英語寫作技巧與寫作注意事項(xiàng)

1、文檔編碼 : CP5Z10Z4I9O4 HI3N4A9P4F1 ZZ2Q8J3J5Z4. 第 七 講：英語 寫 作 （二）大作文往年試題：Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below. Sample 1 My View on Playing Computer Games 1. 有人認(rèn)為同學(xué)打電腦玩耍有利于智力開發(fā)；2. 有人認(rèn)為同學(xué)打電腦玩耍阻礙學(xué)習(xí)；3. 我的觀點(diǎn)；Sample 2：對(duì)貧富差距加大現(xiàn)象談?wù)効捶ㄔu(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Global scoring a.

2、 Content b. Language 2 分: 條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破裂或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)肅錯(cuò) 誤；5 分：基本切題；表達(dá)思想不清,連貫性差；有較多的嚴(yán)肅語言錯(cuò)誤；8 分：有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字將就連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤較多,其中有一些嚴(yán)肅錯(cuò) 誤；11 分：切題；表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤 14 分：切題；表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好,基本上沒有語言錯(cuò)誤,僅有個(gè) 別小錯(cuò)；注：白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想,給 0 分；嚴(yán)肅錯(cuò)誤語法錯(cuò)誤 There are many reasons caused the accident.

3、 1 / 8 . The driver of the car no in. The life is becoming gooder and gooder. That day rain bigly. The man who through the street The car which in a fast speed hit him. The car which in a fast speed hit him. I got the place where happened the accident. Our city would happen many traffic. 寫作留意事項(xiàng)1. 審好

4、題,想好再寫,不要寫了又劃掉,也不要寫完了發(fā)覺字?jǐn)?shù)不夠有寫,這樣整篇 文章就不聯(lián)貫了；2. 把握好文章的重心,一般“ 我的觀點(diǎn)” 應(yīng)當(dāng)是重心；3. 留意寫作的格式縮進(jìn)式或齊頭式；4. 拿不準(zhǔn)的詞、短語或用法應(yīng)防止使用；5. 表達(dá)要清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔,不必一味追求結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜而盡可能多的使用從句,這樣文章會(huì) 顯得很羅嗦；如： The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast. 6. 留意用詞和搭配；7. 檢查 -s 和-ed ,盡量防止嚴(yán)肅錯(cuò)誤；Choice of Words 1. Three levels of English words E

5、nglish native words core informal oral French or Spanish words Latin or Greek words academic words Examples formal written English French or Spanish Latin or Greek ask inquire royal interrogate break sever separate fire flame conflagration house abode residence kingly regal manly male masculine rise

6、 mount ascend time age I am aware that epoch I know that I believe that I am convinced that I have a good idea. A good idea occurs to me. Cause give rise to Emphasize lay emphasis on 2 / 8 . Because of due to, owing to Stop, end come to a stop/end Suddenly all of a sudden Often more often than not 2

7、. Connotation of Words English explanation common, peasant, assassinate, gay, acquire, date, property, enemy, problem, issue 3. General Vs Specific terms overuse of general terms beautiful, delicious, famous, Chinas English小康社會(huì)、緣分、丞相、風(fēng)水、三個(gè)代表 簡(jiǎn)潔用錯(cuò)的詞孔子、孟子、老子1. 詞性 lack, serve, contact, last, marry, con

8、cern, like 2. 漢語影響 more perfect, very excellent, return back, repeat again, good memory power, listening ability, high quality goods learn the knowledge 常見錯(cuò)誤 1 two predicates in one simple sentence Every year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious meal. There have

9、 many people like SFG. My mother cooks food is very delicious. 2 Omission and overuse of Be Nowday peoples life level is arise. Many person are like watch SFG in the eve. SFG was appeared since 1984. SFG is liked by many people. How fast time was gone. SFG can divide into several parts. We very busy

10、. 3 Comparative degree more and more better become gooder and gooder, 4 Conjunction 3 / 8 . because .so although .but While 5 I very like SFG. Very hate 6 Part of speech most of we Chinese, make me surprise, with the quick development of economic and social, In my s opinion, I advice to keep SFG. ea

11、ting good, drinking good, playing good; good plays, good look, good use; I think it dues to the development, Let s analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes. To men, women just liked clothes. they like it like me like it. two weeks past choose, choice, succeed, success, successful,

12、 die, dead, death 7 Choice of words The whole family assemble to have a dinner. congratulate Spring Festival, abolish stop, give up SFG, sit behind the TV to look SFG, Many people fall in love with watching SFG. We can elect other programs to see. celebrate SFG with bomb, stand in the shadow/shade m

13、osquito bite/sting It s a gay meeting/party 8 Phrases in all in; one hand, another hand, third hand; at one hand, at second hand, at last hand; in one hand, from other hand; last but not the last, last but not most; on my opinion; A coin has two hands coins. Everything has two hands coins. 9 Spellin

14、g We cant cansle cancer, cancle it. SFG is watched by hole word. happyness, include ing SF, Every student include me enjoys Poor people maybe very angry hungry. eat the soap soup; Benefitial 4 / 8 . Drived Dispite I will adopt to the campus life 聯(lián) 貫1. 并列：and, as well as on the one hand on the other

15、hand for one thing . for another firstly .secondly .thirdly finally subsequently, then, thereafter, afterward, in the following at first, initially, originally at last, eventually 2. 遞進(jìn)：Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, Additionally What is more Besides Apart from 3. 轉(zhuǎn)折But Yet However Nevertheless

16、 While Whereas On the contrary In contrast 4. 結(jié)果So Therefore, Thus Hence As a result （consequence）Consequently 5 / 8 . 5. 緣由Because of Due to Owing to On the account of In view of Thanks to On the grounds that 6. 假設(shè)If .Given that Provided that Unless On the condition of As so long as 7. 其他1Sentence

17、adverbs: absolutely, alternatively, currently, undoubtedly, certainly, consequently, subsequently , obviously 2 PP: in general, on average, in fact, in effect, in theory, in practice, in reality, in particular, 3 Adv speaking: generally speaking, broadly speaking, strictly speaking, theoretically sp

18、eaking 4 precisely because, mainly because, merely because, only because 段落用語Beginning: With the development of As is well known to We all know that As we all know As a proverb says, As a saying goes As for some people hold the opinion that . While others 6 / 8 . argue maintain that Every coin has t

19、wo sides. It has merits and demerits. It has pros and cons. Supporters and opponents Development Recent researches have proven/shown/indicated that My arguments/reasons/ideas will be listed as follows: In the following paragraph, I will Firstly, secondly, and finally Why is it that .Ending All in all In a word In conclusion In short In summa