雅思圖表線性圖寫作范文

雅思圖表線性圖寫作范文雅思圖表線性圖寫作范文雅思圖表線性圖寫作范文資料僅供參考文件編號：2022年4月雅思圖表線性圖寫作范文版本號：A修改號：1頁次：1.0審核：批準:發(fā)布日期：WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutcinemaattendanceinAustraliabetween1990andthepresent,withprojectionsto2010.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.ThegraphshowspercentagesofcinemaattendanceatleastonceayearinAustraliabetween1990to2010withprojectionsforthefuture.Thegraphisdescribedby4groupsofdifferentageswhichare14to24,25to34,35to49andover50yearolds.Theyoungestagegrouppeoplehavebeengoingtocinemamorethananyotheragegroupsandthepercentagehasbeenkeepingveryhighatapproximately90%since1990.Itispredictedtokeepthehighandtoincreasemorefrom2006.Themiddleagegroupspeoplehaveenjoyedgoingcinemabetween60%to80%.Thepercentageofage25to34grouphasbeenhigherthantheoneofage35to49groupbutfrom2006thepercentageof25to34yearoldspeoplewilldecreasewhiletheoneof35to49yearoldspeoplewillincreaseandgethigherthantheotherone.Theoldestpeopleseemtogocinemalessthantheothergroupsbutthepercentageoftheattendancehasslightlygoingupby15%from40%to55%between1990to2004anditwillkeepincreasingto60%by2010.Overall,itseemstheyoungeragepeople,themoregoingtocinema.(210words)【考官評語】Band6Thisresponseaddressestherequirementsofthetaskandselectsrelevantmaterialtodescribe.Keyfeaturesandanoverviewarepresented,althoughclearerhighlighting,moresupportandamorecomprehensiveoverviewwouldbeneededtoreachahigherband.Informationiswell-organisedandthereisaclearoverallprogressionintheresponse.Thereissomeeffectiveuseofcohesivedevices,butonlylimiteduseofreferenceandsubstitution.Therangeofvocabularyisnotwide,butitisadequateforthetask.Controlofwordformandspellingisconsistentlygood,althoughtherearesomeclumsynounphrasesthatindicatelimitedflexibility.Thecandidateattemptstouseamixofsimpleandcomplexsentences,butcontrolisvariableandgrammaticale