Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時分）Growingpainsandgains（成長的煩惱與歡樂）Ihaveadream（我有一個夢想）ThingsIhatetodo（我不喜歡。。。）Lovearoundme（我身邊的愛)Iwanttodosomethingformyschool(我為學(xué)校做件事）I’mproudofmyself（我為自己感到自豪）與生活相關(guān)與“我”相關(guān)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".(以“最能使我快樂的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)Whatshouldwewriteabout?Whatshouldn’twe(only)writeabout?Freetalk1.Myschoollife2.Mydreamteacher3.ThethingIhatetodo4.Myopinionsofkeepingpetdogs5.ThebestwaytomakemehappyWriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)

Thebestwaytomakemehappyisachievinggoodmarks.IthinkthiswayisthebestonetomakemehappybecauseitistheeasiestwaysanditcanimprovemyabilitysoIthinkitisthebestway.Inthisway,Icangetsomeprizes,soIwillfeelhappy,what’smoreitcanalsomakemyparentshappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全therearealotofwaystomakemehappy.Thebestwaytomakemehappyistoplaybasketball.Toplaycomputergamesisalsoawaytomakemehappy.EverydaywehavePElesson.Thesearealotofinterestsinit.SoIfeelhappyinthisway.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全

thebestwaytomakemehappyistohelpanother.WhenIfeelsad,Icanhelpanother,becauseIhopetheothershappy.Icanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadandplaywithsmallchildren.InthiswayIfeelanotherhappy,thenIalsowillhappy.Helpothersnotonlymakemehappy,butalsomakeothershappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)

Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’

MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’

Theenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)

Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’

MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’

Theenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’Nowadays,ourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Ourbadhabitscausemanyproblemslikeairpollution,landpollutionandwaterpollution.Tomakeourenvironmentbetter,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector.WecanplanttreestomaketheaircleanbecausetreescantakeinCO2andreleaseO2intotheair.Weshouldbuyanduseenvironmentallyfriendlygoods.Finally,wemustn’tleavealotofrubbishintotheriver,pondorsea.Solet’sbeenvironmentprotectorsandenjoylivingabetterlifeontheearth.Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector

Nowadays,therearemanyproblemsofourenvironmentsuchasairpollution,waterpollutionandlandpollution.Peoplecutdownandburntheforest.Peopleusethingsonceandthrowthemaway.Peopleusechemicalstoproducemanythings.Becauseofthesereasons,ourearthisingreatdanger.Weliveontheearth,it’sourdutytoprotectit.IwilldoalotofthingssothatIcanprotecttheearth.Forexample,Iwillreusetheplasticbags.Therearealotofwaystobegreenconsumers.IwanttobeanenvironmentprotectorUsethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點僅供參考）

Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?

Everybodyhasmanywaystomakehappy.SodoI.First,Ilistensomefavoritemusic.Second,Ireadsomebooksandmakesomenotes.Ithinkitisgood.Third,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Inmyopinion,playbasketballisthebestwaytomakemehappy,becauseIfondofit.Becauseofthose,Ibecomehappyandstrong.1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容（7分）+語言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問題）*重點寫什么(提示問題）*時態(tài)(參考問題）”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保護者)”Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點僅供參考）

Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?MytroubleWhatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Environmentaroundus1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）二、理清思路，列出提綱Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保護者)”(以”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點僅供參考）1.Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?2.Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?3.Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".(以“最能使我快樂的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)三、連詞成句，初步成形四、檢查修改，內(nèi)容無誤Environmentisveryimportantforus.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.I’dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector

Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingdaysintheyear.Ididalotofthingsthiswinterholidays.themostunforgetablethingistomakemybirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherbuythethingsweneedfromthesupermarket.Wemixedthefloorandeggs.Thenaddsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheiron.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilynumbers.Itwasreallydelicions.IwillneverforgetthatdaybecauseIlearnedtomakecakesaswellassharemyhappinesswithothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?錯誤太多10’Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,

Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼寫）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小寫）Punctuation（標點符號）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（時態(tài)）Verbagreement(主謂一致)Wordform(詞形）10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短語和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏詞）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（詞序）Usingwrongword（選詞錯誤）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英語）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.1.Environmentisveryimportantforus.2.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.3.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.4.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.5.I’dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.7.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.8.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.6.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.

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Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so

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