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1、 PAGE PAGE 7Facing huge amount of homework, frequent exams and ambitious expectations of their parents, Chinese primary and middle school students now grow up under heavy pressures. This has time and again triggered (觸發(fā)) the nationwide discussion on whether or not we should reduce the students study

2、 Somepeoplestronglyadvocatethatweshouldreducethestudentsstudyload. They hold that, first, it deprives children of their free time and the golden, cheerful childhood which they deserve. As a result, everyday they rush to school with heavier and heavier bags and return home with endless homework. Some

3、times they even have to burn the midnight oil. Moreover, all theirweekends and vacations are occupied with make-up lessons. Second, heavy study load has seriously affected their physical and psychological health.(影響身心健康) To illustrate, more and more students are either wearing glassed or suffering f

4、rom nervous disorder. Occasionally it even can lead to the occurrence of tragedies.However, others hesitate about it and they prefer to stick to the old practice ratherthan to reduce studentsstudy load. They believe that only hard work can earn a bright future for children. They also believe only th

5、ose who study hard undermuchstudyloadcangetrewardedbyfindinganidealjobinthecut-throat competition. Besides, they think its just a waste of time for students to idle around. The fact that more children were drowned this summer might result from the reduction of study load.My suggestion is that we sho

6、uld moderately (適當) reduce study load. What is more, as heavy study load is the by-product of the existing exam-oriented system,（應試教育） we should reform the exam assessment system. （考試評估系統(tǒng)）OnlyinthiswaycanwecompletelysolvetheShoppingontheNowadays Internet is revolutionizing our globe and greatly faci

7、litating (使方便ourmodern life. As a matterof fact, we can do almost everything on the Net.Toillustrate,wecanconductE-business,advertiseourproducts,bookanair ticket,buyandsellstocks,evenhuntajobontheWeb.Recentlyshoppingonthe Net is gradually becoming popular in modern cities. However, people take diffe

8、rent attitudes towards the new way of shopping.Some people who prefershopping on the virtual shopping centers （網(wǎng)上購物中心）or the e-commerce portals (網(wǎng)站), hold that the new way of shopping has many advantages. First, the web-stores can keep customers updated about （使現(xiàn)代化）thebestsellingproductsBesidestheyc

9、anprovidecustomers with a wider range of choices. Most important of all, it is very convenient and time-saving. People can stay at home shopping whatever they want online.However, others who stick to shopping in the real-life stores have their reasons. First, they argue that though time-saving, its

10、a little bit complicated to pay on the Web. Besides, they think that customers can neverrest assured of (使仍然相信) the quality of the commodities unless they see them with their eyes.Finallytheybelievethebestwaytobeonguard警惕againstthefake（貨）and poor quality commodities is to shop in the traditional way

11、. Therefore, theydontshowanyinterestinshoppingonline.Howevermoreandmorepeople will prefer shopping on the Web.And its believe that it will eventually be an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century.ChinasForeignChinas foreign investment has increased continually in the past 20 years. Its re

12、ported that China has approved more than 350,000 foreign funded firms with total contractual of US$ 641.7 billion. Undoubtedly the use of foreign capital has greatly driven our economy. It has helped to create many economic miracles such as Zhuhai and Shenzhen.Although great changes have taken place

13、 in China partially due to the foreign investment, yet, as a developing country, China still proves to be a great target for foreign capital. And theres still potential for overseas entrepreneurs and foreign investors in many aspects. To illustrate, they can still invest in agriculture, water conser

14、vation, energy, telecommunications, raw materials or invest in environment protection, IT industry newly arising high-tech industry, esp. in western regions.As is well known, absorbing foreign capital is important to our countrys growth, but how to attract more of it to push forward an all-round mul

15、tilevel and broader opening up. I think two factors are most important. On the one hand, we should work out more favorable policies and adopt a series of incentives (誘因) to lure more foreign capital. On the other hand, we should further improve our soft investment environment. Only in this way can w

16、e lure more foreign capital and push our door open wider.ThePositiveandNegativeAspectsofExamsand the Existing Examination SystemAs everything has two sides, the existing examination system is not all bad. It certainly has many positive aspects. To begin with, exam is an effective means to assess stu

17、dents knowledge and proficiency and to evaluate teachers teaching level. Besides, it can help students find out their strong and weak points in learning and make their knowledge permanent. Most important of all, its often served as a motive to drive students to study hard and get well prepared acade

18、mically for the future competition.However, its often blamed for its obvious defects. First, exams are always over-stressed as the aim of both learning and teaching. Thus the exam system is often blamed for the formation of the traditional exam-oriented education system. Second, exams are always ass

19、ociated with promotion to a highergradeoradmittancetocollege.Therefore,theyareheavilyresponsiblefor the present exam-assessment system. Finally, because the system leads to students heavy study load and it mainly produces students with high scores and poor abilities, its always the target of critici

20、sm and focus of reform. In a word, the disadvantages do outweigh the advantages. Its urgent to reform the existing examination system in the new century.DoestheNewTuitionPolicyKeepStudentsNowadays, under the new tuition system, an increasing number of students, who passed the University Entrance Exa

21、mination have got into new anxiety of college tuition and fees. Under the heavy financial pressure and much psychological stress, those outstanding students, esp. those poverty-stricken students（貧困學生）and those from families with laid-off parents, who were never beaten down by fate, now seem to be de

22、feated by the crushing tuition burden (千鈞重負). Indeed they really got stuck by the financial problem.Therefore, many people complain that some poor students cant afford pay the college tuition and fees and the new tuition system keeps poverty-stricken students away from college. How can suck (吸取)time

23、 out of the part-time jobs and manage to pass all the exams in college? They hold that college students should enjoy some favorable policies of tuitions so as to be able to concentrate on their studies and free from all the worries about their pockets, and that poverty should never be a hurdle (欄) t

24、o the growth of promising However, in my opinion, the new tuition system does add much difficulties to the poor students but it will never keeps them away from college. First, in carrying out the new tuition system, the government should provide some special policy for poor students. In addition, th

25、ey are entitled to take a loan from banks or do some part-time jobs during their spare time, such as weekends and holidays. Finally, they can try to win scholarship by additional efforts. In short, manproposes(計劃andGoddisposes（決定）Noonewillbekeptoutofcollege due to financial burden unless his is defe

26、ated by his own self.FamiliesAreNotAsCloseAsAlong with the development of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before. To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by this modern world. There are a number of r

27、easons for this phenomenon.Firstly, some customs and traditions, which are handed down from generation to generation, have changed with the changes of people life style and attitude. These customs and traditions once played an important role in bringing families together. For instance, science and t

28、echnology have greatly changed the ways people communicate with each other, which are fast, fashionable but lack affection. Without modern facilities like computer and telephone, people used to get in touch with each other by writing letters by hand or meeting each other frequently, which are full o

29、f more human touch than mechanical contact. Secondly, in this bustling (熙熙攘攘) modern world in which material gains are much valued, people are attaching less importance to emotion and therefore are growing more and more isolated and indifferent to even family members. This is a sort of social illnes

30、s that is hard to cure. Thirdly, some people are just too occupied to spare time for their family. And lastly, the loose relation of the generation gives a negative impact on the younger generation who might follow suit in treating the family relationship.Regarding these reasons, I think there some

31、ways to bring families closer. Themostimportantapproachisthrougheducation.Parentsshouldnotonlyseta good example but also instill into theirchildren from theirchildhood the sense of kinship and the sense of responsibility so that they may form some good habits like writing letters, visiting great-parents now and then. Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a family party or a dinner together. In fact, there are many otherfactors that account for this problem and correspon