中考英語考前沖刺(二)熱點(diǎn)書面表達(dá)優(yōu)質(zhì)公開課課件

2019中考英語考前沖刺專題（二）書面表達(dá)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)2019中考英語考前沖刺專題（二）書面表達(dá)1

中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

滿分檔（15分）：長度符合要求（80-90字），書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯豐富，沒有任何語法錯(cuò)誤。第五檔（12-14分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯比較豐富有少量語法錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（9-11分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本涵蓋要點(diǎn)（有2要點(diǎn)得給9-10分），行文比較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有一些語法錯(cuò)誤。第三檔(6-8分)：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整（只有1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，勉強(qiáng)能看出作文意圖。第二檔（3-5分）：能用句子表達(dá)，錯(cuò)誤百出，只能勉強(qiáng)猜測出作文意圖。第一檔（0-2分）：有一些英語單詞，但與話題毫不相干。（白卷0分）

中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

滿分檔（15分）：長度符合要求（802中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)1、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。2、段與段之間，自然過渡。有合適的連接詞。3、句與句之間，有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使之自然成一體。4、全文中同一個(gè)意思，基本沒有重復(fù)使用某一個(gè)詞、短語或者句型等，說明這個(gè)同學(xué)的詞匯量不同尋常。老師自然就對該作文有好感了。5、能夠恰當(dāng)使用諺語、格言等給文章添彩。中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)1、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，3二、中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)6、書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一個(gè)自然段，讓閱卷老師很容易就能找到作文所要求寫的要點(diǎn)和重要句子。8、要點(diǎn)齊全。9、首尾呼應(yīng)，自然成一體。10、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。閱卷老師一看就知道這個(gè)同學(xué)的功底非不一般，自然就給打高分了。二、中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)6、書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有4中考英語寫作高分“秘笈”要點(diǎn)齊全過渡自然首尾相呼分段提行連詞增色名句添光長短得當(dāng)高分有望中考英語寫作高分“秘笈”要點(diǎn)齊全過渡自然5認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。寫作第一步審寫作第一步審6健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)7用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步8

根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)如何度假st9

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列Alotofpeopletravel.列10Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebodyAlotofpeopletravel.How1110、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.表示對比:instead,not…but,I’mgladthatyou’llcometoourschoolforavisitnextterm.PassageThreestayathomeTrafficrules…方面Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.老師自然就對該作文有好感了。Weshouldn’tspitanywhere.visitfriendsorparents只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.第三檔(6-8分)：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整（只有1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，勉強(qiáng)能看出作文意圖。WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Wecancrosstheroadonlywhenthelightsaregreen.Exciting?Thatis!表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：10、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫作12321465

Second,weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary.First,wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool,thoughmostofusdon’tlikethematall.Everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents.Wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife.What’smore,weoughttoreturnbooksontime.Ourschoolrulesaregoodforus,Iwilltrymybesttofollowthem.Third,wemustdolotsofhomework.321465Second,we13Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca14連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作151.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示選擇:or,either…or;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,what’smore,actually,infact,10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,bo16Let’splaythegame._____Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_____.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback._____,hesmiled.Let’splaythegame._____Iam17Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca18Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美Weinterviewedpeopleaboutth19美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步：美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫20SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekSavingbeachieveSkillOneMakeyoursentences21SkillTwoExpressindifferentwaysOurparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagers

arefondof

thecomputers.Weshouldn’teatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.SkillTwoExpressindiffere22書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美23中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯(cuò)誤或基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（7-9分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀。第四檔（4-6分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀。第五檔（1-3分）只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。

中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）24書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue…書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于25IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,it’smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,I’vebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkit’sdangerous,Idon’tthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,I’llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,I’llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue,ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.PassageOneIh26IhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whenthey’reflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventhey’rethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwon’tbeachievedanymore.It’sjustadream,inmyheart.PassageTwoIhave27PassageThreeIhaveadreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy.Tomakemedreamcometrue.Ineedtrytodoit.AndIneedtakesometimetodoit.Ineedpracticeeveryday.Ifmydreamcometrue,Iwillmorethytodoit.PassageThree28VIII．書面表達(dá)VIII．書面表達(dá)29【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀思維導(dǎo)圖所給的文字和要求，提取以下信息：1.本文是一篇有關(guān)如何讓家鄉(xiāng)更漂亮的記敘文；2.寫作內(nèi)容必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中已提供的三個(gè)方面的信息：Environment；People；Trafficrules并按所給提示進(jìn)行展開3.進(jìn)行發(fā)散性思考，自已在補(bǔ)充一個(gè)方面的信息；4.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名及地名。VIII．書面表達(dá)【審題指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)30【寫作指導(dǎo)】開頭：文章開頭給，直接入題Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。正文：具體描述1.Environment方面（rubbish，spit…）；2.People方面（friendly,helpful,respect,takecareof…）；3.Trafficrules…方面4.自由發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)信息。結(jié)尾：文章結(jié)尾已給不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。VIII．書面表達(dá)【寫作指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)31HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautiful?

Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.

Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowawayanyrubbish.Weshouldn’tspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.

Secondly,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Weshouldrespecttheoldandtakecareoftheyoung.It’spoliteforustogiveseatswhennecessary.

What’smore,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tplayontheroad.Wecancrosstheroadonlywhenthelightsaregreen.

Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Weshouldshutofftheelectricitywhenweleavearoom.Ifwetravelashortdistance,we’dbetterwalkorrideabikeinsteadoftakingataxiorabus.

Ibelieveourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulaslongaswetryourbest.VIII．書面表達(dá)（參考范文）HowtoMakeOurHometownMore32VIII．書面表達(dá)VIII．書面表達(dá)33【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字和要求，提取以下信息：1.本文是一篇有關(guān)介紹學(xué)校相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排的記敘文；2.寫作內(nèi)容必須包括已提供的兩個(gè)方面的信息：

①活動(dòng)計(jì)劃；②安排理由3.進(jìn)行發(fā)散性思考，自已再補(bǔ)充一些學(xué)校信息；4.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。VIII．書面表達(dá)【審題指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)34【寫作指導(dǎo)】開頭：文章開頭給，直接入題

I’mgladthatyou’llcometoourschoolforavisitnextterm.，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。正文：具體描述1.活動(dòng)計(jì)劃（打乒乓球、包餃子……）；2.安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運(yùn)……）；3.自由發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充一些學(xué)校信息。結(jié)尾：文章結(jié)尾I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.已給不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

VIII．書面表達(dá)【寫作指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)35DearMr.Green,

I’mgladthatyou’llcometoourschoolforavisitnextterm.Firstyoucanvisitourschoollibrary.Therearetwothousandbooksinit.Andthentherewillbeaping-pongmatchbetweenourschoolteamsinourhall.Ifyoulike,youcantakepartinit.Itwillbewonderful.It’sourfavoritesportandalsopopularinChina.Finallyyoucanjoinusinmakingdumplings.DumplingsareourfavoritefoodinChina.Itwillbeexcitingtomakedumplingswithyouinourschool.Wethinkdumplingscanbringusgoodluck.Atlunchyoucaneatdumplingsinourschooldinninghall.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiMingVIII．書面表達(dá)（參考范文）DearMr.Green,VIII．書面表達(dá)（參考范文36Thankyou!Thankyou!372019中考英語考前沖刺專題（二）書面表達(dá)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)2019中考英語考前沖刺專題（二）書面表達(dá)38

中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

滿分檔（15分）：長度符合要求（80-90字），書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯豐富，沒有任何語法錯(cuò)誤。第五檔（12-14分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯比較豐富有少量語法錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（9-11分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本涵蓋要點(diǎn)（有2要點(diǎn)得給9-10分），行文比較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有一些語法錯(cuò)誤。第三檔(6-8分)：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整（只有1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，勉強(qiáng)能看出作文意圖。第二檔（3-5分）：能用句子表達(dá)，錯(cuò)誤百出，只能勉強(qiáng)猜測出作文意圖。第一檔（0-2分）：有一些英語單詞，但與話題毫不相干。（白卷0分）

中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

滿分檔（15分）：長度符合要求（8039中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)1、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。2、段與段之間，自然過渡。有合適的連接詞。3、句與句之間，有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使之自然成一體。4、全文中同一個(gè)意思，基本沒有重復(fù)使用某一個(gè)詞、短語或者句型等，說明這個(gè)同學(xué)的詞匯量不同尋常。老師自然就對該作文有好感了。5、能夠恰當(dāng)使用諺語、格言等給文章添彩。中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)1、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，40二、中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)6、書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一個(gè)自然段，讓閱卷老師很容易就能找到作文所要求寫的要點(diǎn)和重要句子。8、要點(diǎn)齊全。9、首尾呼應(yīng)，自然成一體。10、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。閱卷老師一看就知道這個(gè)同學(xué)的功底非不一般，自然就給打高分了。二、中考英語高分作文的特點(diǎn)6、書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有41中考英語寫作高分“秘笈”要點(diǎn)齊全過渡自然首尾相呼分段提行連詞增色名句添光長短得當(dāng)高分有望中考英語寫作高分“秘笈”要點(diǎn)齊全過渡自然42認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。寫作第一步審寫作第一步審43健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)44用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步45

根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)如何度假st46

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列Alotofpeopletravel.列47Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebodyAlotofpeopletravel.How4810、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.表示對比:instead,not…but,I’mgladthatyou’llcometoourschoolforavisitnextterm.PassageThreestayathomeTrafficrules…方面Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.老師自然就對該作文有好感了。Weshouldn’tspitanywhere.visitfriendsorparents只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.第三檔(6-8分)：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整（只有1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，勉強(qiáng)能看出作文意圖。WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Wecancrosstheroadonlywhenthelightsaregreen.Exciting?Thatis!表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：10、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫作49321465

Second,weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary.First,wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool,thoughmostofusdon’tlikethematall.Everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents.Wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife.What’smore,weoughttoreturnbooksontime.Ourschoolrulesaregoodforus,Iwilltrymybesttofollowthem.Third,wemustdolotsofhomework.321465Second,we50Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca51連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作521.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示選擇:or,either…or;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,what’smore,actually,infact,10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,bo53Let’splaythegame._____Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_____.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback._____,hesmiled.Let’splaythegame._____Iam54Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca55Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

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afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美Weinterviewedpeopleaboutth56美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步：美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫57SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekSavingbeachieveSkillOneMakeyoursentences58SkillTwoExpressindifferentwaysOurparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagers

arefondof

thecomputers.Weshouldn’teatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.SkillTwoExpressindiffere59書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美60中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯(cuò)誤或基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（7-9分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀。第四檔（4-6分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀。第五檔（1-3分）只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。

中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）61書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue…書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于62IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,it’smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,I’vebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkit’sdangerous,Idon’tthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,I’llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,I’llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue,ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.PassageOneIh63IhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whenthey’reflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventhey’rethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwon’tbeachievedanymore.It’sjustadream,inmyheart.PassageTwoIhave64PassageThreeIhaveadreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy.Tomakemedreamcometrue.Ineedtrytodoit.AndIneedtakesometimetodoit.Ineedpracticeeveryday.Ifmydreamcometrue,Iwillmorethytodoit.PassageThree65VIII．書面表達(dá)VIII．書面表達(dá)66【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀思維導(dǎo)圖所給的文字和要求，提取以下信息：1.本文是一篇有關(guān)如何讓家鄉(xiāng)更漂亮的記敘文；2.寫作內(nèi)容必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中已提供的三個(gè)方面的信息：Environment；People；Trafficrules并按所給提示進(jìn)行展開3.進(jìn)行發(fā)散性思考，自已在補(bǔ)充一個(gè)方面的信息；4.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名及地名。VIII．書面表達(dá)【審題指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)67【寫作指導(dǎo)】開頭：文章開頭給，直接入題Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。正文：具體描述1.Environment方面（rubbish，spit…）；2.People方面（friendly,helpful,respect,takecareof…）；3.Trafficrules…方面4.自由發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)信息。結(jié)尾：文章結(jié)尾已給不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。VIII．書面表達(dá)【寫作指導(dǎo)】VIII．書面表達(dá)68HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautiful?

Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.

Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tt