英文作文寫作常見錯誤分析

1、 HYPERLINK 附錄 寫寫作練習(xí)習(xí)答案二、寫作常常見錯誤誤分析一、語法錯錯誤（一）句子子結(jié)構(gòu)錯錯誤1 主從從句疊置置 Therre aare morre aand morre sstuddentts wwho likke tto uuse thee coompuuterr. / Moore andd moore stuudennts likke tto uuse thee coompuuterr. Therre aare stiill manny pprobblemms tthatt shhoulld bbe nnoteed aand ressolvved. / Manyy prrobl

2、lemss sttilll shoouldd bee nootedd annd rresoolveed.2 簡單單句疊置置I likke cchatttinng oon llinee veery mucch, so I ggo tto tthe nett baar aalmoost eveery weeekennd. / II liike chaattiing on linne vveryy muuch. I go to thee neet bbar almmostt evveryy weeekeend.3 從句句疊置It iss knnownn too alll tthatt coompuu

3、terrs pplayy ann immporrtannt rrolee inn maany fieeldss off ouur llifee. / Ass iss knnownn too alll, commputterss pllay an impporttantt roole in manny ffiellds of ourr liife.4 句子子成分缺缺失If wee woork harrd, we willl ssureely be succcesssfuul. /Woorkingg haard, wee wiill surrelyy bee suucceessfful.5 語序序

4、錯誤1) WWhy do colllegge sstuddentts sspennd mmoree annd mmoree tiime on thee coompuuterr? I oofteen wwondder wheere theey hhavee goot ttheiir mmoneey.（二）動詞詞形式錯錯誤1時態(tài)錯錯誤Many peooplee thhinkk thhat thee Innterrnett wiill be morre uusefful in thee fuuturre. 2語態(tài)形形式錯誤誤1) II haave beeen eexciitedd seeverral

5、 dayys aat tthe newws tthatt yoou wwilll coome herre.2) MMostt off thhe sstuddentts aare sattisffiedd wiith thee seerviice in thee diininng hhalll.3單復(fù)數(shù)數(shù)形式錯錯誤Wise menn seeek oppporttuniitiees rrathher thaan wwaitt foor tthemm. / A wisse mman seeeks oppporttuniitiees rrathher thaan wwaitt foor tthemm.

6、Some peooplee arre aafraaid thaat ccompputeers mayy coontrrol menn inn thhe ffutuure. 4非謂語語動詞形形式錯誤誤Let mme ssay “heelloo” tto yyou on behhalff off evveryyonee.Doingg exxerccisee inn thhe mmornningg iss goood forr onnes hheallth.Havinng sstuddiedd inn ouur sschoool forr 3 yeaars, I finnd tthatt thhe

7、ccantteenn seerviice hass chhangged a llot.（三）代詞詞錯誤We caan uuse commputterss inn dooingg evveryythiing we llikee.A colllegge sstuddentt shhoulld bbe aablee too doo hiis wwashhingg onn hiis oown.（四）冠詞詞錯誤A/Thee hoorsee iss a useefull annimaal.The eexamm wiill be helld iin DDeceembeer, 20004. （五）詞性性錯誤I

8、 wissh yyou cann coonsiiderr myy suuggeestiionss.If a perrsonn waantss too suucceeed, he musst llearrn tto eenduure suffferringgs aand settbaccks.二、用詞錯錯誤Studeentss muust knoow hhow to opeeratte aa coompuuterr. / Sttudeentss muust knoow hhow to worrk oon aa coompuuterr.Peoplle ccan be expposeed tto m

9、manyy neew tthinngs on thee Innterrnett. / Peeoplle ccan leaarn manny nnew thiingss onn thhe IInteerneet.The ppurpposee off thhis lettterr iss too exxpreess somme oopinnionns oon tthe serrvicce iin tthe dinningg haall. / TThe purrposse oof tthiss leetteer iis tto mmakee soome commplaaintts aabouut t

10、the serrvicce iin tthe dinningg haall.三、表達習(xí)習(xí)慣錯誤誤What genneraatedd soo laargee a chaangee? / Whhy iis ttherre sso llargge aa chhangge?Now 660000 yuuan is enooughh foor yyou to buyy a P4 commputter. / Noow yyou cann buuy aa P44 coompuuterr foor 660000 yuuan.In a rooom oofteen llivee 6-8 sstuddentts. I

11、 thiink theere aree thhreee reeasoons forr thhis greeat chaangee. The ppricces of thee foood aree tooo hhighh. / Thee foood is tooo exxpennsivve.The rreasson forr thhis is thaat ssomee peeoplle wwantt too eaarn pleentyy off mooneyy wiithoout worrkinng hhardd. / Thhis is beccausse ssomee peeoplle wwa

12、ntt too eaarn pleentyy off mooneyy wiithoout worrkinng hhardd.四、標(biāo)點符符號及大大小寫錯錯誤Howevver, evveryy cooin hass twwo ssidees. I thiink thee suurroounddinggs iin oour cannteeen aare thee beest amoong alll unniveersiitiees.The mman wass raacinng ddownn thhe sstreeet becaausee hee waas llatee foor tthe claas

13、s.At laast I wwantt too leet yyou knoow tthatt I lovve oour uniiverrsitty vveryy muuch.My faavorritee spportts aare swiimmiing, jooggiing, moounttainneerringg annd pplayyingg taablee teenniis.The bbestt Enngliish fillm iin mmy eeyess iss Foorreest Gummp.五、冠詞用用法講練練EXERCCISEE 1A. 11. aa2. an3. ann 4.

14、an5. aan 6. an7. aa8. anB. 11. aa neew ooffiice buiildiing2. traavell aggentt3. aan AAmerricaan sscieentiist4. a ddays ooutiing5. aan IIndiian staamp6. a hhearrt aattaack7. aan aadvaanceed ccounntryy8. an inttereestiing plaayEXERCCISEE 21. AA (tteleephoone); aa2.xx; xx; xx3. aa; aa; aan; a4.aa; aa;

15、aa; aan5. aa; aa; aa; aa; aa6.aan; a; x; an; x; a; a7. aa; aan8.xxEXERCCISEE 3A.1. a (veery badd niightt); a (winnk)2. aan (honnestty)3. aa (vvisiion of a nnew andd haappiier Eurropee)4. aa (hholiidayy); a (dayy offf); a (moonthh)5. aan (houurlyy seerviice)6. aa (ggreaat hhonoour); aa (ggathheriing)

16、7. aa (mmounntaiin); a (hoorroor)8. aan (earrly agee)9. aa (wwordd)10.aa (bboy)B.1. a (biig pprobblemm); (noot ttoo bigg) aa (pprobblemm)2. aa (ssquaare nosse); (sso hhanddsomme) a (mann)3. (Howweveer ggreaat) a (dissastter)4. (Manny) a (shiipwrreckked saiilorr)5. (Succh) an (urrgennt nneedd)6. (So

17、urggentt) aa (nneedd)7. (as lovvelyy)a (piictuure)8. (whaat) a (serriouus ccrissis)9. (manny) a (greeateer mman)10. (Hoow sseriiouss) aa (ccrimme)EXERCCISEE 41. tthe; x2. x; Thee(fooressts)3. xx; TThe(natturee)4. Thee (eeduccatiion); xx7. x; thhe8. thee; xxEXERCCISEE 5A.1.x; a; thee2. Thee (ssteaam-

18、eengiine); tthe3. TThe (baat); a4. x; thee; xx; aa5. tthe6. a; thee; xx; xx7. TThe(priisonn);aa8. Thee (yyounngesst); x; thhe; xB. 11.Thhe (horrse); aa (nnoblle aanimmal); aa (ffaitthfuul sservvantt)2. aa (ggamee)3. tthe (scchoool); thhe (behhaviiourr);tthe (puupills)4. TThe (diinneer); thhe (speeec

19、hhes)5. tthe (seettiing of goaals)6. tthe (hoospiitall); (att) tthe (ennd oof)tt hee (wweekk)7. tthe (raadioo)8. TThe (fllutee)9. (havve) a; thee (ccityy ceenteer); (gget) a; (oon) thee (bbus)10. thee (ggrouund); tthe (woood)EXERCCISEE 6A.1.Thee; tthe; thhe2. Thee; tthe3. TThe; thhe4. Thee (wwooll);

20、 thee5. xx; tthe; x6. thee; tthe; thhe; x7. tthe; thhe8. x; x; x9. tthe; thhe10. xB.1. thhe BBrittishh Musseumm2. thee Suuez Cannal3. tthe diffferrencce bbetwweenn4. thee Wiilsoons thhesee twwo wwordds5. iin tthe firrst roww6. thee yeear 19449EXERCCISEE 7(Thee) PPeopple eveerywwherre Whhen (thhe) st

21、rranggerss (TThe) Goood mannnerrs inn (tthe) diiffeerennt ppartts acccepttingg (tthe) giiftss shoows (thhe) badd maanneers evven (thhe) ruddeneess wiith (thhe) goood mmannnerss accceppt (thee) iimpoortaant thiingss wiith (thhe) botth hhandds to accceptt (tthe) immporrtannt tthinngs shoows nott onnly

22、 (thhe) disscouurteesy Inn (tthe) Euuroppe aand (thhe) Norrth Ameericca, howweveer, (thhe) peooplee六、標(biāo)點符符號用法法講練EXERCCISEE 11. TTheideentiity: Ltt, HHenrry BBedeell, Coompaany D, 11tth Verrmonnt VVoluunteeerssoldd.2. Ittthaat DDadalrreaddyfarrminng 880 aacreesjjob.3. Noow IImpoiintbutt whhat thheree?

23、4. Raain, snnow, slleett, ffogworrld.5. Duurinngtouurissts; duurinng tthe winnterrbeaach.6. Tooexttentt, mmankkinddearrth.7. Liikewilld llifee,repprodducee, ggrowwfalll.8. ThheJimm Thhorppe, thee grreattestt Ammeriicanntimmes.9. Thheenoormoous, juuicyyapppettizingg.10. IIkiddseduucattedthee Weestmov

24、viesswouuld be dissapppoinntedd.11. IIstaatuee. IIts souul, so to speeak, issbeauuty.12. TThestuudennts, teeachherss, ddocttorss, bbusiinesssmeen, facctorry wworkkersspeoopleeliffe.13. IIsundderggrouundin newwcavves?14. IIbyy coorreespoondeenceethaat IIherr att Beeijiing HottelThuursdday.15. PPassse

25、nggerssbevveraagess: ccofffee, teea, millk oor ssodaa.16. PPressenttMr. Hoo, CChaiirmaanEngglissh DDepaartmmentt; MMr. Broown, a vissitiingDennmarrk; anddus.17. TThepattiennts; ittof “deffenssivee meediccinee”.18. HHiswitth tthemmhe haddoncce mmadeehellp.EXERCCISEE 21.wworkk, ffor2.ddownn; aas aa re

26、esullt, we3.noote; itt4.waatchh, yyet5.ttireed, so6. bboommingg; cconssequuenttly, thhe ccomppanyy7. iin iit, andd itt waas8. loookinng; thee foood, hoowevver, iss9.coompuulsoory; thhe sstuddentts chhoicce, theerefforee10cooffeee; othherss11coostlly; nevvertthellesss, wwe12weeighhtleessnnesss; mmore

27、eoveer, theeyEXERCCISEE 31. deeathh; 2. ssunliightt. WWe/sunnligght; wee3. MMay, yeet/bbut snoow4. yyearrs; forr exxampple, 5. qquieet; 6. nnighht; I/.niightt, aand/so I7. ppuniisheed; in facct/punnishhed. Inn faact8. ffoodd, aand so./ffoodd; ttherrefoore, I.9. vveryy; wwhatt./varry. Whaat10. TV; Ma

28、ariee/TV, andd MaarieeEXERCCISEE 41. “OOn FFridday,” thhe tteaccherr annnouunceed, “well takke uup aa neew llessson.”2. “ Whaat,” hee asskedd, “do we havve tto pprepparee foor tthe cammpinng ttripp?”3. C4. Hee grreetts eeverryonne wwithh “Hi!”5. “YYou mayy thhinkk I havve aa loot oof ggarbbagee inn

29、thhesee baags,” onee shhopppingg-baag lladyy voolunnteeeredd inn a chuurchh sooup kittcheen, “butt itts eeverrythhingg I neeed.”6. C7. “IIt ppainns mme,” I saiid, “to finnd tthatt yoou bbothh haave beeen ppanhhanddlinng sso llongg thhat it no lonngerr emmbarrrasssess yoou.”8. Reetirremeent oftten br

30、iingss maany proobleems surrrouundiing thee “Whaat ddo II doo wiith mysselff?” quuesttionn, eevenn thhouggh ttherre mmay be no finnancciall woorriies.EXERCCISEE 51. Att onne oocloock on Sepptemmberr 2, 16666, thhe GGreaat FFiree off Loondoon sstarrtedd innsidde aa baakerrs sshopp inn Puuddiing Lanne

31、. It lasstedd fiive dayys, andd neearlly 880% of alll thhe bbuilldinngs witthinn thhe LLonddon Walll wweree raazedd. AAccoordiing to thee offficciall reeporrt, 13,2000 hoousees, 87 parrishh chhurcchess, ooverr 4000 sstreeetss, aand thee ennormmouss olld SSt. Pauuls CCathhedrralonee off thhe wwondder

32、ss off thhe mmediievaal wworlldwerre iin rruinns. Outt off Loondoons 4450 acrres, onnly 75 remmainned unttoucchedd.Robeert Hubbertt, aa Frrencch wwatcchmaakerr frrom Rouuen, waas aaccuusedd off thhe ffiree. TThe senntennce saiid hhe “hadd deelibberaatelly sstarrtedd thhe ffiree”. AAfteer hhe wwas ha

33、nngedd, iit wwas conncluusivvelyy prroveed tthatt hee haad nnot eveen aarriivedd inn Loondoon uuntiil ttwo dayys aafteer tthe firre bbrokke oout.2. Mrr. JJonees wwas verry ffondd off cllimbbingg moounttainns, so onee yeear he wennt tto SSwittzerrlannd ffor hiss hooliddayss. AAfteer hhe hhad cliimbee

34、d ssomee eaasy mouuntaainss, hhe ddeciidedd onne dday to cliimb a mmoree diiffiicullt oone; buut hhe ddid nott waant to go up it aloone, soo hee fooundd a goood SSwisss gguidde, whoo haad oofteen cclimmbedd thhat mouuntaain.At fiirstt itt waas nnot a ddiffficuult cliimb, buut tthenn thhey camme tto

35、aa pllacee whhichh waas nnot so eassy. Thee guuidee sttoppped, tuurneed rrounnd aand warrnedd Mrr Jooness. “Be carrefuul hheree,”he ssaidd “Thiis iis aa daangeerouus pplacce. Youu caan eeasiily falll, andd iff yoou ddo, youu wiill falll sstraaighht ddownn a verry llongg waay.” “Butt,”he conntinnuedd

36、 caalmlly, “if youu doo faall herre, donnt fforgget to loook tto tthe rigght whiile youu arre ggoinng ddownn. TTherre iis aa quuitee exxtraaorddinaarilly bbeauutifful vieew ttherremucch mmoree beeauttifuul tthann thhe oone youu caan ssee froom hheree.”3. Itt iss thhe ssimpple thiingss thhat reaallyy

37、 maatteer. If a mman dellighhts in hiss wiife andd chhilddrenn, hhas succcesss iin wworkk, aand finnds pleeasuure in thee allterrnattionn off daay aand nigght, spprinng aand auttumnn, hhe wwilll bee haappyy whhateeverr hiis pphillosoophyy maay bbe. If, onn thhe ootheer hhandd, hhe ffindds hhis wiffe

38、 hhateefull, hhis chiildrrens nnoisse uunenndurrablle, andd thhe ooffiice a nnighhtmaare, iff inn thhe ddayttimee hee loongss foor nnighht, andd att niightt hee siighss foor tthe ligght of dayytheen wwhatt hee neeedss iss noot aa neew pphillosoophyy buut aa neew ppattternn off liifea ddifffereent di

39、eet, or morre eexerrcisse. Mann iss ann annimaal, andd hiis hhapppineess deppendds oon hhis phyysioologgy mmoree thhan he likkes to thiink. Unnhapppy bussineess menn, II amm coonviinceed, wouuld inccreaase theeir happpinnesss moore by wallkinng ssix milles eveery dayy thhan by anyy coonceeivaablee c

40、hhangge oof pphillosoophyy.七、句型寫寫作練習(xí)習(xí)（一）并列列句It waas aa coold snoowy dayy annd hhe hhad no monney lefft ffor foood.Hurryy upp orr yooull be latte.It raaineed hheavvilyy laast nigght butt I weent to thee shhow anyywayy.I enjjoy claassiicall muusicc, sso ddoess shhe.He muust be illl, ffor he is abssent

41、t toodayy.Some peooplee waastee foood whiile othherss haavennt eenouugh.She iis ffat wheereaas hher hussbannd iis tthinn. She ccannnot reaad, neiitheer ccan shee wrritee.（二）復(fù)合合句1It iss quuitee obbvioous thaat ttheyy neeed morre hhelpp inn Enngliish.It iss goood newws tthatt shhe iis sstilll aalivve.

42、It dooesnnt sseemm liikelly tthatt shhe wwilll coome herre.What thee chhilddrenn liike thee beest in thee zooo aare thee paandaas. What we aree baadlyy inn neeed of is raww maaterriall.2 pyh doceai.s lkwfth onc u ncc.sr aInug mb iaulhpiismiltth u ekphrri.ahdonra yr.ayasgduMyocti.3Can yyou telll mme

43、wwhatt kiind of shoow ttheyy arre pputttingg onn?Im wwondderiing if thee leetteer iis ooverrweiightt.I am thiinkiing howw wee caan iimprrovee ouur sstuddy hhabiits.We arre sstilll uunceertaain wheetheer HHenrry iis tthe rigght perrsonn foor tthe jobb.Peterr haas aalwaays beeen iin ggoodd heealtth ee

44、xceept thaat hhe hhas a ssligght heaadacche sommetiimess.He suuddeenlyy reememmberred thaat hhe hhad forrgotttenn too taake hiss nootebbookk wiith himm.4. I alwwayss toook it forr grrantted thaat II waas ffar morre iinteelliigennt tthann hee waas. We alll tthouughtt itt a pitty tthatt yoou wweree un

45、nablle tto aatteend ourr meeetiing.We coonsiiderr itt immporrtannt tthatt yoou sshouuld minnd yyourr maanneers.He diidnt wwantt itt knnownn thhat he wass tooo iill to go on worrkinng.I reggardd itt immporrtannt tthatt evveryy onne oof yyou shoouldd fiinissh yyourr hoomewworkk onn tiime.He toook it f

46、orr grrantted thaat hhis fattherr woouldd coome to hiss heelp if he gott innto trooublle.We thhougght it higghlyy prrobaablee thhat he migght chaangee hiis mmindd att thhe llastt miinutte.I thiink it likkelyy thhat thee trrainn wiill be dellayeed bby tthe dennse fogg.The ddocttor thiinkss itt addvis

47、sablle tthatt yoou sshouuld stoop ssmokkingg.5. Couldd yoou sshoww mee whhat youu haave wriitteen?This is whaat wwe sshouuld alwwayss keeep in minnd.What theey ssaw in Chiina madde aa deeep imppresssioon oon tthemm.We muust nott puut ooff tilll ttomoorroow wwhatt wee caan ddo ttodaay.6. Nothiing can

48、n hiide thee faact thaat hhe iis ggrowwingg olld. The ffactt thhat he worrks harrd ddoess noot nneceessaarilly mmeann thhat he is a ccomppeteent leaaderr.I havve aa coompllaceent feeelinng tthatt Im hhighhly inttellligeent. The eexpllanaatioon tthatt hee diidnt ssee thee nooticce iis uunsaatissfacct

49、orry./ Thhe eexpllanaatioon iis uunsaatissfacctorry tthatt hee diidnt ssee thee nooticce.Most of us donnt aagreee wwithh hiis vvieww thhat theere is no advvanttagee inn inntrooduccingg thhe nnew metthodd.The nnewss sooon sprreadd thhrouughoout thee coounttry thaat hhe wwon thee fiirstt goold meddal

50、at thee 233rd OOlymmpicc Gaamess.His ssugggesttionn thhat inttellligeencee iss a rellatiive mattterr iss noot uunivverssallly aacceepteed./Hiss suuggeestiion is nott unniveersaallyy acccepptedd thhat inttellligeencee iss a rellatiive mattterr.He seeconndedd myy mootioon tthatt thhe vvotee bee poostp

51、poneed.The ffearr thhat he migght nott bee abble to finnishh thhe wworkk diistuurbeed hhim greeatlly./ Thhe ffearr diistuurbeed hhim greeatlly tthatt hee miightt noot bbe aablee too fiinissh tthe worrk.We exxpreesseed aa hoope thaat MMr. andd Mrrs. Morrrisson wouuld comme aand vissit Chiina agaain.

52、Ive comme ffromm Mrr. LLin witth aa meessaage thaat hhe wwont bbe aablee too seee yyou thiis aafteernooon. Theree caan bbe nno ddoubbt tthatt Suuzy is thee riightt peersoon ffor thee joob.定語從句I wennt tto vvisiit tthe Ameericcan autthorr whho wwrotte aa nuumbeer oof bbookks aabouut CChinna.I atee thh

53、e ssoupp myy auunt preeparred.I havve aan aarraangeemennt wwithh myy baank, byy whhichh thhey lett mee usse ttheiir mmoneey aand reppay theem nnextt moonthh.He seent herr a lettterr, iin wwhicch hhe ssaidd thhat he wass soorryy foor wwhatt hee haad ddonee too heer. Mr. BBrowwn, whoo juust camme ffro

54、mm Brritaain yessterrdayy, wwilll teeachh uss acccouuntiing thiis ttermm.She iis ggoinng tto sspennd tthe winnterr hooliddayss inn Haainaan, wheere shee haas ssomee reelattivees.The UUnitted Staatess iss knnownn foor iits suppermmarkketss, wwherre hhugee quuanttitiies of alll kiindss off foood andd

55、hoouseeholld aartiiclees aare solld.The sstorry hhapppeneed iin llatee 199th ccentturyy, wwhenn Chhinaa iss suuffeerinng ffromm thhe iinvaasioon oof wwestternn poowerrs. 狀語從句Now tthatt yoouve bouughtt a neww caar, whaat aare youu gooingg too doo wiith thee olld oone?Wed bettterr taake thee teelessco

56、ppe wwithh uss inn caase it is neeededd.We muust hurrry offf, llestt wee shhoulld mmisss thhe bbus. The pprobblemm soo veery commpliicatted thaat iit ttookk uss neearlly ttwo weeeks to sollve it. The aairccrafft wwas flyyingg att suuch a hhighh alltittudee thhat we couuld harrdlyy seee iit. Ill lenn

57、d yyou my commputter on conndittionn thhat youu keeep it in goood sshappe. You ccan go outt ass loong as youu prromiise to be bacck bbefoore 11 at nigght. I remmembber thee whholee thhingg ass iff itt haappeenedd yeesteerdaay. Howevver harrd hhe ttrieed, he couuld nott doo thhe jjob sattisffacttorii

58、ly. Whethher it takkes an houur oor eevenn a whoole dayy, II shhalll fiind outt thhe aanswwer. （三）復(fù)雜雜的簡單單句They loookedd booth wayys bbefoore theey ccrosssinng tthe strreett.I madde mmy ddeciisioon aafteer ttalkkingg too Siir FFrannciss.Despiite/In spiite of hiss illlneess, hee waas ddeteermiinedd to

59、o caarryy ouut hhis plaan. Despiite/In spiite of theeir inttellligeencee, ttheyy arrent ddoinng wwelll inn scchoool. Despiite/In spiite of hiss riichnnesss/weealtth, he isnnt vveryy haappyy. Despiite/In spiite of hiss heeighht, he isnnt aa veery goood bbaskketbballl pllayeer.Withoout youur ssuppport

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