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題型分類大全搞定這一步，穩(wěn)穩(wěn)上6.5分！Two

Questions=Report原因分析+解決方案原因分析+有何影響原因分析+隨機(鬼才知道會問什么)造成的問題+解決方案---特別注意你有可能遇到其中任何一種組合往年很多人不認識自己的鄰居。(原因+解決)全世界的城市越來越相似。(原因+影響)爸媽在家扮演的角色有很大不同。(原因+會不會有改變)人類

越來越長。(導致的問題+解決)Two

Questions=Report注意區(qū)分這兩個問題What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?What

problems

does

it

cause?report類型的段(原因+解決方案版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(提前總結原因/空話過渡)2.第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.In

addition,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.~~~(強調問題很嚴重/強調做某事很重要)~~~~so

measures

should

betaken

to…….解決方案1+結果解決方案2+結果5.

總結(重復原因/解決方案)用來寫原因的topic

sentences1.

The reason

for

the

shortage

of

younger

teachers

is

that

a

teachingjob

pays

poorly.2.

The reason

why

bicycle

riding

is

no

longer

popular

is

that

peopletoday

have

mu ore

choices

for

transportation.3.

In

addition,

the

increase

in

the

amount

of

rubbish

is

also

a

result

ofpeople

using

more

disposable

products.4.

It

is

true

that

poor

health

oft eral

population

is

associatedwithpeople’s

bad

eating

habits.寫原因段的邏輯事實+過程+結果(這是最應該學會也是最自然的解釋原因方式)這里的事實很有可能是某方面的年代變化；這里的過程是根據(jù)前面的事實來展開，包括：對比，影響，解釋，舉例；這里的結果是回應題目中

現(xiàn)象；寫原因段的邏輯1).人們收入普遍增加—所以食物變得簡單容易--每頓飯會準備超過自己真實需求的食物，為了滿足

的口味和營養(yǎng)--很多吃不完的食物被當做

處理2).城市人口不斷增加–選擇建造高樓來滿足對空間的需求–傳統(tǒng)的建筑逐漸減少，城市外

起來越來越相似3).城市不斷擴張–目的地之間的距離增加–騎車累死你寫原因段的邏輯4).

環(huán)保的過程比較麻煩

–

比如學習

分類和為了減少碳排放而不開車–

面對選擇的時候，人們自然偏向更便利的而不是環(huán)保的生活方式5).現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)孩子成本極高–高質量的食物和玩具，醫(yī)療，教育，旅行–年輕人無法負擔這樣的高質量生活–決定等到經濟能力提高之后再生孩子孩子學校表現(xiàn)糟糕的原因Thereason

for

students’

poor

behavior

is

that

the

birthrate

is

decreasing

sothat

families

are ing

smaller

withfewer

children.

These

children

are

often

spoilt.

Theyareallowed

to

have

whatever

they

wantregardless

of

price

andto

behave

as

they

please.

This

means

that

the

children

growup

without

consideration

for

others.

When

they

begin

to

goto

school,

theyhavenot

learnt

to

respect

others

and

obeyrules.不認識鄰居的原因In

addition,

people

knowing

little

about

their

neighbours

isbecause

technology

has

greatly

changed

the

way

theyentertain

and

socialize.

Before

the

Internet,

people

activelyparticipated

in

community

activities

to

havefun

or

build

theirsocial

networks.

Today,

however,

neighbours

barely

meet

andtalk

with

each

other,

as

they

aremore

addicted

to

onlinesharing

of

gossips

and

pictures.不去一些地方旅游的原因The

danger

and

wilderness

of

some

places

set

up

a

barrier

forordinary

people,

which

is

the

reason

why

TV

programs

likeMan

vs

Wild

enjoy

a

great

popularity.

There

aresome

destinations

where

tourists

may

be

kidnapped

or

robbed.There

are

also

places

where

trekkers

are

highly

vulnerable

todiseases,

like

malaria

or

bird

flu.分析原因的原則1.不能只局限；2.通過年代對比找到原因(至關重要)；3.必須從事實出發(fā)去寫原因；到底都有哪些年代變化？1.

現(xiàn)代人-忙/錢多/懶/不動2.

現(xiàn)代

(

關注negative

reports);3.現(xiàn)代工作(變得越來越knowledge-based)；4.現(xiàn)代家庭(孩子減少，溺愛孩子);5.現(xiàn)代教育(更專注孩子的all-round

development);6.現(xiàn)代城市(越來越multicultural/ethnically-mixed/racially-mixed)；解決方案--切實可行1.

---至關重要(收稅/花錢/頒布法律)；1).

The ernment

could

impose

higher

taxes

on

……so

that

…….2).

What

the ernment

should s

to

invest

in…../financiallysupport…../spend

money

ng……….3).

The ernment

ought

to

require

…..to

…...2.個人3.家長4.學校5.公司6.

authorities范文-11.第一段超簡單；2.原因只寫了一個，大量的support解釋；3.解決方案先粗略，然后很仔細；范文-21.第一段后半部分太繁瑣；2.原因分析給了兩個idea，非常標準；3.解決方案非常精確；4.結尾段清晰；5.整個結構非常標準；范文-31.

考生范文，分數(shù)是6.5；2.語法錯誤很多，但是大部分時候表達清晰；3.原因分析太偏向不健康的飲食，對缺乏鍛煉解釋太少；4.解決方案很細致，考官會喜歡；5.這個范文是給大家增加信心用的；report類型的段(原因+有何影響版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(提前總結原因/空話過渡)2.One

of

the

reasons

is

that第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.

In

addition,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.過渡句---To

my

knowledge,there

are

完全取決于你自己(好/壞/雖然….但是…..)5.

總結(重復原因/影響)Some

employers

think

that

formal

academic

qualificationsare

more

important

than

life

experiences

and

alqualities

when

they

look

for

an

employee.

Why

is

it

thecase?

Is

it

apositive

or

negative

development??Nowadays

,

more

importance

is

attached

to

formal

educational

qualifications

than

life

experience

andal

qualities

when

a

company

is

recruitingnew

employees.

The

reasons

behind

this

phenomenonaremultiple,

and

I

believe

it

is

a

positivedevelopment

in

the

long-run.??of

all,

university

qualifications

provide

direct

proofs

of

candidates’

competencies.

Employers

can

havea

clear

picture

of

what

universities

and

course

the

candidates

have

attended,and

what

scores

theyhaveachieved

.

Unlike

life

experiences

and alities,

qualifications

are fiable

data

that

can

bemeasured

easily

and

quickly.In

addition,

people

holding

qualifications

coul pt

to

the

new

job

muore

smoothly.

They

normallyneed

less

on-job

trainingwhen

starting

ajob,

and

unlike

those

without

higher

education,they

have

betterability

in

terms

of

critical

thinking,

problem-solving

and

expertise

acquired

in

university

education.?To

my

knowledge,

giving

priority

to

higher

qualifications

results

in

more

advantages

than

disadvantages.The

most

obvious

benefit

is

that

it

encourages

young

people

to

pursue

higheracademic

education,

whichbroadens

their

career

prospects.

From

a

social ,

it

will

create

a

highly

educated

and

developedsociety

if

everyone

chooses

to

receive

higher

education.?In

conclusion,

university

qualifications

are

needed

in

this

knowledge-based

society

and

I

believe

this

trendbrings

more

benefits

than

drawbacks.If ernments

allocate

more

money

to

tertiary

education,

it

willsurely

bring

about

long-term

benefits

to

both

individuals

and

the

society

as

a

whole

.Report類型的第一段一般不需要背景句，題目中的現(xiàn)象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接開始改寫的工作就可以了。report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)1)

In

many

countries

schools

have

severe

problemswith

students’

behavior.

What

do

you

think

are

thecauses?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Poor

student

behavior

seems

to

be

an

increasingly

widespread

problem

in

many

countries.

I

think

thatmodern

lifestyles

are

probably

responsible

for

this.（提前總結型過渡）report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)2).

Children

and

teenagers

are

committing

morecrimes

than

before.

What

do

you

think

are

thecauses?

How

should

they

be

punished?The

number

of

crimes

committed

by

children

andteenagers

has

been

increasing.

I

think

that

therecould

be

several

reasons

that

can

explain

this.（空話型過渡）report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)3).

Some

employers

think

that

formal

academic

qualificationsare

more

important

than

lifeexperiences

and

alqualities

when

they

look

for

anemployee.

Why

is

it

the

case?Is

it

a

positive

or

negative

development?Formal

educational

qualifications

are

believed

to

bemoreimportant

than

life

experiences

and ality

traits

when

acompany

is

recruiting

new

staffs.From

my

point

of

view,thiscriterion

of

choosing

employees

can

beexplained

by

thefollowing

reasons.（空話型過渡）report類型的介紹段(基本句型的切換)4).

The

average

weight

of

citizens

has

beenincreasing

in

many

countries.

What

do

you

think

arethe

causes?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Many

countries

across

the

world

are

faced

with

theproblem

of

obesity.I

think

that

unhealthy

lifestylesof

today’s

people

are

the

causes

of

thisproblem.（提前總結型過渡）report類型的介紹段(基本句型的切換)5).

Children

and

teenagers

are

committing

more

crimes

thanbefore.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

How

should

theybepunished?There

has

been

an

increasein

the

number

of

crimescommitted

by

children

and

teenagers.I

think

that

the

causesof

teenagers

committing

more

crimes

arepoor

parenting

andmedia

influence.

（提前總結型過渡）report類型的介紹段(詞性的切換)6).

International

travel

sometimes

makes

people

prejudicedrather

than

broad-minded.

What

doyou

think

arethereasons?

What

canbe

done

to

increase

understandings

oftourists

about

the

country

they

visit.參考答案：Sometimes,people

whotravel

internationallyhave

prejudice

against

the

country

they

visit.

I