高考英語讀后續(xù)寫作文練習及范文

1、高考英語作文練習續(xù)寫作文及范文第二節(jié)（總分值25分）67.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. Td been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad sai

2、d, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. Thats where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hiker

3、s. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. T saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squ

4、irrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide.An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. It is really huge, as big as a house!,? my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rocks giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dip

5、ped even lower.“Lets head back,“ Dad said.I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didnt recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didnt belong to a dog or

6、a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. Must be a raccoon （浣熊）J I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. Hey! I shouted. Where is everyone? nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. T

7、hey couldnt have gone far. Til catch up to them if I hurry,1 thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；.續(xù)寫局部分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。I came to where I could turn right or go straight.“Stop and think J I told

8、 myself, picturing the map again.解析：由第一段首句內容“我來到了可以右轉或直走的地方?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡咦呱⒑?的心理活動以及反響。由第二段首句內容“停下來想一想，我對自己說，一邊又想象著地圖?！笨芍?，第二 段可描寫作者如何和家人團聚的。繼續(xù)前行一一改變方向一一慌張一一想象地圖一一看到家人【范文】Paragraph 1:I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some sc

9、enes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldnt just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldnt find my way back? I started teari

10、ng through the woods in a panic.Paragraph 2:“Stop and think, I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint light. Then I noticed the sto

11、ne wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. Honey? Are you OK? Dads voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad.第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（總分值25分）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文.DRU

12、MMING WITH GRANDPARoger was filled with excitement as his mother told him his grandfather was on his way over. He always had fun together with his grandfather who once drummed in a band. They could make the whole house shake with their joyful music. Roger got excited and practiced drumming all morni

13、ng.Finally, Dads car pulled up in front of the house. Upon hearing the car door opened. Roger shouted for joy from his bedroom window, nHi, Grandpa! Listen to this!” Taking a deep breath, he raised his drumsticks and began rocking and rolling, just like Grandpa had taught him. Jumping up. he raced o

14、utside to his grandfather and asked, nGrandpa. what do you think? Are you ready to drum together?* Grandpa, giving Roger a hug, said. nIt was wonderful, but Fm afraid I cant play right now. Dad smiled at Roger, telling him some of Grandpa*s finger joints were hurting him and that maybe he would want

15、 to play after a short rest. Roger didnt ask again.After lunch, Roger went to his room to get his skateboard, finding someone had already stepped into the room. It was Grandpa who stood near the drum set. He picked up a drumstick and began to play. Thump! Thump! But just with two thumps, the drumsti

16、ck fell onto the floor. Grandpa reached for it, trying to pick it up, but the drumstick fell out of his hand. He tried again and the same thing happened. Grandpa moved his red and swollen fingers, looking upset. Seeing this, Roger shut the door noiselessly. He walked to the sitting room where Dad wa

17、s reading and asked Dad to drive him to his friends house. nDavid has a drum with the pedal （踏板）and Pd like to borrow it, Roger told Dad about his plan. Dad got the car keys and off they went.注意：L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2 .請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Grandpa, a surprise!” Roger shouted when they returned with a big box.S

18、lowly, Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did.解析：由第一段首句內容“爺爺,一個驚喜！”當他們拿著一個大箱子回來時，羅杰喊道?！?可知，第一段可描寫羅杰給爺爺示范怎么打帶踏板的鼓。由第二段首句內容“爺爺慢慢地伸出腳，像羅杰一樣踩踏板?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫爺爺和羅杰一起打鼓。翻開一一示范一一爺爺打鼓一一羅杰加入范文：Grandpa, a surprise!n Roger shouted when they returned with a big box. Roger led Grandpa to his

19、 room in delight. Dad followed, carrying the big box. With great joy Roger opened the box together with Dad. When Grandpa saw the drum with the pedal, his eyes were shining with excitement. Grandpa, you can play this drum with your foot,“ Roger said and then pressed the pedal with his foot. The drum

20、stick swung forward. Thump! Thump! Thump! The pedal worked smoothly and the thumps filled the whole room. Would you like to have a try? Roger turned to Grandpa with his eyes full of expectation.Slowly, Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did. Thump! Thump! Grandpa smiled and c

21、ontinued with greater enthusiasm. Join in, Roger!1 Grandpa shouted to Roger excitedly and his cheerful voice was even louder than the drum rolls. Roger grinned from ear to ear as he picked up his drumsticks. He rocked and rolled, and so did Grandpa. With the drums beating merrily, their joyful music

22、 shook the whole house like before, not only the whole house, but also the hearts of the grand father and the grandson.第二節(jié)（總分值25分）47.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文The five children in Larrane Leechs day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes under the dizzy sun. By 10 a. m., it wa

23、s time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk down to the river.“Were going to pick berries now, “ she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they spend as much time as possible outdoors.Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd （德國牧羊

24、犬）, The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the trees. They stopped at the first berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talking excitedly.A young cougar （美洲獅）cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air. Stepping over the thick car

25、pet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar, the size of Pal, standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately froze Larrane. Larrane couldnt tell wheth

26、er Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side. Instantly, the cougar wheeled toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretch

27、ed up high and brought its paws down upon the head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to pull down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.注意:1 ,續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2 .請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Now aware of the danger, the other fo

28、ur children screamed and ran behind Larrane.Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground.解析：由第一段首句內容“現(xiàn)在意識到危險，其他四個孩子尖叫著跑在Larrane后面?！笨芍? 本段應描寫在發(fā)現(xiàn)了美洲獅的威脅之后，Larrane與孩子們跟美洲獅搏斗求生的過程。在千 鈞一發(fā)之際，Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出現(xiàn)，打跑了美洲獅，他們獲得平安。由第二段首句內容“Larrane沖向Micky, Micky靜靜地躺在地上?！笨芍?，本段應描寫 Larrane和Pal將美洲獅打跑后，迅速檢查Mic

29、ky的傷情，并將恐懼的孩子們帶回日托中心, 最后感悟生死之間可以做的抉擇。思路：發(fā)現(xiàn)美洲獅一一迅速出手一一盡力相搏一一處于劣勢一一Pal相救一一恢復平安一一感 悟范文：Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane. They picked up branches from the ground and began attacking the cougar. However, their strikes only managed to anger the fierce beast.

30、 Letting out a threatening howl, it scratched Larrane head. Blood began to flow down Larrane face, but she held tightly onto its neck to prevent its deadly bite. Just then, Pal came to her rescue. He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore open its flesh while dragging it backward. Facing such

31、united enemy, the cougar had to admit defeat and flee.Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground. He was still breathing. Thank God! Hes alive. Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total shock. “We have to run home now. She said calmly to the terrifi

32、ed children, Everything will be all right. With Mikey on her back and the other children following her, she ran all the way back to the day care center. The other staff helped her put Mikey down on a bed. That was when she finally had time to attend to her wound. Larrane met the greatest challenge o

33、f her life head-on and won. Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between life and death.第二節(jié)（總分值25分）47.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Last March, Margarito drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside. When he set off for home, Margarito mother looke

34、d at the dark sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm. Worried about her sons safety, she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way hoine and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.With his mothers words in mind, Margarito approached the main road carefully. Soon, it started

35、to rain heavily. Eager to get home, Margarito began to drive faster. Two hours later, he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek （|、溪）.Margarito, driving a four-wheel drive truck, figured that he would be OK. At that moment, he didnt realize that such a thought would be a big

36、mistake.It was halfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place: The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle, pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed. The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away. Margaritos problems only grew from there as the water had someh

37、ow positioned the truck into the creek bank at a 45-degree angle, making it difficult for him to open the drivers side door. Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly, Margarito was certain he was going to die. Shaking with fear, he was at a loss about what to do.On the road rig

38、ht behind Margarito were a delivery worker named Steve and his nephew Mike, who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside. They witnessed the horrible incident, and when Margarito s truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek, Steve quickly began to take acti

39、on. First, he grabbed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Next, he turned to Mike and yelled, Give me a rock!Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.解析：由第一段

40、首句內容“接著，他轉向邁克喊道：“給我一塊石頭！ 。”可知，第一段可描 寫送貨員史蒂夫看到瑪格麗托被困在車里，立刻想到了必須馬上用石頭砸破車窗戶，把瑪格 麗托營救出來，詳細表達他營救瑪格麗托的過程。由第二段首句內容“瑪格麗托正要感謝史蒂夫和邁克，這時他夾克口袋里的手機響了?！?可知，第二段可描寫瑪格麗托被救后接到了他母親的 ， 中他向母親講述了剛才自己 經歷的驚險一幕，掛斷 后，瑪格麗托向史蒂夫和邁克表達的真誠的感謝之情。思路：史蒂夫砸車窗一一瑪格麗托獲救一一瑪格麗托接到母親 一一瑪格麗托表達感謝范文：Next, he turned to Mike and yelled, Give me a

41、rock! With the rock, he hit the window over and over but had little success. Steve then shouted to Margarito to move away from the window. He balanced himself on the truck, leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally, the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass. Relie

42、ved, Margarito reached out fbr Steves hand and was rescued. The two men escaped and returned to safety.Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang. With trembling hands, Margarito took out the phone and pressed it to his ear. His mothers anxious voice

43、came over the phone, Are you home yet? Everythings good?” Tears welled up in his eyes at the familiar sound of concern. Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her. Hanging up the phone, he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them. Cold as the rai

44、n was, great warmth filled his heart like never before.五第二節(jié)（總分值25分）47.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Nothing ExtraordinaryIt was a Saturday. The mall was packed with people. I was with my mom.Mom is short, skinny. It is easy to overlook her in a crowd simply because she is nothing extraordinary

45、 to see.On that day we went for another window shopping in a mall next to our apartment, peeking at window boutiques（時裝店）in fleeting glances because we both knew we wouldnt be buying much, like always.I remember I was looking up at the people we passed as we walkedat first indifferently, but then mo

46、re attentively.Ladies wore bright, delicate clothing and five-inch heels that clicked importantly on the floor. Men stepped by smelling of sharp perfumes. An uneasy feeling started to settle in my chest. I tried to push it out, but once it took root, it refused to be rid of and tossed away: I was as

47、hamed of my mother.We were in a high-class neighborhood, I knew that. We lived in a small, overpriced apartment building that Mom chose to move to because she knew the schools were good.We were in a high-class neighborhood, but as I examined the passers-by and then turned accusing eyes on Mom, I rea

48、lized for the first time that we didnt belong there.I could see the heavy lines around Moms eyes and mouth, carved deep into her skin without luxurious creams to ease them away. She wore cheap, ragged clothes with the seams tom, shoes with the soles（鞋底）worn down. Her eyes were tired from working lon

49、g hours to make ends meet and her hair was too gray for her age.My mom is nothing extraordinaiy, yet at that moment she stood out because she was just so plain.I dont want to be seen with her, so I hurried away to the bathroom. When I finally made my way out with reluctant steps, Mom wasnt in sight. I had to search d