高中英語寫作常見錯誤句子課件

書面表達(dá)常見錯句分析Aims:1.Toknowthecommonmistakesthatyoualwaysmakeinyourwriting.2.Tofindthereasonwhyyoumakethemistakes.3.Tolearnhowtoavoidthesamemistakes

研究表明，多數(shù)同學(xué)在寫作上的主要欠缺不是系統(tǒng)的寫作理論和方法，而是最基本的單句寫作能力。

next5Problemsinwritingsinglesentences1.TheChinglishexpression2.SubjectandVerbDisagreement3.Misuseofthewordsforms4.MisuseoftheTenseandVoice5.Missingofessentialpartsofthesentence6.Misuseofwords61、TheChinglishExpressionManisiron,andfoodissteel.infrontoftheflowersandunderthemoonMybodyisgood.Wecollegestudentsarethesonsofthesky.Peopletakefoodasheaven.Breadisthestaffoflife.Staybyfloweringshrubsorunderthepuremoon.82、SubjectandVerbDisagreementMysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.Tomwithhistwobrothersaregoingtothecountry.HesavedenoughmoneytobuytheworksofShakespearewhichhethoughtwasworthbuying.104、MisuseoftheTenseandVoice在一般的闡述中，作文的時態(tài)應(yīng)該定位在現(xiàn)在的時間。除了闡述過去或?qū)戆l(fā)生的事情。Theharderyouwillpractice,thegreaterprogressyouwillmake.We’regoingtodivideintofourgroups.Thisfishwascaughtwherethewaterdidn’tpollute.12Ihaveseenthefilmseveraltimes,butIstillliketosee.Isthisuniversitywhereyoustudiedthreeyearsago.theoneit(缺賓語)(缺表語)143)中國電影很受新加坡人的歡迎。TheChinesefilmsarewelcomedbythepeopleinSingapore.popularwithSolutionstotheseproblems解決方案正確連接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.避免誤置修飾語3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.注意邏輯主語5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免人稱代詞混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.避免重復(fù)9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.DuringmystayinBeijing,I…WhilestayinginBeijing,I…12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.注意時態(tài)一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.注意時態(tài)一致Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.30Because---structure

WrongSentences：Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.forthatWriteashortparagraphabout:Lackofsleep(

睡眠不足的原因，危害）Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’t

haveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.隨堂練習(xí)Summary正確連接分句避免誤置修飾語注意邏輯主語避免指代不清盡量避免漢語干擾注意時態(tài)一致

THANKYOU!34文明的社會里關(guān)愛無處不在。以一只小貓照顧一只生病的小鴨為例。Thereareconcernandcareeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.Concernandcarecanbefoundeverywhereinaci