讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-戒指學(xué)案-高考英語(yǔ)作文備考

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)---戒指（導(dǎo)學(xué)案）本文主要講述酒吧店主樂(lè)于助人，當(dāng)?shù)弥幻櫩驮诰瓢蓙G失了放在錢(qián)包的結(jié)婚戒指后，他不惜一切，幫助她找回戒指。文本特點(diǎn)：

文本的在開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾部分別強(qiáng)調(diào)Jimmy為人，為后文的續(xù)寫(xiě)鋪墊。本節(jié)課的設(shè)計(jì)思路：

基于考生表述平白如流水賬，可讀性不強(qiáng)的特點(diǎn)，我們認(rèn)為：學(xué)生的欠缺的能力是最好的突破口，也是最好的備考點(diǎn)?；诖耍鉀Q方法可采取3S主題續(xù)寫(xiě)：培養(yǎng)學(xué)生抓伏筆，進(jìn)行自問(wèn)自答式SelfQuestion&Answer主題寫(xiě)作；同時(shí)兼顧相似考題Similar的連接對(duì)比以及小情節(jié)構(gòu)建上增添可讀性的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)Show。本文的高潮部分在哪里？高潮小段落截取并請(qǐng)翻譯Atthispoint,mostpeoplewouldprobablystopandregretfullytelltheladythatthewalletcouldn'tbefoundanymore.這時(shí)，大多數(shù)人可能會(huì)停下腳步，遺憾地告訴這位女士，錢(qián)包已經(jīng)找不到了。話(huà)題：助人教學(xué)步驟123

1.解讀續(xù)寫(xiě)文本2.抓伏筆自問(wèn)式思路啟發(fā)3.優(yōu)秀學(xué)生作文及下水作文4.小情節(jié)構(gòu)建及可讀性細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)5.相似“助人”類(lèi)續(xù)寫(xiě)考題對(duì)比好句子翻譯學(xué)案1.

盡管看起來(lái)難以置信，吉米還是不遺余力地雇傭潛水員徹底搜查水域，直到找到丟失的錢(qián)包。

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他真的很認(rèn)真地想找到這位女士的錢(qián)包，并完成尋找戒指的任務(wù)。

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沒(méi)過(guò)多久，他就抬起頭，得意洋洋地把錢(qián)包向空中揮舞。

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就連站在旁邊的小偷也驚訝地用雙手捂住嘴。

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當(dāng)他發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包并最終找到吉米時(shí)，他絕望地想作為一個(gè)無(wú)家可歸的人生存下來(lái)。

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這個(gè)少年對(duì)這個(gè)善良的人只有感激之情，這激勵(lì)了他在生活中做得更好。

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小偷被感動(dòng)去見(jiàn)一個(gè)陌生人，為了糾正他的錯(cuò)誤，他會(huì)做更多的事。

類(lèi)似考題讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：廣東金太陽(yáng)高三聯(lián)考

以貌取人Samisabravepolicemanwhooftencomesacrossdangeroussituations.However,whenhewasyoung,heexperiencedafunnystoryduringhiswork.

Thatwasaniceday,andSamworkedatthepolicestationasusual.Arichandbeautifulwomancarryingapursedrovetowork.Sheparkedhercarinthestreetoutsideheroffice.Whenshefinishedherworkthatafternoon,shegotintohercarquicklyandstarteddrivinghomeasusual.Suddenly,shenoticedayellowcaratherback,whosedriverwasamanwithaveryuglylook.Tohersurprise,whensheturnedleft,theyellowcaralsoturnedleft.Whensheturnedright,theyellowcarturnedright,too.Whenshestoppedatthetrafficlights,theyellowcarstoppedbehindher.

Gradually,fearcameintoherheart.Whatshouldshedo?Howcouldshegetridofthisterribleman?Todealwiththissituation,shedecidedtodrivequicklytothepolicestationwhereSamworked.However,shewasevenmoresurprisedwhenshesawthecarstillfollowedherandstoppedbehindher.“Howdarehefollowmehere?"shesaidtoherself.Shecouldfeelherheartbeatingfasterthanever.Atthattime,Samwasstandingondutyoutsidethepolicestation.SeeingSamwearingapoliceuniform,shewasmorethandelightedthatshewouldbesafe.

Atonce,shejumpedoutofhercarandrantoSamwithoutanydelay.Pointingatthemaninsidethecar,shesaidabadmanwasfollowingherandaskedSamtoarresthim.Tofindwhatwashappening,Samwalkedtowardsthemanwhohadstoppedhiscarnearthewoman’s.

ButwhatshockedSamwasthatthemandidn'ttrytoescapewhenhesawhim.Instead,themanlookedrelieved.Secondslater,themanwalkedtowardsthewomanandSam.Para1:Themanjustsmiledandstartedtotellthetruth.Para2:Then,Samwaslostinthoughtandbegantotalkwiththewoman.2016年10月浙江新高考《考試說(shuō)明》英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作樣題——讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.

“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”

“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”

“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”

Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardthelongloudnoiseofanalarm.

Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(搶劫)!

ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.

Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.

Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?”Hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI’mthebankthief!”

Arthurlookedaroundatth