廣東高考英語 高考真題研練命題 基礎(chǔ)寫作 課件1

1、高考真題研練2021/8/8 星期日12011廣東高考真題以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關(guān)報(bào)道。2021/8/8 星期日2基本信息：書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：Amy Chua，美籍華人，耶魯*大學(xué)教授出版時(shí)間：2010年內(nèi)容：作者用中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)方式教育兩個(gè)女兒的故事效應(yīng)：引發(fā)中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論2021/8/8 星期日3相關(guān)報(bào)道：中文版：2011年初開始在中國(guó)銷售意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國(guó)媽媽不贊同作者的做法最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛和耶魯錄取*耶魯：Yale *哈佛：Harvard2021/8/8 星期日4寫作內(nèi)容根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹,內(nèi)容

2、包括：1.圖書的基本信息；2.圖書的相關(guān)報(bào)道。寫作要求只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章連貫。2021/8/8 星期日5 認(rèn)真審題：從命題形式上看，是中文提綱，但也完全可以轉(zhuǎn)換為表格形式。從內(nèi)容上看是要求寫一篇圖書介紹，屬說明文。主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。 信息重組：基本信息有5個(gè)小點(diǎn)，相關(guān)報(bào)道有3個(gè)小題，我們要將信息重組為5組，以便用5句話來表達(dá)。根據(jù)信息點(diǎn)之間的關(guān)系密切程度或邏輯關(guān)系來組合，可分為：2021/8/8 星期日6 基本信息(1)和(3)關(guān)系密切，書名和出版時(shí)間必須用一句話來表達(dá)；(2)和(4)都有“作者”信息，即書的內(nèi)容是作

3、者本人教育自己的女兒，因此，(2)和(4)用一句話來表達(dá)較好；要點(diǎn)(5)單獨(dú)用一句話來表達(dá)。 相關(guān)報(bào)道，3個(gè)要點(diǎn)用兩句話來表達(dá)，既可以(1)和(2)用一句話來表達(dá)，因?yàn)?1)和(2)之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；也可以(2)和(3)用一句來表達(dá)，因?yàn)檫@兩句之間有讓步關(guān)系。2021/8/8 星期日7 在表格或提綱式中，表述方式多為不完整的句子，我們必須用完整的句子來表達(dá)，寫成短文的形式。因此，一定要注意補(bǔ)全句子省略字眼。如，“(4)內(nèi)容：作者”不能譯成 “Contents: the author”，可用 “The book tells”或 “The author tells”來表達(dá)，在英文中不用content

4、s一詞。表達(dá)提示：2021/8/8 星期日8 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of p

5、arenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way. Version 12021/8/8 星期日9It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reporte

6、d to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.2021/8/8 星期日10 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese wa

7、y. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. Version 22021/8/8 星期日11The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chuas way

8、 of parenting. A recent report says that Amys elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.2021/8/8 星期日12has started a debate as to已經(jīng)引起了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于的討論a heated discussion has been aroused about已經(jīng)引起了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于的討論the Chinese version of the book這本書的中文版本美詞佳句2021/8/8 星期日13the majority of 大多數(shù)的disagree

9、 with sb不同意某人的看法be reported to have done據(jù)報(bào)道已經(jīng)It is reported that 據(jù)報(bào)道A recent report says that 最近報(bào)道2021/8/8 星期日142. 2010年廣東高考真題以下是一則關(guān)于中國(guó)政府決定禁煙的報(bào)道的主要內(nèi)容。2021/8/8 星期日15內(nèi) 容：公共場(chǎng)所禁煙實(shí)施時(shí)間：2011年1月1日起實(shí)施范圍：全國(guó)目 標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場(chǎng)所無煙措 施：張貼禁煙標(biāo)志相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)：（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分 布：男性75;女性：25（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年二手煙：secon

10、d-hand smoke2021/8/8 星期日16寫作內(nèi)容 略試題解讀 要求寫一則通訊，表示現(xiàn)狀用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，“已經(jīng)決定”用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，決定將要落實(shí)的事用一般將來時(shí)。 本題中沒有一個(gè)是完整的句子，且信息點(diǎn)散而多，寫作時(shí)一是注意信息的整合，二是要補(bǔ)全句子和省略字眼。2021/8/8 星期日17 The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-

11、free, will come into effect from the first day of 2011. To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Version 1 2021/8/8 星期日18Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smo

12、ke， which causes 100，000 deaths per year.2021/8/8 星期日19 The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country. This decision, which will be carried out from January 1,20011,aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. In order to achieve th

13、is goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Version 22021/8/8 星期日20Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000，000 smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100，000 deaths p

14、er year.2021/8/8 星期日21in public places在公共場(chǎng)所aim to (do) 以為目標(biāo)，旨在come into effect開始實(shí)施；開始生效to this end為了這個(gè)目的；為達(dá)此目的no-smoking signs禁煙標(biāo)志in order to achieve this goal為了達(dá)到這個(gè)目標(biāo)put up張貼carry out實(shí)施；進(jìn)行cause (132) deaths引起/造成(132人)死亡Statistics show that. 數(shù)據(jù)顯示美詞佳句2021/8/8 星期日223. 2009年廣東高考真題你是校報(bào)小記者,最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這

15、次采訪的情況：2021/8/8 星期日23時(shí)間：上周末對(duì)象：眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授主題：我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness)問題基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50(2)人數(shù)：世界第一專家解讀：(1)原因：很復(fù)雜(2)治療：沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視(3)建議：不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)(4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)2021/8/8 星期日24試題解讀1. 從方框內(nèi)采訪的情況來看，要點(diǎn)顯得多，但從寫作內(nèi)容列的三條來看，要點(diǎn)顯得少，因此，寫作時(shí)需要我們根各信息點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系進(jìn)行組合或分解成五組信息，以便用五個(gè)句子來表達(dá)。(1)“采訪的時(shí)間、對(duì)象和主題”可以

16、用一句話來表達(dá)；(2)因?yàn)椤鞍l(fā)生率高”與“有近視的人數(shù)排世界第一”邏輯關(guān)系緊密，所以“中小學(xué)生近視的發(fā)生率及人數(shù)”用一句話來表達(dá)；2021/8/8 星期日25(3)導(dǎo)致近視的原因很復(fù)雜，所以沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視，邏輯關(guān)系緊密，故“專家解讀”的(1)(2)用一句話來表達(dá)；(4)“專家解讀”中，“建議”本身有“不要過度用眼”和“多參加戶外活動(dòng)”兩個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，用一個(gè)句子表達(dá)到；(5)“專家解讀”中，“特別提示”用一個(gè)句子來表達(dá)。2021/8/8 星期日261.詞組或短語。rank the first位據(jù)第一；名列前茅point out指出the cause for. 的原因do outdoor a

17、ctivities做戶外活動(dòng)be related to. 與有關(guān)have an interview with sb. 采訪某人美詞佳句2021/8/8 星期日272. 以下是寫采訪報(bào)道的典型句式,建議在熟讀范文的基礎(chǔ)上重點(diǎn)記憶。(1)Last weekend， I had an interview with sb. concerning/about sth.上周,我就(某問題)采訪了(某人)(2)According to sb.， . 根據(jù)某人的看法，(3)He pointed out that.他指出(4)He suggested that.(should) do.他建議(5)He part

18、icularly reminded us that.他特別提醒我們2021/8/8 星期日28 Last weekend， I had an interview with Professor Wang， an eye-doctor， concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China. According to Professor Wang， slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted， ra

19、nking the first in the world. 2021/8/8 星期日29He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness. He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities. He particularly reminded us that how to

20、hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.2021/8/8 星期日304. 2008年廣東高考真題你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的一名志愿者，負(fù)責(zé)編寫奧運(yùn)比賽項(xiàng)目的英語介紹。2021/8/8 星期日31背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。1896：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目1904：中斷1928：中斷1932：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運(yùn)會(huì)只有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有17項(xiàng)。寫作內(nèi)容請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項(xiàng)目的英語介紹：2021/8/8 星期日32試題解讀 該題以中文提

21、綱的形式出現(xiàn)，要點(diǎn)已非常明確，寫作時(shí)不易漏掉要點(diǎn)。但提綱簡(jiǎn)明，省略了一些句子成分，大多不完整，寫作時(shí)一定要注意補(bǔ)全句子，如“現(xiàn)狀”后的“穩(wěn)步發(fā)展”都缺少主語“shooting這個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目(the sport)”，寫作時(shí)要補(bǔ)上。同時(shí)也要注意省略字眼，象提綱中的“背景”“現(xiàn)狀”，由后面句子的內(nèi)容本身可以體現(xiàn)出來，不要再將其譯出，否則就會(huì)畫蛇添足。2021/8/8 星期日33 因提綱本身是按時(shí)間順序排列的，大體上可按此順序一條一條寫出來即可，但寫作要求中規(guī)定只能用五句話，所以還需將提綱中的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行適當(dāng)組合，組合成五個(gè)要點(diǎn)以便用五個(gè)句子來表達(dá)。如：1904年和1928年兩次中斷，既然都是中斷，就可合在

22、一起來表述，既可以與“1896年第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目”合在一句之中，也可與“1932年重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)”這個(gè)要點(diǎn)合在一句中。2021/8/8 星期日34 要做到篇章連貫，一是前后句子內(nèi)容本身要邏輯關(guān)系緊密，二是要適當(dāng)使用連接性詞語，如本文可使用but, and等連詞。2021/8/8 星期日35 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were conteste

23、d during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.Version 12021/8/8 星期日36 It was not until at the end of

24、 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate

25、in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896s three events to todays seventeen.Version 22021/8/8 星期日37develop into發(fā)展成為in the late 19th century在19世紀(jì)晚期return to.恢復(fù)到compete in參加be allowed to do sth.被允許做某事grow steadily from.to.由穩(wěn)步發(fā)展成It was not until.that.直到才美詞佳句2021/8/8 星期日3

26、85. 2007年廣東高考真題上周，我們以“誰是你的偶像”為題，在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查（survey）以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：2021/8/8 星期日39偶像(idol) 女生 男生 偉 人 18 18 父 母 25 1.1 影視明星 50 14 體育明星 6 48 沒有偶像 1 92021/8/8 星期日40試題解讀1. 本題雖以表格的形式出現(xiàn)，但可轉(zhuǎn)換成下列圖表形式，兩者完全相同：2021/8/8 星期日412. 像這樣要求表達(dá)兩者之間的差異對(duì)比的作文，要善于運(yùn)用while (而卻)，but, however, on the contrary等連接性詞語。表示相同用be the same

27、 as (that of)等。2021/8/8 星期日42 Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth

28、for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for me, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.2021/8/8 星期日431.詞匯短語。(1)as for. 至于(2)rank the second位居第二；排名第二(3)the same as. 與相同美詞佳句2021/8/8 星期日442.

29、句式表達(dá)。以下是圖表類調(diào)查報(bào)告作文中常用的典型句子或短語，建議在熟讀范文的基礎(chǔ)上重點(diǎn)記憶：(1)We did a survey among . on.我們就(某個(gè)問題或主題)對(duì)(什么人)進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。(2) The survey shows that.調(diào)查結(jié)果表明(3)As the data shows， .正如數(shù)據(jù)表明，2021/8/8 星期日45揭示命題規(guī)律解題絕技（略）見書的P149-1542021/8/8 星期日46Thank you !2021/8/8 星期日472021/8/8 星期日489、靜夜四無鄰，荒居舊業(yè)貧。2022/9/92022/9/9Friday, Septembe

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