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續(xù)寫(xiě)結(jié)尾1.有限視角主人公見(jiàn)證者WhenIhelargehospitalkitchen,Rosewasalreadycheckingnametagsonthetrays(托盤(pán)).“Hi,I’mJanet.”Itriedtosoundcheerful,althoughIalreadyknewRose’sreputationforbeingimpossibletoworkwith.“I’mscheduledtoworkwithyouthisweek.”Rosestoppedwhatshewasdoingandpeeredoverherreadingglasses.Icouldtellfromherexpressionthatshewasn’tpleasedtoseeastudentworker.“Whatdoyouwantmetodo?Startthecoffee?”Iasked.Rosecoldlynoddedandwentbacktocheckingnametags.Ifilledthe40-cuppotwithwaterandbeganmakingcoffeewhenRoseyelled,“That’snotthewaytomakecoffee.”Shesteppedinandtookover.NothingIdidpleasedher.Allmorning,hereagleeyesmissednothingandhersharpwordshurt.Fightingbacktears,Iwrestledwithmydilemmaaloneinmyroomafteralongday.“WhatshallIdo?”Theanswercaughtmecompletelybysurprise:IneededtoloveRose.WorkingwithRosethenextmorning,IignoredthehurtfulremarksthrowninmydirectionanddidthingsRose’swayasmuchaspossible.IsilentlybegantosurroundRosewithawarmblanketoflove.Overthenextfewdays,anamazingthingbegantohappen.Myfocusshiftedfromwhatshewasdoingtome.Iwastheonewhochangedfirst.Ashericytensionbegantomeltaway,Rosecriticizedlessandless.Throughouttherestofthesummer,wehadnumerousopportunitiestoworktogether.Eachtime,sheseemedtrulyhappytoseeme.AsIworkedwiththislonelywoman,Ilistenedtoher.Ilearnedthatshewasburdenedbyelderlyparentswhoneededhercare,byherownhealthproblemsandbyanalcoholichusbandshewasthinkingofleaving.Thedaysslippedbyquickly.Isoonwouldbereturningasafull-timeuniversitystudent.【來(lái)源：南師附中】(Para1)Oneday,whileIwasworkingaloneinoneofthehospitalkitchens,Roseenteredtheroom.(Para2)AlthoughIneversawRoseagain,Istillrememberhervividly.【來(lái)源：南師附中】

AlthoughIneversawRoseagain,Istillrememberhervividly.

Imissedheronceeaglebutkindeyes,Imissedherhumorousremarks,Imissedherlastwarmhug.

Idecidedtovisitheroneafternoon,onlytofindRosehadresignedbutleftmealetter.

Itread,“…MydearJanney,youtoldmeeverycloudhadasilverliningifyoudaredtochange…Itistimeformetoact.Blessme.”

Istoodtheremotionless,asifalightingofhappinessstruckme.

“Comeon,Rose!”Iexclaimedinmyheart.InmymistedeyesIheardRose’sjokingblame,“That’snotthewayto...”Igiggled.2.全知視角例一1.有限視角主人公見(jiàn)證者Finallythetimecamewhenthekinghadtobethrownawaytotheisland.

Amidthefuryroarofwildanimals,（氛圍）athrilloffearranthroughtheking.（有刪節(jié)）

Inthecompanyofsoldiers,hestepped/landedontheisland.……………….…..Astheyoungmanhadwished,thescaryislandwastransformedintoabeautifulplace.Deepdownheknewthatthecouragetoconquerchallenge,alongwithfullpreparations,wouldfinallypayoff.（有刪節(jié)）Finallythetimecamethenthekinghadtobethrownawaytotheisland.Everyonewassurprisedtofindthattheislandhadbecomeaprosperousvillage.Theworkershadsettledontheislandandturnedoveranewleaf.Theyextendedtheirsincerestwelcometothekingandofferedhimacozyshedtolivein.Bathedinthesunandfeelingthebreezefromthesea,thekingknewthatanewpageoflifewasabouttounfold.He,withhiswisdomanddetermination,canchangehisdestiny.2.全知視角Finallythetimecamewhenthekinghadtobethrownawaytotheisland.Theyoungkingwascalmtoaccepttheawfuldestiny.Thestrongsoldierscametohispalace.Buttheysaid,“Wecomeundertheconstitution.Butfiveyearsaretooshortforamercifulking.Weappreciateyourdiligenceforthekingdom.Youmaybethekinguntilyourdeath.”Theyoungkingwassurprised.Eventhoughtheruleisruthless,thetendermercycanwarmpeople’sheartwhichwillfightagainsttherule.反面例子：Finallythetimecamewhenthekinghadtobethrownawaytotheisland.Unwillingly,withtearsintheireyes,thesoldiersaccompaniedhimaboard.Beforetheysetsail,asthekingwatchedthehugeswarmofpeople---theentirenation,tobeexactkneelingonthebeachpleadinghimnottoabandonthem,henoticedamanrushingtowardshisdirection.Theman,withthemostdelightedexpression,shoutedatthetopofhislungs,“theconstitutionhasbeenmodified;anewrulehasbeenpassed,‘Hewhobenefitsthepeopleshallnotbethrown!”主題被吃了？總結(jié)思考真題思考JustafterNewYear’s,beforeschoolvacationended,Iwentoutforawalk.ItwasawalkI’dbeenmeaningtotakeeversincewemovedtothehouse.

Itookmycamera—thefirsttimeI’dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry—andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.

IwalkedtowardtheseeminglyabandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.

Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,beside

atiny,weather-beatenhouse.

Therewassmokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthedoor.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethetruck—no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.

“Hi,”Icalled.

Itwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithoutsayinganything,eventhoughI’vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalktostrangemen.

Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled—anicesmile—andsaid,“MissChalmers.I’mgladyou’vecometovisit.”

“Meg,”Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?

“ForMargaret?”heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand.“Forgiveme.Myhandsareverydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather.”

“HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?”

Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck.“Mydear,Iapologize.Ihavenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit’smuchtoocoldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andI’llmakeuseachacupoftea.AndI’lltellyouhowIknowyourname.”

Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled.“Meg,”hesaid,“I’mseventyyearsold.Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepmecompanyforabit,andgetwarm.”

Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverknowwhatI’mthinking.ThenIwentinhishouse.(Para1)Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteaintotwothickpotterymugs.(Para2)It’snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill.參考詞句1.Sometimes,asweetliecangreatlytransformone'slifeandtheseedsofkindnesswillgrowintobigtreessoonerorlater.2.Ilearnt,atthatmoment,howawhiteliecouldprotectaboy'sdreamandmeanwhilechangehislife.3.Yousee,sometimes,asmallgesturecanbringhugeblessings.4.Allofusknewthatloveandcaremattermorethananythingelse.5.AftersomanyyearsI'vefinallyunders