(新高考)高考英語二輪專題讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉（八）（含答案解析）

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉（八）一：原文重現(xiàn)“Whatacrabby-lookinglady（怨婦）,”thecashieratmylocalconveniencestorewhisperedtohercoworker.Iwasgrabbingsomethingofftheshelf.Ihadahalfdozenkidswaitingformeoutsideinthevan,andhere'sthething:theywereallmyownchildren.Notimeforpolite.Nocasualconversationwiththecheckoutlady,nonodofapprovaltowardthestockboy,nobreathing.Justgetthetoiletpaper,twogallonsofmilkandsomeFrostedFlakesandgetbacktomychildren!Butmyinterestwasarousedbythecrabby-lookinglady.Whichonewasshe?Takingafamilypackoftoiletpaperundermyarm,Iscannedthetinystoreforthecrabbylady.Let'ssee,there'samiddle-agedguycheckingonpork,anoldergentlemanatthecheckoutpurchasinganeggsaladsandwichandacoffee,and...justthenIsawher,thecrabby-lookinglady.21*cnjy*comHereyesweresmall;herbrownhairwaspulledbackinaponytailsotightthatitlookedlikeherforeheadwoulddrop.Hermouthwasshutserious.Thisladylookedlikeshehadsmelledsomethingreallybad.Then,Iturnedawayfrommyownreflectionintheconvexsecuritymirror（安全反射鏡）atthebackofthestore.Thecrabby-lookinglady...wasme!Thatnight,Icried.Iwasthecrabby-lookinglady!Me!Thegirloncevotednicestsmilebyherhighschoolclass!Thingsmustgetchanged!RightthenandthereIresolvedtodoonethingoverthenextyear.Onesimpleresolution:tosmile.Ididn'tneedtowaitforJanuary1st--Iwouldstartrightnow.Iresolvedtosmileatanyoneandanything,eventhoughtheywouldletmedown.AndIalsoresolvedtomakeaconsciousefforttosmile,atleasttentimesaday.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onthefirstdayof“MissionSmile”Ipracticedsmilingasplanned.【出處：21教育名師】_______________________________________________________________________________.Amonthlater,somethingdifferenthappened.

_______________________________________________________________________________.二：文本解析1.故事大意：一個六個孩子的媽媽在便利店購物時，被收銀員評價為“怨婦”后受到很大觸動，決心每天微笑10次來改變自己。2·1·c·n·j·y2.第一段續(xù)寫：根據(jù)第一段首句Onthefirstdayof“MissionSmile”Ipracticedsmilingasplanned，續(xù)寫第一段的情節(jié)發(fā)展方向應(yīng)為：我第一天按照計劃練習了微笑10次，對任何人，任何事，哪怕是一些原本會讓我失望的人或事。此處要點為“practice”和“asplanned”。續(xù)寫的情節(jié)可以是對小貓小狗練習微笑，可以是對鄰居練習微笑，也可以對花草樹木練習微笑，也可以對鏡子練習微笑，對自己的孩子等一切人與事練習微笑；不必一一列舉，但是要說明練習了10次。21*cnjy*com這樣寫已經(jīng)基本符合要求，如果能提及自己對原本會失望的事情也刻意微笑了會更好；可以寫的情節(jié)有，看到家里一片狼藉，提醒自己微笑；小孩子打破了碗，提醒自己微笑；丈夫下班遲回家，提醒自己微笑；鄰居家的孩子球打碎了自家的窗戶玻璃，提醒自己微笑。此處不一而足?！景鏅?quán)所有：21教育】3.第二段續(xù)寫：首句Onemonthlater,somethingdifferenthappened起承上啟下作用。續(xù)寫第二段的情節(jié)發(fā)展方向應(yīng)為：我在練習微笑一個月之后，情況發(fā)生了改變。此處要突出與第一段的對比，強調(diào)different；一個月之后的不同可能表現(xiàn)在以下幾個方面，自己的情緒上、外貌上、對待他人的態(tài)度上以及他人對我的評價上。這幾個方面不需要全部提及，但是自己情緒上的改變是重點。續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要突出我不再需要刻意練習微笑，相反，遇到所有人所有事我會自然而然地露出微笑。情節(jié)部分可以是第一段續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的情景再現(xiàn)，不同的是，以前是忍住怒火刻意微笑，現(xiàn)在是由內(nèi)而外地微笑面對，生活也變得愜意起來。結(jié)尾最好要與文章開頭首尾照應(yīng)，寫出別人對我的評價的改變?？梢允腔氐奖憷曩徫?，得到同一個收銀員的贊美；也可以是在其它場合得到別人的贊美；或者是家人、鄰居等發(fā)現(xiàn)了我的改變后對我的贊美。【來源：21·世紀·教育·網(wǎng)】三：續(xù)寫單句訓練“使命微笑”的第一天，我按計劃練習微笑。我對一只奇怪的狗微笑，它在我女兒的新鞋子里，門口的推銷員，我六個孩子中的三個，圖書管理員問我是否知道全球人口過剩的問題，還有我的浴缸。當我丈夫打電話說他會遲到時，我甚至對他笑了笑。我在鏡子里對自己笑了兩次，只是為了提醒自己一個微笑是什么樣子。在練習了一個月后，出乎意料地，發(fā)生了一些不同的事情。我甚至沒有試圖找到可以微笑的東西，我仍然會注意到微笑占據(jù)了我的臉。當我女兒給洗碗機裝上襪子時，我笑了。當我們?nèi)ソ烫谜娴暮芡淼臅r候，我笑了。有一天，我在當?shù)氐囊患铱Х鹊暧龅搅藥讉€朋友。我無意中聽到出納員對她的同事說：“一個多么快樂的女士??！”我甚至不用環(huán)顧四周就能知道她在說誰。這是我的理解！四：佳作展現(xiàn)Onthefirstdayof“MissionSmile”Ipracticedsmilingasplanned.21_______________________________________________________________________________.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Amonthlater,somethingdifferenthappened.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：課后練筆OneeveningIwasrestinginacafe.Iworeapairofnewlyboughtwhiteleathershoes,whichwereratherexpensive.Thenaboycametome.【來源：21cnj*y.co*m】Hewasinanunfitshirt,lookingpaleandabouteleven.Atsightofmynewleathershoes,hisbigeyeswerebrightwithhope.NosoonerhadIbeguntospeakthanheopenedtheboxinhishandandtookoutthetoolsofshoe-polishing.Hequicklybentdown,tookoffmyleathershoes,andbegantoshinethem.Hewasbusydoinghisworkwhenheavyrainbegantopourdown.Peoplerushedtothecaféforshelterfromtherain.MoreandmorepeoplecrowdedinandgraduallyseparatedtheboyfrommebeforeIrealizedit.Hourspassed,anditturneddark.Ihadnoshoesonmyfeetandwonderedwheretheboyhadbeen.Ithoughthewouldnotreturnmyexpensiveshoes,andIwouldhavetogohomeonmybarefeet.Whenitwasnearmidnighttherainended,andtherewerefewerandfewerpeopleinthecafé.Thecaféwastobeclosed.Ihadtomoveslowlytothedoor,headlowered.JustasIwenttothegate,Iwassurprisedtofindthataboyofabouteleven,lookingveryfamiliar,wassleepingatthedoorwithhisheadleaningagainstaboxandhisupperbodybeingbare.Hewasholdingapackagemadeofhisshirttightlyinhisarms.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1.Ishookhimslightlyandwokehimup. 21世紀教育網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2.Ifeltitnecessarytodosomethingfortheboy.21·cn·jy·com___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：單句訓練我輕輕搖了搖他，把他叫醒了。他跳起來揉了一會兒眼睛，才終于認出我是誰。然后他小心地打開懷里的包裹，把皮鞋給了我，害羞地一次又一次地向我道歉。我付了他錢，把他冰冷的小家伙包裹起來他的不合適的襯衫，包裹了我的皮鞋。在回家的路上，我腦海里浮現(xiàn)著那個小男孩的形象。我覺得有必要為這男孩做點什么。第二天，我又去了咖啡館，看到這個男孩在那里并不感到驚訝，他在顧客中間尋找生意。我讓他坐下來，我們聊了聊喝了一杯咖啡。我知道他想賺些錢來幫助他生病的父親和回到學校?！澳阒绬?？”我只需要有人給我的員工擦鞋，因為他們太忙了，不能這樣做，”我微笑著說。參考答案三：單句訓練Thefirstdayof“MissionSmile”Ipracticedsmilingasplanned.21教育網(wǎng)Ismiledatastrangedogwhopeedonmydaughter’snewschoolshoeswhileshewasinthem,thesalesmantothedoor,threeofmysixchildren,alibrarianwhoaskedmeifIwasawareoftheglobaloverpopulationproblem,andmybathtub.Ievensmiledatmyhusbandoverthephonewhenhecalledtosayhe’dbelatefromwork.AndIsmiledatmyselfinthemirrortwice,justtoremindmyselfwhatasmilelookedlike.Afterpracticingamonth,unexpectedly,somethingdifferenthappened.Ididn'teventrytofindthingstosmileatandI'dstillnoticesmiletakeovermyface.Whenmydaughterloadedthedishwasherwithhersocks,Ismiled.21·世紀*教育網(wǎng)Whenwewerereallylateforchurch,Ismiled.OnedayIwasmeetingacoupleoffriendsatalocalcoffeeshop.www-2-1-cnjy-comIoverheardthecashierremarktoherco-worker,“Whatahappy-lookinglady!"AndIdidn'tevenhavetolookaroundtoknowwhoshewastalkingabout.Itwasme!六：單句訓練Ishookhimslightlyandwokehimup.HejumpedupandrubbedhiseyesforquiteawhilebeforehefinallyrecognizedwhoIwas.21教育名師原創(chuàng)作品Thenheopenedthepackageinhisarmswithcaution,gavememyleathershoes,andapologizedagainandagaintomeshyly.Ipaidhimandwrappedhiscoldlittlebodywithhisunfitshirt,whichhadwrappedmyleathershoes.Onmywayhome,theimageofthelittleboystayedinmymind.Ifeltitnecessarytodosomethingfortheboy.ThenextdayIwenttothecaféagainandwasnotsurprisedtoseetheboythere,makinghiswayamongcustomerslookingforsomebusiness.2-1-c-n-j-yIaskedhimtositdownandwetalkedoveracupofcoffee.Ilearntthathewastryingtomakesomemoneytohelphissickfatherandtogetbacktoschool.“Youknowwhat?Ijustneedsomeonetopolishshoesformyemployeesastheyaretoobusytodothat,”Isaid,smiling.四：佳作展現(xiàn)（一）Thefirstdayof“MissionSmile”Ipracticedsmilingasplanned.Ismiledatastrangedogwhopeedonmydaughter’snewschoolshoeswhileshewasinthem,thesalesmantothedoor,threeofmysixchildren,alibrarianwhoaskedmeifIwasawareoftheglobaloverpopulationproblem,andmybathtub.Ievensmiledatmyhusbandoverthephonewhenhecalledtosayhe’dbelatefromwork.AndIsmiledatmyselfinthemirrortwice,justtoremindmyselfwhatasmilelookedlike.Afterpracticingamonth,unexpectedly,somethingdifferenthappened.Ididn'teventrytofindthingstosmileatandI'dstillnoticesmiletakeovermyface.Whenmy