大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板課件

大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文條理性及相關(guān)句式寫作模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)1內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文條理性及相關(guān)句式寫作模板內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平2寫作一般要求我能填寫常見表格如注冊表、申請表、問卷調(diào)查表等。我能寫給或回復(fù)他人祝賀卡、生日卡、邀請信、便條、短信、通知等。我能寫出簡單的指示語、個人廣告、社團海報、個人簡歷等。我能簡要地描述個人經(jīng)歷、發(fā)生的事件、讀過的故事、觀看的影片、喜怒哀樂等情感，寫出或回答個人或公司的信函、電子郵件、傳真等。我能就一定話題或提綱在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出不少于120詞的短文，內(nèi)容基本完整、中心思想明確、用詞恰當(dāng)、語意連貫。我能在一般寫作或應(yīng)用文寫作中恰當(dāng)使用相應(yīng)的寫作技能。寫作一般要求3評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2％：不切題。條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。5％：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。8％：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。11％：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14％：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚、文字通順，連貫性較好?；緹o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。 注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足以應(yīng)酌情扣分：（1）如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句，均不得計入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。（2）只寫一段者：0~4％；只寫兩段者：0~9％。（指規(guī)定三段的作文）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2％：不切題。條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。4條理性作文是主觀性題，要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進去。評卷老師的時間很短（每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完），用firstofall,second,to

begin

with,after

that,

next,

moreimportant,at

last等短語，可以使閱卷老師一眼就看出你作文的條理性。條理性作文是主觀性題，要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進去。5增加條理性的常用句式表層次,遞進:Furthermore,…What’s

more,…Also…Next,…Besides,…Moreover,…In

addition

,…Lastbutnotleast,…增加條理性的常用句式表層次,遞進:6增加條理性的常用句式表因果；Therefore,

…Consequently,

…because

of/thanks

to…Thus,……isdue

to/owing

to…On

this

account,…Since/as…As

a

result,

…As

a

consequence,…增加條理性的常用句式表因果；7增加條理性的常用句式表總結(jié)：In

summary,

…In

a

word,

…In

conclusion,

…In

short,

…Tosumup,…Generallyspeaking,…增加條理性的常用句式表總結(jié)：8增加條理性的常用句式表轉(zhuǎn)折，對比，比較；Compared

with

A，B．．．There

is

a

striking

contrast

between

them．On

the

contrary,…Whereas,…By

contrast,

…Despitethe

fact

that…Nevertheless,……even

though…On

the

contrary,…However,…Ontheonehand,…On

the

other

hand,…Otherwise…增加條理性的常用句式表轉(zhuǎn)折，對比，比較；9增加條理性的常用句式表示事實、現(xiàn)狀We

cannot

ignore

the

fact

that．．．No

one

can

deny

the

fact

that．．．Thereisnodoubtthat...

This

is

a

phenomenon

that

many

people

are

interested

in．However，that’s

not

the

case．增加條理性的常用句式表示事實、現(xiàn)狀10增加條理性的常用句式表舉例：To

take

…

as

an

example,…One

example

is…

Another

example

is…

For

example,…增加條理性的常用句式表舉例：11增加條理性的常用句式其他：AsfarasIknow據(jù)我所知Asfaras...isconcerned就……而論Asthesayinggoes俗話說Ithasbeenprovedthat...已經(jīng)證明Itisestimatedthat...據(jù)估計Itisbelievedthat...人們相信Itisconsideredthat...大家認(rèn)為Itishopedthat...人們希望Thereforeweshouldrealizethat...因此我們應(yīng)當(dāng)明白增加條理性的常用句式其他：12Aboveall最重要的是Afterall畢竟Finally,wehopethat...最后，我們希望Itmaybeconfirmedthat...可以肯定Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat因此，我們有理由相信Aboveall最重要的是13常用閃光高分詞認(rèn)為，主張argue/claim/believe/maintain/holdthat…考慮take…intoconsideration;consider;ponder;thinkover;reflecton/upon下結(jié)論，斷定cometotheconclusion;arriveattheconclusion;drawtheconclusion;conclude;judge獲得，贏得，取得

acquire,obtain,attain,reap,gain,procure常用閃光高分詞認(rèn)為，主張14支持，贊成

approveof,infavorof,uphold,standbyone’sside,agreewith提倡advocate,recommend反對，抵制

oppose,objectto,beagainst,resist重大的，有決定性的

profound,significant,eventful,vital,crucial,critical,decisive運用，使用

optimize,makefull/bestuseof,employ,utilize,apply支持，贊成15當(dāng)前，目前

nowadays,atpresent,currently,presently表達(dá)，說

voice,convey,express,deliver,communicate適應(yīng)

beadaptedto,beaccustomedto,beadjustedto阻礙，阻止

hinder,curb,hamper,restrain,prevent,wardoff,avoid當(dāng)前，目前16好處，優(yōu)點advantage,merit,benefit壞處，缺點

disadvantage,defect,flaw,drawback,deficiency參加

participatein,takepartin,attend,goinfor,engagein集中精力于，專心于

focus(one’sattention)on,centeron,concentrateon,setone’smindon依賴，依靠depend/relyon,leanon取決于itdependson…好處，優(yōu)點advantage,merit,benefi17努力做，盡力做

attemptto,makeeffortsto,endeavorto,manageto進步，成就，成績

advancement,achievement,accomplishment,feat,fulfillment除……外

apartfrom,inadditionto,alongwith開展，實施，做

practice,carryout,enforce,conduct,perform努力做，盡力做18強調(diào)，重視，突出

lay/placeemphasison,attachemphasisto,stresson,highlight優(yōu)秀的

outstanding,brilliant,remarkable,distinguished,excellent實現(xiàn)，完成

achieve,accomplish,fulfill,complete把……看作，當(dāng)作

regard…as,consider…as,lookon…as,treat/view…as強調(diào)，重視，突出19珍惜，重視

cherish,treasure,attachimportanceto完全的，徹底的

sheer,utter,thorough解釋

accountfor,illustrate,clarify起作用

playarole/partin,perform,function,serve證實，證明

testify,confirm,verify,turnout事實上

inpractice/reality/effect,asamatteroffact,virtually,actually珍惜，重視20顯示，表明

pointout,indicate,demonstrate,reflect,manifest縮短，減少

shorten,cutdown減少，削弱

reduce,decrease,diminish,lessen方法，手段

method,approach,means,measure,mode提高

improve,increase,enhance,raise,elevate顯示，表明21建立

build,setup,putup,found,establish,construct遭受

sufferfrom,besubjectedto,encounter在我看來，就我而言

inmyview/mind/belief,asfarasIcansee,asfarasIamconcerned想到，想出

comeupwith,crossone’smind,occurtosb.建立22需要

callfor,require,demand遵守

abideby,observe,conform易于，傾向于

tend/inclineto,beinclinedto,beproneto,belikelyto,beliableto熟悉，知道

beacquaintedwith,befamiliarwith,beinformedof需要23解決，處理

solve,resolve,settle,dealwith,copewith,manage,workon必要的，不可缺少的

indispensable,essential影響

affect,impact,haveeffecton意識到

beawareof,beconsciousof解決，處理24寫作模板對立觀點型/辯論型說明原因型

解決問題型

寫作模板對立觀點型/辯論型25對立觀點型/辯論型A．一個校園或社會現(xiàn)象/問題B．有人認(rèn)為X

是好事，贊成X，

為什么？有人認(rèn)為X

是壞事，

反對X，為什么？C．我的看法。

對立觀點型/辯論型26對立觀點型/辯論型

Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthe

social/economic/environmental

…problem/phenomenonthat出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象或問題.

(X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public./Withthedevelopmentofsociety,moreandmoreXhavecomeintobeing.)說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況或舉例子.Thereisahotdebategoingonarguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot(,especiallyforcollegestudents).Eachcoinhastwosides.Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Some

believethat支持X

的第一個原因。(Ontheonehand,…)They

also

argue

that

支持X

的另一個原因。However,

thereisanoppositevoice,whichclaimthat反對X

的第一個理由.

(Ontheotherhand,…)They

firmly

point

out

that

反對X

的第二個理由.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iholdthebeliefthat

the

advantages

of

X

overweigh

the

disadvantages,because說明原因.Isuggestweshould建議.對立觀點型/辯論型Nowadays27對立觀點型/辯論型e.g.2008.6.真題Directions:

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

thirty

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic

Recreational

activities.

You

should

write

at

least

120

words

and

you

should

base

your

composition

on

the

outline

(given

in

Chinese)

below:1.

娛樂活動多種多樣2.

娛樂活動可以使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.

作為大學(xué)生我們的看法對立觀點型/辯論型e.g.2008.6.真題28對立觀點型/辯論型范文：

With

the

dramatic

development

of

society

and

theimprovementofpeople’s

living

standard,

moreandmore

recreational

activities

arecoming

into

being.

Some

peoplemay

go

to

KTV

with

their

friends

on

weekends

to

get

relaxed

after

fivedays

intense

work.

Meanwhile,

others

might

choose

to

surf

the

internet

to

kill

time

and

appreciate

vast

resources

on

the

internet.Everything

has

two

sides

just

like

a

coin,

and

entertainment

is

no

exception.

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonrecreationalactivities.On

the

one

hand,

amusement

activities

can

enrich

people’s

livesandbroaden

people’s

horizons.

On

the

other

hand,

somepeoplemaywastetheirtime

if

they

fail

to

approach

recreation

properly.

As

far

as

college

students

are

concerned,

Iholdthebeliefthat

the

advantages

of

recreationalactivitiesoverweigh

the

disadvantages,becausewe

can

take

advantage

of

the

benefits

torelaxourselvesandlearnmanythingsoutofschool.

Weshouldalwayskeepthefollowingwordsinmind:

it

is

essential

to

be

self-disciplined

and

stayawayfromthenegative

influencesfromrecreationalactivities.對立觀點型/辯論型范文：29對立觀點型/辯論型2009.6.真題Freeadmissiontomuseums1.越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么?2.也會帶來一些問題3.你的看法對立觀點型/辯論型2009.6.真題302006年12月英語四級作文1、許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會；2、但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會；3、我的看法

2006年12月英語四級作文31說明原因型

A.出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象B.一些人這樣做的原因；另一些人這樣做的原因；還有一部分人這樣做的原因C.我的看法/這種現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果說明原因型A.出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象32說明原因型Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthe

social/economic/environmental

…problem/phenomenonthat出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象或問題.

(X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public.)說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況或舉例子.However，asforthereasonswhypeople…,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeople…inorderto….Somepeoplewantto…sothat….Andtheothershavethepurposeof…AsfarasIamconcerned,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento….SoIsuggest給出建議./Thisphenomenonwillleadto…造成什么結(jié)果.Anotherresultis…說明原因型Nowadays,

mo33說明原因型e.g.2007.12.真題WhatElectivesToChoose1.各學(xué)校開了各種各樣的選修課2.學(xué)生選課有不同的原因3.就我而言說明原因型e.g.2007.12.真題34說明原因型WiththereformofChinesehighereducation,moreandmorecollegesanduniversitiesputanemphasisonnurturingstudents’practicalabilities.Asaresult,avarietyofelectivecoursesareavailableforcollegestudentsofallmajors.Certainly,asforstudents’reasonstochoosetheirownelectives,differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentschoosetheelectivesinordertodeveloppracticalskills,whicharetheessentialpartofcollegeeducation,andtherefore,coursesoncomputerscience,marketing,andfinancearehighlypreferred.Ontheotherhand,othersmaythinkthatliberaleducationandelectivesconcerningliterature,history,andphilosophyarethemostwelcomed.AsfarasI’mconcerned,universityisnotaplaceforsurvivalskills,butapalaceofknowledgeandcriticalreasoning.Althoughmymajorischemistry,theelectivesIattendmostfrequentlyareEnglishliterature,anIntroductiontoClassicMusic,andDifferentSchoolsofWesternPainting.Theyreallybroadenmyhorizon.說明原因型Withthere35說明原因型2010.6.真題DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.這種現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果說明原因型2010.6.真題36解決問題型

A.出現(xiàn)了什么現(xiàn)象，造成了問題一、二、三B.解決的途徑一、二、三C.我的途徑解決問題型A.出現(xiàn)了什么現(xiàn)象，造成了問題一、二、三37解決問題型Nowadays,

X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public,anditmightleadtosomeproblems.Oneobviousproblemisthat問題1.問題2isanotherproblem.Theworstresultmaybe問題3.However,theproblemscanbedealtwithinmanydifferentways.

Themostcommonwayis途徑1.

Anotherwayis途徑2.

Thereisstillthethirdchoicethat途徑3.

Asforme,Iwouldliketo……,because……Therefore,Ichooseto……解決問題型Nowadays,

X

h382008年12月英語四級作文

LimitingtheUseofDisposalBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用

2.造成的問題

3.限制使用塑的意義2008年12月英語四級作文392009年6月英語四級作文

Freeadmissiontomuseums越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么?也會帶來一些問題你的看法2009年6月英語四級作文40解決問題型e.g.2000.1.真題HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.

上大學(xué)的費用可以通過多種途徑解決2.

哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)解決問題型e.g.2000.1.真題41解決問題型Everyyear,thousandsofyoungmenenteruniversitiesandcolleges.Ithasbeenaproblemforsomestudentsandtheirfamiliestofinancetheircollegeeducation.Infact,theproblemcanbedealtwithinmanyways.Themostcommonwayistogetallthemoneyfromtheparents.Iftheirparentscan’taffordthefees,studentscanapplyforaloanfromthebank.Thereisstillanotherway.Studentscanfinancetheireducationbydoingsomepart-timejobsintheirsparetime.Asforme,myparentscanpaythegreaterpartofthefeesforme.So,Iwon’thaveaheavyfinancialburden,andIcanfocusonmystudy.Iwouldliketopaytherestofthemoneybydoingapart-timejob,becausealthoughmyparentsareabletopayallthetuition,Istillwanttoknowmoreaboutsocietythroughmyownworkingexperience.

Therefore,Ichoosethiswaytofinancemycollegeeducation.解決問題型Everyyear,t42圖表式作文

A.說明圖標(biāo)內(nèi)容和顯示的變化B．說明原因一二三C．預(yù)測發(fā)展趨勢/有什么困難問題，怎么解決圖表式作文A.說明圖標(biāo)內(nèi)容和顯示的變化43圖表式作文

第一句先說明主題是什么。Readingthischart,wecanfindthat/It

is

obvious

in

the

graph/table

that

the

rate/number/amount

of

Y

has

gone

up/grown/fallen/dropped

considerably

in

recent

years

(as

X

varies).

At

the

point

of

X1,

Y

reaches

its

peak

value

of

…(多少).

What

is

the

reason

for

this

change?

Mainly

there

are

…

(多少)reasons

behind

the

situation

reflected

in

the

graph/table.

First

of

all,

…playanimportantrolein…(第一個原因).

Also,…leadsto…(第二個原因).

Besides,

…enables…to…(第三個原因).

From

the

above

discussions,

we

have

enough

reason

to

predict

what

will

happen

in

the

near

future.

The

trend

described

in

the

graph/table

will

continue

for

quite

a

long

time

(if

necessary

measures

are

not

taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢)./Therearesomeproblems/difficultiesin……Forexample,……Soweshould……圖表式作文第一句先說明主題是什么。44圖表式作文

2002.6真題Directions:ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudentUseofComputers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbase

yourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.上圖(圖略)所示為1990年、1995年、2002年某校大學(xué)生事業(yè)計算機的情況,請描述其變化

2.請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計算機的用途、價格或社會發(fā)展等方面加以說明）

3.你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計算機使用中有什么困難或問題圖表式作文2002.6真題45圖表式作文

Studentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays.

Readingthischart,wecanfindthattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply.In1990,ithaslessthan2hours;andin1995,itincreasedtoalmost4hours,andin2000,thenumbersoaredto20hours.Obviouslycomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Mainlytherearethreereasonsforthis.Firstofall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyaspectsoflife.Also,fastdevelopmentoftheInternetleadstogreaterdemandsforusingcomputers.WecaneasilycontactwithfriendsinremoteplacesthroughtheInternet.Besides,thepriceofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablesmorestudentstoaffordthem.However,therearesomeproblems.Forexample,somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesandforgettostudy.Soweshouldbalancethetimebetweenusingcomputersandstudying.Anyhow,wewillbenefitalotfromcomputersaslongasweusethemproperly.圖表式作文Studentste46論證句式表示原因表示好處表示壞處表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能表示措施表示變化論證句式表示原因47表示原因There

are

three

reasons

for…．The

reasons

for

…

are

as

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does

us

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lot

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us

quite

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lot．It

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beneficial

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us．Ithasapositiveeffect.表示好處Ithasthefollowingadva49表示壞處It

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much

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do

sth．We

think

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our

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should

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confrontedwith．表示措施Weshouldtakesomeeffec52表示變化Some

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years．A

great

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education．表示變化Somechangeshavetakenp532009年6月英語四級作文Freeadmissiontomuseums1.越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么?2.也會帶來一些問題3.你的看法2009年6月英語四級作文54FreeAdmissiontoMuseums(滿分版)

Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsareadmission-freetovisitorshomeandabroad.Thehiddenreasonbehindthisisnothardtoanalyzeasthere’sagrowingawarenessoftheauthoritiesregardingtheurgencyofpopularizationofculture,knowledgeandhistorywitheveryaveragepersoninoursociety.Onlywithfreeaccesstothislive‘database’,canmostpeoplefullyenjoywhatmuseumscouldofferthem.

However,freeadmissiontomuseumsmightleadtosomesocialproblemsaswell.Themostobviousproblemisthatitmightgivemuseumsaveryheavyeconomicburdenwhichdirectlyimpedesthesustainabledevelopmentoftheseorganizations.Asaresult,ourgovernmenthastoworkoutotherwaystocollectfunds

fromdifferent

channels,whichmightbedifficulttooperateorcontrol.Ontheotherhand,freeadmissionattractstoomanyvisitors,someofwhichmightnotbewell-purposedanddosomeconsciousorunconsciousdamagetothevaluabletreasureswhichusedtobewell-preservedinthemuseums.

Asauniversitystudent,Iaminfavorofthefree-admissionconduct.Yetitisproposedthatsomemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvethepotentialproblemscausedbyit.Forexample,museumscanmakesomeregulationstoguidethebehaviorofvisitorsorsetsome‘closed’daysformuseumsforregularmaintenance.Onlyinthiswaycanfree-admissiontomuseumsbecomealong-lastingphenomenonandhavesustainabledevelopment.FreeAdmissiontoMuseums(滿分版)55Nowadays,moreandmoremuseumsbecomefreeofchargetopeoplebecausetheywanttomakethemselvesfamous.Inordertogainfame,theyopentheirdoorswidelytopeople.Itcanwidenpeople’sknowledge.Nowadays,moreandmoremuseum56First,thiswillmakethetrafficmorebusy,becausesomepeoplemaybecomefromdifferentplaces.Eventheycomefromothercountries.First,thiswillmakethetraf57Inmyopinion,weshouldchargesomemoney,thentherewillnottoomuchpeoplecometomuseums.Anotherwaytosolvetheproblemistoincreasethepublictransportssotherewillfewpeopleusetheirowncars.Inmyopinion,weshouldcharg58Thispolicyalsohavesomeproblems.Astheticketsarefree,moreandmorepeoplestarttohaveavisitforsomemuseums.Thisphenomenonmaymakemoreandmorerubbish.Theworkersmustincreasetheirworking.Themuseumsneedmoreworkers.Buttheyhavenomoneytosupportthispolicy.Maybeoneday,themuseumisclosedjustbecausetherearenobodytoclearthemuseum.這是整個第二段的文字。作者到底要表達(dá)什么？Thispolicyalsohavesomepro59謝謝觀賞！2020/11/560謝謝觀賞！2020/11/560大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文條理性及相關(guān)句式寫作模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作必備模板大學(xué)61內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文條理性及相關(guān)句式寫作模板內(nèi)容提要四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平62寫作一般要求我能填寫常見表格如注冊表、申請表、問卷調(diào)查表等。我能寫給或回復(fù)他人祝賀卡、生日卡、邀請信、便條、短信、通知等。我能寫出簡單的指示語、個人廣告、社團海報、個人簡歷等。我能簡要地描述個人經(jīng)歷、發(fā)生的事件、讀過的故事、觀看的影片、喜怒哀樂等情感，寫出或回答個人或公司的信函、電子郵件、傳真等。我能就一定話題或提綱在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出不少于120詞的短文，內(nèi)容基本完整、中心思想明確、用詞恰當(dāng)、語意連貫。我能在一般寫作或應(yīng)用文寫作中恰當(dāng)使用相應(yīng)的寫作技能。寫作一般要求63評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2％：不切題。條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。5％：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。8％：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。11％：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14％：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚、文字通順，連貫性較好?；緹o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。 注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足以應(yīng)酌情扣分：（1）如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句，均不得計入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。（2）只寫一段者：0~4％；只寫兩段者：0~9％。（指規(guī)定三段的作文）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2％：不切題。條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。64條理性作文是主觀性題，要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進去。評卷老師的時間很短（每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完），用firstofall,second,to

begin

with,after

that,

next,

moreimportant,at

last等短語，可以使閱卷老師一眼就看出你作文的條理性。條理性作文是主觀性題，要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進去。65增加條理性的常用句式表層次,遞進:Furthermore,…What’s

more,…Also…Next,…Besides,…Moreover,…In

addition

,…Lastbutnotleast,…增加條理性的常用句式表層次,遞進:66增加條理性的常用句式表因果；Therefore,

…Consequently,

…because

of/thanks

to…Thus,……isdue

to/owing

to…On

this

account,…Since/as…As

a

result,

…As

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summary,

…In

a

word,

…In

conclusion,

…In

short,

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with

A，B．．．There

is

a

striking

contrast

between

them．On

the

contrary,…Whereas,…By

contrast,

…Despitethe

fact

that…Nevertheless,……even

though…On

the

contrary,…However,…Ontheonehand,…On

the

other

hand,…Otherwise…增加條理性的常用句式表轉(zhuǎn)折，對比，比較；69增加條理性的常用句式表示事實、現(xiàn)狀We

cannot

ignore

the

fact

that．．．No

one

can

deny

the

fact

that．．．Thereisnodoubtthat...

This

is

a

phenomenon

that

many

people

are

interested

in．However，that’s

not

the

case．增加條理性的常用句式表示事實、現(xiàn)狀70增加條理性的常用句式表舉例：To

take

…

as

an

example,…One

example

is…

Another

example

is…

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example,…增加條理性的常用句式表舉例：71增加條理性的常用句式其他：AsfarasIknow據(jù)我所知Asfaras...isconcerned就……而論Asthesayinggoes俗話說Ithasbeenprovedthat...已經(jīng)證明Itisestimatedthat...據(jù)估計Itisbelievedthat...人們相信Itisconsideredthat...大家認(rèn)為Itishopedthat...人們希望Thereforeweshouldrealizethat...因此我們應(yīng)當(dāng)明白增加條理性的常用句式其他：72Aboveall最重要的是Afterall畢竟Finally,wehopethat...最后，我們希望Itmaybeconfirmedthat...可以肯定Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat因此，我們有理由相信Aboveall最重要的是73常用閃光高分詞認(rèn)為，主張argue/claim/believe/maintain/holdthat…考慮take…intoconsideration;consider;ponder;thinkover;reflecton/upon下結(jié)論，斷定cometotheconclusion;arriveattheconclusion;drawtheconclusion;conclude;judge獲得，贏得，取得

acquire,obtain,attain,reap,gain,procure常用閃光高分詞認(rèn)為，主張74支持，贊成

approveof,infavorof,uphold,standbyone’sside,agreewith提倡advocate,recommend反對，抵制

oppose,objectto,beagainst,resist重大的，有決定性的

profound,significant,eventful,vital,crucial,critical,decisive運用，使用

optimize,makefull/bestuseof,employ,utilize,apply支持，贊成75當(dāng)前，目前

nowadays,atpresent,currently,presently表達(dá)，說

voice,convey,express,deliver,communicate適應(yīng)

beadaptedto,beaccustomedto,beadjustedto阻礙，阻止

hinder,curb,hamper,restrain,prevent,wardoff,avoid當(dāng)前，目前76好處，優(yōu)點advantage,merit,benefit壞處，缺點

disadvantage,defect,flaw,drawback,deficiency參加

participatein,takepartin,attend,goinfor,engagein集中精力于，專心于

focus(one’sattention)on,centeron,concentrateon,setone’smindon依賴，依靠depend/relyon,leanon取決于itdependson…好處，優(yōu)點advantage,merit,benefi77努力做，盡力做

attemptto,makeeffortsto,endeavorto,manageto進步，成就，成績

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apartfrom,inadditionto,alongwith開展，實施，做

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pointout,indicate,demonstrate,reflect,manifest縮短，減少

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reduce,decrease,diminish,lessen方法，手段

method,approach,means,measure,mode提高

improve,increase,enhance,raise,elevate顯示，表明81建立

build,setup,putup,found,establish,construct遭受

sufferfrom,besubjectedto,encounter在我看來，就我而言

inmyview/mind/belief,asfarasIcansee,asfarasIamconcerned想到，想出

comeupwith,crossone’smind,occurtosb.建立82需要

callfor,require,demand遵守

abideby,observe,conform易于，傾向于

tend/inclineto,beinclinedto,beproneto,belikelyto,beliableto熟悉，知道

beacquaintedwith,befamiliarwith,beinformedof需要83解決，處理

solve,resolve,settle,dealwith,copewith,manage,workon必要的，不可缺少的

indispensable,essential影響

affect,impact,haveeffecton意識到

beawareof,beconsciousof解決，處理84寫作模板對立觀點型/辯論型說明原因型

解決問題型

寫作模板對立觀點型/辯論型85對立觀點型/辯論型A．一個校園或社會現(xiàn)象/問題B．有人認(rèn)為X

是好事，贊成X，

為什么？有人認(rèn)為X

是壞事，

反對X，為什么？C．我的看法。

對立觀點型/辯論型86對立觀點型/辯論型

Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthe

social/economic/environmental

…problem/phenomenonthat出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象或問題.

(X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public./Withthedevelopmentofsociety,moreandmoreXhavecomeintobeing.)說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況或舉例子.Thereisahotdebategoingonarguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot(,especiallyforcollegestudents).Eachcoinhastwosides.Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Some

believethat支持X

的第一個原因。(Ontheonehand,…)They

also

argue

that

支持X

的另一個原因。However,

thereisanoppositevoice,whichclaimthat反對X

的第一個理由.

(Ontheotherhand,…)They

firmly

point

out

that

反對X

的第二個理由.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iholdthebeliefthat

the

advantages

of

X

overweigh

the

disadvantages,because說明原因.Isuggestweshould建議.對立觀點型/辯論型Nowadays87對立觀點型/辯論型e.g.2008.6.真題Directions:

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

thirty

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic

Recreational

activities.

You

should

write

at

least

120

words

and

you

should

base

your

composition

on

the

outline

(given

in

Chinese)

below:1.

娛樂活動多種多樣2.

娛樂活動可以使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.

作為大學(xué)生我們的看法對立觀點型/辯論型e.g.2008.6.真題88對立觀點型/辯論型范文：

With

the

dramatic

development

of

society

and

theimprovementofpeople’s

living

standard,

moreandmore

recreational

activities

arecoming

into

being.

Some

peoplemay

go

to

KTV

with

their

friends

on

weekends

to

get

relaxed

after

fivedays

intense

work.

Meanwhile,

others

might

choose

to

surf

the

internet

to

kill

time

and

appreciate

vast

resources

on

the

internet.Everything

has

two

sides

just

like

a

coin,

and

entertainment

is

no

exception.

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonrecreationalactivities.On

the

one

hand,

amusement

activities

can

enrich