writing - a letter of 教學(xué)課件講解

ALetterofAdvice[EWP3]ReadthePossibleVersionaloudDearTom,I’msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend.Herearesometipsforyou.First,don’tbetooworried.Mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime.Second,whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong?Ifyoudothis,yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis/herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim/her.Atthesametime,he/shewillsurelyrealizehe/shewasatfault,too.Third,talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts.Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,LiHua呈現(xiàn)主題---就來信呈現(xiàn)需解決的問題提出針對性的建議表明觀點(diǎn)或提出希望建議信----“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”Para.1----呈現(xiàn)主題(就來信呈現(xiàn)需解決的問題)Para.2----提出針對性的建議Para.3----表明觀點(diǎn)或提出希望Para.1呈現(xiàn)主題---就來信呈現(xiàn)需解決的問題WhatproblemdoesXiaoDonghave?-----Heisnotgoodatcommunicating withpeopleandcan’tmakegood friendswiththem.Yourshowtime:WritethefirstparagraphI’msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend.Herearesometipsforyou.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.Para.2----提出針對性的建議(適當(dāng)說明原因)注意使用過渡銜接詞和提建議的句式[EW.P3]First,don’tbetooworried.(Mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime.)

Second,whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong?(Ifyoudothis,yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis/herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim/her.)

Atthesametime,he/shewillsurelyrealizehe/shewasatfault,too.Third,talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts.(Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter.)Tobeginwith,

youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobefriendlyaspossibleasyoucan.(Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowyoubetter.)

What’smore,itisagoodideaforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.(Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.)

Atlast,youhadbettertakeanactivepartinclassactivities(whereyoucanshowyourtalentandmakefriendswithotherpartners.)表示順序的常用銜接詞(OrderlyTransitionalmakers)Firstofall，...Inaddition…首先，……；另外，……；Tobeginwith...，Moreover./What’smore/Besides..，F(xiàn)inally...第一，……；此外……，最后……Firstly，...Secondly，...Finally，...第一……；第二……；最后……First,…Second,…Third,…Shareyourideastochangethesituationwithgroupmemberandgiveyourreasons.Yourshowtime:WritethesecondparagraphPara.3----表明觀點(diǎn)或提出希望Someusefulsentences

----EWP3Yourshowtime:WritethethirdparagraphFinishyourletter.《周報(bào)》同步評估試題第1期閱讀C篇和D篇（選做一篇）以及完形填空DearXiaoDong,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Fromyourletter,Iknowthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleanddon’tknowhowtomakefriendsinthenewschool,soyouneedmyadvice.

Firstofall,you’dbetterfindthechancetojoininpeople’sdiscussiontoknowmoreabouteachother,sothatyoucanfindtheclassmateswhohavethesamehobbiesasyou.Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould

showyourgreatinterestinthetopicbyaskingquestionswhilelisteningtoothers.Finally,whentheyareintrouble,youshouldofferhelptoyourclassmatesandsharetheirsorrowsandpains.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulandyoucanmakesomefriendssuccessfulsoon.Yours,MissWangDearXiaoDong,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Fromyourletter,Iknowthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleanddon’tknowhowtomakefriendsinthenewschool,andthefollowingsaremysuggestions.

[回應(yīng)來信，指出問題]

Firstofall,

you’dbetterfindthechancetojoininpeople’sdiscussiontoknowmoreabouteachother,sothatyoucanfindtheclassmateswhohavethesamehobbiesasyou.Besides,

itisagoodideaforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyouandwouldliketomakefriendswithyou.Finally,whentheyareintrouble,youshouldofferhelptoyourclassmatesandsharetheirsorrowsandpains,whichcanshowyou’reakindandeasy-goingperson.

[針對問題提出建議]

Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou

andyoucanmakesomefriendssuccessfulsoon.[表明觀點(diǎn)或提出希望]

Yours,MissWangjoin

vt./vi.加入；參加joinaclub/anorganization/anarmy----tobeamemberofHaseveryonejoinedtheYouthLeague?joinsb.(indoingsth.)----todosth.withsb.TogetherWouldyoujoinusfordinner?joinin+活動(dòng)

----takepartin----Willjoin(us)inthediscussion?[《全優(yōu)》P9]joinin/takepartin/attend的區(qū)別----詳見《全優(yōu)》P9Istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem.[《全優(yōu)》P9]find+it(形式賓語)+adj./n.(賓補(bǔ))+todo/that---(真正賓語)常用此結(jié)構(gòu)的動(dòng)詞：consider認(rèn)為;feel;find(覺得);guess;imagine(想象);make;thinkWeallconsideritourduty

tohandinhomeworkontime.他覺得看電影學(xué)英語很有用。

Hethinks/findsit___________________byseeingfilms.usefultolearnEnglishIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.如果……我將不勝感激---Iwouldappreciateitif……根據(jù)漢語提示，完成下列句子。Susan:Hi,Maria!Longtimenosee.______________________________________________（你和你的新室友相處如何）?Maria:Notverywell.Infact,Iamhavingsometroublewithher.Susan:What’sup?HowareyougettingalongwithyournewroommateMaria:Myroommate________________________（不喜歡早點(diǎn)睡覺）andshesurfstheInternetdeepintotheni