高三短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)課教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)精選

1、高三短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)課教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)一、教學(xué)對(duì)象泰寧一中高三(6)班學(xué)生.二、教材內(nèi)容分析短文改錯(cuò)是全國(guó)高考卷的寫(xiě)作部分第一節(jié)試題.此題型是將錯(cuò)誤置于100字左右的篇章中，考查考生在短文所提供的語(yǔ)境情景下辨析并訂正錯(cuò)誤的能力.本節(jié)課主要以2013年至2016年全國(guó)高考及部分省份高考真題為課堂使用材料，采用分解，J13類(lèi)等方式進(jìn)行材料的利用.并且結(jié)合泰寧縣的旅游特色進(jìn)行信息挖掘和資源整合，以求達(dá)到知識(shí)與情感的結(jié)合.三、教學(xué)目標(biāo)本堂課作為高三總復(fù)習(xí)階段的專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)課，旨在通過(guò)一系列任務(wù)的設(shè)計(jì)和完成來(lái)幫助學(xué)生：(1) 了解短文改錯(cuò)題型的特征和要求，提高“詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇邏輯”能力；(2)熟悉解題思路，深入地

2、理解和內(nèi)化課堂所學(xué)知識(shí)；(3)發(fā)揮團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作和學(xué)習(xí)的精神，共同完成各項(xiàng)課堂活動(dòng)任務(wù)四、教學(xué)過(guò)程Step I: PreparationsT plays a “ Name Guessing game with the students, aiming to clear the obstacle betweennd Ss.意圖說(shuō)明老師通過(guò)游戲，與學(xué)生認(rèn)識(shí)，為增強(qiáng)了解和互動(dòng)性做一個(gè)鋪墊Rules for Group WorkThe whole class will be divided into 5 groups.Many tasks need to be performed by groups.Eac

3、h of you is supposed to participate.points for your group.5. The group which wins the most points will get prizes. s interest to take part.Group1 G2G3G4G51 / 10ParticipationTotalStep II: Leading-inT shows a picture about the game Finding differences “to lead in the topic Proofreading :意圖說(shuō)明老師通過(guò)“找茬”游戲

4、引出這節(jié)課的主要內(nèi)容-“短文改錯(cuò)”，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)行該題型的特點(diǎn)分析.Finding differences in the following two paragraphs.Mom has a full time job, so she has to do most of the housework. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We got up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on s

5、hopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.Mom has a full time job, but she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad and I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went shopping. When he c

6、ame back, I found a bunch of flowers in hjs hand.T asks Ss to point out the correct usages in the paragraph:1. Housework; 2. Both and；3. got up;4. went shopping;5. his hand.Step III. Introduction of Proofreading第四部分寫(xiě)作第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（10分）下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處.請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并下面加上該加的詞.

7、刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉.修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞.注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分冠詞 名詞 代詞形容詞動(dòng)詞及非謂語(yǔ)主謂或副詞時(shí)態(tài) 動(dòng)詞 一致2 / 102016年全國(guó)卷（I ）1111131102016年全國(guó)卷（n）1130013102015年全國(guó)卷（I ）1112113002015年全國(guó)卷（n）1122102102014年全國(guó)卷（I ）1104121002014年全國(guó)卷（n）111220201近三年高考短文改錯(cuò)考點(diǎn)分布表Rules for proofreading:1.改變形式以“實(shí)詞”居多 2.添刪

8、以“虛詞”居多3.多“改正”少“添刪”（8:1:1）4.改后要保持原意不變Skills for proofreading:Step 1. Skimming（通讀全文，掌握大意，確定時(shí)態(tài)）Step 2. Scanning1）逐句研讀，細(xì)查語(yǔ)法；2）由動(dòng)詞入手，注意句型和搭配；3）由易到難，各個(gè)擊破；Step 3. Checking復(fù)核答案，規(guī)范答題；注意 土不改”：A、標(biāo)點(diǎn)；B、綱外詞（漢字注釋詞）C、詞序Step IV: Observing rules for proofreading and making summaries.T takes NOUNS for example to show

9、 how to do group work for observing rules and making summaries.As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landform in China, Golden Lake of Taining attracts many visitors every year.As I told you last time, I made three friend here.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.Your knowledges of Greece

10、 can help the whole class.The popularity made for the grow in the porcelain industry.3 / 10My summary2)可數(shù)、不可數(shù)(3)詞性正確使用(1)單復(fù)數(shù)的使用(根據(jù)句意、主謂一致、限定詞)(When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good(cup) with handles to suitBritish habits.From the time I was about four until I was about si

11、x, I destroyed each of my(toy).My parents are glad every time I make progresses.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Group work:Ss are divided into 6 groups and will be handed out different tasks before class. They are supposed to finish task one and have a discussion in class to

12、find the rules for each part, then make a summary.Teachers example:As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landform in China, Golden Lake of Taining attracts many visitors every year.As I told you last time, I made three friend here.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.Your knowledges of Gr

13、eece can help the whole class.The popularity made for the grow in the porcelain industry.My summary:These mistakes are the ones about NOUNS (名詞).In my opinion, the rules are about:(1)單復(fù)數(shù)的使用(根據(jù)句意、主謂一致、限定詞)(2)可數(shù)、不可數(shù) (3)詞性正確使用.Consolidation:When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for g

14、ood(cup) with handles to suit British habits.From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my(toy).My parents are glad every time I make progresses.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Challenge yourselves!Task oneYou are supposed to finish the followin

15、g exercise and have a discussion with your group members. Then make a summary about the rules for this part.4 / 10Verbs:When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.If you are me, would you talk to them about the problem?My dream school look like a big garden.We mu

16、st found ways to protect our environment.Traditionally, Tea in China drunk from cups without handles.Consolidation:Today, I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm go off.I was only four when my grandmother passes away.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are o

17、ften up all night with the baby.The CD was so popular that it was sold very well.Non-infinitive:It s been a month sIncame to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.Locating in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, which is about 60 kilometers

18、 long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.It s difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s out.We ve been spending a lot of time sing in Karaoke bars.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, which might not be served until 8 o clock at n

19、ight.Consolidation:It is impossible give without expecting anything in return.I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.Golden Lake of Tainting is a state-level Grade 4A tourist zone, a national

20、 forest park, and was awarding Global Geo-Park in Feb. 2005.Adjectives & Adverbs:Much rare animals are dying out.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help.On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field.5 / 10Interesting, it had a connect

21、ion by the British porcelain （ 瓷器）industry.Visitors can admire wonderfully natural scenery and experience unique culture as well in Taining.Consolidation:We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!The teachers are kind and helpfully.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.No one in

22、the carriage had previous spoken to or even notice the ticket-owner before.I learned early in my life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.Prepositions:Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.On the ancient town of Taining, one can fin

23、d the best-kept residential buildings of the Ming and Qing Dynasty.We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening music.We appreciate your apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Please help with me and give me some advice.My soccer

24、 coach retired in last week, I wanted to do something special for him at his retirement party.Consolidation:Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities.If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to t

25、alk with what you should do when a fire alarm goes off.The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.Although we ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we re hoping to settle something that bothersto us.Articles:Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.In the

26、morning, drivers are often seen to go in hurry.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.Consolidation:6 / 10That day I didn t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learned a impressive lesson abou

27、t gravity!As result, the plants are growing everywhere.My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the problems I will turn to her for help.Pronouns:The fruits are small in size, but juicy and tasty. There are so many that we often share it with our neighbors.Then everyone in

28、 the carriage began searching for the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have a problem I ll turn to him for help. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others into our small town.Loca

29、ted in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, that is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.Consolidation:I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around

30、them.My soccer coach retired last week, I wanted to do everything special for him at his retirement party.Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o clock at night.For each part, Ss will be invited to present their answers in class

31、. Each group will gain points for their performance. Then a passage is provided for students to employ what they learn.Task TwoYou are supposed to finish the following exercise using what you have talked about.When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well yea

32、rs late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister

33、and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Step V. Further discussion among T and Ss.T will make a final summary about morphology （ 詞法）,then introducing the other two important factors, whi

34、ch are syntax （句法）and the contextual logic with the help of examples.真題展示7 / 10 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the Restaurant is popular in ourarea . Every day he makes sue that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. (2016 全國(guó)

35、 I )My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.If wspstay money. (2016 全國(guó) II)Others:At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.The dishes what I cooked were Mom s favorite.Exercises for Ss:There the air is clean the mountai

36、ns are green.In fact, I don t like to go,I eir airaidship. ll lose thAlthough we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,we have never had any insect attack problems.She said that she and my schoolmates all wished me success, but it didn t matter would wdifficult the work may b

37、e, we must go all out to finish it ahead of time.Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.Ts summary about grammatical rules for sentences:(I)從句包括并列句，復(fù)合句如，名詞性從句、定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等.重點(diǎn)考查1.連詞的選擇2.關(guān)系代詞、關(guān)系副詞的運(yùn)用 ；句式結(jié)構(gòu)省略是否有誤/疑問(wèn)詞是否運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)/句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整What s wrong with the following sentences?Farther in the dist

38、ance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.We didn t need to do so much homework.Some People even had to wait outside.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.However, the building groups of relics and the well-maintained streets and alleys are also great choices for visitor

39、s.Contexts for each sentence.On the left-hand side of the class, I could easily see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom was also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther

40、in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy8 / 10mountains.My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn t need to do so much homework.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not

41、very big, but the Restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.No one in the carriage had previously spoken to or even notice the ticket-owner before. Yet they had s

42、o quickly offered the strangers their help.As for the last sentence, T leads Ss to recall the following sentences, and find the correct answer for it:Golden Lake of TainingAs one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landforms in China, Golden Lake of Taining attractsmany visitors every year.Located in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, which is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.Golden Lake of Tainting is a s