中考復習書面表達修改市公開課金獎市賽課一等獎課件

1、書面表示技巧方法第1頁Writing (15 分)書面表示第2頁 一、考試題型命題作文提醒作文限制性寫作, 給出情景和提醒，讓學生構想自己處于這么情景中該怎么辦英語和漢語同時出現(xiàn)第3頁一.學會審題。確定短文體裁（普通為記敘文）二.依據(jù)所給提醒內容，確定所用到主要時態(tài)（多為普通現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，普通過去時態(tài)，普通未來時態(tài)）第4頁2000-年書面表示題分析年代題目體裁/內容題 型時 態(tài)My favorite /Everyone needs help記敘文個人興趣/談論幫助作文對話普通現(xiàn)在時普經過去時I hope記敘文個人愿望作文對話普通現(xiàn)在時普通未來時I love my hometown記敘文描寫故鄉(xiāng)表示

2、感情作文對話普通現(xiàn)在時普通未來時第5頁表示愿望 記敘文 作文/對話 If I have a lot of money, I will 普通現(xiàn)在時 普通未來時記難忘事 記敘文 作文/對話 Highs and lows in my life 普通過去時表示感情 記敘文 命題作文Love for my parents 普通現(xiàn)在時 普通過去時第6頁 四、中考答題要求 1、 學生能在所學詞匯、句型和語法 范圍內寫正確句子，不得少 于60個詞。2、要表示真實感情3、對卷面整齊有一定要求第7頁三.學會轉換作文題目，將新面臨題目轉換為自己寫過熟悉題目，學會發(fā)散思維列：此次月考題目-My first My fi

3、rst dream- My dreamMy first journey-A trip toMy first teacher-My favorite teacherI hope- My dream第8頁 四.寫出條理清楚文章，遵照一定模式1.用總分- 總 模式 1）先有引入語，將話題轉到題目上2）定出主體內容 ，分層次清楚寫出文章能夠用：First 第一 second 第二 third 第三或 At first(首先） Next其次 finally 最終來分清文章體系，方便閱卷人批改3）結束文章時一定要再次點到體2.豐富文章體裁，學會使用以下句型：第9頁基本句型模塊、主語be動詞+名詞、形容詞、

4、數(shù)詞（表語） 表示人或事物身份、特征、形狀等。I am a teacher.You are students.My brother is tall。Our classroom is big and bright.Mr. Brown is sixty .第10頁I am happy/angry/friendly/ sad/sure/sorry/glad/afraid/第11頁2、主語+動詞+賓語We study English hard.Mary likes dancing.Tom has been to Beijing twice.Some foreigners came to our cit

5、y yesterday.第12頁There is a blackboard on the wall.There isnt any bread on the plate.There are many visitors in the park.There is something wrong with my bike.There is nothing serious with you.4.Its +adj+to do sth.Its + adj.+for sb.+to do sth. 3、There +be 第13頁慣用動詞模塊Be,.have,do, go, come ,visit, play,

6、 work,study,learn,Run,jump,climb,walk, talk ,hear ,listen, say,speak,tellwatch ,read ,look,seewrite, sit,stand, like ,enjoy,finish, think, want ,hope, wish ,decide, forget, remember，believe，第14頁 碰到不難寫詞語時，用簡單同義詞替換近義詞模塊：Beautiful-nice,good, Wonderful- excitingDelicious-nice,goodDifficult - hardDiffere

7、nt - not sameInterestingfunny第15頁 動詞時態(tài)模塊1、描寫人或事物慣用普通現(xiàn)在時 My friend/Our school/ I love my hometown.2、記敘發(fā)生事情慣用普通過去時 A happy day/ A diary / A visit to 3、表示想法和愿望慣用普通未來時 I hope /I want to be 第16頁一些需要注意細節(jié)：1.標點符號使用一定要規(guī)范，句號是黑點2.標題，句首字母大寫3.在無格子情況下，為了使書寫更美觀，可輕輕用鉛筆畫橫線第17頁七、書面表示評分標準一擋（13-15分）內容切題、層次清楚、語言流暢、基本無語言

8、錯誤。二擋（10-12）內容切題、層次比較清楚、語言比較流暢、語言表示錯誤較少。三擋（6-9）內容基本切題、層次不夠分明、語言表示較多錯誤。四擋（1-5）有一定內容、但語言表示錯誤較多。注意:作文語法錯誤扣分不得超出2分；單詞拼寫錯誤扣分不得超出2分；剽竊卷中閱讀材料剽竊部分不給分。第18頁八、答題思緒與技巧第19頁認真審題慣用句子要求提醒書寫規(guī)范英語思維列出關鍵點慣用詞語第20頁九、優(yōu)異范文點評 依據(jù)提醒寫一封約80個詞信。1、提醒：收信人姓名：Susan 寫信人姓名：Li Ping 2、要求： 請把你興趣- 打籃球、玩電腦游戲、交朋友、 看電視、讀書等及家庭情況向她做一個介紹。第21頁De

9、ar Susan:How do you do ! My name is Li Ping. Im a Chinese boy. Im fourteen. Im from Kunming, China.Kunming is called “SpringCity”,because its neither cold in winter and nor hot in summer. Its a beautiful city.I like playing basketball computer game,making friends,watching TV and reading books. There

10、 are three people in my family. 第22頁They are my father, my mother and I. My father works in a factory. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital.I want to make friends with you .Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Ping(95-20=75) 第23頁 A diary It was blowing hard outside. I went to bed after I fin

11、ished my homework. Suddenly I remembered that the windows of my classroom were open. Quickly I got up and put onmy clothes.I ran against the wind to theclassroom in hurry. On the way to school I had many falls. 第24頁When I arrived there ,I was too tired to go any farther. I did my best to closed all

12、the windows. Till then there was a smile on my face . After a short rest, I left the classroom happily. (92-26=66).第25頁 年書面表示解析提醒：父親媽媽給了你無限愛，你必定把這 份深情切記在心。但你是否曾用適當方式表示過你對父親媽媽愛呢？要求：1、依據(jù)所給題目。用英語寫一篇短文，記敘你為父親媽媽做過一件事，以表示你對他們情感。詞數(shù)不少于60個。2、語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范。卷面整齊。文中不得使用真實人名、校名，不然以零分計。第26頁 實戰(zhàn)訓練 An E-mail to Li Hua 提

13、醒：Tomorrow is Sunday .Your friend Li Hua invite you to have a pinic with her .But you cant go .要求：依據(jù)提醒，用英語發(fā)電子郵件告訴她你想法或打算。第27頁認真審題慣用句子要求提醒書寫規(guī)范英語思維列出關鍵點慣用詞語第28頁列出關鍵點、詞組、句子。表示感激和心情表示遺憾說明原因thank you for want to go with sbhave a lot of things to do do my homework wash my clotheswatch TVlisten to the musicgo shopping Be sorry to say be afraidwhat a pityButbecausefirst secondthird第29頁組句成文、書寫規(guī)范Dear Li HuaThank you for inviting me. I really want to go with you .But I am afraid I cant.Because I have a lot of things to do .First I must finish my homework in the morning.Second I have to wash my cloth