讀后續(xù)寫高分作文4則-高考英語備考寫作專練

讀后續(xù)寫高分作文4則--高考英語備考寫作專練Onefall,mywife

Elli

andIhadasinglegoal:to

photograph

polarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcamp

outside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.

Taking

pictures

ofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbe

photographedfroma

safe

distance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethrougha

camera

witha

telephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelled

ourgarlic

bread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwire

fence.Hepulledandbit

thewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfired

blankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloud

noises

likethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutes

beforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.

ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.Thecampmanager

suggestedIusepepper

spray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes.butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvited

guestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebear

ran

tothelaketo

washhiseyes.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2.

至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.

續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Para1.

Afewminuteslater，thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Para2.

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

范文1Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Inahuff,thebearpoundedatthe

fence

violently.Frozenwithterror,Icouldmakenoactionbut

trembledhelplessly

withtearsrollingdownmyface.Atthatverymoment,

Elli

rushed

outofthecabinwithabagofgarlic

bread

embracedinherarms.BeforeIrealized,she

had

castthebagtoalonghaul,whicheventuallylandedinabush.Atthissight,thebear

turnedaround

fromthefenceand

headed

tantivy

forthebush.Havingfinishedthebread,thebearpacedtowardsourcampagain,likelytogiveourfenceanother

fierceimpact.Nothingleft,

wecouldbutawaitourdoom,withfearengulfingbothofus.Paragraph2：Atthatmoment,thehelicopterarrived.

Twowildlifecontrolworkerslookedoutfromtheaircraftwearingcounter-assaultoverallsandtheyfiredawarningshottodeterthebear.Astonishedbythe

noises

ofthehelicopterandtheshot,thebearwasstartledtoleapintothebushand

galloped

towardtheforestlikeashot.Immediately,I

forced

myselftocalmdownandmanagedtophotosome

pictures

beforethebeardisappearedintotheforest.Theworkersleftuswithsomepine-baseddetergent,foritssmellissupposedtodeterbears.Whatathrillingexperience!

范文2

Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Withgreaterrage,thebearroaredandtriedto

teardown

the

fence

withallhismight.I

gatheredupmycourage

andtriedtosprayhimagain.Unfortunately,hemanagedtoescapeandmyheartfrozeinmychest.Atthismoment,

Elli

cameupwithacrazyideaandthrewourgarlic

bread

atthebear.Tomygreatsurprise,

thebearstoppedandboweddowntoeatthebread.Seeingthis,allofusletoutasighofrelief.Beforelonghowever,thehungrybearfinishedeatingandpushedthefenceagain.Thefencewasabouttofalldown!Paragraph2：Atthatverymomentthehelicopterarrived.

Shockedbythe

noises,

thebearstoppedandturnedaround.Seeingthepeopleequippedwithguns,heranawayanddisappearedinthewoodsasifheknewwhotheywerewefinallygotourbreathandElliandIembracedtightly

withstillracinghearts.Afterwecalmeddown,thelocalstoldusthatthebearswerelosingtheirhomesandfoodbecauseofhumanactivitiesandclimatechanges.Onthewaybackhome,

Icheckedtheprecious

pictures

inthe

camera,lostinthought.Thisexperiencewouldberemembered,forever.

范文3Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Roarsandscreams

piercedthesilence

with

needle-likeshrillness.The

noises

turned

Elli

andI

palewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwhole

fence.Heroaredrepeatedly,

shattering

whatwasleftofthesilence.Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesome

pictures

ofthebear.Theanimal’snoises

echoed

allaroundus.We

betrayed

ourfeelingsby

huddling

together,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughly

scrutinizing

thearea,he

trotted

forwardafewsteps.Paragraph2：Atthatverymomentthehelicopterarrived.

Myheart

leapedwithjoy

asIknewwewere

likelytobesaved.Elli

usedpepper

spray

againtobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.He

regarded

uswith

themercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarted

devouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Elliprayedlikeathousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeing

safe

andsound.

范文4Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Hecouldnot

resistthetemptationof

thebread.Thepepper

spray

hadslowedthebearbutwasn’tenoughto

stopthebeast.Onthecontrary,it

provoked

thebearandmadehimeven

morefurious.MuchasIwantedto

photograph

theapproachingbear,my

survivalinstinct

overtookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.Inamomentofpanic,

Elli

andIdecidedtogivehimwhathewanted—thegarlic

bread.While

itwas

lo